Fall of Equestria: Wrath Of Sun and Moon

by Mr Lore miser

Wrath of the Sun

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Author's Note

Hello fellow watchers of the pony verse, (I wonder if that's as cringy as I think it is,... Oh whatever i Already Wrote it so there's no use backtracking now).

Thank you for coming back And reading this chapter, So just sit back and relax, It was originally just gonna be about Celestia Burning A certain Caribou king to ash But one of my lovely readers wanted to see the Royal guard do something so You have him to Thank for this extra carnage,

also leave a comment on how powerful You Guys Celestia and Luna should be, and was the ending too edgy Please leave constructive criticism, it is wanted


Wrath of the Sun

[during Luna's attack, In a desert within the Caribou Kingdom]

The night was cold and unadventful, like every other night before With only the insects And shifting sands Providing motion, It was like this for A long time, but nothing lasts forever It seems, as the darkness that blanketed this desert, once so dormant, began to rise like waves shaping themselves, Into a dark pillow as big and as wide like a door, and from this dark pillar emerged A squad of twenty Unicorns being led by an old unicorn stallion, with a massive beard and elegant robes Wearing a massive hat, quickly the squad being led by the old Stallion, Spread out across the desert land and begin casting a conjoined allusion spell, covering the whole land, they now occupied concealing their presence.

With the illusion spell successful, The old stallion Smiled with satisfaction ''Alright allusion spell in place, send the order to Expand the the pillar'' said the stallion.

''Yes arc mage Star Swirl'' Said one of the twenty unicorns

And just as the old Stallion said, The pillar began to grow and expand to a massive size, Which would have caused them to be spotted If not for the illusion spell, and just like before Ponies emerged from the shadows But instead of it just being a few unicorns, it was massive gleaming army of all three tribes marched out from the shadows, quaking the ground with their bootsteps, and leading This army Was a grand combination of them all, an eight feet tall alicorn adorned in golden armour With fur as white as ivory And hair colourful like an aurora this is Princess Celestia and she's ready for war.

When the whole army was out of the shadows, The Princess wasted no time and began giving orders ''alright my guard, We have made it into enemy territory Phase one is complete, Send word to my sister That she can close the portals, And let us begin phase two '' Ordered the princess of the sun

Immediately the earth ponies also being led by a pillar themselves, followed the mighty Rock hoof, with great haste using their magic to Reshape an area of ground creating a massive underground tunnel, and quickly following suit, the Pegasi Sore up into the sky and begin gathering and shaping the clouds to the purpose as well.

After two and a half Hours, of her orders being followed, star swirl approached her with an Professional mask plastered on his face, hiding his is baffled emotions , seeing this Celestia couldn't help but to allow herself a smirk.

''Well hello there Star swirl, Have something you'd like to tell me'' She said with a smirk clear as day and amusement clear in
her eyes, ''Something like 'O my brilliant brilliant student I should have never have doubted you Long range teleportation is possible' ''. She mimicked playfully.

''Smug superiority is a terrible look for you my faithful student, at least pretend to be gracious in victory'', Star swirl playfully chastised

''and technically Since I'm your teacher, and all I want is your improvement this is technically my win'', he said With a teasing smile on his old lips.

''humble as ever I see'' She said her voice dripping with playful sarcasm, '' jokes aside, You have something to report yes''

''Of course, the illusion spell Is working better than we expected, we are completely invisible and my troops are ready as well'' He said with pride

''Excellent'' She Spoke With lips stretching from ear to ear, ''Now we just need to wait for Rock hoof report''

''so you're the reason why my ears are burning'', Said a friendly and familiar voice that grab their attention

Turning her head to the direction of the voice, caused her smile to widen '' Rock hoof, We were just talking about you'' said the solar princess

''I heard and the tunnels are ready and my guard are just itching for the fight'' He said boisterously

''Perfect With everything in place then there's no use wasting Anymore time'' Says the solar princess with steel in a voice, ''We all know our roles let us go and fulfil them''

''Yes your majesty'' Both Stallions Saluted and left to do their duties

And with that order given, she took a deep breath Stealing herself for the battle to come, with nerves Strengthened she flapped her wings Beginning to soar To her Pegasi soldiers, she flew to a Large group of Pegasi ready and waiting to begin the preparations for the attack, When she arrived All the pick pegasi greeted her with a salute With The squad captain stepping forward,

''Your majesty We are ready and able to begin the plan'' Said the squad captain with confidence,

Celestia nodded and gave her attention to the whole squad ''Alright my ponies Time to commence the operation dawn Rain''


[Dane's Castle, next day]

As if an artist was spilling grey paint on a canvas, the skies above began to be filled with storm clouds, however Despite this there was no crackle of thunder to be heard, making the Caribou in the castle carry on with their day like normal. The castle in truth was so large with it would be more accurate to call it a mountain than a castle and with tower's so tall they nearly scraped the sky itself it was nothing less then a fortress, And this mighty palace Was surrounded by two great wars.

And within this fortress, Within its throne room, sitting upon a thrown with his advisors beside him, king Dane glared death at a prostrated messenger, ''What do you mean, we have received no feedback'' Spoke the king coldly.

Head still bowed the messenger spoke quickly in order to avoid Spoiling his king's mood even more ''As I said your majesty, We have received no update from general Arnulf in Equestria'' He said with a slight trump in his voice.

''ha the big oaf is probably enjoying his time with the new slaves a a bit too much'' ,said one of Dane's advisors with an amuse chuckle.

'Does that fool not understand the importance, of this campaign' the king thought frustrated, with his fist clenching so hard the armrest's on the throne threatened splinter as he spoke, "regain contact with him immediately", he spoke with authority fueling every word "and once contact has been regained I want him to be informed that, he will be receiving reinforcements to better secure position, i will not have this holy crusade delayed for anything".

"As you wish your majesty, it shall be done". quickly rising up the messenger left the the throne room with great haste, to fulfill his orders.

As the messenger left the advisor looked at his King with a puzzled "forgive me, your highness but I do question the necessity for this action, the general despite his vices is still very capa-"

the simple raising, of Dan's hand was enough to silence the advisor immediately.

"No need to remind me of how capable he is, I am well aware, this is more than just about his competence", he said with venom building in his voice, "these ponies with their female leaders and naive ideals, are an insult to all very culture and if we let their naivety spread it might be a threat to the truth of male superiority itself.

The advisor's eyes widen in shock at the statement, he knew the equestrian culture was horrendous but to think it was an actually a threat, "my king surely you just, we have nothing to fear from such soft hea-"

"enough", that single decoration from the King made the advisors words turn to Ash in his mouth and disappear "I will no longer be questioned on this, my word is law do we understand each other"

"yes your majesty, forgive my impertinence", send the advisor bowing deeply, with switch dropping from his forehead

"you will be forgiven, when you remove yourself from my presence"

"As you wish your majesty", he said and then proceeded to scaring away as quickly and respectfully as he could, leaving the throne room.

left alone with his thoughts, King Dane was far Beyond agitated that he's caribou do not seem to comprehend the threat the equestrians represent 'cock headed fools the lot of them' he thought in fury.

His thoughts were than halted, buy an explosion That shook the castle down to its foundation, ''What in the tortoise'' Screamed the king In shock And then he began to hear the Ring of Thunder


[Above the Caribou Castle]

[The Battle is about to start, Here's some music if you want]

Standing on top of grey clouds, Surrounded by her pegasi army With their weapons ready, Princess Celestia looked like the perfect Image of Serenity and control, Inwardly though it was far from the truth. Something boiled within the solar princess, something which she rarely felt, Something she tried to ignore during the planning phase Of this operation, So she could think clearly, However Now she feels like She can let it go,'' I suggest you all give me some room, I will take the honour of first blood'' said the Solar Matriarch to her guard, As she Closes her eyes and Reaches within herself For that boiling feeling, and when she reached it She realised what it was, As it arrived and churned Hungry for release. Hatred pure undiluted hatred.

And all of it was reserved For the Caribou for Dane, She would normally never even consider using such an emotion for magic, However For now She would make an inception, So she grabbed it By the metaphorical bit and the bridal, and dragged it to the surface, causing her horn to glow with a golden flame.

and following her will, The Golden Flame floated from her horn to the palm of a raised hand, She felt the power within it This tiny spark of sunfire So small but yet so destructive 'So beautiful and yet so dangerous' She fought to herself Before closing the palm of her hand And began to mould the Sunfire shaping it into something that would suit her purposes, Until the small spark of Sunfire became a burning javelin of pure focus flame, Looking at her work and finding it sufficient Celestia raised the javelin Reading herself to throw it ''pegasi of equestria'' her voice rang out with authority across the sky '' Rain lightning'' She bellowed as she threw her javelin towards the enemy breaking the sound barrier in the process,

and following Their princesses orders without fail, The Pegasi All uniformly Raised their hands and struck the clouds beneath them Causing a downpour of lightning To follow The Flaming Javelin to strike down their enemies And their fortress.


On Top of the second great wall, A group of Caribou soldiers were performing their duties as guards on this cloudy day, ''Looks like it might rain today'' Said one of the guards off handedly Noticing the rumbling of the storm clouds.

''yeah but We're nearly done with our shift anyway'', Said another guard ''So it would be the other gu¬''

BOOOMMM!!!!!!

Whatever he was going to say was cut off when the sky burst open, Unleashing a javelin of fire that Struck at the part of the wall The Caribou soldiers are standing incinerating them, And the piece of the wall turning once great Architecture into ash and then into vapour and then Into nothing, causing an explosion that shook the whole castle,

Screams of panic and pain rank throughout the castle and soldiers, Them be caught off guard by the Attack However there was no time for them to recover Because following the flame javelin Was a hail of thunderbolts Striking down the walls in the parable with impunity, Towers were shattered, Siege engines were burnt And soldiers were fried, Under the Heavens onslaught.

''Reports I need reports, what is this'' Screamed a Caribou General Who was gobsmacked by what he was looking at, Taking cover in the castle, This is more than just a strange weather phenomenon The Flaming Javelin and the Lightning Bolts were striking key parks in the wall Causing the walls to collapse like a mountain during an avalanche 'It has to be some sort of an attack' He thought to himself.

And as if to join the battle, The ground itself began to open and burst And from the ground came a horde of Earth Ponies and Unicorns Rushing out of the tunnel Into the castle to meet their enemies

''What in th-'' the Caribou General attempted to scream But he was silenced by an arrow to his throat,

panic and confusion took hold of Almost all the Caribou Warriors Like a fever, Leaving them vulnerable for their attackers to take advantage And took advantage they did, Like an unrelenting machine the Earth Pony's marched Striking with Massive hammers and great swords Mourning down the enemies before they could recover And the unicorns Fired their spells with lethal purpose.

But all paled in comparison With the skillful and brutal deaths bing delivered by their commanders, Rock hoof moved like a juggernaut Of flesh and shovel, Mowing down Multiple Caribou Warriors with just one Swing of his shovel, and with one powerful thrust He skewed one caribou warrior on his shovel And using the skewered body as a shield blocking a hill of arrows from hitting him, And responding with speed Far greater than what his size would suggest He charged at the line of Caribou Mowing them down like an avalanche,

star swirl however, Was far more Arcane in his dealings By using simple telekinesis and Enchantments He levitated And reinforced Five Shields around him, Intercepting any arrow sphere or sword, and his offensive was no less potent On each finger and thumb on his hands A small white ball of energy appeared And faster than a blink he launched them towards His foes, Then just like that 10 caribou were dead then 20 then 30 Then 40 and so on and so on, The energy balls Piercing through the heads Of the enemy Warriors Then darting off to the next target, him looking at this with just clinical detachment.

The battle raged for what seemed to be a small eternity, Bodies being thrown and broken everywhere, Shields and sword being consumed by spell fire or crushed under boots. The pony surprised attack was proven very successful, However their enemy is not to be underestimated With the initial shock of the surprise waning the Caribou Began to Regroup And push back the equestrian's advance,

Seeing that the Caribou Warriors Were starting to Regroup, Celestia decided To get more directly involved Locating the biggest Cluster of Caribou she could find She jumps off of the cloud, Leaving the Pegasi To continue with the artillery Barrage She then ignites herself And crashes on to the Caribou like a meteor, Creating a firestorm on the battlefield A firestorm that was Least like an animal And being let loose against the Caribou It burnt and charred Enemy soldiers by the thousands Melting buildings and reducing them to nothing but us But no flame ever ones burned an equestrian warrior, all by Celestia's design of course.

Giving the flames more shape, Celestia decided to turn The flames Into burning constructs That resembled a flock of birds Soaring from the battlefield Burning and charring every caribou.

[Thrown room]

The carable watched on a massive crystal ball, The battle that was ensuing, As battle cries and explosions shook the walls of the Castle, The King's mind might have been the only place that was more Stressed field as reports are coming in of the situation. ''They have just broken through the final wall my lord'' scream the caribou general at the Kings right, with a voice ringing with urgency.

''Send reinforcements there immediately, We mustn't let them push any further'' ordered the king As he Watched with frustration mounting.

After giving a firm nod To his king in confirmation, a Caribou Warrior was about to relay order Until 'BOOOM!!' He was stopped in his tracks by the very castle itself shaking, and the image that appeared on the ball, an image that caused a chill to run up his spine and freeze his face in fear, A figure in golden armour appeared, Tall beautiful and burning. If it wasn't moving it could have been mistaken for a master crafted statue.

And then it spread its wings and following that action a flock of burning birds, Numerous in number Emerged from her flames and rushed towards the Caribou Army, flying through every soldier turning all to ash And leaving the Caribou watching in the throne room With Trembling nerves and feet and none were trembling more than the Kings.

She then shifted her wings again, and the flames listened again following her into the castle as she soars through its walls. Seeing such a display done by a female only seemed to harden the king's resolves even more to erase this threat to the Truth of male domination So he got ready for battle.


Soaring through the castle, With her constructs, making sure to burn the wall she passed through to less than nothing Soaring straight to the throne room going straight to the wall, Some soldiers tried barring her path They were dealt with quickly and efficiently, as she Burns through all opposition finally she reaches an ornate door.

Taking a deep breath, Stealing herself even more to take down her enemy, And then she ignited her horn again telekinetically grabbing the doors and ripping them off their hinges and walked into the throne room


King Dean sat on his throne, Seeming to be alone and unbothered that his enemy Just destroyed his doors and is now in his throne room.

"Greetings"said the alicorn as she struts into the throne room, levitating the massive metal doors"my apologies about the doors, I tried knocking but nobody answered" she said it with a kind smile

"Princess Celestia I presume"said the king with contempt glaring hate at the princess.

"So you know of me, that is splendid"she said with her cordial demina never leaving, "best to get the introductions over and done with" which fouled the king's mood even more causing his fists to clench.

"So what now, do you suspect me to surrender" he said with disdain, clear on his face.

Putting her hand over her mouth, gasping in playful shock "ohnonono, my little caribou didn't you know, after what your people did to the Crystal empire" ,then her cordial demeanor evaporated leaving only tempered fury, "surrender is no longer an option".

as this conversation was happening, an invisible caribou was approaching the seemingly unaware princess from behind with a dagger in hand, reaching her he raised the dagger above his head and with all his might tried to plunge the dagger into the gaps of her armor,

but then he was halted, grabbed by celestia's Golden magical grip, causing the Kings composure to begin to crack, "I believe this is yours" she says with a smile levitating the warrior and launching him like a cannonball straight to King Dane signaling the battles beginning.

With panic clear on his face, the king leaped off of his throne narrowly avoiding his launched subject, who became a stain on the throne.

The other Caribou warriors, who were hidden up until now, decided to make their presents known, dropping their invisibility and launching a hell of arrows at the solar monarch,

and with another simple use of telekinesis, she used the giant metal doors she was levitating as makeshift weapons, using them to defend herself from the hill of arrows and spells can win the volley finished she grabbed every caribou in that room with telekinesis leaving them immobile, and completely at her mercy. And with that she looked at King Dane,

hatred in his eyes, but also fear causing his his limbs to tremble as much as they could, walking towards him "wai-"before he could even let other single word celestial prevented his lips from moving

"hush now it is time to listen" ,said Celestia with a strong tone as if she was talking to a disobedience student" I want you to understand something Dane, what I'm going to do to you, it won't be Justice, killing you would be Justice, imprisoning you would be Justice however what you tried to do, to my sister, to my Equestria, to my ponies" she circled around him like a predator stalking her prey, stopping herself realizing what she just said she Began to chuckle slightly , "oh my I'm monologuing my apologize either way what I'm going to do to you would just be for my satisfaction"

with a snap of her fingers she completely removed Danes clothes, leaving him as naked as the day he was born and and with another quick snap of a fingers she turned the once proud King Dane into a female.

shock and fear was written on the King's face, Which only caused Celestia to smile more. turning her head to look at the other terrible warriors she cast a new spell she just developed the, wanted it needed it spell, causing them to be enchanted and with that work done Celestia turned and walked away out of the throne room and then releasing the caribou warriors to to please themselves with the now female dane she knew me too cruel, But today seems like to be a day of exceptions,

before leaving she ignited her horn and fired at some random wall close to the front room causing a magical fire to ignite and spread as if the stone was wood with the caribou being enchanted and using King they probably won't feel the fire burning them but Dane will.

The End