First Male in Equestria

by Star Dawn

...But, Slightly rewritten....

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Luna jolted from the dream world with a startled gasp as she looked around frantically....Her paintings were heavy as she remembered the feeling that she hadn't felt in over a thousand years...being embraced...

She had a million thoughts in her head before...but now only one remained; Him, SHe has to see him...

He was at Ponyville.

the Dragoness... Barbara sent her sister the letter...

Luna got to her hooves; glancing at a mirror She noticed her dis reviled state. Should she let her beloved see her like this, first time in a thousand years....and... She noticed that she was shaking.

Not out of fear...but out of anticipation...her own body shaking involuntarily...

Buck...the wait, she needs him...

She needs him...

NOW!

Her eyes narrowed, and her wings spread; her horn gave off a majestic glow before with a single flap of her wings, she vanished in a bright flash of Blue light.


I stared at my Daughter, my mind blank, my expression....blank...Everything came to a halt as I stared at him; frozen stiff.....

"Dad..." He waved a hoof in my face, "Dad?" He started to slap it left and right. Still nothing.

"A blue and a yellow flash of light later and Luna and Celestia appeared. Luna, looked like she had just gotten out of bed, which didn't lessen how she looked from the dreamscape.. He

Celestia looked surprised to see Luna there, from what she had seen of her sister earlier; she wasn't expecting her sister to be here so soon.

She smiled at her, Luna didn't see her, she was too busy staring at me.

Celestia walked over to...my...no our daughter...and nuzzled her gently, "How are you, my daughter."

"I'm great." she nuzzled his mother back, "Dad, however..."

She looked at him then looked at me, I still stood frozen...staring at my son in disbelief.

Celestia put a hoof over her mouth to stop a giggle from escaping her lips as Luna trotted forward

Poke.

Poke.

Poke.

Suddenly Luna got a devilish gleam in her eyes, she raised her hoof and brought it down...under my pants....and my underwear, the second she made contact with my bare skin, I snapped out of my daze and grabbed her hoof, blushing slightly.

Her smirk grew.

"I...I'm fine." I muttered, "Not Necessary,"

I didn't want her to know that I was dreaming about her...

I never actually met her before.

Celestia smiled, "Ah, Eli...I don't think you've been introduced. This is my sister."

"We've met." Luna's eyes never left mine. Celestia's and...my son's eyes lit up in recognition.

"No...we haven't," I said my expression shifting into a look of confusion, "I don't remember meeting you."

"You've dreamed about us."

"No I haven't," I said, lying through my teeth. If possible her smirk grew wider, it looked like it was about to split her face.

"Then perhaps this would freshen thou's memory." A second later, I saw a blue glow on both of my faces. I felt a grip before I was pulled, and my eyes widened as my lips were locked with hers once again.

Fuck...Fuck....Fuck....Fuck....Fuck...Fuck. My eyes widened as she kissed me once again, Damn her lips are tasty, I could see Celestia licking her lips at the corner of my eyes.

My Daughter...honestly just smiled, I guess he was just happy that I was back.

We stayed there forever, I was very impressed she could kiss that long without the need for a break...

I raised my hand and tapped her on the shoulder. she let go and we both panted, and a string of saliva stretched from our faces.

She looked at me and smirked.

I stared at her, my expression blank for a few seconds, before I sighed, "Alright...so I have a son..." I glanced at him, "When and how?":" I demanded, "Bringing my full focus on Celestia, "and why didn't you tell me? You didn't give me the slightest hint?"

She looked down, her hoof silently tracing the ground in a small circle.

"Well...I didn't know how you'd react." Celestia admitted, "I was told off from you; reactions men have in your home world and I didn't want to scare you off."

"Fair enough." I shrugged my shoulders, I looked him up and down

, "So... " I trailed off.

"DawnStar Jackson" my Daughter smiled, "My human name is DJ

"Dawn Jackson I guess?"

She nodded, "Yeah..."

I nodded, "Nice name."

"Thank you." Se smiled at me, "You named me."

The silence between us too.

Suddenly the doors burst open...and the...Elements of harmony came in , along with the girl that put me in this place.

What was her name?"

(Flashback)

"LYRA!"

(Flashback-end.)

She looked like she was dragged here, she bowed her head to me her ears splayed onto the back of her head, that...is honestly the first time I have seen something like that. It looked so adorable.

"I-I'm sorry for...almost killing you with my horn..." Lyra muttered, "I got carried away when I figured out an Actual human appeared in Equestria."

For a long moment, I just stared at her, before I turned my gaze back to my Daughter. "Then to my...Baby momma....then to the blue pony... who's apparently my wife too. I then gazed back at the girl. I didn't bother to look at the elements of Harmony...no offense to them, I just had too much stuff on my plate right now.

"Lyra we are good, you don't have to bow your head to me."

"B-but you almost died!" she cried, "I could have killed you!"

"But you didn't so we're good."

'Yes, Magic is bullshit. What else is new,'

"B-but..."

"Lyra..."

"Bonnie..."

"Thant's enough..." The Unicorn that I remembered screaming Lyra's name put a hoof on her shoulder. "Bonnie you don't understand...I could have killed him...I could have..."

This...Bonnie could only glare at Twilight.
Celestia, Luna, My son, and I noticed this, who looked nervous and while Celestia was angry at Lyra for harming her beloved, even she knew that Twilight can take things too far.

We all turned our attention to twilight; who looked nervous

I looked between the two slightly confused, knowing my daughter's look; she was confused too...

"Lyra...listen to me," I said softly squatting down, pulling her chin up so she could look me in the eyes, "We are good alright...I forgive you."

'Didn't really care about it anyway, she didn't mean it.

Her golden eyes widened...


Author's Note

That's that...I hope you like it.

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