Their Rightful Place

by Omegathyst

Luring Loyalty

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Author's Note

Contains: Reluctant/Bratty Rainbow Blitz, relationship "counseling," bisexual sex rumors, zebra musk, blowjobs, facefucking, teasing, voyeurism/cucking, and a bukkake!


Luring Loyalty

"Do you think this is a good outfit to w-wear for when we meet him?"

Rainbow Blitz, checking out himself in the mirror as he briefly analyzed his short but well-kept prismatic mane, turned around and felt his cheeks heating up as he stared at his coltfriend's white flower in his long flowing pink mane, which was paired up with a white skirt while the front half of his body was lacking clothing. Rainbow Blitz snorted and shook his head. Perhaps if Butterscotch had dressed up like that more often, there wouldn't be the problems they were having in the first place.

The Element of Kindness and the Element of Loyalty, having known each other longer than the others, had recently started dating a few months ago. And while Butterscotch's soft personality meshed very well with Blitz' brash demeanor, the same couldn't be said for their endeavors in the bedroom. Rainbow Blitz wasn't as turned on by the femcolt's antics as he quite hoped, and Butterscotch found the blue stallion's approach to sex to be too much. The couple knew that they had barely scratched the surface to even be self-aware of the problems in the first place, but that was only where the weirdness began.

Around the same time they had started dating, the other Elements of Harmony started rambling over lunch about what they were hearing about the zebra stallion that lived in the Everfree Forest. Having all shared an unfortunate first encounter with the zebra, Rainbow Blitz and Butterscotch were very familiar with him. He went by the name Zecora, and just the mere images of the rumors that were told about him were enough to make both pegasi blush as deep as tomatoes. It had been several years since the poison joke incident, and to say that Ponyville had finally warmed up to the striped outsider was a severe understatement. Several mares had gone up to the Elements of Harmony, claiming they were pregnant with Zecora's foals.

If that weren't already absurd on its own, many other gay couples said that they had their relationships mended in lewd ways by the zebra. Boy Bon and Guyra were closer than ever after seeing Zecora, and hearing their tale was the final straw for Butterscotch's mounting curiosity. He had spent the past several days simply begging for Rainbow Blitz to come with him to get Zecora's help. Rainbow Blitz had felt his annoyance growing by the day, the merciless thoughts and images of Butterscotch leaving him for Zecora doing the opposite of helping him feel more secure in the relationship.

And now? Butterscotch was more dolled up for the zebra than he ever had been for Rainbow Blitz.

"Lose one of those," Blitz grumbled. "We're going to ask Zecora for verbal advice. Nothing more than that. No need to dress like a-"

Rainbow Blitz cut himself off mid-sentence as he saw his coltfriend's ears flattening, the yellow pegasus' green eyes wide as saucers as he looked at Blitz like a kicked puppy. Rainbow Blitz groaned, walking out of the bathroom and pressing his muzzle against Butterscotch's forehead.

"Sorry, you look beautiful as always," Blitz whispered. "I really want us to work out, you know the last thing I want is for someone to get between us, right?"

"I know," Butterscotch nodded. "And I'm not planning on that. We're just going to ask him if those rumors are true, and get some possible help for our relationship. Y-You promise to keep an open mind at least?"

"Well, considering how doing the opposite gave us the wrong impression of Zecora…sure," Blitz relented. "It’s the least we can do for him."

"Oh thank you!" Butterscotch pulled back to look at him with sparkling eyes and a wide grin, reminding Rainbow Blitz why he was putting himself out there. The blue pegasus pressed his lips against Butterscotch's lips, savoring the kiss for a few moments before pulling back. "Alright, let's get going before it gets dark."

"Aren't you going to dress up or something?" Butterscotch scowled in the pouty lip way that Rainbow Blitz loved, and he chuckled as they walked to the door of the yellow pegasus' cottage. Rainbow Blitz opened his wing and rested it on his coltfriend's back before turning to look at him.

"Butters, we don't normally wear clothes," Blitz replied. "This is just a visit to Zecora's hut, not the Grand Galloping Gala."

"Okay," Butterscotch blushed, the two stallions making small talk the whole way to the Everfree Forest, with the femcolt jolting at the sound of every growl and scuffle. Rainbow Blitz laughed, ignoring his growing nerves at all the hidden wildlife as they eventually reached Zecora's hut.

The two stopped at the door, neither lifting a hoof as they looked at each other. Or more accurately, Rainbow Blitz looked at his coltfriend while the femcolt stared at the ground.

"Hey," Rainbow Blitz moved his wing off Butterscotch's back to gently lift the femcolt's chin to meet his eyes. "Even if Zecora can't help us, we can still figure this out. I love you, alright?"

"I love you too," Butterscotch gave a small smile, before slowly lifting a hoof and knocking on the door. "Oh Solaris, I'm getting nervous. Why am I getting nervous?"

"Because we're about to tell a stallion we barely know about our sex life?" Blitz chuckled. "That’s pretty normal, hon-"

The door swung open, and Rainbow Blitz no longer remembered what he was going to say as he stared at the taller and bulkier zebra. Easily a paragon of masculinity, Zecora was a head and shoulders taller than the smaller pegasi. The fact that his entire body was wet and his mohawk was pressed against his face, most likely from coming out of the shower, did something to Rainbow Blitz that was simply unexplainable at the time. On top of that, and Zecora's piercing cyan stare, there was another factor that Rainbow Blitz was woefully unprepared for.

"Greetings to you both," Zecora's deep and sonorous voice went into Rainbow Blitz' ears and vibrated throughout his entire body like that of a siren's call. "For what reason did you choose my lovely hut to approach?"

"Um, c-can we come in?" Butterscotch spoke up first. "It’s a little cold out…"

Some intuitive feeling deep down told Rainbow Blitz that Butterscotch was not shivering from the cold.

"Please do come inside my hut!" Zecora smiled, leaving the door wide open as he took several steps back into his own home. "It looks like something has gotten you two in a rut?"

"More like a lack of rut," Blitz muttered.

"W-What gave you that idea?" Butterscotch asked the zebra.

"Madly blushing and fur ruffled on end?" Zecora described. "Be honest with me and let's not pretend."

"You're right," Butterscotch gulped before he spoke. "Is it…true that you've been sleeping with all these ponies?"

"Not exactly like I can sleep with another of my kind," Zecora waited for several seconds before clarifying. "That was a joke to ease your mind."

"Oh!" Butterscotch let out a forced laugh. "Appreciated, thank you."

"And what about this one here?" Zecora tilted his head as he looked right at Rainbow Blitz. "Are you all quiet because you're still shaking with fear?"

"No," Blitz shook his head, his ears flattening as he narrowed his eyes at Zecora, wrapping his wing around Butterscotch's back and pulling him close. "Are the rumors true or not?"

"Did I strike a nerve?" Zecora's laugh was as infuriating to the blue pegasus as it was addicting, the bigger stallion walking in a slow circle around the two pegasi. "Yes, it is true that I'm a bit of a perv. Mares and stallions alike come to me, and then they cum for me."

"You can't rhyme me with me," Blitz rolled his eyes.

"Have you considered the problem being how you talk?" Zecora stared down at Rainbow Blitz. "Your coltfriend has talked to me more than he's probably looked at your cock!"

"Rainbow Blitz!" Butterscotch gasped as he saw his coltfriend grit his teeth and glare at the taller zebra. "You need to be nice! All you've been is rude to him when you said you'd have an open mind. If you don't change your attitude…I'll…I'll…"

"You'll what?" Rainbow Blitz glanced down at Butterscotch.

"I'll learn from him without you," Butterscotch threatened the blue pegasus, causing cold fear to rush throughout the blue pegasus' body. Without a doubt, Rainbow Blitz knew that leaving Butterscotch to the significantly more handsome and powerful zebra would essentially be the same as leaving the femcolt altogether. Even though he considered Zecora’s remark to be far more rude, he knew that Butterscotch had already made up his mind about how he perceived the situation. Closing his eyes and taking a deep breath, Rainbow Blitz then looked at Zecora’s blank expression.

Strange, shouldn’t he be delighting in this?

“Okay,” Rainbow Blitz sighed. “You don’t have to tell us if the rumors are true, sorry for bothering you.”

“It was merely your approach I wasn’t fond of,” Zecora raised a hoof to stop the blue pegasus from turning around and leaving. “But I will admit I do engage in many forms of love. Whether it was impregnating mares wanting to experience motherhood, or indulging in another stallion’s wood. So with that all out there, what is it that you two need to share?”

“Truth be told, I think you’ve already suspected it,” Blitz sighed. “We’ve been having issues with our sex life…incompatibility issues. I’m plenty accepting of Butterscotch’s less masculine expression, but it doesn’t seem to turn me on like I hoped it would. And he always tells me that I just keep trying to go straight into sex and that I try too hard. I was hoping you’d help us out.”

“There we go, you’ve told me the problem to know,” Zecora let out a small smile as he walked up to his cauldron, sitting on his haunches next to it as he patted the floor in front of him. “Come sit here facing each other for what comes next, getting to the bottom of this may be a bit complex.”

Rainbow Blitz and Butterscotch looked at each other, the blue pegasus couldn’t help but scowl a bit at his coltfriend as the femcolt’s threat still lingered in the back of his mind. Butterscotch’s ears flattened as he looked away from Rainbow Blitz and walked towards Zecora. Sitting on the side closer to the cauldron, Butterscotch looked down at the floor as Rainbow Blitz sat across from him. Rainbow Blitz was about to confront Butterscotch on the matter when his eyes drifted to Zecora’s flaccid length, now a lot more clear to see when the bulky zebra stallion was sitting. Zecora’s black flaccid length was huge, over six inches long and nearly as thick as the pegasus’ foreleg. With where Rainbow Blitz was sitting, he was the only one able to get a good look at Zecora’s length as the zebra stallion was turned more in Butterscotch’s direction, his forelegs neatly hiding the length from the femcolt pegasus.

No wonder Butterscotch was considering leaving me for him…what, what am I thinking?! I can’t let that stupid, sexy, smoldering stallion take my coltfriend! I must satisfy Butterscotch, listen to what Zecora has to say, and nothing more!

“Is everything alright over there?” Zecora snapped the blue pegasus out of his thoughts, and before Rainbow Blitz thought it could get any worse, the bulky zebra relaxed a little as he sprawled out. Resting on his forelegs, Zecora splayed out his hindlegs and revealed his length for the two to see. “Hopefully you both know that it’s more than okay to stare~”

“I w-wasn’t staring-”

“Was this why Butterscotch’s threat brought you so much fear?” Zecora tilted his head, that small smile of his growing slightly bigger, just enough for the blue pegasus to notice. “That you had to stay near?”

“That’s not fair!” Blitz protested, his heart skipping a beat as he noticed how higher-pitched his voice sounded with his protest. “It didn’t matter who you were, how was I supposed to feel when he offered to learn sex lessons from another without me?!”

“I suppose that makes some sense,” Zecora nodded, not changing his position even as Butterscotch began to blatantly ogle the zebra stallion’s goods. “But I promise I never meant to say something with offense. Despite whatever he wanted to do with me, I never would’ve done these with just one pony. The both of you are in need of my word, and perhaps you’re in need of a third. Keep your pelt on, Rainbow Blitz, no need to throw any fits.”

“What do you mean by a third?” Blitz growled. “Because if you think you could just touch Butterscotch-”

“Whoever said anything about only touching him?”

Rainbow Blitz shut his mouth, his blue cheeks exploding in a bright shade of crimson as he stared at Zecora without another word. Zecora then turned to Butterscotch, who was blushing even more as Zecora smirked at him.

“Even though you’re the femcolt of the two, he’s way more bratty than you,” Zecora chuckled. “Are you sure that you’re the mare? Perhaps your coltfriend is also one deep down somewhere.”

“Hey, I thought you were going to be help-”

“Shut your muzzle with a sock,” Zecora glared at Rainbow Blitz before giving a single thrust in the air, his cock half-erect and even bigger. “And come over here and suck my cock.”

Rainbow Blitz only meant for his jaw to drop in shock, but what happened was far worse. As he mouth opened, a stream of drool fell from his lips and fell on the floor. His eyes shooting wide open, he couldn’t even make eye contact with his femcolt lover as he was completely entranced by Zecora’s wide victorious grin.

“I didn’t, that was just-” Blitz stammered, his heart beginning to beat like a drum as Zecora laughed a laugh loud enough to echo throughout the hut.

“It’s almost downright pathetic watching your attempts to deny such need,” Zecora rolled his eyes as he brought a forehoof to his twitching length, trailing it down from the tip to his base as he narrowed his eyes at the blue pegasus. “Now why don’t you come over here and work for my seed?”

Rainbow Blitz stood up without a second thought, glancing over at his coltfriend. Butterscotch wasn’t glaring or even frowning. Rather, the yellow pegasus had pushed aside his skirt to expose his below average length, slowly stroking it as he stared right into Rainbow Blitz’ eyes. The message was all too loud and clear without the femcolt even saying it.

With his approval, Rainbow Blitz trotted over and pressed his much smaller hoof to Zecora’s colossal bitchbreaker. Zecora pulled his forehoof back and sighed with a gentle twitch of his ears.

“That’s a good little mare!” Zecora nodded at Rainbow Blitz. “Please treat my length with a little more care?”

For a stallion that essentially told Rainbow Blitz to shut his mouth with cock only a few moments ago, the zebra gave such a polite request to Rainbow Blitz that he was torn between fighting further for a rougher response, or giving in. Deciding not to test the zebra just yet, Rainbow Blitz nodded as he moved his hoof to the side and brought his muzzle to Zecora’s big balls.

While Rainbow Blitz’ balls were the size of limes, Zecora’s balls were the size of oranges. Taking a small sniff of the zebra’s balls was his undoing, an overwhelming assault of musk filling his nostrils in a way that turned him on way more than he was willing to admit. Rainbow Blitz even had to bite his lip to restrain himself from making noises that he considered to be very unbecoming for a stallion such as himself.

“Don’t be shy,” Zecora brought his forehoof to Rainbow Blitz’ mane. “There’s nothing wrong with letting out a feminine cry~”

Rainbow Blitz shook his head.

“Perhaps you just need a little push,” Zecora pushed Rainbow Blitz to his balls, smashing the pegasus’ muzzle against his fat orbs. “Lick those balls of mine and shush.”

Rainbow Blitz was at a point where he couldn’t refuse even if he tried, the smell against his nostrils becoming all too desirable to fight back against. Stifling a moan once more, Rainbow Blitz opened his mouth and ran his tongue around one of the superior stallion’s balls before popping it into his mouth. Sucking on it, Rainbow Blitz wondered how he could’ve possibly denied such a foreign yet mindblowing sensation. It felt like sucking on heaven itself, and Rainbow Blitz could’ve done it forever if Zecora hadn’t gently moved his head to the other ball. Doing the same thing to the other ball, Rainbow Blitz reminded himself to not lose himself to the sensation, knowing that he couldn’t disappoint the brickhouse of a stallion that he was touching. Stopping himself after a few moments, Rainbow Blitz then brought his tongue to the base of Zecora’s cock, slowly licking up to the tip and swirling his tongue around when Zecora looked at Butterscotch, who was also sprawling and shamelessly jerking off his four inch cock with tiny whimpers here and there with one forehoof.

“Tell me Butterscotch, does he also focus on your crotch?” Zecora asked the femcolt.

“N-Not really,” Butterscotch admitted. “Oh Solaris, shouldn’t I be jealous?”

“Jealousy is a poison to any romantic pair,” Zecora noted, before adding. “It might also be a bit of an issue that both of you are the mare.”

“I g-guess that’s where you come in?” Butterscotch shuddered at the thought, precum lubing up his forehoof more as he sped up the jerking off of his dark yellow cock.

“Perhaps if that’s what the both of you w-want,” Zecora stammered a little as Rainbow Blitz began taking the zebra’s fully erect cock into his mouth. With Zecora’s length being nearly a foot long now, Rainbow Blitz stopped at the first several inches before struggling a little, causing Zecora to look down and pet the pegasus’ rainbow mane. “Relax your mouth-cunt.”

Rainbow Blitz nodded with very little movement due to having his mouth stuffed with zebra cock. His dark blue ponut clenched at the air and his erect dark blue cock dribbled with a pathetic amount a precum, the realization that he was indulging in such a different kind of cock hitting him like a mental stack of bricks. Gulping down more of Zecora’s cock, Rainbow Blitz kept going even as his throat began to ache at the sudden intrusion, until his lips were pressed against the base of the zebra stallion’s cock. Rainbow Blitz’ eyes shot wide open as he spit on Zecora’s balls, his eyes rolling to the back of his head at the overstimulation that his throat was enduring.

“Alright now,” Zecora used his hoof to lift Rainbow Blitz’ head up by a few inches until Rainbow Blitz stopped and kept his head at the halfway point, determined to keep some zebra dick in his mouth. “Glad you still got the energy for a good plow~”

Rainbow Blitz nodded, and was relieved that when Zecora began facefucking the blue pegasus, that he stuck to only pushing half his length in. With Blitz’ relatively sore throat barely touched by the tip of Zecora’s dick, Rainbow Blitz relaxed and focused on swirling his tongue around the much bigger length while keeping his breathing steady through his nostrils. Doing so served for two benefits, with Rainbow Blitz also being able to savor the musk of the zebra while keeping an intake of oxygen at the same time.

While his eyes were closed, Rainbow Blitz began hearing his coltfriend’s tell-tale mewls as they got louder in volume. He could only imagine the smaller stallion’s legs trembling as he bit his lip, and Blitz’ eyes shot wide open as he felt something land on his cutie mark.

“S-Sorry, I didn’t realize it’d land that far…” Butterscotch whimpered. “Oh f-fuck, you two please don’t stop just because I finished.”

Rainbow Blitz, barely aware that he was reaching the peak of his pleasure, threw his head down further to meet Zecora's thrusts at the realization that his coltfriend came to the sight of him gulping down zebra dick. Letting out a high-pitched whine around Zecora's dick, Rainbow Blitz bucked several times into the air before spraying a pathetic amount of jizz onto the floor of Zecora's hut. Almost passing out into a warm and welcoming post-orgasmic haze around Zecora's dick, Rainbow Blitz felt a sharp thrust knock him back into bright-eyed awareness.

"Close your eyes for I am close," Zecora grinned from ear to ear, pushing Rainbow Blitz off his dick and jerking himself off. "Here it goes!"

Rainbow Blitz closed his eyes just in time to take the rope of cum landing in the square middle of his muzzle, and then another shot of zebra jizz landed far on his back and cutie marks. With both his coltfriend's load and Zecora's decorating his pelt, Rainbow Blitz shuddered and bit his lip at how delightfully used he felt in the moment. Reaching a hoof down to his half-erect length, Rainbow Blitz opened his mouth to let out a little gasp. And when he felt an unsuspecting rope of Zecora’s cum land right on his tongue, the salty and strong taste made the blue pegasus cave as he let out a feminine moan that escaped his mouth before he could stop it. Feeling the hot burn of shock and excitement tangling inside him, Rainbow Blitz gasped as he felt himself reaching an orgasm a second time.

"He even cums multiple times like a mare!" Rainbow Blitz heard Zecora’s laugh while his eyes were still closed. "Do you now understand why Butterscotch’s role is important to share?"

"Y-Yes," Rainbow Blitz turned to look at his blushing coltfriend. "I'm sorry I judged you for liking feminine stuff so much, it's s-so hot…"

"This is a very good start, but you are not finished playing your part," Zecora elaborated, no longer sprawling as he got up on all four legs. Staring down at the bukkaked Element of Loyalty, Zecora continued. "Your homework is to go out and wear a feminine piece of clothing for the week, then we'll see if you've improved your technique~"

"And w-what about me?" Butterscotch whimpered.

"That all depends on what he has to say," Zecora looked at Rainbow Blitz. "Is breeding your coltfriend’s tight little ponut okay?"

"Y-Yes, it's absolutely okay with me now," Rainbow Blitz let out the words before he could stop himself. "I'm s-sorry for being a brat before."

"You are forgiven considering your very erotic form of making amends," Zecora smirked, then walked towards the door as he beckoned the two to follow him with one hoof. "See you soon my friends~"

Rainbow Blitz and Butterscotch walked out of the hut, glancing back at Zecora’s intense gaze that promised a far more intense session when they came back…

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