Dead Loop

by Con Los Terroristas

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark, Alternate Universe, Sad, Gore, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Sex, Tragedy, Twilight Sparkle
Length: 3082

Halloween scary story

Strange dark magic has invaded Equestria. Dark creatures lurk in the shadows as evil invades quicksilver's mind. Dark Hallucinations reveal the only path to salvation in this darkened evil time.

MUCH GORE>DEATH>OTHER ADULTCONTENT

Published 2012-10-26 21:30:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-10-30 21:35:48 UTC

Bad Omen

Darting up in bed gasping for breath that struggled to fill my lungs, I awoke covered in sweat from a horrible nightmare I could hardly remember. Thunder boomed outside; Lightning forks constantly sliced through the darkness, I would have yearned to be out there flying on a night like this if not for her. Partially wrapped in blood red bed sheets near me, a purple unicorn shuffled slightly as the silver-shards of moonlight mixed with flashes of lightning, piercing into the room pouring over us and illuminating her bare fur. I snuggled near my lover pulling the crimson cloth over us careful not to wake her from her slumber. The purple mare felt warm against my fur, her sweet aroma filled my senses as my muzzle burrowed into her soft pink and blue mane; I wanted this moment to last forever. Nestling tightly against my mate and wrapping my hooves around her tantalizing body I quickly forgot the dwelling nightmare, drifting back into a more peaceful dreamless rest.

The next morning I awoke to a beautiful sight. Sun peeked through windows of our recently purchased house on the far outskirts of Las Pegasus, Twilight's violet eyes peered into mine forcing a smile onto my face. I examined her body, her purple fur beckoned for me to stroke it but I withheld my desire. She lay there a moment before gently leaning over to touch the tip of her muzzle against mine partially throwing her front hooves on my chest to pin me down. Closing my eyes I placed a hoof on the side of her muzzle; Our tongues danced for a moment as she lay beside me. I was lost in thought making love to the beautiful-intelligent mare. I felt a strange-warm drip on my hoof, opening my eyes I saw a horrific sight; Blood was spattered across the ceiling caking it in dripping red lines that drew strange symbols and spelled out three simple words.

"Death"

"Kindness"

"Magic"

I gasped, looking down at Twilight, she was dead, maggots slithered on her rotting-bloated body in the now disgusting bedsheets. Her eyes were removed, holes glared back at me sending daggers of fear straight into my heart. The smell of rotting flesh quickly filled my senses overwhelming me, I became dizzy from the lack of fresh oxygen almost screaming at the ghastly sight. Shocked, I backed up quickly, falling out of the bed entirely and slamming to the floor. I only blinked for a moment, when I opened my eyes everything was normal. Twilight leaned over the edge of the bed looking down at me with a very puzzled look on her slightly blushing face. I felt sick, I could hardly hold back the nausea, I felt like I would puke.

"Are you okay down there?" She teased.

Stunned, I rubbed my eyes with my hooves, my heart was still racing. "What the fuck was that?!" I thought to myself quietly.

Quickly standing up, I stared at Twilight sprawled out in the bed, her beautiful purple fur taunted me as she slid the sheets down to reveal more. I didn't understand what was going on, was this some kind of sick joke? I felt horrible for lying but I had to get some fresh air.

"Twi, Babe I'm so sorry, I just remembered, I have to report to Princess Luna today, I am probably late already!"

The lie was only a mild one, slipping into my royal armor I glanced back at her, I could see her eyeing me in my fancy dark blue attire, the same thing I had been wearing the first time we met. She looked mildly upset but I couldn't think about that.

"Be back soon. I love you." I said, winking to her as I trotted toward the door.

"Hmph! Fine whatever go then..." Twilight teased me with guilt, I could not respond correctly in my state so I simply chose to ignore it merely sending another loving gesture her way.

Opening the door, the sunlight hurt my eyes. As a Lunar Guard I was much more acquainted with nighttime and darkness rather than the bright sunlight.

Quickly adjusting, I burst out the door and took flight in the direction of Canterlot. The journey from Las Pegasus was a very short one, zipping past several cloud tufts at top speed I made good time and landed just outside the royal chambers. I was met by several of my up-tight "white fur" brothers at the gate who seemed rather reluctant to let me pass.

"Oh Luna, I really don't have time for these clowns right now.." I muttered under my breath so nopony could hear me.

"Halt!" One of the door guardsmen said as I approached the giant double slabs. Several other unicorns pointed their deadly magic horns in my direction when I ignored his "request".

"I don't take my orders from the likes of you! You know not who you speak to. Open the door, and let me pass." I ordered showing my royal insignia, I had far superiority to a simple door guardsstallion, he would be a foal to attempt anything rash.

"Y-yes sir!" He said saluting me as his horn started to glow. Sorry sir, we don't get many officers reporting in these days, especially Lunar Guard."

"Yeah, I wouldn't be here if it were not of importance! Now, I can't discuss the matter further with the likes of you, if you don't mind, I shall be on my way." I purposefully spoke down to the door guard to show my superiority. In all truth, I was glad to see the young lad defending the kingdom, perhaps some day he would rise in ranks and be in a similar situation as my own.

After entering through the giant door, I was mildly astounded, this occasion marked probably the thousandth time I had trotted these halls but every time it's elegance seemed to impact me just the same as the first time I laid eyes upon it. trotting for seemingly an eternity, I came to a new set of even more luxurious doors. The guardsstallions here were more my style, Lunar guards. We needed no introductions of each other; As I cantered closer the duo took more straightened postures.

Chapter 2 Coming soon.

Royalty

"Sir?" One of the stallions said, I recognized him, knew him by name, he knew mine as well but most, if not all Lunar Guard knew at least that much about me. I considered us somewhat friends, we went way back; We had even been on several nocturnal missions together. "Sir" was just a matter of respectfulness that I can't lie, I rather enjoyed.

"Oh no need for such formalities Shatter, how are the mare and foals?" I eased him with light conversation, it was not often visitors came this far back into the castle other than myself and a few select Lunar Guard officers.

He chuckled at the question deflecting with his own witty answer as always.

"Why don't you get busy with that new mare we have all heard so much about? Then you would know.... No, But seriously, having foals home waiting for you is like the greatest thing in all Equestria! Don't put something so magical off for long, you never know when.... Well... My wife's dad... He... He died last week... Something about his brain man... He was fine, then poof, he was gone."

"Wow, yeah I will have to keep that in mind. By the way, don't forget about the full moon party later this weekend, I want to see both of you there, they are great." I ordered in a mockingly official tone. "This means you too Sliver. Hey, that reminds me, I heard you were asking questions about my squad, are you interested? I have seen your night flying runs before, you are pretty damn good!"

"Damn, I never know when I am being watched by the best I guess." His S's whistled through a slight grin.

"Oh please, I am nowhere near the best... I have been out of practice and missed a few missions... Hope to get back out there soon, I feel... Something strange."

The two guards' curiosity peaked at the response.

"Something strange?" They rang out in almost exact harmony.

"Oh nothing... Nevermind, Just a few nightmares I had recently." I responded.

The immense feeling of Déjà vu seeped into my senses, I couldn't actually remember any nightmares other than the one the night before but it all seemed similar somehow.

Thinking for a moment, I quickly questioned them. "Hmm, didn't I already tell you two this?"

Looking at each other for a moment then back at me they both shook their heads. "No, I don't think so sir." Shatter eventually said.

"Well, as much as I love to chat I really need to get this report to Luna. Have a good day gentlecolts."

With that final gesture, the two stallions tapped a secret code on the door; Moments later the giant slabs were highlighted in magical aura. The massive doors groaned as they swung open to reveal vast quantities of elegant fabric and jewels masterfully positioned inside Luna's throne room. The ceiling was dark and high, but looking at it was perplexing, it seemed as endless as the black reaches of space; The illusion of magical starlight speckled the ceiling. It was impossible to count the individual dots, there must have been billions. Silver lamps gleamed out over the interior of the beautiful enclosure, their faint shimmer was designed to imitate the cool-soothing light of the moon over Equestria, it made me feel at ease. I slowly cantered deeper into the room toward the long staircase at the end of the foyer, a long dark-blue carpet stretched down the stairs up to the edge of the door I had just walked through. Several Lunar guard unicorns saluted as I cantered past, I made the mental connection that they had been the ones who had opened the doors. Gently nodding my head at them I continued trotting down the long-carpet toward the enormous throne resting on the other side.

As I drew closer, I could see a dark-alicorn sitting majestically upon the throne, her starry-mane flowed even in the absence of wind. Bowing my head in respect as I waited, thoughts raced through my mind, I could feel my heart beating within my chest, I was incredibly nervous.

"Captain Quicksilver, we had not expected you to join us. Has something happened?" Luna calmly questioned, her practiced tone was gentle and soothing.

She tried to hide it, and I must say did a very good job of it but I could sense the worry in her voice. I felt like my nerves getting tense but it was too late to turn back now.

"Princess, No nothing like that. There have been some strange things that have happened recently... I can't explain it I have a bad feeling." I said trying to judge her reaction to what I was about to say.

"Pardon? What do you mean strange things?" Luna had a worried look on her face, perhaps I was more shaken by the experience than I realized.

"Dreams..." I paused for a moment. "I had a strange dream I can't explain it.... There were symbols and........"

"What do you mean symbols?. We need you to show us." Luna's voice changed from calm to slightly more stern as she waved a pair of unicorns toward me. I could tell she was obviously more worried now. Maybe this was more serious than I thought.

I was at a pause for a moment. I hardly remembered what the symbol even looked like, only one image burned into my mind; Twilight Sparkle's decayed corpse staring at me with bloodied blank sockets, I felt sick again but the unicorns quickly stepped before me with a scroll and notepad leaving little time to think.

"I think I can do that." I said as I took the quill in my hoof.

I started to give my best sketch of the symbol. As I drew, more of the the twisting shapes started to form in my mind quickly transferring to the page, The symbol was intricate, I needed to duplicate it as best as possible. It took several minutes to finish, the room seemed to hold it's breath as my quiet quill sketches radiated their noise alone. I started to feel dizzy, the final lines of the symbol connected, it seemed to be alive on the scroll, far more complex than I remember drawing. Before I had time to think the symbol flashed red, I felt a sharp pain in my chest. Hearing the two unicorns' gasping voices behind me, the room started to fade, the last thing I saw before the darkness swirled around me was the princess of the night leaping up from her throne, the terror on her face drilled the seriousness further into my mind.

Slightly groaning, I awoke to a vast barren landscape. I was dazed, my mind slowly started to recompose it's self. Sharp rocks jabbed into my side causing me to regain consciousness fully, Crumbled buildings extended for miles, the sky was darkly red tinted and nopony was around. I nervously scanned the horizon, a towering building stood in the distance, as I allowed more of the scenery to enter my mind, a grim fact became more apparent, I was standing in the ruins of Canterlot. The towering building in the distance was the twisted remains of the palace, morphed by dark magic. A tall red spire penetrated the center of the once exquisite building, extending into the sky. I quickly burst into flight over the crumpled city. Rushing toward the castle, I saw nopony, dead or alive, the bodies had seemingly vanished leaving only this unnerving ruin behind. Upon landing, a sinking feeling rose in my gut. The doors had been ripped off their hinges. I saw the first sign of ponies in this nightmare, skeletons of long dead guard ponies still wore their armor, their deaths had been brutal and I hoped quick; Limbs were scattered everywhere, old blood stains caked the walls. I heard a shuffling noise behind me, quickly pivoting my head in the direction of the sound I started taking a battle stance, I thought I saw a dark figure seem to fade from view, there would be nowhere to hide, I passed it off to my imagination.

Turning back toward the door, I ran through, nothing looked the same, I was very anxious, the walls held deep gashes and memories of a war. The magic had morphed the structures themselves to be dark and wild, arches on doorways twisting with red thorns that seemed to pulse with the rhythm of a heartbeat. Each stone held glowing red symbols that mimicked the one that landed me in this nightmare. I felt my gut churning as adrenaline pumped through my veins pushing me faster down the seemingly endless hallway. Dark shapes often appeared in the corners of my vision but I ignored them delving further into the twisted ruin of the old castle. After what seemed like eternity I finally reached the familiar doors deep within the keep.

I dropped at the horrific sight feeling my heart skip a beat, twisted corpses lie dead at the entrance, their bones seemed to be melted fusing with their armor, flesh was long gone, they were only identifiable by the deep-blue armor that wrapped their skeletal remains. Lunar guards, probably Shatter and Sliver. A gaping hole had been torn in the center of the giant slabs. Several thoughts raced through my mind, I had to go inside, it was my duty. The hole was enormous, slipping through was easy. Luna's throne room had changed entirely, the spire ripped through the ceiling pouring sunlight into the room. I saw a strange sight, a lunar guard slumped in the middle of the carpet surrounded by a dark aura. Cantering closer my heart skipped a beat, I was staring at a reflection of myself, the doppelganger took slight breaths, he seemed strained, as I drew closer I could tell why. The skin of my clone had been removed, his body trembled, he was in shock. I extended a hoof to touch him and his face quickly turned to stare at me, he had the same blank eye sockets, the bloody holes stared into me. My attention was drawn to his teeth; Sharp rows of needles filled his mouth, he seemed to grin at me before pouncing in my direction. Shocked, I backed away tripping over some crumbled stone scattered across the floor. I quickly stood back up and the figure had vanished.

"What have you done?" A raspy-terrifying voice seemed to emanate from all directions.

I nervously pivoted my head, nopony was in the room but I could feel the cold eyes watching me.

"Sh-Show yourself!" I commanded the unknown presence, it was difficult to hide the fear in my voice.

An eerie scream fractured the silence, it quickly filled the room around me reverberating from the long crumbled walls. With only a moment to think, I slightly lowered my head and stiffened my stance ready for battle. A black mist began to swirl around creating a dark figure in the center of the room, shadowy shapes entered through the broken windows and crumbled ceiling as soul piercing shrieks tore into my ears shattering the few remaining windows in the abandoned tower. The deafening sound radiated through my bones feeling as if needles were scraping off my flesh; The unbearable pain forced me to collapse to the ground, I struggled to keep my eyes on the dark figure manifesting in the center of the room, As I stared the feeling of sickness started to overcome me, The figure was little more than a decayed stallion; Bits of gore and blood spattered the bleach white bone, he peered through the shadows as the figure slumped in the middle of the room absorbing the darkness and enveloping himself in it. The screams from the figure sounded pained and tormented; The feeling of fear and disgust quickly subsided leaving room for pity to overcome my thoughts. I struggled to stand up, the figure glared at me with black sockets. The final bits of shadow swirled around the room wrapping his body in a twisting-dark cloak that seemed to have a life of it's own.