Lightning's Phoenix Feather Fun

by StarkyShy

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Porn, Fetish, Rainbow Dash, Scootaloo, Anthro, Profanity, Lightning Dust
Length: 2798

After Rainbow Dash saves her from a brutal tickle torture session, Scootaloo gets to dish out some well-deserved revenge on Lightning Dust.

All characters in this story are depicted as adults.

Commission for superfun.

When we last left off, Lightning Dust was in the middle of giving Scootaloo a particularly cruel edging and tickle torture session, courtesy of some phoenix feathers that make the poor pegasus more sensitive with each stroke.

Her plans to make Scootaloo defect to her side are quickly dashed when Rainbow breaks in and saves the day.

With Lightning Dust unconscious, the question isn't if Scootaloo should take revenge, it's how much until she's satisfied.

Story contains: Tickle torture, edging, increasing sensitivity, sweet sweet revenge

Published 2023-02-03 21:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2023-02-03 21:00:00 UTC

Turnabout Tickles

“AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA! PLEHEHEHEEAAAHAHAHASE! I! I CAHAHAHAHAHAN’T TAHAHAHAKE IT!”

Scootaloo had no idea how long it had been since Lightning Dust had captured her. It could have been days, weeks, months, or only a couple of hours. Ever since she woke up, Lightning Dust had been giving her a full dose of tickle torture, whittling away at her sanity by use of mythical phoenix feathers.

The feathers alone tickled far more than any conventional tool, one stroke would set her nerves ablaze with ticklish intensity. But they had an additional property that guaranteed Scootaloo would keep screaming with laughter. Much like the phoenix itself, the feathers gave new life to whatever they touched. Any spot on her body that the feathers touched would become more sensitive, and it provided her with energy so that she would never feel exhaustion, and never get used to any of the tickling sensations.

Lightning Dust had used the feathers on practically every part of Scooaloo’s exposed body by now, but she put special focus on her feet and pussy in particular.

Scootaloo’s feet were already the most ticklish part on her, but after countless passes of the feathers, a simple kiss to her soles would leave her screaming.

Between Scootaloo’s legs was a mechanical wheel with eight phoenix feathers slowly rotating and ever so gently brushing against her pussy lips, only going fast enough to keep her just at the edge of an orgasm.

The only times Lightning Dust was merciful enough was when Scootaloo caved in and told her one thing that Lightning was better at than Rainbow Dash.

Scootaloo could count the amount of times she was allowed to orgasm on one hand.

Lightning Dust was currently using the feathers on Scootaloo’s breasts, she dragged the vanes across the pegasus’s stiff nipples to make her squirm and squeal.

“NNNNNF! AAAAHAHAHAA! STAHAHAHAHAP! NOHOHOHO!” The phoenix feathers slowly dragging across her nipples forced hysterical moans and needy laughs out of her. It would be all she could focus on if the wheel of feathers between her legs wasn’t there. Lightning Dust had frequently changed where she’d tickle Scootaloo, but that wheel was the one constant throughout her torment, always keeping her on edge and making her far too horny to think.

“Aw, don’t be like that, Scoots! I know ya love it!” Lightning Dust chuckled, speaking casually to the pegasus she was torturing. She adored all the reactions she was drawing out of Scootaloo. She may have been moving the feathers at a glacial pace, but Scootaloo’s natural reflexive thrashing meant she was effectively tickling herself.

“NOHOHOHOHO MOHOHOHOHORE! A-AAAAAHAHAAAAAHN!” Scootaloo begged. Drool dripped down the corners of her lips as the pleasure overloaded her mind. It tickled beyond belief, but she couldn’t deny the sexual pleasure she was getting from it, although it wasn’t enough to get her off.

With a smirk and a shrug, Lightning Dust lowered the feathers. “Alright, fine, I’ll go somewhere else.”

Scootaloo’s head hung low as she whimpered and gasped for air, she was given a slight moment of mercy until a light tapping at her hypersensitive soles made her scream and learn where that “somewhere else” was.

Lightning Dust was only poking and prodding Scootaloo’s feet, but after all the exposure to the phoenix feathers, it was enough to make the poor pegasus cry with laughter.

Just before Lightning Dust was about to get truly cruel with tickling Scootaloo’s feet, she paused. She was hearing something above all of Scootaloo’s laughs and moans, a pounding that was getting louder and louder.

The door to the room flew off its hinges, and the light shone on Scootaloo’s hope and Lightning Dust’s nightmare. The multicolored mane and blue and gold uniform were unmistakable.

“R-RAINBOW DASH!”

Rainbow cracked her knuckles. “Let Scootaloo go. Now.” she said with a deathly serious tone.

Lightning Dust stood her ground, tilting her head with a cocky smirk. “It’s already too late, Rainbow Dash! Scootaloo’s already pledged herself to me, and there’s nothing you can d-”

Rainbow wanted nothing to do with Lightning’s monologue. With an enraged cry, she charged at her, immediately knocking her to the ground.

Scootaloo watched the two wrestle as best she could. They kept moving all around her, and she had a limited range of motion. Not to mention the feather wheel was still maddeningly keeping her on the edge of a climax.

Rainbow Dash eventually pinned Lightning Dust to the floor, and with one good headbutt, she knocked the Washout out cold.

The first thing Dash did when she stood up was kick the feather wheel away so that it no longer tormented Scootaloo.

“Aaah…hah…Rainbow Dash…thank you…!” A wave of relief washed over Scootaloo’s body. Her mind still felt exhausted, but she was finally able to think again.

“Are you alright, Scootaloo? Did she hurt you?” Rainbow Dash was frantically looking for ways to get her out of all those straps and clamps.

Scootaloo weakly nodded. “I’m fine…she just…tickled me…a lot…”

Rainbow eventually got Scootaloo free, holding her up so she didn’t strain herself. “Can ya walk?”

Scootaloo gingerly touched her foot to the floor, and immediately retracted it with a loud squeal. “AIIIEEEEE! N-No…My feet are way too sensitive right now…”

Rainbow Dash hoisted Scootaloo onto her back. “That’s fine. I’ll just carry you home and we can find a way to get you back to normal!”

“What are we gonna do with her?” Scootaloo pointed to the unconscious Lightning Dust.

Dash looked around the room, seeing the other bondage setups and scattered phoenix feathers. A mischievous smirk grew on her face as she plotted, and soon Scootaloo was sporting that same look.

Lightning Dust woke up with a groan and a headache. As she blinked herself awake, she was greeted with the evil grins of Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash looking right at her.

“Good moooorniiiiing!” Rainbow Dash sang.

As Lightning Dust realized the situation she was now in, her eyes widened in horror.

Her arms were forcibly raised above her head, put into a metallic tube from her elbows to her hands, Her wings were wrapped up with straps to ensure they couldn’t extend. Her legs stuck out in front of her and placed into the metallic stocks she was planning on putting Rainbow Dash in. And to further drive in the humiliation, she had been stripped completely naked.

“Ready for a little payback?” Scootaloo grinned, holding the phoenix feathers in front of her face.

“Y-You wouldn’t dare!” The look on Scootaloo’s face alone made Lightning Dust’s body tremble, even if she still tried to put on a tough front.

“I would, and I am!” Scootaloo sat on Lightning Dust’s legs, just so she could keep her feet off the floor. It also gave her easy access to pretty much any part of Lightning Dust’s body, but Scootaloo already knew where she wanted to target first. She turned herself around and immediately slid the phoenix feathers down those trapped soles.

“GAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Lightning Dust couldn’t even attempt to hold back her laughter. The moment those plumes touched her feet, she immediately exploded with hysterics.

Hearing Lightning scream with laughter filled Scootaloo with vengeful glee. It felt so good to hear her cry out with laughter after the hell she had been through. She dragged the feathers down the same spots again, wanting to hear Lightning Dust experience the true evil of the phoenix feathers.

“NOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO! STAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAP PLHEHEHEHEAAAASE!” Lightning Dust violently thrashed around. The first touch of the feathers against her soles made her scream at the top of her lungs, but as they retreaded the now rejuvenated skin, the ticklish sensations got even more intense, and they would only increase with each pass.

“Aw, you’re begging already?” Scootaloo smirked, finally able to fire off some snarky comments at Lightning Dust. “But I just started tickling your feet!” Scootaloo’s voice lowered to take on a more sinister tone. “And I don’t plan on stopping any time soon…”

Lightning Dust felt chills going down her spine, but the magic of the phoenix feathers was sure to warm her up. “WAHAHAHAHA! NAHAHAHAHAHA! SCOOTAHAHAHAHA SCOOHOOHOOHOOTALOOHOOHOO! I’M SOHOHOHOHOHO! SOHOHOHOHOHOHORRIIEEEHEEHEEHEE!” she screamed out in an attempt to get any sort of mercy from the pegasus.

“I bet you are!” Was Scootaloo’s simple response. She was focused on running the pair of feathers all over Lightning Dust’s feet. There was vengeance in her eyes. Each screaming laugh she heard was pure catharsis. Scootaloo wouldn’t be satisfied until she stroked every inch of Lightning Dust’s feet a hundred times over.

Scootaloo’s revenge was absolutely wrecking Lightning Dust. Each stroke tickled more than the last, and Scootaloo was eager to make the feathers explore her feet. All she could do in defense was weakly curl and wiggle them, but it was hardly a hindrance to Scootaloo’s tickle assault.

As Scootaloo sawed the phoenix feathers between those trapped toes, part of her wanted to see the look on Lightning Dust’s face. But a moment spent looking would mean a moment spent not tickling her. For now, she was satisfied just hearing her beg for mercy and watching her feet uselessly flail about.

Lightning Dust was already crying, sweating, blushing, and drooling. With the phoenix feathers sliding back and forth, her toes were being constantly stimulated and made more and more sensitive by the second. “AAAIIIIIEEEEHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NONONONONONOHOHOHOHO PLEASE IT TIHIHIHIHIHIHAHAHAHAHA! IT TIHIHIHIHIHICKLES! GYAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

“Oh? Does it? Does it tiiiickle?” Scootaloo sang, making sure the feathers gave the same treatment to the rest of Lightning Dust’s toes. “Your feet must be sooooooo ticklish by now!”

Rainbow Dash had been watching Scootaloo take revenge for a while. And looking at the sinister grin on Scootaloo’s face and the hysterical one on Lightning, Dash was almost starting to feel sorry for Lightning Dust.

…Almost.

The tears flowed freely down Lightning’s face. All she could see through her blurred vision was the back of Scootaloo, but she could certainly feel the feathers going between and underneath her toes. She was caught completely off-guard by Rainbow Dash coming up from behind, using two more feathers to stroke her exposed armpits. “EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAHAHAHAHAAA WHYHYHYHYHYHYHYHY!?”

“You had a lot of phoenix feathers lying around,” Dash chuckled. “It’d be a shame to let them go to waste.” She kept the feathers at Lightning Dust’s armpits, wanting to test out the effects of the phoenix feathers herself, especially after watching Scootaloo wreak havoc on her feet.

Now being double-teamed, Lightning Dust’s laughter reached new heights. She took in a short gasp of air, followed by silent laughter. Her mouth was open, her body trembled, and her chest heaved, but no sound came out. The silence only lasted a couple of seconds, as the laughter came back in full force. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

Scootaloo heard Dash joining in to add to Lightning Dust’s torment. She allowed herself to turn her head to look, and it was everything she wanted and more. She saw all the tears, sweat, and drool that were dripping down her face, the desperation in her eyes, the open-mouth laughter, the futile attempts to pull her arms down to protect her armpits, even a little bit of a wet spot in between Lightning’s legs.

Rainbow Dash swirled the pair of feathers into Lightning Dust’s exposed pits, smirking as she saw how hysterical it was making the poor pegasus. “Aww, is it too much for you? I thought a tough pegasus like you would be able to withstand a little tickling!”

Seeing Lightning Dust reduced to a laughing, sobbing mess made Scootaloo grin ear to ear, but she still wasn’t done getting revenge. Since she had already turned around, she decided to help Rainbow Dash with getting the rest of her upperbody, waving the feathers all over Lightning’s abs and sides.

Even though Scootaloo had stopped tickling her feet, her soles and toes still felt tickly tingles all over. That alone would be enough to bring her to a fit of laughter, but with Scootaloo and Dash both feathering her upperbody, she was still laughing at the top of her lungs. Her hips rocked side to side, and her arms struggled, trying to fight against the metal structure that kept her arms raised. The verbal teasing from Rainbow was another layer of humiliation. She’d be furious if she wasn’t so flustered.

Dash kept piling on the taunts as she circled the feather plumes in Dust’s armpits. “You’re such a ticklish pegasus! Oh, I bet this must be driving you craaaaazy!” She leaned in to whisper in her ear, making sure that she would hear it above her own laughter. “Tickle tickle tickle…”

Scootaloo joined in on the teasing, putting one feather in Lightning’s navel, and the other across her cutie mark. “Laugh for us, Lightning Dust! Be a cute, giggling, ticklish mess!”

The blush on Lightning Dust practically covered her entire face as she was pretty much forced to obey Scootaloo’s commands. “EEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEE! NONONONONOHOHOHOHOHOHO! STAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! TIHIHIHIHIHIHIHIHAHAHAHAHA!”

Rainbow Dash finally moved the feathers out of Lightning’s armpits, and right onto her naked breasts. “How about this? Does it tickle heeeere?”

More laughter spilled out from Lightning’s lips, but a heavy moan was mixed in-between. The feathers slipping into her cleavage and across her nipples felt just as good as it tickled.

Following Rainbow’s lead, Scootaloo moved her feathers lower. The tips of the phoenix feathers just barely teased her wet pussy.

“NNNGAAAHAHAHAHAHA! AAAHAHAHAAAA FUUHUHUHUHUHUCK!” Just the few light touches were enough to send Lightning into horny overdrive, moaning and laughing as the two made her breasts and crotch even more sensitive to touch.

Dash’s voice whispered low and seductive into Lightning’s ear. “All these tickles feel good, don’t they?”

Scootaloo giggled, the feathertip brushing over her clit just for a brief moment. “You love it, don’t you?”

“OOOOHOHOHOHOHO FUHUHUHUCK! YES! YEHEHEHEHES! PLEHEHEHEAAASE I NEEHEEHEED IHIHIHIT!”

Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo exchanged glances, giving each other knowing grins.

Lightning Dust shut her eyes as the pleasure overwhelmed her. The warmth of the feathers tickled her nipples and her pussy at the same time, her sensitivity heightening with each stroke made her drool and gasp.

But just as she was about to feel the warm bliss of a climax, she felt nothing at all.

“H-Huh?” Lightning opened her eyes to see Rainbow and Scootaloo pulling the feathers away. “No…no! Please!”

“I dunno,” Rainbow casually shrugged. “You were making a lot of cute sounds when you’re on edge. What do you think, Scoots?”

“Oh, I agree!” Scootaloo grinned. “But I think you make even cuter sounds when your feet are being tickled…”

Lightning Dust started panicking as she anticipated Scootaloo running those plumes through her toes again. “NO! NOT THAT!”

Rainbow Dash put an arm around Lightning’s body. “Aw, don’t be like that! We aren’t gonna tickle your feet just yet! Scootaloo’s gotta get dressed for the occasion!”

“W…What?”

“Yeah, Rainbow Dash is gonna take me home to change, but we’ll be back for you!” Scootaloo chuckled, poking Lightning Dust on the nose.

“W-Wait! You can’t just leave me here!” Lightning Dust protested.

“Don’t be so dramatic!” Rainbow Dash playfully rolled her eyes. “We won’t be gone for long. Besides, you’ll have something to pass the time!”

Rainbow Dash carried over the wheel of phoenix feathers previously used to put Scootaloo in a constant state of edging, and set it right down in front of Lightning Dust’s feet.

“A-AAAHAAA! NO! PLEEEEAAAASE! EEEEHAHA!” Lightning Dust tried to keep her feet still as the feathers pressed against her foot, but her nervous trembles were more than enough to make her tickle herself.

“And look at what I found while you were napping!” Rainbow brought out another wheel of feathers, putting it on the other foot.

“NOOOOOHOHOHOHO!”

Rainbow Dash grabbed Lightning’s Washout flight suit. “We’ll make sure you’re properly dressed for our return, too! I think Rarity can add a little something to line this thing with…”

Rainbow picked up Scootaloo in her arms, walking to the front of the stocks. “Care to do the honors?”

With her big toes, Scootaloo pressed the buttons on the wheels, letting out a loud ticklish squeal as she did so. Though the brief instant of intensity was worth it.

The wheels of phoenix feathers started to spin, the soft warm vanes made slow strokes from Lightning’s toes to her heels.

“AAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! DAHAHAHAHAHASH! SCOOHOOHOOTALOOHOOHOO! I’M SOHOHOHOHOHOHORRIHIHIHIHIEEEE! IT TIHIHIHIHIHIHAHAHA TIHIHIHIHICKLES SOHOHOHO MUHUHUHUHUHUCH!”

As Rainbow walked out with Scootaloo, they could hear Lightning Dust’s laughter and begging echoing behind them.

“Heh, we better hurry,” Rainbow chuckled. “I don’t think she’s gonna last long.”

“Ooh, I don’t know, the wind blowing through my toes is gonna tickle a loooot…” Scootaloo warned, though there was some sincerity mixed in with her mischief.

“Fine, fine…” Rainbow playfully sighed. “I guess I can take it slow…”