Evilclawws Revenge

by Darkwing_Evilclaww

Rating: everyone
Tags: Main 6, Nightmare Moon, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Adventure, Tragedy, Princess Celestia
Length: 4416

Jake appears in ponyville to on accident to stop the Evilclaww.

Jake appears in ponyville to on accident to stop the Evilclaww.

Published 2012-09-24 02:14:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-09-24 02:14:01 UTC

Chapter 1

(Hay, so i used spell check because some people said i spell bad. it was like magic, now everything is fixed. so don’t say it is a bad story because i spell bad cause it is fixed and now saying that would be mean.)

“There once was a brony in equestria. He loved all of the ponies equally,but his favorite pony were Rarity. He suddenly appeared in equestria one day and was so happy because he watched and liked the show lots and gave him joy like a candy in a children store. The sun shone in the blue sky like a cantalope in a Olimpic swimming pool in the sky. He immediately saw Rarity at Sugar Cube Corner and saw derpy Hoofes in the background eating muffins and ran over to talk to her because she was far away and couldnt hear him. He realized he was not a human in equestria because that wouldn’t make sense. He was now an half alicorn half zebra but i didnt have stripes like a zebra but you could still tell he was a zebra. Twilight sparkle said Hi welcome to equestria. these are my friends rarity, pinky pie, rainbow dash, fluttershy, spike, applejack, and me. Nice to meet you all of them said. He said Hi. He saw derpy again.

Suddenly there was a knock at the door. rarity and pinky pie and rainbow dash, fluttershy, spike and applejack and pinkie pie and Jack, and twilight sparkle wondered who it was because the door was closed. It was Zecora. I know why all this has happened to you. Jack was wondering why know one herd her and realized that she was using psycic powers to talk to him and no one else here could hear her talking to him. Then everybony ran away because Bridle gossip hadn’t happened yet.

Pinky Pie said I heard she eats Hay. And but you eat hay said Twilight Sparkle. Butt its the way she eats Hay. They ran.

Rainbow dash wasn’t looking where she was flying and she ran into Cranky Doodle Dnkey. OW!!! they said collectively together at once.

Oh my Celestia! said everypony quiet loudly. youre eyes!
Rainbow Dash looked at her eyes and realized they were just like Derpy’s except not gold like Derpy’s. Oh my god! my eyes are like Derpy’s! said Rainbow Dash. She didn’t know “what to do because this hadn’t happened to her before. Derpy“ was there to.

HAHAH HA HA HA HA said Cranky Doodle Donky and laughed.

Your eyes look just like Derpy He said. and laughed some more becuase its funny..

Twilight Sparkey said I know a spell that can fix this but she forgot. She couldn’t do anything about the eye so she felt badly. SOrry. Maybe some books will help, Daring doo maybe help focus.

While they were talking, rarity was still running with spike because they really like them. the best pony took him far away from the scary zebra so that they could be private. They were private with derpy, because she liked them too. They found a tree. It was not fluttershy,

Jack was there because he ran with them when they ran. He asked who was that strange pony called Zecora. He had never seen it in the epidoses.and he could not talk about what he saw in episodes because of magic. She was a person that is always doing ominous things. Oh said Jack. He didn’t really understand though.

Applejack kinda ran, but then she had to sell apples. She sold red apples and blue apples and green apples and yellow and rainbows, which were very special, because only the apple family sold them. The cost alot and made lots of money. Appelboom was also there too, trying to sell aples to derpy hooves was hidden in the background. She is very sneaking pony. But people saw her sometimes if they watch close.

Then Luna (who is the best pony) came to fix things. and she said i REALLY THINK YOU SHOULD HE FIXED EYES, RAINBOWDASH AND SERPY. yES i SEE YOU. fIXXY! and there was magic, and she saw that it was good. but it only made rainbow dash really warm inside. her face turned red, like when you eat rainbows, but it wasn’t
spicy cause she didn’t actually eat them. i THINK THAT SPELL we USE WAS WRONG, BECAUSE SHE IS RED.

Rainbow Dash being red and all ran out of the library crying because she started feeling things she didn’t feel before the magic happened. She ran but then she flew where earthponies cant fly and neither unicorns. She was flying in corcscrews cause, it is hard to see when you cant look stairght. She started falling because of the tears and was caught in Derpy Hooveses mailbag because Derpy Hooves had followed her when she fle.w Rainbow Dash wondered what smelled like muffins but it was muffins in Derpy’s Hooves Mailbag. She qiuetly whispered in a hushed voice Thank you Derpy hooves!

* ~~Trot with me through the autumn leaves and keep close to stay warm soon you’ll see how much you mean to me feelings I’ve never felt before - MicTheMicrophone <3~~ *

Derpy Hooves didn’t see Rainbow Dash until she fell into her bag and whispered those things. Derpy blushed because nopony had ever talked to her like that before. Also Rainbow Dash had Derpy eyes so they were perfect. Their eyes mirrorred echothers eyes and they looked into each others eyes. It was a cute scene. But fluttershy flew in because she heard a wounded duck in the sky where they, derpy and Rainbow Dash were in the sky together.

Rainbow Dash burst out of DerpyHooves’s mail sack because she was embarassed but she actually didn’t want to leave because she actually liked it. Pinkie pie’s head came up to, but she jumped out and they said stupid pinkie. she fell.. Flutter Shy caught her though so she was ok. She put her on the ground so she walked away and she flew away back to Derpy hooves and Rainbow Dash.They were still embareassed and Rainbowdash said I don’t need a wingman.

Jake saw all of this and he wanted to tell all the ponies that Rainbow Dash and Derpy Hooves were in love buyt he didn’t becasue he minded his own business. He went off to talk to Rarity where she was best pony. Rarity was with Spike but there were other people ther too. And a tree. Jack said hi again. Rarity was saying something to spike but she stopped and talked to Jack. Hi. Jack said I really like your work; you make petty dresses. Rarity said thanks and blushed a lot. Spike was mad. He was jealouse. I mean REALLY jealouse.Then jack gave rairtys a hug because friendship and told her he could help make her things too. spike wanted to help jack off rarity he thought with angers. He stormed off muttering under his breath about mustaches. He bumped into Pinky Pie who was walking from earlier. Ow my nose

he said clutching his nose. Ow my nose said Pinky Pie clutching her hand because pinky Pie is very random. Spike was confused but he didn’t care because he was still thinking about Jack and Rarity talking like they did.

Fluttershy said what are you two doing up here all alone. Cloudsdale isn’t here and I am here because of a duck but shirley you can’t be up here because of a duck as well? Rainbow Dash blushed. Derpy Hooves said that she was flying whe Rainbow dash was also flying and the colided into her bag when she wasn’t looking. Neither of the three noticed the dark and ominous figure that was hiding far away behin d them. They dind’t see him at all. He laughed wickedly.

MWAHAHA!
But he was far away so they did not here him laugh wickedly. He was a giffon with large black feathered wings and red eyes and his feathers stood up on his head giving him a feather crown. He was hiding behind a cloud watching all the Elements of Harmony. He knew that they were the only ones who could stop him like they stopped Nightmare Moon. He teleported away because he was also an alicorn griffon so he could use magic.
Deep in his griffon eyrie (that’s what you call the place where eagles live) Darkwing Evilclaww plotted his evil plan. He had been bannished from the gryphon society because of his magical horn. He had always had it, but he did not know where it came from. He never knew who his parents were, and this had always made him angry and evil. He was evil but he was just misunderstood. So he came to Equestria to where he could be evil to the ponies but he found out about the Elements of Harmony and how they were more powerful than even Vinyl Scratch’s Bass Cannon. So he had to defeat the welders of the Elements of Harmony, Twilight Sparkle, Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy, and one time Spike in order to assert his evil rule over Equestria. Luckily since he was an magical gryphon he was very powerful, so he could conquer them. His name was Darkwing Evilclaww. He had named himself that because he was so cool and he had no parents to name him like batman.

Meanwhile, back in Ponyville, all of the ponies had got back together to talk, and Jackie said he wanted to talk to Zecora because she said that she knew why he was in Equestria. But all of the other ponies said he shouldn’t because he lives in the Everffree Forest which is full of dangerous things and poison joke and timberwolves and bad songs. So then Jackie and Rainbow Dash decided to go to the Everfree Forest to go see Zecora because Zecora has lots of drugs that Rainbow Dash thinks might fix her Derpy eyes. Then Jack asked how he was going to get to Zecoras house. Twilight Sparkle then said that she would vaporizze any monsters that got in their way with her increadable magic that is more powerful than any other unicorn in Equestria, so that they would be safe when they went there.The other ponies decided to come along also because they were bored and they have to do everything together.

So at Zecoras hut house they all arrived. They said Hello is anybody there? But nopony answered so they yelled again Is anypony here and mist began to form around them and suddenly monsters made out of mist jumped on everyone. But because they were made out of mist the ponies were not afraid but they should have been since the mist was black magic and the mist monsters hurt them. But then Twilight Sparkle said do not be afraid and she shot lazers at the monsters and the mist monsters were vaperized. Suddenly a shape appeared out of the mist and Twilight Sparkle got ready to shoot at the shape but then the shape said shoot you must not for I am Zecora. I am a friend but not a monstora. She said this because she rhymed because she was a zebra.

Zecora then told all of the ponies including derpy hoovesand Jake that they are welcome in her hut for a cup of tea that makes warm inside. The ponies then all went inside the hut (they fit because it is bigger on the inside) and sat down and got ready for tea but then Applejack said that Zecora was making poision tea because she didn’t trust her because she is a raceist. But then Rarity said, do not worry, because I learned a poision detector spell, while I was in the service. Rarity then said that the tea was not poisioned and Applejack then trusted Zecora and her black magic. And then everyone had a mug of jolly tea and laughed and were friends.

And so Jake said you told me with your psychic powers Zecora that you knoew why I was here so why am I here? Zecora said It is because you are the chosen, to save your fellow pony. All of the ponies looked at Jake when she said this and they said but w’ere the chosen ponies who have the Elements of Harmony what is he chosen for? And Zecora said There is a great evil in this land And only you can stop his hand. Jake said that was nice but we are really here to fix Rainbow Dashes Derpy Whooves eyes. Zecora said A brew I have but it will cost you very bad. Rainbow Dash said that she would take it so Zecora gave her the potion for free because the potion only costs the drinker. Rainbow Dash drank the potion and her Derpy eyes were fixed but then her wings disappeared and she fell on the ground because she was flying like she was every second of her life. Rainbow Dash then started crying because she couldn’t fly anymore but then Pinkie Pie said Do not cry Rainbow Dash because I have steampunk wings and she then gave them to Rainbow Dash. Rainbow Dash put the steampunk wings on and she was happy because she could fly again and were very fashion because Rainbow Dash always dresses in style. “Thank pinkie you are my firned so good. In fact you are now my one true love. But there was no time for friendships because there was still evil in the land and they had to stop it fast because it was dangerous. And you know time waits for no pony or man or zebracorn so they had to hurry. They all ran out to the outside of the hut except rainbow who flies because she is pegasis with steampunk wings which made her twenty percent cooler.

You have fallen my trap said Darkwing Evilclaww who was suddenly there like ninja if ninjas exist in equestria and now your going to die and i win because i am the law. The ponys jumped scared because they were surprise and Darwing Evilclaww laughed but then choked from laughing but still he was mostly scary. Then Darkwing made noises like chicken except when the chikcen has got a no head and stuff. Darkwing slashes at derpy like a knife through a hunck of aloomenum. And she cries. And cries. Thil silence of the night falls upon her eyes. (Zecroa?)

Evilwing grins and says any pony else face my waith? He ingores them as they buzz like a mosquito in da summer sweat of oppressing heat with beams of rainbows and sunshine of harmony he ignores. He picks up one of the beams and threw it back upon Rainbow Dashs feathery wings, because he is so badass like that and he is an alicorn griffin so he wasn’t effected. They grazed He threw them and hits the one that was behind him that so happens to be the one that is shy, fluttershy. And they hit her head. And exploded. In rainbows, because the Elements of Harmony they were using backfired.

Darkwing continues upon his rampage. And using his magiccal horn he and wings few and killed all of the rest of the characters, because they could not attack without Futtershy nd even he killed Zecora even tho she fought him and she was using zebra magic but he was too strong so he slew her on the ground. When Pinky pie pulled out her party canon and combined it wit DJ P)N3s BASS CANNNON and blew it at Darkwint Evilclaww. He dodged but it was really powerful so he got hurt too. He yelled in a manly voice that You Ponies are a Noosance that is not to be Trifled with. He vanished in a poof of mysterious. Thank celestia that
is over sighed fluttershy and derpy. Who was that exclamed Ranbow Dash?
Zecora replied with an onimous rhyme her ghostly wail at the time watch out from the one above he will get you badly from above!

As Zecora said that Darkwing Evilclaw jumps them from behind with a griffin sword made out of hatred and spite. an malce. It was bad. Rainboom Dash blocked the sword with her steempunk wings. they blocked the attack. CAAAWWWW yelled Darkwing Evillclaww angrily a being foiled in his attack of sneak. And twlight sparkle was grabbed by pinky pie who used her as a lazer gatting gun and hits Darkwing Evilclaee with the gun in the face. He was in bad pain for a while there. Because lazer do a lot of damage when they are a lot and are fast. But he was tough and manely so he was very strong to not die from Twilight Sparkle lazers. He used his awesome magic and power to shoot an energy beem at Pinkie Pie and Twilight Sparkle.
They were both not hit because rainbow dash is fast but her steam wing got clipped by the Darkwing Evilclaww attack and she fell over while flying. her beutiful rainbow mane was burnt and everyone was sad because Rainbow Dash loved her pretty mane. Darkwing Evilclaww stood over there crumpled bodys and laughed an evil Whinney of despair and sorrow, and rage! I have bested those ponies in fighting and am now the evil one he triumphed.

As he readed the finishing blow he was just about to shot and then he did and they died. Jack was there. He saw it. All of them were dead, Twilight Sparkle, Fluttershy, Pinky Pie, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Rarity and Spike and Zekora but he was alive still. Jack was sad but he still had a long life ahead of him.
Jake was an alicorn just like Darkwingg Evilclaw, so he could fight him just like he did and was very powerful and he was the one true hope for equestria. He would save the ponies. It was his destiny. He was the destiny Child. It was him. Darrkwing Evilclaww knew this and feared his power as chosen one. This made Darkwing Evilclaww fearful and angry at the same time because he was suppose to be the chosen one by birthright AND bloodline not Jake. This enraged him so that he stabbed Jacke with his horn on his head and slain him with his magic and horn. But Jack used his magic to teleport and he shot a laser down. Darkwing saw him fly up though, so he knew it was coming and it missed. Darkwing didn’t like that, so he grabbed Jack and dropped him to the ground. Darkwing left him to die he left with magical teleportation because he knew that he would die.

Jacke looks around him and see all the ponies in pieces and dead and cried, and he was almost dead when he said. I love you all. And died. Then some magic appears and all of the ponies were lifted into the air including derpy hooves and the magic made them whole and beautifull again. so beautiful.... It was love and the power of love brings them back to life. They are alive now. They are alive again because love was stronger .. It was stronger as Vinyl Scratches Bass Cannon. Im glad im not dead said derpy and they laughed out of being happy.
Princess Celestia and luna came down from the heavens to the ponis and told them said You were resurected because you all felt so much love for each other. That is the power of the magic of friendship said Celestia. Now we will go get help to defeat this gryphon villain. with our combined powers we will be very powerful.

So they all went to ponyville where playing were the Cutie Mark Crusaders. They didn’t know this big fight had just been there and were still playing . So the princesses told them You are the best friends in equestria you 3 are going to help us win. so the CMC said okay but sweatie bell was sad because she cant fly the best. Rainbow Dash said, okay Sweetie Bell I will teach you to fly it was a dream come true because she looked up to RainbowDash very much and was a big fan of her flying and wanted to be just like her. her flyng wasnt good so she used a skate-bored scooter thing to get around but i was very cool but not as cool as flying was. So rainbow Dash took her to a cloud and said you need to just flap you wings and pushed her off of the cloud like a mother bird who pushes it’s babies off of a cloud to teach them to fly and Swetie Bell flapped her wings as hard as she could and she began to fly! Rainbow Dash taught her to fly because she could and it is stupid to us a that she can’t fly just because she has some physical disability because hasbro can’t make her a cripple becausethats terrible. it would make such a good episode to have rainbow dash teach her.and it would be cute and why cant a pegasus fly if it has wings theirs not even a reason for it the just say that she cant ly... even the pony with the steroid mussels could fly and scientificly if he can fly she can because he has sucha small wing to body ration but hers is bigger so she should be able to fly to.
Apple Bloom was also training with Twilight Sparkle in magic to fight so she was also strong.Scootaloo practiced her karate because earth ponies cant fly or do magic so they have to fight with their hooves. So Apple bloom can now fly with the best of them and her friends swweety bell and scottaloo were proud like happy parents who have kid that are good at things that don’t make parents upset at you for doing. that happy. Sence Sweetie bell can fly the Cutie Mark Croosaders were now the strongest they have ever been even stronger than they were in that one episode. Rainbow Dash bragged because she was like a good parent who is good at raising theyr kid so they are good and do well in school and fly and arent cripples. Robert the ponycorn who was elsewhere then turned to spoke.
He said hi spike because he loved dragons a lot. Everything dragen he liked because they are cool and have breathfire and have purple scales. Robert Didn't have a favorite episode but if he did it would be dragenquest because it had a lot of dragens in it and spike and superior story to the other episodes. Crackle was his favorite because be was cool. Its not fair thought he that crackle should get little screentine because he was mentally crippled. It was just Faust being a racist against crippled again like she was with derpy and hasbro from before. Crackle was funny and people liked him so why was he there so little like when derpy hooves voice was changed becaise it sounded funny and some people don't like that. Hasbro should be voted worst company so next time you are asked which company is worse say Hasbro thought Robert.

The
Princesses saw the amount of progress they had made as a group of friends and flyers and magicians and fighters and commented them for good training times. Luna felt that they should bring the attack and to fight Darkwing Evilclaww and hit him will the iron was still in heat. Celestia said no. So the Cutie mark Crusadres were stronger and happier now since they thought they could beat Dark Wingduck (they called him that) by themselves at their current level of power magnitude. Because they were strong. Princess Luna was being all mysterious as the dark side of the moon when she suddenly becasme Nightmare Moon! ponies were afraid because Nighmare moon was scary and evil before but she was like no. She said she was good but she used the Nightmare moon form to be even more pwerful than before. Now she is Sweetdream Moon because that name is nicer but still powerful scary. So they went to find Darkwing Claww in his eyrie.

but he was not there because he was behind them when they were not looking at him. Ninja power! he called and said cruelly So you have come back to be beaten by me again!?!?. No because we have more so we are in the advantage said the smart Twilight Sparkle who knew that they would win because they had more. Rainbow dash could not do the same math but she got sure that shed when a fight whenever she got into fights. Darkwing’s Evilclawws math skills were not as superior as his evil skills so he did not know was at a advantage. Princess celestia and S wetdreams Moon fused using the Fusion Prance to become the almightier Princess Celestic Moon The cutie mark crusaders also did this to become Scwootie beloom a very powerful Alicorn.more powerful than one of the princesses but not both Princess. shes was\were beautiful and Jack was in love with them|her when he fist saw her\they and it was ok because theyr ages were added together so she\they werent a kids anymore. He was in love and because love is more powerful, he cloud defeat the evil grifffon because he was also very strong alicorn. Princess Celestia moon told Darkwong EVILCLAWW THAT HIS PAREnts were actually Gilda and a unicorn. He was happy that he knew his parents but he still wanted to be evil still even thouh he was mis-understood. They fought him and won and Derpy Hooves was peeking out from behind a muffin-shaped rock in the background. But everyone saw her and said Hay its Derpy Hooves! and they went to greet her and they were happy because they kiled had the evil guy and when Derpy Hoofs and Rainbow Dash met they were still in love, so they kissed mouth sand it was very loving. Jake also said to Scloowtiebelloom that he was in love with them\her and she\they was very nervous because was just fillys at heart but they|her loved him too so they kiss too. Then everyone bucked happily.”

The End?