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Friendship is Magic: How it all Began

by Ryebuck Coppercap
Celestia wept the night away. "A big mistake; a thousand years... Are you ever coming back, Luna?" Celestia's faithful student, a freak-out prone Twilight Sparkle, plans to help in any way she can. [My own take on the series' pilot]

Cover art by Sinrar, go give them some love!


A thousand years ago, Celestia had to battle against Nightmare Moon: a possessed form of her sister Luna. The princess wept the years away and tried to bring Luna back, but nothing ever worked, so instead she made sure that history did not forget her younger sister.

Her faithful student Twilight Sparkle is convinced she will come back as she's sent to Ponyville to supervise the preparations for the thousandth Summer Sun Celebration since Luna's banishment. She'll make sure that her impending return goes off without a hitch.


This is my own take on MLP:FiM's pilot episodes, Friendship Is Magic Part 1 & 2, and the start of my own Alternate Universe where I rewrite some plotlines for the fun of it and to have more chronological consistency between episodes and shamelessly shove my OC down your throats (Not here yet, though).


Content Warnings:
- Minor mentions of blood and injuries (marked with the gore tag just to be safe)
- Light Violence (not far beyond what the show itself would dare to show)
- Family drama (2 bits if you can guess between whom)
- An Overabundance of Thee-s and Thou-s in the prologue
- Sad Alicorns

Rated ‹T› just to be safe, but probably more along the lines of ‹E+10›


Any comments are appreciated, as well as constructive criticism, be it about grammar, orthography, awkwardly written phrases, pacing, or any other things!

Teen
Incomplete
Slice of Life
Alternate Universe
Drama
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Adventure
 
TPMNS

2533 words: Estimated 13 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. Prologue: The Day The Moon Fell 2022-12-30 19:41:56 UTC
    1559
  2. Prologue II: A Brave Face, A Charred Sun 2023-03-09 20:25:16 UTC
    974