A Shimmer of Obedience

by Ebonyglow

For Obedience to Rise

Previous Chapter

“Yes! More! Harder! Thank you! Thank you Master! Thank youuuu!!!”

Starlight wailed below Anon, folded back into a mating press as he pummeled into her marehood. Her legs were lifted over his shoulders, as he absolutely dominated and plowed into her with all his might. He did promise her a reward for her efforts, and he was certain to fulfill it.

“Tch ~ I gotta say, you took way too long,” Lightning Dust muttered, turning away from the sight of Starlight’s pleasure and towards Sunset. “Seriously, it was a pain to keep up the super sultry act while taking that long. I just wanted you to see you become Master’s slut, just like me!”

“Ever impatient, aren’t you?” Mayor Mare grumbled, sorting through some of the papers in the corner of Anon’s room. “Or are you just jealous you’re having to wait so long for Master to rut you? That winking pussy of yours surely tells the tale~”

Sunset rolled her eyes, channeling magic into Anon’s dark tome. “Oh please, I can see how drenched you both are from here.” She chuckled, focusing back on the book as she continued to empower it. “Can’t say I’m any better ~ I’d love to be rutted by our Master like Starlight is right now.”

“You’ll all get similar treatment in time, slaves~” Anon grunted from behind, his words nearly drowned out by Starlight’s pleasureable wails.

She giggled in response, biting her lip as she felt her marehood give an enthusiastic wink upon the promise of being dominated in similar fashion. The mere idea sounded like a dream come true, but now that she was Anon’s property, she knew she’d eventually be used just as hard and well. It was her purpose to serve now, and her Master was extremely generous with how he treated his slaves. Generous enough to even show a mare as resistant and stubborn as her the wondrous light of enthrallment.

Shortly after being remade into a proper servant by her Master, he had quickly informed her and the others to all return to his home. After having her asshole eaten out by Starlight, having the leaking seed inside her thoroughly lapped up, she had managed to stand and follow him and her fellow slaves back to his home.

They had arrived at his humble abode a little an hour ago, but he was swift to make a handful of commands. First and foremost, he had immediately focused on her. Having walked up to her and lovingly caressed her ass, which was now his property, the mere touch of her newly forged Master was enough to send a pleasurable shiver up her spine. Though, receiving her first personal order as slave nearly made her cum right then and there.

He had made his command rather straightforward; she was meant to empower the book with her own magic, fusing it with Starlight's. The process would take some time, especially if she was meant to get it to the level where it could conquer even the Elements of Harmony, but she happily did so as long as it’d take. She was fulfilling his orders after all, and that’s all that mattered to her now.

Shaking her ass behind her, putting on a show for her Master while he rutted her fellow slave, she hummed happily to herself. Obedience was bliss and pleasure, and thanks to Anon she now knew the truth of it all. Eagerly fulfilling her purpose, feeling pleasure course through her with every second she obeyed, she finally saw the book shimmer with a deep red glow.

“Ahn! Y-yes! Fill me up, Master! Thank you! Oh fuck! Yessssss!!!”

Starlight let out another flurry of ecstatic moans, screaming with bliss as her Master gave a deep groan from above her. Rope after rope of divine cum shot into her pussy flooding her womb to the brim. Cum swiftly began to spurt past the seal his cock made on her cunt, as her insides were flooded with his batter. Behind her, she heard Mayor Mare and Lightning Dust give out pleasurable moans. They had caved to their desires, and, unable to hold back, had furiously been eating one another out while listening to the symphony that was their Master’s work.

Sunset stopped shaking her rear for her Master, slowly turning in place. She felt a cascade of her arousal drip down her thighs, as she caught sight of the quivering, gleeful mess Starlight now was. Fighting the urge to rub herself furiously, she shrouded the book in her magic and levitated it over to him.

Watching his tome hover towards him, Anon slowly unsheathed himself from Starlight’s depths. A surge of cum gushed out of her marehood, as she gasped at the air and regained her bearings. Leveling her breathing, coming back to reality from her blissful nirvana, she caught sight of the book in her blurry vision.

“Did yoush finish it?” she slurred, still somewhat drunk on lust.

Sunset chuckled to herself, envying Starlight's state. “Yup! Just like Master ordered, I added my magic to the book alongside yours. Nothing should be able to resist it entirely now. Though, it’s still possible something like what happened with Lightning Dust could occur.”

Dust scoffed, pulling her muzzle away from Mayor Mare’s marehood. “As long as that prismatic pest Rainbow Dash doesn’t last as long as me, it’ll be fine - mmmm~

Giving a single, parting lick to the pegasus’ snatch, her face covered in her partner’s lust, Mayor Mare snickered. “You really still hold that grudge against her, hmm? You weren’t kidding when you told all of us how you two were ‘rivals for life’”

Anon chuckled as he listened to his two slaves banter. “As nice as Rainbow Dash would be, I don’t think we’ll be getting to her for a while. There’s a much more immediate threat within the Elements we need to worry about,” he replied, snatching the book from the air.

Starlight shook her head, groggily blinking as she recovered from nearly passing out. “Mmmph ~ That’s right…”

“We still need to inevitably handle Miss Pie,” Mayor Mare finished, eyeing the papers scattered around her. “She and her friends are set to return in about two days, so you have all of tomorrow to prepare, Master.”

Lightning Dust rose up onto her hooves, shaking herself off and ruffling her feathers. “Alright, so how are we going to do this? Snatch her up when she isn’t looking and bring her back here? She doesn’t look that tough I’m pretty sure I -“

“I’m positive she could straight up kill you if she wanted to,” Anon interrupted, rubbing his brow. “No, we need to approach this way more carefully.”

“How so?” Sunset inquired, sitting down onto a pillow. “Do you have a plan of sorts?”

He rubbed his chin, thinking to himself intently. There wasn’t exactly a clear cut way to approach a possibly pissed Pinkie Pie pursuing him, but he knew of some factors. Though her Pinkie Sense could tell when one of her promises were broken, it couldn’t directly tell her who. She would certainly have a feeling around him, but jumping the gun and accusing him of such an abhorrent act would be out of character for her.

As long as he played his cards right, he could ease her into a situation with him. Sure, he’d be scared shitless knowing she was suspecting him the entire time, but he could manage a way to weave some threads of trust into her. As long as he had enough to enact some sort of plan, he’d be golden.

Pointing between Sunset and Dust, he pouted his lips. “Firstly, you two absolutely cannot help.”

“What?! Why?!” Lightning Dust blurted out, raising a foreleg to object. “C’mon, Master, you know I’m totally capable of backing you up! Nopony can beat me!” She recoiled a portion, biting her lip. “Y-Y'know, besides you…”

He rolled his eyes, failing to hide a smile from her adorable rebuttal. “Because I totally know you both don’t belong here right now. If any of them see both Lightning Dust of the Washouts, without y’know, the Washouts, and Sunset Shimmer from a literal different world, hanging out with little ole me - they’d be way more suspicious of things.” He pointed out his window, towards Sugarcube Corner at the edge of his house’s view. “Especially Pinkie Pie.”

“Wait, that could work…” Mayor Mare began, running towards the window.

Anon raised a brow, slipping off the bed and giving Starlight an affectionate pat on the head. “Pardon?”

Starlight peeked over his shoulder, perking up as she pieced together what the mayor was laying out. “Sugarcube Corner…”

Anon shrugged, staring deadpanned between them. “You lost me.”

“Pinkie Pie is always there. It’s where she works and lives, but it’s also where she’s most comfortable,” Mayor Mare explained, glancing over at Starlight.

“Meaning she’d possibly be more relaxed while in there, and, more than likely, easier to catch off guard and add to your collections,” Starlight followed, giving a smile and a nod at the Mayor.

Anon rubbed his chin, focusing his gaze on the far sweet shop. “Alright, but how exactly am I supposed to set anything up in there?”

Mayor Mare snickered to herself, eyeing him deviously. “I can distract Mr.Cake for the day. There’s tons of paperwork I can make up for him to fill out.”

“What? Why would I need you to -“

“So you can enslave Mrs.Cake with much more ease,” Starlight interrupted, levitating and waving the cursed book in front of him. “Who better to help set up a trap inside Sugarcube Corner than one of the owners of it? Plus, Pinkie would trust her entirely.”

Anon rubbed his chin, his member beginning to rush with blood at the thought of adding the sweet Mrs.Cake to his collection. “I am rather fond of milfs…” He smacked Mayor Mare’s rump, eliciting an excited yelp from the mare. “Very fond actually…”

“So, I suppose you have a plan set up then, Master?” Sunset began, her eyes drifting towards his hardening member. “Lightning Dust and I will wait here, Mayor Mare will distract Mr.Cake, and you and Starlight…”

“Will add the next pony to our wonderful, little group~” he darkly chuckled, eyeing the innocent looking shop.

Tomorrow was going to be quite the important day.


Pinkie Pie laid back in her bed, the royal bedrooms of the castle as quiet and peaceful as ever - yet she was anything but.

There was one day remaining in her and her friends’ trip, yet she hadn’t managed to get a lick of sleep tonight. Her tail and body had been fidgeting nonstop since lunch, and though she did her best to hide it, she was finally alone to herself to think. Her friends were all asleep in different rooms, leaving her alone to her thoughts, but all she found herself doing was adorning an uncommon scowl across her face. She grit her teeth, flicking the bouncy lick of hair that hung above her head with annoyance.

A second one. A second Pinkie Promise had been broken, and she was writhing with frustration. She didn’t know who would break two Pinkie Promises, but she did know it was the same pony! She didn’t intend to harmwhoever broke them, but an extremely firm talking to was certainly needed. Nopony breaks a Pinkie Promise - nopony.

Then, at the end of her same, agonizingly reminding combo, a second one followed.

She felt the motions go through her body, a different set to that of a broken Pinkie Promise. She recognized this one immediately, since it only happened when associated with a certain individual.

“Really, Pinkie?” she muttered to herself, her scowl shifting to uncertainty. “Maybe your sense is all coco in the loco today…”

But then it happened again.

The same two combos. One that spoke of a broken Pinkie Promise, and then this other one.

And again.

And again.

And again.

She sighed, struggling to believe what her otherworldly senses were telling her, yet she surrendered to it. Her pinkie sense was never wrong, as unnatural as it seemed, so she had to accept it as it was.

Yet it made her all the more angry. Of all creatures, they were one of the ones she spoke to most! They were one of the ones she trusted more than any other! They baked together! Played games together! Hung out all the time together!

But there was just no denying it, her sense never lied.

“Alright,” she sighed, her annoyed grimace returning to her. “I’m going to find out what you promised and why you broke it.”

She hurled her blanket over herself, grumbling to herself as she prepared to finally sleep. She still had to wait a whole day to confront the mean ole promise breaker after all. She might as well not be totally dead tired, it’d ruin her friends’ fun on the last day of their trip here anyways.

“And you’re gonna apologize a whole lot…”

She let her eyes flutter closed, allowing the grasp of sleep to seep into her, but not before letting out one last mumble.

Anon.”