Magyck

by legionbrony
A boy named Brandon is accidentally teleported to Equestria by his genius fathers' invention.

Brandon, a human, is sent to Equestria in a freak accident with one of his father's crazy inventions and loses his memory. After residing in Equestria for a short time, however, he finds that disaster is about to befall both his world and Equestria, and must find a way to save them both.

This is NOT an insertion, as Brandon is not meant to represent me or anyone I know. He is simply a character I made up. Completely original.

I have this posted on FanFiction.net, and one of my friends urged me to post it here. I hope it meets your standards! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE comment, unless you're just going to say something along the lines of "This is an HiE, so it's stupid because HiE's are stupid". ACTUAL criticism is welcome; in fact, I'm begging for it. All anyone on FanFiction.net does is say "Good story, write more".

Everyone
Incomplete
Adventure
Alternate Universe
Human
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Comedy
 
OPMPO

8998 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read
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9 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 2012-09-21 12:50:03 UTC
    866
  2. Chapter 1 2012-09-22 01:49:32 UTC
    931
  3. Chapter 2 2012-09-22 02:20:31 UTC
    653
  4. Chapter 3 2012-09-23 21:24:25 UTC
    754
  5. Chapter 4 2012-09-24 00:08:04 UTC
    1270
  6. Chapter 5 2012-09-26 11:32:52 UTC
    1078
  7. Chapter 6 2012-09-24 22:00:29 UTC
    783
  8. Chapter 7 2012-09-27 21:43:17 UTC
    1575
  9. An unnamed plot setup scene, and a narrative explaining my personal head-canon. 2012-09-30 12:39:01 UTC
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