Chapters Celestia's Vison/The Abduction
A Unicorn woke up strapped to a chair with a weird device on his head In this strange room. It had rusty leaky pipes on the walls, less rusty but still a little rusty pipes on the ceiling, chains hanging from the ceiling, light bars on each corner of the room. And finally there was A static TV in the middle of the room. ''What's is this place, Where am I, What's going on'' The Unicorn asked.
The TV suddenly turned on, The screen showed a Voodoo Doll in the shape of a Black unicorn with black button eyes And a Red mane. ''Hello Sharpend Horn I wanna play a game.'' The unicorn Doll said in a deep voice ''The power you have of being a Royal Guard has basically corrupted you. The device on your head is called a Reverse Bear Trap it will rip your jaw open if you don't break free and find the key somewhere in this room It's game over you have 2 minutes live or die it's your choice.'' Then the TV turned off.
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''He told me to break free but how do I get out of these straps?'' Sharpend struggled for a couple of seconds, then he started banging the reverse bear trap on the straps. ''Please tell me this works'' It took a lot of hits and by the time he broke free of the straps his hooves were swollen. ''The key has to be here somewhere.'' There wasn't a lot of light in the room making it VERY hard to see. ''I THINK I FOUND THE KEY!'' Without his telekinesis it was very hard to use the key. ‘’I’m not use to using these hooves’’ Sharpened said of course due to his lack of hoove usage he dropped the key ''DARN THESE FUCKING HOOVES.''
3, 2, 1
The clock hit zero ''AHHHHHHHH'' Sharpend yelled this lead to The Reverse Bear Trap ripping his jaw open Killing Him. This caused a lot more damage than you expect. It ended up creating a MASSIVE hole in his face completely shattering his skull, exposing his brain and blood was also dripping from It.
Princess Celestia woke up panting
''Sister are you alright'' Luna asked after bursting through the doors. ''I've just had the most terrible dream'' ''Why do you think i'm here that wasn't a dream It was a vision.'' Luna explained
''Why is it a vison if it already happend? A corrupted Royal Guard named Sharpend Horn died in it'' Celestia Argued
''The vison itself could be a warning to us as in something strange is going on here in Equestria. As for the part about the corrupted Royal Guard the topic itself seems to be pretty common, it's said that some Royal Guards vandalise areas and even said to commit assualt or battery on other ponies.'' Luna Explained
Then all of a sudden they heard a noise ''What The?'' Celestia Said ''How can somepony possibly break into the castle especially at night?'' They both went down to the throne room using their horns as a light source since it was dark in the throne room there was not a single light source. And once again they heard another noise.
''Over There'' Luna Pointed at a random doorway before charging in.
Celestia waited a few moments hoping for Luna to come out with the intruder. ''Uh Luna are you there?'' Celestia Asked, she then snuck into the same room Luna had run Into. All of a sudden she got attacked by a mysterious pony wearing button eye sunglasses and a stitched up mouth face mask. Celesta was able to fight back by blindly firing a couple of blasts before being knocked out with a blunt object.
Author's Note
This Is The First Time I'm Writing A Fanfic In A Traditional And Also I'll Try To Make The Traps In Future Chapters As Unique As Possible And Fitting With The Victim/Pony In The Trap
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The Game Begins/Guard Plot/The Cutie Mark Vault Trap
''Celestia woke up she couldn't move much until she realized she was in a full tub. She started thrashing around trying to get out of the tub. She pulled the drain plug and causing the key to go down the drain. Once getting out of the tub she looked around finding herself In a abandoned temple room ''Why is there a working bathtub In a abandoned temple?'' Celestia Asked.
The temple room Itself didn't have any windows And There was spray paint on the walls and there was a small fountain that still had water in it. The biggest thing in the room seem to be a dead Blue Unicorn with a Red Mane in the middle of the room who seem to have shot himself. ''Guess he Couldn't Escape This Place So He Killed Himself.'' Celestia Thought
''Sister i'm over here I'm alright'' Luna Said from the other side of the room. Celestia tried to walk over to Luna only to be stopped by a chain connected to a pipe that was attached to her hoof. ''A chain seriously.'' This is when celestia realized that her horn and wings were surgically removed, the area where they were suppose to be were sitched up. ''Losing our magic is bad enough but this is taking it too far.'' Celestia Said
''I Knew That Your Vison Was Warning Us About Something Going On In Equestria But I Didn't Expect It To Be Warning Us That We Were Next.'' Luna Said.
All of a sudden a flat screen TV on the wall turned on the same Black Unicorn Voodo Doll appeared on the screen. ''Hello Princess Celestia and Luna I want to play a game.'' The doll said in the same deep voice. ''You're in a abandoned temple in the middle of the Everfree Forest far away from canterlot.
''During your rule all you two really did was raise the sun and moon and be known as royality. In this game only one of you can escape alive and get back your magic back. In this case the one who escapes gets all the magic and gains responsibility of both sun and moon. You two have 1 hour for one to kill the other or else it's Game Over for both of you.''
Meanwhile near Ponyville
A crime scene was happing, a deas body of a unicorn has been discovered in a hay wagon and a bunch of Royal Guards were on the case. ''Apparently this unicorn's name was Starlight Glimmer.'' Dr Chemical said checking his autopsy report ''We've also found this hacksaw with a note tied to it saying We're all equal on the inside'' Dr Chemical Said
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''Whatever happend to Starlight must've been bad'' Detective Twilight Said
'Looking at the body looks like she was pricked, stabbed or even impaled with something and a lot of skin seems to be missing including her Cutie Mark.'' Said Captain Shining Armor
''Something strange must be going on in Equestria.'' Twlight Said
Earlier that day
Starlight Glimmer woke up in the cave with the Cutie Mark Vault ''Huh WHAT, SOMEPONY HELP'' she yelled slightly muffled ''GET ME OUT OF HERE'' she yelled. The TV sitting on the stone pillair where the Staff Of Sameness was suppose to be turned on. ''Hello Starlight Glimmer I wanna play a game.'' The voodo doll said in it's deep voice ''LET ME GO YOU SICK FUCK'' Starlight Yelled.
''You've removed other ponie's Cutie Marks which is what makes Us Unique. The same goes for me'' The TV then showed a picture of this mysterious ponie's Cutie Mark which was a Hacksaw.
''You forced others to try to live without them in this remote village basically forming a cult, you know you remind me a lot of my First Test Subject. So today Starlight you'll learn that we're all equal on the inside your task is simple all you have to do is remove the chains from your body, from your legs, and flanks and remove the hook from your jaw.''
''But if you don't rip all of them out before the timer runs out that Glass Shard Bomb sitting on that rock will explode blasting glass shards everywhere you have 1 minute and 30 seconds, live or die It's your choice.'' The TV then turned off.
Starlight hesitated for a moment but then noticed the time on the bomb going down she started with the one on her legs, of course ripping one out also removed a piece of her skin off.
Then she went for the two chains on her flanks she once again hesitated to rip them out but gathered enough will power to rip them out removing her Cutie Mark in the process.
Finally she moved onto the hook in her jaw, which was lodged deep in her jaw causing her to start sobbing when trying to pull it out.
3..2..1
The timer hit zero the Glass Shard Bomb went off blasting glass into Starlight's face killing her decaptating her, exposing her brain, and her body creating a puddle of blood the glass shards also ended up breaking open the Cutie Mark Vault
Back to the present
As a hearse took away Starlight's body Twilight decided to start a investigation a investigation idea ''Hey Captain how about we try to look into this mystery and figure out what's going on on Equestria and maybe even find out who's behind this''
''Sounds a bit far fetched but we can give it a try'' Shining Armor Said
Author's Note
Let Me Know What Traps You Want To See It Could Be From The Movies Or Your Own Orignal Trap But It Can't Be To Complex Tell What Pony Is In The Trap And Why
Puzzle 1/Airship Trap/Guard Plot 2
The Game Has Begun
Celestia looked around the abandoned temple hoping to find something of use or any clues from the graffiti on the wall. Then she noticed that the dead unicorn was holding a small tape player and a gun. The tape player on her side, she used a branch and a piece of cloth to reach it. Once retrieving the tape player she found a tape in her ''horseshore.'' (not exactly sure if that's what it is) When she inserted it into the tape player, the same deep voice from the voodo doll came on but it was slightly different this time, it said ''You two may be wondering where you are but i'll tell you where you might me, you might be in the room that you die in''
''That doesn't sound all that helpful'' Celestia Said
''Hey sister I found another tape in my horseshoe here catch'' Luna said as she threw the tape across the room. Celestia caught it and inserted it into the tape player it said ''The aim of this game is for one to kill the other, whoever kills the other get their magic back and gets responsibility of both the sun and moon''
''It didn't give me any information it just reminded us of what were suppose to do'' Celestia said
''Maybe you should listen closely to the tape it might reveal a hidden clue.'' Luna said, Celestia rewinded the tape and listen very closely and heard a very faint whisper saying ''Follow your heart'' Celestia looked around the temple and found a heart graffitied to the fountain. The water in the fountain was dirty there was even mold in it, Celestia reached her hoof into the fountain hoping to find something of use in it, she found a sack with 2 hacksaws in it. She threw one to Luna even though the hacksaws are suppose to cut through metal, these one were rusty so they didn't do much against their chains.
''FUCK I THOUGHT HACKSAWS CUT THROUGH METAL'' Celestia yelled as she threw her hacksaw against a panal in the temple wall which broke a piece of it off.
''Sister the hacksaws aren't to cut through our chains, it's why they're rusty they're for cutting through our hooves.'' Luna Said.
Meanwhile Near Ponyville
Dead bodies of 3 Wonderbolt members were discovered with a airship crash site a couple of yards away
''Looks like the members who did here were Soarin and Spitfire'' Dr Chemical said ''As for the third one can really tell, guess i'll have to wait for the autopsy report, We've also found another hacksaw withc a note tied to it saying ''Flying around and doing tricks for other ponies''
''Something tells me that the airship crash had something to do with their deaths.'' Twilight said
Earlier That Day
Soarin was the first Wonderbolt to wake ''What the, uh guys are you there.''
''I'm right here'' Spitfire said
Both of them along with another Wonderbolt member were all chained to heavy objects Soarin to a safe, Spitfire to a anvil and the third member to a huge block of cement
The TV inbetween the 3 of them suddenly turned on ''Hello Wonderbolts I want to play a game'' The voodo doll said, ''All you ponies are really known for is flying around doing tricks for other ponies there's more to life than that. Your task is simple reach you hooves into your pile of broken wires in front of you, retrieve the key and unchain yourselves from the heavy objects. If you don't get the key out before the door behind you opens you'll all be sucked out the airship and fall to your deaths, live or die it's your choice.'' The TV then shut off.
All 3 of them start digging their hooves into their own pile of broken wires, because it was a pile of broken wires, the Wonderbolts kept on being shocked by the wires. Soarin was the first one to find his key Spitfire on the other hoof had trouble finding her key, she kept on being shocked by the wires ''Am I Really This Sensitive To Electric Shocks'' but by then the dooe behind them opened
''NOOOOOOOO'' Spitfire yelled as she was sucked put of the airship along with the other member, Soarin was about to fly after them before being caught off guard by a box smashing apart before getting a bunch of nails stabbed into his body k This causes blood to flow down his down his body, before getting hit with a box and his head bursting his open,
Back To Present
''Hey Captain I managed to retrieve the license plate from the airship crash sight.'' A Royal Guard said
Shining Armor examined the license plate ''Looks like this airship was rented from a place call Canterlot Rentals come on Twilight lets head there.''
At Canterlot Rentals
''Did a pony make a purchase of a cargo airship in the last 24 hours'' Twilight asked the Computer Pony
''Actually there was a purchase of a cargo airship, ponies don't buy those type of airships alot making purchases of them stick out like a sore hoof'' The Computer Pony said ''Just let me check the database (Typing On Computer) Huh looks like the purchase of the cargo airship came from Diamond Tiara's bank account.''
''That doesn't make sense Captain isn't Diamond Tiara dead for like a year now'' Twilight whispered
''This ponie's gonna be harder to catch than we thought if he's able to cover his tracks like that using some other ponie's bamk account to make purchases'' Shining Armor said
Author's Note
The idea of the Airship Trap came from a comment of a youtube video called Saw Traps That Were Unbeatable It Said ''Look officer, I killed no one. He did it himself, I just simply tied him to a safe, and required him to eat all of his own intestines in 10 seconds or be ejected out of a plane to fall to his death. He DECIDED not to eat all of his intestines." Of course i removed the eat all your intestines in 10 seconds part since the comment it self was a joke
And also filly and colt characters like Diamond Tiara, Sliver Spoon, Button Mash, Rumble Flurry Heart and The Cutie Mark Crusaders are aged up in this AU
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Final Puzzle/DJ Booth Trap A.K.A The Eardrum Destroyer
''No, no, no'' Celestia Said ''Luna We're not gonna resort to severing our hooves to get free from these chains. There has to be a more safe less painful of unlocking these chains.'' She looked around for anymore clues, then she noticed that the piece of that panal that broke off was 2 way ''2 Way Glass So That Means'' Celestia then threw the piece at the remaining panal smashing it, revealing a camera and a note saying ''X marks the spot, Sometimes you see more when your eyes are closed.''
''Maybe that clue could be referring to a vison but I doubt it since visons are triggered by dreams or trances'' Luna explained
Meanwhile in Ponyville
The dead body of DJ Pon-3/Vinyl Scratch had been discovered in a abandoned music store head collapsed on a DJ Booth, headphones had somehow been stitched to her ears and when the headphones were removed blood came dripping out of her ears
''Looks like her eardrums have bursted from whatever sound was playing.'' Twilight said
''There doesn't seem to be a sound powerful enough to burst eardrums as far as we know.'' Shining Armor Explained
Earlier The Same Day
Vinyl woke up strapped to a DJ chair with cables ''What the this isn't my usual DJ setup'' Vinyl said as she started wigging around. All of a sudden her headphones turned on playing a loud sound she tried to shake her head to get them off to no avail ''What the fuck is wrong with my headphones.'' Vinyl said
Then a flat screen TV turned on ''Hello Vinyl Scatch I wanna play a game, your whole life you've focused on being a DJ and music in general so why don't we put that to the test. All you have to do is free yourself from the cables and turn off the DJ Booth. If you don't do that in 1 minute the loud noise from the headphones will be set to the max and it will explode your eardrums live or die it's your choice.'' The TV then shut off.
Vinyl struggled to free herself from the cables ''Why are these cables so fucking strong.'' Vinyl Complained. She was evantually able to free one hoof from the cables and reached for the controls, The DJ tried to get her other hoof free but realized she was wasting time so as she kept on trying with her free hoof to reach the controls to once agin no avail.
3..2..1
The timer hit zero and the noise from the headphones became so high pitched to the point where Vinyl couldn't even hear the noise all of a sudden her eardrums basically exploded and blood clogged up her ears and she ended up passing out and bled to death
Back To The Present
''So how's the case with the Royal Sisters going'' Shining Armor asked
''There doesn't seem to be anymore leads Captain were all out of evidence to find looks like were gonna have to declare this a cold case'' Flash Sentry Told Him
''I got an idea'' Celestia said ''The clue is you sometimes you see more when your eyes are closed so Luna turn off the lights.''
When Luna turned off the lights it revealed a X in the wall which was drawn in glow in the dark paint which was on Luna's Side. ''Who knew these clues were a lot literal than we thought'' Luna Said as she turned the lights back on and break through that part of the wall. She Found a box with a lock on it Luna uses the rusty hack from earlier to open it up, luckily the metal wasn't as strong as the chains, In The box she found a bullet. ''THAT'S IT I'M GOING FOT IT'' Luna Shouted as she bit down on a stick and started slicing off her own hoof all the while Celestia started yelling.
After all of that was over Luna threw the hacksaw aside and grabbed the gun from the dead unicorn and loaded it with the bullet from the box
''What are you doing Luna?'' Celestia asked
''You have to die'' Luna said aiming the gun at her sister
''I WANNA LIVE I WANNA LIVE '' Celestia yelled moving around to try to avoid the bullet
''I'm so sorry sister'' Luna said shooting her sister in the neck causing her to collapse to the ground, Luna dropped the gun and started sobbing. ''I'VE DONE IT LET ME GO NOW'' She said before continuing sobbing
All of a sudden a panal in the wall opened and Nurse Redheart came walking in the room ''SO YOU'RE THE ON BEHIND THIS I'LL GET YOU FUCKING BASTARD'' Luna yelled which was completely out of character for her, Nurse Redheart checked on Celestia's body are turns out she was still breathing ''She's still breathing'' Nurse Redheart said as she reached in a first aid kit with a x over it and pulled out a gun. ''You're both dead'' She said aiming the gun at Luna's head.
''AHHHHHHHH'' Celestia shouted tripping Nurse Redheart and knocking the gun out of her hoof before grabbing a piece of stone and smashing it over her head killing her. ''Don't leave me'' Celestia said sobbing ''Don't leave me here to rot Luna.''
''Don't worry sister'' Luna ensured ''I'll bring someone back I promise sister'' Luna said as she limped out of the temple room. Celestia reached into the first aid kit in hopes of finding a finding a key or something of use in there to unlock her chain. She ended up finding a tape player when playing it, it said ''Hello Nurse Redheart I want to play a game i've injected you with a slow acting posion that only I have the antidote to your task is to kill one of the Royal Sisters if one of them kills the other under one hour I'll leave you to die, but if the one hour runs, one of them aren't dead and you kill one of them i'll give you the antidote so basically your life is in there hooves''
''Wait a minute if Nurse Redheart isn't the mastermind behind this then who is'' Celestia Thought. All of a sudden the dead blue unicorn body with a red mane got up revealing that his cutie mark was a hacksaw ''The key to your chain was in that tub.'' Hacksaw said as he walked over to the door ''Some ponies are so ungrateful to be alive.''
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Hacksaw's voice wasn't even that deep a little raspy but overall he sounded like your typical stallion
''AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH'' Celestia yelled sobbing as Hacksaw turned off the lights
"'GAME OVER'' Hacksaw said as he used his magic to close the door
Author's Note
This one in my opinion this one really didn't have a lot to offer since the traps happend inbetween instead of being apart of the actual plot
The idea of Nurse Redheart being the fake mastermind came from another MLP Saw fanfic called My Little Horror: Games are Magic where Redheart injects Photo Finish with posion. Written by Ruby Sapphire you should go check it out, I read a couple other MLP Saw fanfics but that one was my main inspiration
The Sequel to this the traps will have something to do with the actual plot
