Author's Note

The reason for why there's so many times skips is because there are going to be backflash's to Sunset childhood

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Pilot

The Beginning

Sunset Shimmer POV

Sunset Shimmer was a little filly in a orphanage around the outside of equestria border lines near the bad lands sunset shimmer had parents, but they both disappeared outside of equestria (in a another universe) and sunset shimmer was send to "the sand foal orphanage" in a midsize town.

The orphanage didn't have ponies or any creatures that cared about the orphans, because the town only had a little bit more than what they needed and only enough one class of water per creature, so if there's one less mouth to feed all the better right.

Sunset was 8 years old in "the sand foal orphanage" and was using her hoof to make soup since she couldn't use her magic, whenever she used magic it would explode, as Sunset was finishing the soup a colt walked in it was dulled head the bully.

Dulled head had a golden brown mane and tail and sandy coat with a hammer for a cutie mark... Sunset Shimmer didn't have a cutie mark.

"Hey there ashy you better not be burning my food" mocked Dulled.

"It's not just your food, and if you don't like my cooking then make your own Food!" shouted Sunset.

"ha i should at least i won't be eating ash's and with liquid too" Dulled said has he was getting closer to wear Sunset was.

"Shut up!" Shouted the filly.

; I said getting angry at this foolish colt he always bullies the other foals for being weaker than him, but if he was out in the streets he would be crying like a new born foal it really annoyed me someone how's all bark no bite.

"Or what?" Challenge Dulled.

"I'm going to cauterize your mouth shut" Shouted Sunset.

"Ha as if you could even cast a simple light spell without blowing it up" Dulled Mocked again.

"That's it" should Sunset.

; I started to buildup my mana, but I didn't have the chance since dulled went up to me... and hit my horn, and next thing I knew was a bright light.

; When i came back all i saw was a black cold crater and a local changeling all black with neon red instead of green I knew her she's Morda she was a skilled spell caster who was a killer.

(queen chrysalis aren't the only changelings in this fanfic)

"Hey kid what is the fuck happen here" asked the freelance.

Sunset felt sad and disappointed in herself, sad for taking the live of another creature, and disappointed for feeling satisfaction for killing him, but not any other creatures who was around because they weren't at fault for hitting her horn.

"I-i *sobbed* I didn't *hiccup* mean t-to" Sunset tried to say though her crying.

"Hey, hey it's okay kid come here" Morda had a soft spot for children despite.

; While I was still crying morda pulled me closer to her chest and tried to cheer me up, but i didn't hear her since how can you cheer a little child up after they murdered and destroyed there friends and home I continued to cry under morda said something I didn't think I hear in my life.

"... Hey kid did you hear me, I said do you want to live with me... i could be your mother, and teacher i know you have a lot of mana so you can be an assassin like me and and... and I'm not helping am I" Morda may have a soft spot for children, but can't deal with emotional situation all to good.

Sunset felt happy and didn't care for whatever the reason morda had to adopt her sunset shimmer was going to become Morda's daughter and was going to learn how to use magic... sure to was to be a killer, but whatever.

"Yes please" this made Sunset enjoyed because she always wanted a mother.

"Awesome kid" Modra always wanted a daughter without the being Married and Pregnant part.

[2 years later]

; Me and my changeling mother had been hunting some pirates who had been stealing from ships with the food and clean water for the town and was miles away from it and closer to the equestria border line and the west cost of the "southern lunar ocean".

(i know it's "south luna ocean" but i'm calling it "southern lunar oceans" cuz it sounds better)

; The real name is "south luna ocean", but the locals called it the "southern lunar oceans" which was wired since it was in the westside not the southside, anyways we were on a boat with an invisibility spell.

"Remember kid your shadow, it needs to be invisibility too" Morda said seeing Sunset shadow.

"Oh yeah sorry mama" the now older filly said to her mother/teacher.

*whispers* "ssh kid look it's them get ready for a fight" advised Morda.

Sunset Shimmer and morda rage got to the right side of the ship and started claiming meanwhile the captain of the ship was making a speech he was zomu a big zebra with red tattoos of fire spirits and pink reddish eyes, and a red skull with an x as a cutie mark on his flank and a long mane & tail and was gray & white.

"Okay lads we'll be swimmin' in lots of loots, now let's go and steal their waters and foods" said Zomu.

"So that's why they're stealing from the food ships... so ready to kill them lil Sunny" 😏.

"Yes mom" Said Sunset with a smile.

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Morda Rage POV

; I jumped in and got the attention of all the pirates there were mostly zebras, earth ponies, and pegasus with some griffins, grifbras (a hybrid of a griffin and zebra) and 3 unicorns i give them a smirk this was going to be easy assuming the unicorns couldn't sense the magic of sunsets invisibility spell.

"So who wants to die" *savage smirk* Joked Morda making her presents known.

"Quick kill her! she's the changeling of the bloody seven seas, oh spirit of fire obey me and kill my enemies!" yelled Zomu.

A fire spirit came out of Zomu the red marks glowing, as for the fire spirit it self it was in the shape of a tiger it also reminded morda of sunsets mane, as for the pirates there's 36 in total.

There's the 3 unicorns, 5 grifbras, 6 griffins, 6 earth ponies, 6 pegasus, 9 zebras, and 1 for Zomu making it 36 in total the ponies and fire spirit were the first ones to attack morda with sunset shimmer taking the 3 unicorns and the another's went to get weapons.

The 12 ponies 11 stallions and one mare ran up to her with 2 pegasuses being in the front and the fire spirit at the back end, morda rage jumped up and spin mid-air kicking the head of the right pegasus and jumped from him to the left one and kick him in the wing joint causing them to collapse (face first for the right & lower back head and neck for the other one) in to the ships floor.

Morda saw the 10 remaining ponies and fire spirit the closest ones are 3 earth ponies so she used her favorite combo spells (a 40x thought {faster processing spell}, 50x magic used {mana casting/gathering spell}, 40x reflexes & strength {body boosting spell}, 50x protection {aura shield spell}, 60x slowing others {area slowness spell}, and 30x thought for the target).

; I love this combo it lets me see my targets realizing they're bucked and they can't do nothing about it, but watch me pull my hoof back and punch them or do whatever i want.

Morda rage punched 2 of the earth ponies in the throat and shot a ice needle spell to the 3rd earth pony causing him to jump to the right to get out of the way, but was too slow and it ended in his left inner thigh (femur) and caused him to landed painfully.

The remaining ponies (7) and fire spirit were still running to her and 1 earth pony & a pegasus, morda froze the floor under earth pony causing him to go sliding towards her, and morda took the advantage of this and jumped over the stallion and grabbed him by the lower back (croup) and did a front flip and sending the stallions head through the floor of the ship (just imagine a front flip and delivering a tombstone like in wwe).

Morda then jump to the pegasus and delivered cutter (rko; ¾ facelock bulldog maneuver) leaving her with 2 earth ponies, 3 pegasuses and the fire spirit to fight, morda shoots 4 ice needles hits the 2 earth ponies front knees causing them to faceplant to the floor and with their flanks in the air, so morda jumped off their flanks.

She grabbed 2 pegasuses and hit the last and 3rd pegasus mare with a counterclockwise dropkick while using her to spin herself clockwise mid-air to deliver a DDT to the two pegasus stallions she was holding, the fire tiger spirit jumped and tried to attack her from above, but her combo spells it didn't work.

Which is called "the phenomenal sage mode" or "phenomenal rage technique" (i was originally going to have these in spanish "el modo sabio fenomenal" o "la técnica de rabia fenomenal") or just "phenomenal rage mode" can't make up my mind.

The spell combo made it so that morda had time to get up and see that the fire tiger was only 1 feet and 3½ inches up in the air... morda ran up to the spirit and did her signature move "the phenomenal hook" (which is her jumping and using her left/right hoof/fist to one punch her opponent) as soon as her punch landon the fire spirit tiger disappeared.

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[Meanwhile]

Sunset Shimmer POV

Sunset was invisible and took advantage to use an ice spell to freeze over the floor and trap the 3 unicorns each of them realizing they were in trouble used heat spells to melt the ice around their hoofs sunset took down her invisibility spell and grabbed the attention of the unicorns, she also noticed the 9 zebras, 5 grifbras, and 6 griffins going below deck.

"Shit boys! look out it's the red sun" said the 1st unicorn.

; They turn around and started shooting stun bolts (a spell that stun the target with a bit of electricity) at me so i put up a kinetic barrier (a spell that uses the force that impacts the barrier/shield to become stronger (depending on the user it makes a unbreakable shield)) the barrier ate the stun bolts and i had it burst outwards launching the 3 unicorns to the ground.

"Oh fuck this, i don't get paid enough to fight the "changeling of the bloody seven seas" and "the red sun" i'm out" said the 2nd unicorn.

"She just a foal we ca-" said the 3rd unicorn.

; I shot a blunt magical blast knocking him out, while the 2nd unicorn i jumped into the ocean the first got off the floor and shot a lightning arrow (a arrow made of lightning... duh) at me, i just stepped to the side the bad thing about a lightning arrow the lightning doesn't affect what's around it just was in front of it.

"That was a weak spell pal" said Sunset with a smirk.

"Shut up, bitch!" Yelled the 1st unicorn.

"ha! that's funny since you're the one who's wearing jewelry, mister nose piercing with a chain" Joked Sunset pulling on said nose chain piercing, causing the pirate unicorn to yell in anger.

*rage screaming*.

The unicorn was running to sunset, but was grabbed by a telekinesis turquoise magical aura... and thrown overboard landing on his back and neck, as the 9 zebras, 5 grifbras, and 6 griffins came back from below deck as Zomu grabbed a crossbow (Zomu can't summon a fire spirit as soon as the first one been destroyed).

"The both of ye' best be leaving, before me and me crew kill ye' young ladies" (i hope that was a good rhyme) Said the pirate captain.

"How's about... no?" Said Morda.

Morda run to the group of pirates and went into her "phenomenal rage mode", she jumped into the middle of the crew and nocked out 4 zebras leaving 17 pirates plus Zomu meaning 6 zebras, 5 grifbras, and 6 griffins.

2 grifbras launched at morda with spears in their eagle talents only for morda to uses her telekinesis to pull the spears closer, and inhale them into the 2 grifbras shoulders then and it's on top of the spears 3 more grifbras when to attack and 3 griffins went after sunset, and the rest surrounded Zomu as he was trying to build up mana to summon a spirit.

Sunset used a 9-foot staff to stabbed the first griffin in the throat causing them to have a choking hazard and slapped the knife out of his left claw sanding it to the face of the left griffin causing him to duck down, but sunset took advantage to upper cut him with the end of the staff.

This cause the griffin to bite off his own tongue and then sunset launched herself with the staff, as the last griffin took to the air, but sunset used a "mass spell" (a spell to make things heavy 😒) and hit the griffin in the side of the head sending him cartwheeling through the air and landing through a window.

Morda froze the floor under her and shot a fireball causing a cloud of steam hiding her and the 3 grifbras from sight when the cloud dissipated they were killed via slit throat leaving 6 zebras and 3 griffins Zomu walked out summoning another spirit this one a fire manticore.

After that chaos broke loose the 5 zebras and 3 griffins attacked morda while Zomu stayed back and let his fire spirit attack sunset, one by one morda kill or nocked out the pirates and sunset was able to keep the fire spirit at bay with kinetic shields, ice balls, and cooled spells (spells to cool down the area).

Morda turned around as the fire spirit was about to kill sunset with it's manticore scorpion tail morda only had enough time to get in between sunset and the fire spirit... causing her to get impaired by the stinger.

; I saw the only mother figure i had get killed and felt a darkest with in along with the light of the life i spent with morda then with both out stretched hoofs dark magic on the left and harmony magic on the right i made an explosion leaving a crater momentarily in the water... unbeknownst to sunset a red stream of magic went inside her head.

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[Meanwhile]
{Canterlot Celestia Castle}

Celestia Solare POV

; My sister is almost free and i don't have a student, a new bearer or bearers of the elements of harmony, or a weapons to use against her soon equestria will fall into endless night.

Strong or talented unicorns can since when something are someone has outrageous amounts of mana, but they only get a small vibration through their horns, so it was a surprise for celestia to feel a painful headache she saw all her maids hit the floor screaming their heads off.

The unicorns weren't the only ones to feel the magic, the pegasus maids took to the air and looked around to see where it was going from, and the earth pony maids hugged one another scared for their lives, while celestia faced southwest towards the badlands she was the only pony who could locate the power without being overwhelmed by it.

Celestia followed the power to the ocean only to find a crater in the water shrinking in size celestia used a spell to look and see if anyone was still alive, she found a filly in a turquoise magical aura and was close to the core of the crater.

'This filly is what i've been looking for even if she wasn't the cause of this, she's still strong enough to have survive the explosion she can be used against my sister in one way are other' celestia grabbed sunset in her own magic yellow aura "excuse me little one, but are you okay" Asked Celestia.

Sunset head:
(Morda) 'uh-oh sweetie look out it the mother of all pigs'
'what mom is that you'
'yes sunny it's me i copied all of my memories, consciousness and sentience in to you just think of me as a voice in your head'
'oh okay who the white mare'
'that is princess celestia'

"Princess Celestia what are you doing here" asked the filly.

"That's not important my little pony, nevertheless would you like to be my personal student?" Said the Princess.

Sunset head:
'I don't think i have a choice'
'No you don't, she wants you sweetie'
'But why'
'I don't know i'm a changeling and we can only sense desires above the surface of a mind'
'Okay? uh do you think she wants to adopt me'
'Maybe you should say yes, but don't say you want to be her daughter, she did say to "be my personal student"'
'Okay'

"Yes Princess" said Sunset trying not to give away anything the princess didn't want to see.

[3 years later]

Sunset Shimmer pov

Sunset head:
'I can't believe it, she take their side again'
'Calm down baby'
'Calm down!? this isn't the first time she didn't take my side of things i even had witnesses, yet she didn't even summon for them so they could have their say on the matter'
'It was still a bad thing to set them on fire'
'They were touching my flanks'
'Okay good point the mother fuckers did deserve it'

[5½ years later]

Sunset Shimmer was 18½ years old and was in her room with princess Mi Amore Cadenza or Princess Cadance and was teaching her magic at first sunset hated her because cadance had everything she herself wanted, but when the voice in her head (Morda) told her that cadance didn't deserve to be hated out of jealousy especially since it wasn't her fault.

Cadance was afraid of sunset via the stories she heard of the fire mane mare, sunset was only a little rude to cadance and she knew she was better out then most ponies when it came to sunset, sunset even took cadance to a carnival until she noticed cadence was uncomfortable.

They left the carnival and went to get ice cream with illusion magic to disguise their identity and have a fun day in the city sunset knew they were being followed by royal guards which is why she wanted to disguise their identities.

Cadence was glad about that since she hasn't had a normal life since coming to the castle she felt as if she was a prisoner not having her own freedom because of politics, but today thanks to sunset, cadence was getting to be a normal filly just like how she was living in the orphanage, and surrounded by ponies she came to know as her family.

Princess cadence wanted to remember this day so she asked sunset they could take a picture together shimmer rode her eyes, but bought a camera and took one with her anyways, at the end of the day sunset got in trouble for disappearing off with cadence, sunset didn't get mad with her.

To be continued... In chapter 1... I think.

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