28 pranks later alt ending

by Anonymous15

Rating: everyone
Tags: Tragedy, Derpy Hooves, Alternate Universe, Sad, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Rainbow Dash
Length: 2462

alt ending to 28 pranks later

I try to write alt ending to 28 Pranks later.. I don't like the ending to the episode so I wrote my own ending.

I don't own anything, MLP belongs to Hasbro.

Published 2023-01-25 01:50:00 UTC
Last updated 2023-01-25 01:50:00 UTC

Chapter 1: Alt Ending

Thank You, God for helping me write this.

Rainbow Dash dashed to the corner, a tear was in her eye, she yelled "No, Noo, don't eat these cookies they will make you sick!"

The cookie zombies were trying to corner and make sure she doesn't escape. She hugs to jar of rainbow cookies. She said in a fearful tone, "W-wait.. I- I am a.. pegasus.. i can just fly away but they could maybe fly too.."

She was on the floor crying hugging the jar of rainbow cookies.

Then the "cookie zombies" stopped and started laughing and pointing their hooves at Rainbow Dash.. Rainbow Dash raised one of her eyebrow and said, "H-Huh? What is going on?"

The "cookie Zombies" wiped the rainbow icing from there mouths and started laughing. Rainbow Dash didn't understand what was going on and asked, "What is going on?"

Pinkie Pie said, "HA HA we got you, Dashie.. we pretended to be cookie zombies and scare you. It was LIKE SO AWESOME, you were scared and it was crazy!"

Rainbow Dash's right eye twitch and said calmly, "I don't get it!"

Twilight said, "We were pranking you back since we were tired of pranking us. I guess it worked very effectively and I think you learned your lesson.." she giggled after saying that

The other ponies who were part of this prank started laughing at Rainbow Dash. They pointed at Rainbow Dash and yelled, "You been pranked!"

Scootaloo said, "Got you, Dash, in yo face!"

Mr. Cake said with a giggle, "We pranked the prankster."

Spike felt a bit guilty about this.

Rarity stepped forward and said, "Darling, you should have seen this coming, your pranks are so lame just like you! You shouldn't have pranked us!"

Twilight said in a snarky remark, "Your pranking spree is over!"

All the ponies in the crowd started laughing their hooves off and pointing at Rainbow Dash. Rainbow Dash was embarrass and her face was glowing red like strawberries.

Apple Jack said to Big Mac, "Oh Big Mac, didn't we prank 'er good?"

Big Mac said, "Yup!"

Derpy was sad and ashamed she took part in this.

Cheerlie mocked, "Ha ha, now I have a funny story to tell my students."

Starlight Glimmer said in a snarky remark, "You are a great friend.

The other ponies except Derpy and Spike made fun of Rainbow Dash. (Poor Rainbow Dash :( )

Derpy had enough and said, "This is not right!"

The other ponies look at Derpy except Rainbow Dash since she was embarrass and she was trying to think of the situation.

Derpy continued, "Why didn't we try to stand up to ourselves by telling Dashie that what she did was not okay plus most of her pranks were harmless except for her prank for Mr. Cake and Cranky doodle donkey."

Twilight said, "And?"

Pinkie Pie screamed, "But this prank was so much fun and we scared Rainbow Dash so hard that she have learned her lesson. what is wrong about that?"

Applebloom and Sweetiebell said in unison, "Yeah!"

Derpy said, "Well, if I stole something from you will it be okay for you to steal my muffins? EXACTLY NO! AND DON"T STEAL MY MUFFINS."

Apple Jack said, "I am the element of Honesty and honesty I think this prank was well done."

Derpy then countered-argued and she raised her voice, "Well, were all those pranks worth embarrassing her in front of every pony in Ponyville, twice? You had the nerve to prank her but you don't have the nerve to tell Dash that her pranks were not okay and she should stop?"

Twilight said, "What do you mean twice?" she said with an angered expression. Rainbow Dash was smiling that at least some pony is defending her and not making fun of her. She wiped off the tears from her face.

Spike Deserted the room and ran to Twilight's house.

Derpy said, "Well you did this before in Mysterious Mare do well, and sure she could be a bit cocky but she had the nerve saved several ponies lives, she saved that filly that was stuck in the well, she saved those senior ponies from dying when the balcony collapses from below.. and to mention she saved that baby who was on a runaway stroller. You outshining her and trying to showoff was a terrible way of handling the situation. " The other ponies in the crowd, was mad at Derpy.

Fluttershy said, "Well I mean, Derpy is speaking the truth oh and Rainbow Dash don't hate me for this! Also, instead of making the situation better we just embarrassed her and made things even bad, two negatives do not make a positive!"
Rainbow Dash nodded her head and said, "I forgive you y'all!"

Apple Jack said, "We taught her a lesson and that is the important part at least we know that she won't be pranking us anytime soon!"

Rainbow Dash had a frown on her face.
The ponies except Fluttershy and Derpy made fun of her. Fluttershy and Derpy walked away they had enough crap for one day.

Rainbow Dash flew home, she was crying on the way home..
(Do not worry this story will have a happy ending and I feel bad for Rainbow Dash)

Spike was at Twilight's library and said, "Twilight and the others made a fool of themselves. I feel kinda bad for Rainbow.. I know what to do!"

He grabbed a peice of paper and a quill and wrote a letter to Princess Celestria.

He finishing the note to Princess Celestria and took a deep deep breath and blew fire. The letter was now officially sent.

The letter looked like this:

Dear Princess Celestria,

I came to inform you about Twilight and what the other residents of Ponyville have done. Rainbow Dash was pranking, everyone and well most of her pranks were harmless except for the prank she had for Mr. Cake and Cranky Doodle.

The ponyville residents pulled a prank and pretending to be zombies in order to teach Rainbow Dash a lesson. I think this was very unjustified, they could talk to her about how her pranks are not okay but they decided to be terrible friends and pulled a prank that embarrassed her in-front of all the residence of Ponyville. They also made fun of Rainbow Dash everypony

I hope this letter found you well, I hope you can talk to Twilight about her actions or do something.

Spike, Twilight's assistant

Princess Celestria got the letter was was very angry. She went home to home and told them what they did was not okay and they should apologize to Rainbow Dash!"

Author's Note

What did you think?

Chapter 2: A unpredictable surprise

The next morning, the event that took place last night was fresh in everypony's head.

Twilight woke up and heard trumpet sounds.
She said, "Oh, must be the princess!"

She rushes downstairs were Spike was sitting on the couch playing a tower defense game.

Twilight waved at Spike saying, "Good Morning, Spike!"

Spike glanced angrily at her and said, "Oh hi.." He then went back to playing his game.

Twilight jokingly said, "Looks like some dragon woke up on the wrong side of bed!"

The noise at the door went, "Knock" Knock" "Knock"

Twilight yelled, "Coming coming."

She used magic from her horn to open the door.

She looked up and saw Princess Celestria and then she bowed down.

Princess Celestria was not amused she said, "We must talk.."

Twilight started to worry and said, "Oh am I tarty did I forget to write to you something I learned about friendship."

Princess Celestria said, "Those lessons aren't working..

Twilight perplexed, asked, "What do you mean?"

Princess Celestria said, "Bring all your friends except Rainbow Dash, this is about you and what your friends did."

Twilight brought her friends over.

Apple Jack asked, "Everything alright princess?"

Princess Celestria shook her head.

Rarity said, "Darling, is everything alright?"

Princess Celestria said, "No.."

Twilight had a worried look on her face.

Pinkie Pie asked in a cheerful tone, "Why didn't you want us to bring Dashie?"

Princess Celestria said, "Because I wanted to talked to you about what you did to Rainbow Dash AKA YOUR FRIEND!"

Apple Jack said, "What we did was nothin' we had to do what we did so she can learn 'er lesson, she was pranking us and we had to make 'er stop!"

Pinkie Pie said, "Yeah!"

Princess Celestia said, "Well, you could have had a conversation with Rainbow Dash about her action but you decided it would be okay to pull a giant prank on her and even embarrassed her in-front of everypony that lives in this fair town!"

Princess Celestria turned to Twilight and said, "Twilight, I am disapointed in you the most."

Twilight got all defensive and angry and shouted, "WHY ME? I WAS TRYING TO TEACH RAINBOW A LESSON, IT WAS PINKIE PIE'S IDEA TO DO THE ZOMBIE PONY PRANK ON RAINBOW DASH!"

She screamed so loud that she almost lost her voice.

Princess Celestria said, "I said I am the most dissapointed with you because for years I been your mentor I taught you principles of friendship, friendship and many other things. I NEVER said in one of my lessons that it was okay to humiliate your friends. that is why I am the most disapointed in you, I trained you and taught you many things but you abandoned those teachings and potentially ruined your friends life over pranks. Not to mention that you are setting double standards, It is not okay for Rainbow Dash to prank ponies but It is okay for you to prank, even though Pinkie Pie pranks ponies and you don't try to scare her with any pranks.. I though Discord was bad."

Discord appeared out of nowhere and asked, "Did someone call my name. I thought someone said my name and needed me." He then turned into a telephone. Princess Celestria said, "Sorry Discord I was not calling you!"

Discord frowned and said, "Oh.."

He turned into a teardrop.
Then he turned back to normal and went home.

Princess Celestria said, "Apologize to Rainbow Dash... I hope you don't make this fallacy again! I also temporary revoking your titles as title princess of friendship too! and suspending lessons..."

Twilight eyes's twitched.

Princess Celestria walked out of the door and slammed the door. and was taken back to her castle.

Pinkie Pie said, "That was harsh! At least we got through with Dashie!"

Apple Jack said, "Yup."

Rarity said, "Okay to be honest darling, I feel kinda bad what we did to Rainbow Dash!"

Fluttershy said, "We must find her!"

Rainbow Dash was at the spa. The blue spa ponies said, "Hello Miss Rainbow Dash came for a massage?"

Rainbow Dash nodded her head, she followed the spa pony into a room.

They start doing the massage.

The Spa pony had a worried expression in her face she said, "Miss Dash, I feel kinda bad for you you were being made fun of and your quote on quote friends embarrased you in front of everypony in Ponyville. I still think your brave and cool."

Rainbow Dash smiled and said, "Thank you also how did you know about what happened last night.

The spa pony said, "It was on the newspaper, everypony reads the newspaper."

Rainbow Dash said, "Oh right, Thank you!"

The spa pony said, "No problem!"

The Mane 6 was looking everywhere for Dash.

The Mane 6 bashed into Sugarcube Corner and some ponies had looks of shame while some ponies had looks of anger.

Derpy got up from her seat and stood on the table and said, "You were the meanies who embarrassed and made Dashie sad!"

Mr. Cake and Mrs. Cake said, "We were in the photo that they took for the newspaper, aout the whole pranking and bullying Rainbow Dash, We lost a lot of our loyal customers and make less money then we used too.

Twilight then asked, "Then why is this place filled with ponies?"

Mrs. Cake said, "Well, they are only here to yell at us for what we did to Rainbow Dash. She has a huge influence in Ponyville and afterall she is the fastest Wonderbolt."

Derpy was yelling and demanded the Mane 6 to get out of the restaurant. The other ponies joined in.

The Mane 6 left.

Twilight had an ashamed look on her face, She spoke, "What we did was wrong.."

Apple Jack jumped in and said, "As the element of Honesty I got to agree with Twi, what we did was not cool we could have talked to her and still have a friend but i am pretty sure that after all that happened last night, Rainbow Dash will never forgive us and never wanted to be our friend."

Rarity said, "Darling relax, she is the element of loyalty she stood up to the shadowbolts to fix the bridge so we can cross and go rescue Princess Celestria."

The other mane 6 ponies threw death glares at Rarity.

Ponies passing by even Scootaloo gave them a glare of disgust a glare of anger.

some ponies were so ashamed of what they did that they left Ponyville to go far away towns so they don't get condemned by other ponies and scared of apologizing to Rainbow Dash.

Rainbow Dash said, "Ah, that is the spot."

The blue spa pony said, "That's all. Hope you enjoyed your massage! Hope you are better from that horrible action your friends and ponyville residents.

She said, "Thanks."

She handed over the bits and walked out then she saw her friends acrossed from her. her face starts glowing red then she went over and says, "Hello, are you lost?"

Twilight hugged her marefriend, Rainbow Dash and Twilight weeped.

Rainbow Dash said, "Sorry for the annoying pranks."

Twilight and the others said, "It's okay and we're sorry for that zombie prank we did and sorry for embarrassing you in front of all the Ponyville residence."

Rainbow Dash said, "It's fine."

Author's Note

How was the chapter?

Chapter 3: Aftermath

The Mane 6 (Except Rainbow Dash)) get condemned by Ponyville residence about what they have done.
Rainbow Dash agreed to prank other ponies lightly and not to go to far from her pranks.

With a little begging, community service and prohibition. Twilight can continue her lessons she used to have with Princess Celestria, The other mane 6 got their titles back.

Derpy and Rainbow dash became best friends after what Derpy did during the cookie zombie prank.

The End

Author's Note

Thank You, God for helping me make this.