Sweet Submission
A Visitor
Previous Chapter“So - nngh - Master turned all of you into obedient, needy sluts while my friends and I were up in Canterlot?”
Now in her bedroom upstairs, happily bouncing on Anon’s cock, Pinkie Pie casually discussed among her fellow slaves as she serviced her new owner. After the minor heart attack she had given him, Anon ushered Starlight and Sunset to round up the rest of his slaves and meet back at Sugarcube Corner to celebrate and discuss his greatest conquest yet - an Element of Harmony.
Starlight rubbed her snatch gently, cum drooling out of it as Anon had rutted her, amongst the rest of them, earlier in the evening. “Yup ~ Master claimed me first. A few days ago, he so generously tricked me into enslaving myself to him by Pinkie Promising he’d free me.” She licked her lips, eyeing up Anon’s cock
“Oooooh~” Pinkie dramatically replied, glancing over her shoulder and back at Anon. “So that’s - unf - the promise you broke?”
Anon took a moment to reply, opting to savor the sight before him for a few more moments. He had fucked each of his slaves thoroughly in celebration of a massive conquest, and he of course was ending things off with his newest slut. Pinkie’s tempo was wonderful, throwing her fat ass down at the perfect rate, letting her thick flanks jiggle before rising back up and repeating the motions again. Her enthusiasm was clear as day, but that could only be expected of the party pony.
Feeling her slam down onto his cock again, Anon smacked her ass and glanced up, meeting her lustful gaze. “Yeah - heh - but I also did something similar to Sunset over there.”
“Mmph~” Sunset mumbled in response, her muzzle pressed into Lightning Dust’s depths, hungrily lapping up the cum that filled the pegasus’ asshole. Pulling herself away, a trail of saliva connecting her lips to her partner’s body, she glanced over at Pinkie Pie. “He Pinkie Promised me I was safe to try on this amulet that increased the effectiveness of magic against its wearer.” She flagged her tail, shaking her ass and flinging some of the cum that dripped out of her holes. “Next thing I knew I was hit by magic, and after foolishly fighting it for a bit, Master’s cock made me cum and I was shown the light~”
Pinkie giggled, looking back at Anon. “Hehe! Yeaaaah, if I found out about that I definitely would’ve told Twilight and the others!” She slammed herself back down on his cock, grinding her rump against his groin and eyeing him lustfully. “Mmph ~ But thankfully you made me your obedient bitch! I was super duper upset when I sensed you broke a Pinkie Promise, but it doesn’t matter now! All that matters to me is being a perfect slut for you, Master!” She rose back up, slamming herself back down onto him and resuming her bouncing. “Nnngh ~ I obey you entirely now! Serving your cock is the most fun thing I can imagine ~ Parties and the rest don’t matter, well not as much at least. After all, being one of your fucktoys is my truepurpose!”
Anon groaned as Pinkie’s tempo increased, doing his best to remain composed as that pink party pony pussy of hers pleased every last inch of his cock. Smacking her ass again, earning both an pleasurable yelp and giggle from her, he smirked and glanced to the side.
Throwing their asses back into one another, Mayor Mare and Mrs. Cake shared a double-sided dildo, fucking themselves deeply as their rumps clapped together. Cum drooled from their assholes, their plump ponuts kissing against each other with each powerful thrust backwards. They remained together for a moment, before a pop sounded out as they were separated again. It was an absolutely degenerate action, yet they could care less. Master commanded it, and that was all that mattered.
“Mayor, Mrs. Cake, are you sure neither of you saw someone lurking around the shop?” Anon inquired, still worried of his sudden, possibly helpful, possibly hostile, visitor.
Slamming her ass back into Mrs. Cake’s, both their flanks jiggling from their efforts, Mayor Mare glanced over at him. “N-no, Master. I didn’t see - mmph - anypony around.
“Neither did I,” Mrs. Cake followed, an erotic pop sounding out as their bodies drew apart again, only for them to slam back against each other, filling her and Mayor Mare’s cunts to the brim with their dildo. “Hnnng ~ W-we searched around for a bit, and nothing.”
Anon both his lip, both from Pinkie riding his cock and his growing concern. “Right, okay.” He turned his attention towards Lightning Dust, who was still getting her asshole eaten out by Sunset. “Anything on your end, Dust?”
“Nah,” Lightning Dust quickly shot back, placing a hoof on the back of Sunset’s head and encouraging the unicorn’s efforts. “I flew all around, Master. Nngh ~ Didn’t see anypony suspicious on the way here.” She groaned, Sunset’s efforts intensifying as she spoke. “I flew - mmph ~ damn you’re good at this ~” Complimenting Sunset quickly, she shook her head and refocused herself. “I flew around as long as Glimmer’s camouflage spell was active, but I still didn’t see anything.”
Their responses didn’t quell much of Anon’s worries, as he glanced over at Starlight. “Any ideas?”
“We can’t be sure of who that was,” she replied, casually rubbing her snatch as she enviously watched Pinkie Pie riding him. “But, there’s nothing we can do for now. Might as well enjoy us all to celebrate, Master.” She pursed her lips, sighing softly. “With Twilight and her friends back, I won’t be able to be around as often during the day.” She perked up, eyeing him lustfully. “But I’ll try and make sure you fill me with cum every night~”
Anon smirked, her lewd and comforting response calming him slightly. “Oh right ~ what did you all tell Twilight and them about you all being here anyways?”
Pulling her muzzle from Dust’s pucker, Sunset replied. “Well, she doesn’t even know Dust and I are here. So, nothing on our end.”
“I own the shop, so…” Mrs. Cake added, moaning as she slammed her ass back into Mayor Mare’s.
Mayor Mare groaned as well from their united efforts, before glancing over at him. “She doesn’t really bother knowing what I do, unless - unf - it’s princess stuff or permits.”
“I went back to the castle after you enslaved Pinkie. Said hi to Twilight, told her I was helping you plan a surprise for Pinkie, and that we’d have to catch up later,” Starlight joined in, biting her lip. “Which is technically true.”
Pinkie moaned deeply, her body tensing up as she was reaching her peak. “And I’m - haaa - here enjoying said super big surprise~” She rapidly bounced up and down on his cock, filling her depths with his length over and over again. “Which is - nnngh - Master’s - oh buck - massive c-coooooock!”
With a titanic plunge downwards, she hilted him within her entirely and hit her climax. Her nerves went alight with pleasure, as her orgasm rocked her body with bliss. The feeling of his dick within her, accompanied by the pleasure her body received from obeying him, concocted into an amorous blend of mind breaking ecstasy. Though, as her whorish moans rang out, they soon morphed into a guttural howl, the first cloys of his seed shooting into her womb.
Anon gripped onto her hips, snarling as he pumped her full of his cum. Her sudden intensified motions had brought him to the brink, and her marehood’s vice grip on him from her climax had done him in. Pumping rope after rope of cum into her depths, he flooded her womb as his essence overflowed out of it and painted her walls.
The rest of his slaves gave out their own deep groans, all either climaxing alongside them or getting far closer from the sight. The room reeked of a lustful aroma that’d send any stallion wild - and Anon was no different. His libido at its peak, his stamina lengthened thanks to an endurance spell Starlight used on him, he was ready to rut each of his sluts again and again.
Sighing to himself, he reached the end of his orgasm, reaching up and spanking Pinkie’s ass. “Okay, slave, time to get off me ~ It’s another sluts turn on my cock.”
“Awwww,” she whined, pouting at him. “But I’ve only been your slave for like…a few hours! They’ve been getting your perfect dick for days!”
Anon chuckled, caressing her flanks and rubbing over her corrupted cutie mark. “Yes, but everyone is getting multiple turns. I’ll be filling that asshole of yours later.” He raised a brow at her, tapping her cutie mark. “And I gave you a command, slut, let one of your fellow slaves go.”
The hearts in Pinkie’s eyes shimmered with color, as she slowly began to raise her rump. “Yes, Master.”
His command reinforced her obedience, as she was dutifully reminded of her purpose. Slaves obey mindlessly, and he was the one who decided what she did and how she acted. Though she was saddened to have to release him from her depths, obeying her Master was more important than anything else.
With a wet shlick, she unsheathed him, letting his cum drip from her pussy and cascade onto the already ruined bedsheets. An abundance of cum and marish juices soaked the bed, but the group only found it all the better. Shakily, still recovering from her orgasm, Pinkie hopped off the bed and trotted over towards Mayor Mare and Mrs. Cake.
“Oh! Oh! What if we tried a triple sided dildo?!” she excitedly asked the two, bouncing in place.
Anon watched the confused expressions grow on the two older mares, suppressing a laugh as he turned towards Starlight. “Alright, Glimmy, come serve your Master.”
Starlight nearly jumped up, quickly scampering to her legs and quite literally galloping over towards him and onto the bed. Turning her ass towards him, she lowered her torso to the ground and flagged her tail.
Beginning to shake her ass, making it clap for him like she knew he loved, she shot him a sultry look. “Oh thank you, Master! How would you like your obedient slave to serve you?”
His cock throbbed at her words. He still struggled, even now, to understand this was his reality. He just fucked and came inside an Element of Harmony, and not only that, but right after it he’s casually instructing the pupil of the Princess of Friendship to come be a proper cumdump.
Needless to say, he was loving how things were going.
Though that gave him all the more reason to worry. He now had six fantastic sex slaves, and the last thing he wanted was to lose them all. Not only would he be stripped from owning some of the sexiest mares he could imagine, leaving his sex life to perish, but he’d also likely face a punishment worse than anything he could imagine.
His anxiety began to well up in him, but he was quick to distract himself from it. “Slave, come ride me, but face me.”
Starlight paused her motions, raising a brow at him. “Oh? That’s new for me, Master.” She turned, slowly trotting towards him. Using her magic, she lined his tool up with her salivating lower lips, cum from an earlier session still dripping out of them, before slowly easing herself down onto him. “Haaa ~ Not that I mind.”
She began slowly riding him, tenderly moving herself up and down on his cock, massaging and caressing his every inch as she worked. She shivered, feeling his hands reach down, gripping onto her fat ass and squeezing tightly. A low moan escaped her lips, as she lowered her muzzle and brought it near his face.
“Becoming your slave was the best thing to ever happen to me, Master.” She flexed her walls, gripping down on him harder. “And I will serve you and help enslave more mares for you no matter what ~ I’m your dedicated bitch, and I’ll do everything I can to keep it that way.”
Anon smiled at her, knowing she was saying all this to calm his nerves. Taking one hand off her ass, he grabbed the back of her head and pulled her into a deep kiss. She was surprised for only a moment, before accepting his embrace in full force. She pressed back into his lips, as she began throwing her rump down onto his cock with increased force. Their tongues intertwined, dueling and caressing one another in a lustful, yet romantic embrace. She moaned deeply into his mouth, the sensation of everything striking her like a cord.
Squeezing down on her flank harder, Anon pulled away from their kiss. A string of saliva connected their lips, their make out being a passion filled one. She opened her eyes, gazing down at him while he looked into her own. He stared at the wondrous hearts that laid within them, knowing full well they meant she was his mindless, obedient slave - even though she feared this exact fate back when she first fell.
Now she loved it, not that she had a choice, and had helped show five other mares the light.
Smiling down at him, she reassured him further. “We’re all yours, Master. Nothing will change that. Whoever it was outside probably didn’t see anything, you might've been seeing things from some magic side effects, maybe.” She booped his nose, giggling to herself. “We still have a bit of time before we all need to go home tonight. So why don’t you focus on enjoying our slutty bodies, starting with you fucking me senseless~”
“Heh - you’re right,” Anon tittered, slapping her rear. “What’s the worst that could happen?”
Anon rested in his bed, enjoying the warmth and comfort of being within his own home. His impromptu celebration for enslaving Pinkie Pie had been an absolute blast, but of course the party for claiming the party pony had come to an end. With that, meant his harem splitting up for the time being.
Pinkie Pie and Mrs. Cake both remained at Sugarcube Corner. The sweet shop being closed for more than one day or two would be awfully suspicious, and being Mrs. Cake was such a core member of Ponyville’s community, ponies would come around questioning things. Pinkie Pie was for obvious reasons. Though he’d love to indulge himself with the Element, Anon was well aware he had to take things slow with his scheming. He could utilize Pinkie and her connections later down the line, when the time was right.
So, with them disguised with the changeling magic Starlight knew, they were good to remain hidden as slaves.
Mayor Mare returned to town hall, her concerns around being behind on work raising questions in the town a wise and astute observation. So, as regretful as Anon was, she had returned back to her own residence, being she had to finish work without getting fucked senseless. With magic hiding the features of her enslavement, she was safe to have on her own - though he’d be sure to give her a nice hard rutting whenever possible.
Starlight was his first, and in turn favorite, slave, so her absence from his home felt rather impactful. It had only been a scant few days, but having her pussy on demand, as well as her adorable role in scheming alongside him, had been a development he was very fond of. But, with Princess Twilight’s return to Ponyville, she had to return to spending her nights at the castle. If she stayed with him at nearly all times, there wasn’t a chance in Equestria Twilight, or even Trixie, wouldn’t take notice of it. The last thing he wanted to do was worry about the princess becoming suspicious of him, and a blabbermouth like Trixie was best left unsuspecting.
As for Sunset Shimmer and Lightning Dust…
The sounds of wet slurping rang in Anon’s ears, his face contorting into a pleasurable grimace. Resting near his groin, carefully and lovingly lapping at his package, were the two aforementioned mares.
Lightning Dust was deepthroating his cock with whorish expertise. She caressed the underside of his member with her tongue, as his length slipped down her throat with each plunge she made. Whenever she pulled back, she’d swirl her tongue around the tip of his member, before surging down again and again. She moaned lightly around him, the hearts in her eyes shimmering as she fulfilled her purpose.
Below her, Sunset Shimmer was hungrily suckling on his nuts. She carefully caressed and lavished the pendulous orbs with her tongue, coating them in her saliva as she savored their taste. Every few moments she’d part her lips and suck on one, licking and teasing it perfectly. With an audible pop, she’d release it, giving it a parting kiss before moving on to the next.
These two had nowhere to be, since they weren’t even supposed to be in Ponyville, at least not extensively. Due to this, they were bestowed upon the honorable titles of being Anon’s constant live-in cocksleeves and maids - titles they both wore with pride. He had accounted for this, being he was fully aware they’d be the ones within his home at all times, and had Starlight grab some ‘supplies’ earlier that evening.
Being live-in fucktoys and maids meant they had to look the part, at least more so the latter. Thankfully, Starlight had been successful with her errand, and resting before him, worshiping his nethers, were Shimmer and Dust - both adorning a slutty set of maid-themed lingerie.
It was entirely self indulgent of him to put them in such getups, but their enthusiasm to better appeal to their Master made them more than happy to oblige - even through that still hardened exterior Lightning Dust had. Fishnet stockings ran up each of their legs, as a proper maid’s dress met their bodies. The outfit accentuated their lovely forms, making them more than pleasurable additions to his home.
He savored the tongue bath his two slaves were giving him, leaning his head back against the pillow and moaning pleasurably. Glancing at the clock, he took note of the time. 11 p.m. rather late in the day, but he had time to enjoy their mouths before pumping their pussies full and heading to bed in a cuddle pile.
Knock! Knock! Knock!
Anon’s brow twitched, hearing the sound of his door being knocked on, eclipsing that of the slurping Sunset and Dust were making. Both mares ceased their efforts, ears twitching curiously as they too heard the sound.
“Who the…?” Anon mumbled, utterly confused at the knocking.
Popping one of his balls out of her mouth, Sunset tilted her head and eyed him. “Master? Were you expecting company at this hour?”
“No,” he replied, shaking his head, “I wasn’t.”
Lightning Dust pulled her head back, releasing his dick from her gullet and gasping for air. Shaking herself off, she furrowed her brow and glared out the bedroom and down the hall. “Who the buck is interrupting me giving Master the best blowjob he’s ever had.”
Anon initially raised his finger to protest, but retreated. Truth be told, she was doing damn good at sucking him off - easily contesting some of the best he’s had, though the competition isn’t exactly thick.
“Stay behind me and out of sight you two,” he instructed, scooting back and slowly sliding off the bed. “Just be there in case I need help, but if it’s something innocent it’s best you stay out of sight to avoid any major problems arising.”
Both slaves exchanged confused glances with each other, before slipping off the bed and trotting up behind him. Seeing they understood his directions, tails flicking wildly as obeying him spiked their arousal, he walked down his hallway at a brisk pace. Leaving the door unanswered wasn’t his goal, so making whoever or whatever was outside wait wouldn’t be helping that. Walking out of his hallway and down a short set of stairs, he found himself nearing his front door.
Knock! Knock! Knock! Knock!
He rolled his eyes. Who in the world would have the audacity to visit someone this late, and be incredibly impatient on top of that. The only reason he was truly bothering with answering it was because he received the slave book suddenly at this time. Assuming a possible new relic or goodie to help him in his conquest, he eagerly made his way to the door. Expecting a true delight, possibly one that could empower and emphasize his book’s magic, he gripped the handle and swung his door open.
What greeted him made his blood run cold.
Standing before him, adorning a set of golden armor, was a white unicorn mare - a royal guard mare. He tensed to almost immediately, sweat already forming in his forehead as his thoughts ran wild. Though, before he even had time to think, she spoke.
“I assume you’re Anon,” she bluntly mumbled, eyeing him up and down, “obviously.”
He tugged his shirt, grateful he hadn’t stripped entirely naked back in bed and had easily gotten dressed. “Erm…yeah, I am. May I ask why you’re, uh, here at this hour?”
“I suggest you let me inside,” she coldly replied, already making her way in. “It’ll make my investigation and report all the easier.”
A chill ran up his spine, and he could've sworn he heard one of his slaves gasp from the shadows, yet he did his best to maintain his cool. “Investigation? What for?”
“Please,” she scolded, surging magic into her horn, a green aura shrouding it. “You’re well aware of what you’ve done.”
His breathing began to pick up pace, his heart racing within his chest. “I…I beg your pardon?!” he nervously replied.
The unknown guard huffed hot air from her nostrils, turning away from him and scoffing. “Your little magic routine with a bunch of mares?” She turned her attention to the far wall, avoiding eye contact with him, not out of fear, but spite. “And more importantly you are twisting their minds to violate Celestia’s law.”
“It…it was you in the window,” Anon muttered, taken aback by the situation at hand.
A smirk split her muzzle, as she chuckled to herself. “You made it far too easy.”
“And so did you.”
The guardsmare paused, barely having time to glance over at him and acknowledge his remark. “Excuse me -“
“Sunset, get her!”
In a flash, the book’s magic was called upon, arcane lettering surging out of it from a nearby table and into the shadows in the corner of the room. Sunset’s eyes shimmered with dark magic, the tome’s arcane effects flowing through her very mana, as she held her ground and aimed her horn at their visitor.
Anon’s worry morphed to smug cockiness, having realized his primary worry had delivered herself on a silver platter to him. Watching as Sunset blasted a massive burst of the original enslavement spell at the mare, with Lightning Dust hovering in the air beside her in case of emergency, he snickered to himself and turned to see the bewildered expression on the guard’s face.
But instead, she was smiling.
As the blast met her, the very beam itself bended around her, as if a magic field was in place. It was clearly hitting her, but unlike any pony before her, it yielded no results at all. Not a moan, not a gasp, not even a blush formed on the mare’s face, as she began to chuckle.
“Tch~” she mumbled, summoning magic into her own horn. “You’re so naive. No wonder you almost failed with Pinkie Pie.”
In the blink of an eye, she blasted a massive surge of magic out of her own horn, deflecting Sunset’s beam, and even managed to push the unicorn back.
Stumbling backwards, losing control of the spell from the sudden resistance, Sunset tried to get a grip on the situation. “W-what the?! But how could you!?”
“My turn!” Lightning Dust cried out, surging forward. “You’re gonna serve Master for acting so smug you - hrk!””
Her battle cry was seized, her body soon shrouded with magic. With a flick of her head, the guardsmare sent the pegasus flying back, crashing into Sunset as the two slaves fell to the ground.
Anon’s mind was filled with thoughts, but one thing called to him the most.
“How…how did you not get affected by it?!” he blurted out, backpedaling as she turned her attention towards him.
She threw her head back, laughing heartily, though this time it was partially distorted. “I’m aware of your toy’s magic ~ It only works on ponies.”
Anon took another step back, as she took another one forward. “How could you…but…we were so careful!”
“And yet without meyou would’ve failed against Pinkie Pie,” she growled, her voice clearly warped now.
“W-without you?” Anon questioned, utterly confused at this point.
She sighed, bringing a hoof to her face and rolling her eyes. “Please. I knew you’d be an idiotic grub but this is ridiculous.”
Sunset and Lightning Dust both groaned to his side, rubbing their heads as they slowly rose up from the ground. They saw their Master’s current state, cowering back in fear, their eyes going wide as they were unsure of what to do.
“But at least their love is the perfect source of power,” she continued, her original voice entirely gone.
Anon felt his back press against the wall, totally cornered by the guardsmare. “P-please! I don’t know what you’re talking about!”
She snorted, unamused by his pitiful state. “I’m going to make sure you satisfy me after this to make up for that little favor I did for you earlier.” She leered at him, staring daggers into his very being. “But fine, I’ll be kind enough to answer one question I’m sure you’ve been asking yourself.”
She closed her eyes, magic funneling in her horn yet again, though this time her aura shrouded her entire being. Green hues danced on her form, before a flamelike energy engulfed her entire body. It was all so quick, but what came next rocked Anon to his core.
Standing before him, nearly eye level with him, were a set of dark green eyes, belonging to the large, black figure before him. She had an aura to her, one of dominance, one of power, and one of control. The holes on her legs, the bug-like wings, and the fanged teeth she adorned - they were unlike anything he had seen before. She was no ordinary creature.
No, she was a queen.
She chuckled darkly, a villainous tone littering every sound she gave. She licked her lips, a long, unique tongue dancing before him. With her gaze narrowing, Queen Chrysalis herself, in the flesh, mockingly spoke out to him.
“Who do you think gave you the book?~”
