There is always a Sparkle in the blackest hole
I love you Twilight...
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7:30 AM
Derek P.O.V.
Derek woke up to a tickling sensation on his neck. He looks down and sees Twilight was nuzzling her head under his chin. He was laying on his back, and she had one hoof draped across his midsection. He smiles and kisses the top of her head, causing her to open her big gorgeous eyes at him. She gives him a soft smile before yawning. Derek quickly stole a kiss when she finished yawning. Causing Twilight to smirk before rolling over, getting on top of him. Derek smiled as he wrapped his arms around her back as she then leaned down and gave him a proper kiss. Derek kisses her back, gently rubbing her back. They broke the kiss and the two looked at each other.
"How'd you sleep?" Derek asked.
"Like a princess with her big strong knight holding her close." She joked, inciting a chuckle from Derek. He leans up and kisses her again before looking at the clock. He was a bit surprised he had woken up so early, as today was his day off. He looks back at Twilight who was giving him a mischievous grin. She knew that she had him all day.
"Anything you feel like doing today princess?" Derek asked her, giving her a nervous grin back.
"I have a few things in mind." She joked before getting pretty serious. "We took a big step yesterday."
"Yeah, we did." Derek began to rub her back again. "Do you regret it?"
"Of course not, I loved every minute of it." Twilight responded, but it was obvious something was on her mind.
"I'm feeling you were about to say 'But...' Am I correct Twilight." Derek gave her a serious look. Twilight sighed before looking away. Something was in fact on her mind.
"I... I wanted more Derek. I wanted to do more but... I got worried." She said softly.
"Is it because you're a virgin?" Derek asked, to which Twilight looked back at him, a blush starting to form on her face.
"Not only that... but... I wasn't sure you were going to like it..." She finally admitted.
"What do you mean Twilight?" Derek said, scooting up in the bed to prop himself up on the headboard.
"I just... I’ve just been thinking... about the first day we met... Do you remember that?" She asked, she looked away again.
"Yeah. How could I forget, it's the day my entire world changed." Derek told her.
"Do you... do you remember what you said to me?" Twilight asked, her voice getting more and more shaky.
"I uh... not really. I kinda passed out afterwards if I remember correctly." Derek scratched the back of his head as he tried to remember exactly what he said.
"You called me a horse." She finally said. Derek looked at her, she still had her head turned, not looking him in the eyes. He felt his heart sink a bit, he didn't understand why it mattered so much.
"I... I don't understand Twilight. Why does that upset you?" He asked, trying to get some more info out of her. Twilight finally looked back at him, her eyes a bit swollen.
"Horses... and ponies have a common ancestor. We split off in the evolutionary line and... we evolved as time went on. Horses remained the same but ponies became what you see now." Twilight began to lecture, but it was the least enthusiastic lecture Twilight ever gave,
"Ok... your point is?" Derek asked which Twilight kinda snapped at him.
"Don't you get it Derek!? Horses remained animals while Ponies evolved to become sentient! You called me an animal Derek!... one I was scared you were going to be disgusted with..." She looked away again, and Derek's eyes widened. "I know you didn't know any better... you didn't know what it meant, I forgive you for that. But... how would you feel if I called you a hairless ape, and then you tried to form a relationship with me? You would feel as if I saw you as an animal... and that I would be disgusted by your... animal appearance... I... I don't want you to think that way about me."
Twilight began to tear up. She laid her head back on his chest as she tried to force herself from sobbing. Derek could feel his chest and throat tightening. This was the first time Derek saw Twilight cry, and the worst part, he felt responsible for making her cry. A feeling of shame fills his thoughts, shame and guilt. He didn't know he had made her feel that way, he didn't know. Even though Twilight said she forgave him, Derek knew an apology alone doesn't heal all scars. He looks down at Twilight, some tears were running down her cheeks, her soft swollen eyes portraying sadness. Derek could feel his heart shatter, he didn't want to see her like this. It was painful to see her upset, he knew he had to do something.
Twilight P.O.V.
Twilight kept her face away from Derek's, afraid to see the look in his eyes. Last night was one the best nights to happen to her, but it also only increased her anxiety. She couldn't get the thought that Derek only did what he did last night because he felt obligated, not that he wanted to do it. He never stuck his fingers that deep in her, like he was afraid to. She couldn't think of an answer why he suddenly hesitated last night. Not knowing scared her more than knowing. She was afraid he found her repulsive, and didn't want to be intimate with her, because of her appearance. She then sees his hand come across her face slowly, and put it on her cheek gently. He moves her head to look him in the face. Her eyes met his, and she could see the look of regret on his face. His eyes were soft, swollen, filled with remorse. But they were also filled with another emotion... desire. He looked at her with soft eyes that held back a strong amount of desire. Derek then leaned forward, and gave her a kiss on her forehead, the most gentle one he had ever given her. He pulls back to look into her eyes again.
"Twilight...I'm so sorry I made you feel that way... I'm so sorry. I didn't know, I never meant to make you feel uncomfortable about your body. That's something I never want you to feel. Whenever I see you... hear you... think about you, I never see your body... I see you, I see Twilight. The most important girl in my life... the most important mare. I didn't fall in love with a pony... I fell in love with Twilight. The one who cared about me like no one ever had before who wasn't my parents... The last thing I want to do to you Twilight, is hurt you... make you feel like you are below me. I love you Twilight, and if I was somehow separated from you, I would risk my life to get near another black hole just to find you again. You're my best friend Twilight... you're my marefriend... my soulmate... and I never want to drive you away... I want to hold you close and never let go... I love you Twilight." Tears now began to run down Derek's cheek as he poured his heart into her. Tears began to roll down Twilight's cheeks again as well... but a new kind of tears. One that seemed to wash away the old ones. She could feel Derek's arm tighten around her back, and his hand begin to shake on her cheek. She puts her hoof on top of his hand which held her cheek. she cupped it gently, and leaned into his hand.
"...I love you too Derek... I love you... I love you..." Twilight's lip quivers and she feels like sobbing, crying out the words till the day she dies. She never wanted to stop saying them. She would have continued to say them if her head wasn't pulled forward by Derek's hand. She knew what was coming, she closed her eyes and didn't fight back against his pull. Their lips meet, and Derek kisses her passionately. Derek began to move his hand from her cheek, to the back of her head running his fingers through her mane. Though it wasn't as deep of a kiss like their previous ones, this one was much more powerful and more intimate than any other kiss he had given her. She could feel the emotions he was feeling and the love and care he had for her... in just that one kiss. She began to melt into him, kissing him back with as much passion as he was giving her. But That was only the start.
Shared Perspectives
Twilight could feel Derek shift his weight, and soon in one fluid motion, she was no longer on top. Her eyes quickly open, and she sees Derek had rolled over, and now he was on top of her. She blushes as Derek finally breaks their kiss. He looked longingly into her huge... soft... loving eyes. His voice, low, and soft, began to speak.
"I love you Twilight... please... let me show you how much you mean to me..." He whispered into her ear. Her body began to heat up, and her cheeks became redder. She tried to speak, but all her words kept getting caught in her throat. Finally she bit her lip and nodded her head. Derek then sits up, getting on his knees, for a brief moment. He reaches down, and pulls off his shirt, revealing his chest and abdomen to her. Her eyes widened, she couldn't tell if it was because of all the hard work he had been doing for Applejack, but the muscles on his chest seemed... bigger. His abs are more defined, and his arms more swollen. Her body increases in temperature and she instinctively crosses her hindlegs while under him. Her breath became short and choppy, as she gazed up at him. The sight of his strong, muscular, and exotic body was sending jolts through her body. Before she could oogle him more, he slowly and gently got back on top of her.
the fur on her chest, met his bare one. She lets out a small gasp, finding the contact extremely intimate. Derek took that moment to strike, turning his head to the side and giving her another kiss, his tongue going straight into her mouth and wrapping around her own tongue. Twilight let out a soft moan as her tongue danced with his inside her own mouth. She had uncrossed her hind legs and then started to wrap them around his waist. Derek's tongue slowly began to let up the fight for dominance, causing Twilight's tongue to follow it, going into Derek's mouth. His hands were rubbing down her sides, off her shoulders, and down her wings. Then, onto her haunches. He grabbed her firm flank and squeezed them hard, causing Twilight to let out a moan.
Derek breaks the kiss once more, sucking in needed oxygen. Twilight gulped in air greedily, but yearned for his lips to return to hers. But Derek was nearing his limit, he almost couldn't take it anymore. He needed her, he needed her badly. He gets up once again, this time reaching for his boxers, he pulls them down. His cock sprang out almost immediately, throbbing hard and eager to get to work. Twilight feels her body relax upon seeing his member, her body shivers despite being so incredibly hot. She slowly began to sit up, and she widened her mouth but Derek slowly stopped her.
"No... Not right now... We can do that some other time... right now, you need this more than me... and I want your first time to be all about you..." Derek said as he gently pushed her back down onto the bed and got on top of her. He began to kiss her cheek, then he moved his lips onto her neck, making her shiver even more. His lips moved onto her chest, feeling her soft fur, which smelled of lavender. He kept kissing down, feeling a strong heat the closer he got down. till finally he was face to face with it. Surprisingly, it looked much differently than he thought it would have. It definitely didn't look human, but it did not look like a horse's pussy. It was puffy and very wet from excitement, and her clit was winking at him. It looked like a cross between the two.
Derek let out a soft breath before finally leaning down, giving her lips a soft kiss. She jolts and lets out a soft moan. Her hind legs wrap around his head, holding him firmly in place. He grinned, knowing she liked it. He gave her another passionate kiss, and another. Her body tensed up from the new feeling, and she grips the sheets with her hooves. That's when his tongue then finally slid across her lips, causing her to squeal like Fluttershy meeting a new pony. He uses his hand to grab and take a firm hold of her hips. Derek's tongue then slowly started to part the purple lips of her pussy, and began to enter her. Twilight closed her eyes tightly and gritted her teeth as Derek's tongue began to enter her. Her hind legs squeeze the sides of his head, as he presses his face into her pelvis, his tongue wouldn't go past her hymen. Which was fine, he was going to get past it later. Derek continued to lick the inside of Twilight's pussy, giving her the attention she deserved. Her back arches, and she moans out, not caring who heard. Derek kept his hands firmly on her sides, never letting up his oral pleasure. He focuses on her clit, running his tongue in circles around it. Derek could hear her moans getting more and more high pitched. Her body was tensing up, and he felt her legs squeeze his head tighter. He knew what was coming, which was why he quickly pulled his tongue back and began to pull away from her. Twilight's eyes widened, and she looked up as he began to sit up. Her facial expression turned into a pout, and she began to whimper.
"D-Derek... Why did... why did you stop?"... she whined, giving him puppy eyes. God damn she was adorable. He smirks and gets right back on top of her, his face inches from hers. Her eyes widened at his sudden desire. Her heart began to pound.
"I don't want you finishing too early on me. Besides... I still need to make you mine..." Derek said, his voice full of desire now. Twilight gasps, as she feels Derek start to angle himself, slowly pushing his tip inside her pussy. She bites her lip and looks him in the eye, the suspense was starting to kill her, she wanted him, she wanted him to take her, make her his.
"D-Do it... Do it now! Make me your mare!..." She begged him, pressing her hips into his. That was all the encouragement he needed. He puts his hands down on the bed on either side of her, and finally rammed himself in.
Twilight's eyes widened till they were the size of dinner plates. She lets out a loud high pitched cry as he rammed into her, one of both pain and pleasure. She felt her hymen break as Derek's cock thrusted its way through, without mercy. The brief moment of pain slowly washes over her, and she then finds herself wrapping all four hooves around him, holding onto his strong body. Derek places his hands on her shoulders as he then begins to pull out, only to ram himself in again. Twilight's body jolted upward with force, she let out another cry, one of passion and pleasure. Her pussy molded around his cock, squeezing him tight. It was warm, almost hot, and wet. Derek let out a soft grunt as he began to thrust into her again. Her hind legs locked around his waist, holding him firmly as his speed began to increase. His cock was slowly getting in deeper and deeper, first going half way, and then three fourths of the way in. Twilight would press her hips into him, in sync with his own thrusts to try and get him deeper inside her. With one more hard thrust, he gets himself in all the way to the base of his cock. Twilight squeaks like a mouse, feeling his whole length inside her. Derek leans his head down, and gently bit her neck, causing her to moan even louder. Derek was picking up speed with every thrust, not giving Twilight a second to breathe, or to even think. Derek could feel her begin to tense up again. Her moans getting high pitched once again. She buried her face into his neck and closed her eyes tight.
"D-D-Der...Derek!... D-Derek! I... I... I'm...!" She stuttered, unable to get all the words out. Derek knew what she was trying to say. He lifts his head up to her ear and gives it a small kiss before whispering.
"Go ahead... don't hold back my little princess... give me all you got." Derek's words send shivers down her spine.
He never let up his thrusts for a second. Twilight couldn't handle it anymore, She arches her back, pressing into him as hard as she could and moaning as loud as she could. Derek feels her pussy quiver, and trembles around his cock. He feels his thighs get increasingly wet, as she began to cum all over him. Derek grits his teeth, reaching down to her hooves, and grabbing them. Twilight finally coming down after her powerful orgasm, looks him in the eye. He looked at her, hunger in his eyes, it was his turn. He squeezed her forehooves with his hands, and then pinned them above her head. Twilight gasps in between her moans, seeing a change in him, a change that excites her more. Her chest rises and falls as she tries to catch her breath, but Derek wouldn't let up for a second.
She bites her lip, as Derek held her firmly to the bed by her hooves, she couldn't move, or squirm, she was completely at his mercy. She could feel her excitement get higher as she felt helpless. She felt like his eyes looked her over as prey, and she looked up to him, as a predator. She bites her lip feeling as if she might cum again if he kept this up. Derek grunts loudly, his chest rumbling from his own voice. The hair on Twilight's neck stand on end, and she cries out again, her pussy trembling again as Derek was showing it no mercy. Finally Derek lowered his head and grit his teeth hard. his speed was getting faster and faster, till finally, he rammed in as hard as he could, forcing himself to get in deeper. Twilight could feel his cock enter her womb, and began to fill her up. Derek let out a loud, grunt like moan, as his cock erupted inside of her. He relaxes his body as he was at the tail end of his orgasm. He kept her hooves pinned down, as he began to pant hard. His thrusts finally ceased, giving Twilight a moment to finally breathe. She feels her whole body become sensitive, that even the slightest touch would send electrical shocks throughout her body.
Derek would slowly pull out, causing Twilight to tense up as he did, finally he pulls out of her and he looks down at her, releasing her hooves. Twilight looks up at him, both breathing heavy. They stared into each other's eyes, Derek could see visible hearts in Twilight's eyes, while Twilight could see his eyes sparkle. Derek finally fell to the side, and Twilight instantly snuggled up to him, both holding each other close. No words were spoken, none needed to. Twilight had her human, and he had his mare, nothing else mattered. Derek gently strokes her back, comforting her. She rested her head into his chest, slowly closing her eyes. Derek kissed the top of her head as he then pulled the covers over them. If he died right then and there, he would have no regrets. He smiles widely, as he and Twilight hold each other closely.
Author's Note
Happy Valentines day Everyone! They finally did it! This is not the end of the fic, I actually see this as the beginning. I wanna continue this story and explore it a bit more with different scenarios as the two go up and down in their relationship. But expect chapters to come out a little less frequently now as I will be working on others projects. Thank you all for reading! ![]()
