Two Wings

by ZM

Chapter 33 - I'm ready

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Blueberry POV

We left Greengrass the next morning, a bit later than usual, but I was still thankful. That grass, (or weed as Zitrus called it,) sure had messed with my head. But Zitrus also looked like he had needed that extra sleep. He still looked a bit tired, and he had a bit of a limp. From the smirk Crystal wore, it was not hard for me to guess why.

Right now, Zitrus was sitting next to Savage as they studied his map. She had her wing wrapped around him and they talked how and where to go next. Since we had no more assignments, Zitrus wanted to head to New Appeloosa. It would be a long walk so Zitrus wanted to visit some of the as yet unvisited locations on the way.

“Alright, guess we know where to go next”, Zitrus said loud enough that I and Crystal heard it.

He then stood up and offered Savage a hoof, which she accepted. When Zitrus was out of hearing range I made my way to Savage.

“Savage, can we talk for a short moment?”, I asked my purple sister.

“Sure, what is it, Blueberry?”

“Can I have Zitrus for tonight?”, I asked and suppressed a blush. Tonight, it was planned that Savage would share the tent with Zitrus while I and Crystal would get one.

But Savage was not stupid. She was able to put one and one together. But she didn’t press too much in it. But she still had to brush her wing along my back as she walked along.

“Sure, I do not mind. I will enjoy my night with Crystal instead”, she said only half casually.


We had set up the camp near a river. Which was fortunate since I planned to clean myself for this big night. Even though it was early spring, and the water was cold. But my determation was stronger and I used it to clean my fur as best as possible. I took the brush out of Zitrus’ saddleback and brushed my mane with it, using my magic. (It was Crystals' brush, which she had bought in Greengrass but I was sure she did not mind.)

When I felt ready, I made my way back to our camp. The night was coming, and darkness fell over the landscape. Only our slowly dying campfire provided light.

Zitrus and Savage were nowhere to be seen. Most likely in their tents. (Separated now.) Crystal was outside and calmly watched as the campfire burned through the last of the wood. As she heard me approaching, she lifted her head and gave me an all-knowing smirk and wink. I could only blush in return.

As I stood in front of Zitrus’ tent, I took a deep breath to calm my nerves and then entered.

But Zitrus was nowhere to be seen. A bit disappointed I unrolled my blanket and sat on it. And then I waited. Something that wasn't easy at that moment. I was again nervous. But this time my desire was stronger. Or so, I hoped…

Suddenly, the tent opened and Zitrus entered. As he saw me sitting there, he was shortly taken by surprise. I just looked back at him with my neutral expression.

“Oh, I am sorry. I was expecting Savage. Not that I am unhappy to see you!”, he quickly added.

He was so caring. He didn’t want to make me feel less valuable. I stood to full height and tried to strike as good a pose as possible. Even though it made me blush.

“Yes, but I asked her if I could have this night with you. I hope you don’t mind…”, I said, without looking directly at him.
But Zitrus was also worn out from yesterday. I felt a hoof on my cheek, which made me turn my head, only to look straight into Zitrus’ blue eyes. My heart skipped a beat.

“Such a beauty you are”, was all he said before he kissed me.

And there it was again. My mind went empty, and I lost myself in the kiss and everything around me faded away. When I was with Zitrus it always ended like this. There was nothing more to think, nothing more to be, nothing more to feel. Just this pure moment of bliss.

Zitrus’ kiss was soft and not demanding. He took care of me; it made me feel safe and comforted.

He then let go of my lips and continued his kisses on my neck. Again, soft and slowly. And it still was enough to make me melt even more. My breath grew heavy and loud. I didn't open my eyes again until he stopped. How did I end up laying on my back? My wings were spread out wide and Zitrus was standing over me.

“Ready?”, he asked calmly.

I blushed and gave a nod.

“Yes… please…”, I was hardly able to say.

This burning inside was not just a “I need it.” This was a “I need YOU.”

Zitrus smiled as he nibbled my ear. I gave a short moan from it.

“Just tell me whenever I go too rough”, he whispered in my ear.

He then went downwards with his muzzle. Passing my chest and belly, but not without spreading kisses on them. I was in such bliss, I could do nothing more than accept it. But I did so without hesitation.

He laid down in front of my mare hood, his right hoof massaging my hip. Softly in circles. And he slowly approached my most sensitive place...

“EEEEP!”

I turned to the side while I gave a very filly like scream.

“Are you sure you are ready?”, Zitrus asked me with a little chuckle in his voice.

I tried to calm down as best as possible. My face felt like it was burning. I turned back on my back.

“Yes… I am sorry… It is just…”

“Sssssh. It’s alright Blueberry. Just relax as best as possible”, Zitrus offered.

I gave a nod, but I was not sure if he saw it. His focus was again on my sensitive part. He touched it again. This time I held myself back. As he noticed that I could control myself now, he gave it a few small rubs. I had already started to breath heavily.

I have touched myself many times before. Especially during heat season… But it was something different if some pony else was doing it. You only had to focus on one thing. The feeling of pleasure going through your body.

Zitrus' hoof went up and down on my opening, playing with the sensitive skin. I already felt how heat built up in my body. I panted and my body tensed up a bit as I fought back the feeling.

Not already…

Then Zitrus stopped. I don't know if he did it randomly or because he knew how close I was. But I was grateful that he stopped. It gave me the chance to cool down and catch my breath again. But suddenly I felt a tongue going up my vulva! I gave a surprised gasp as the heat came back in me. Faster and stronger than before.

“AAAAAAAH!”

It felt like all my muscles tensed. I closed my eyes as warm fluid came out of my mare hood. Most likely hitting zitrus in the face. But I just couldn't help myself. It felt so good.

“Zitrus… I…”

A lick going up my belly made me stop and look down. Indeed, I did squirt my juices on Zitrus…

“You liked it?”, he asked with a smirk, knowing the answer fully well.

“A lot”, I admitted, and I felt my blush going strong again.

“Would you like to enjoy it again, my beauty?”, he wanted to know.

How much I loved when he called me his beauty… I gave a nod of agreement.

As soon I did such, again, he went down and his licking resumed. Even though he was just teasing, never really going inside, it filled me with excitement again. Soon my heavy pants filled the tent again. But besides that, I was barely able to do anything else. Only able to lay there, stiff and relaxed at the same time.. A soft bite on my tickler made me give a short scream.

Then a small break. I already feared that I scared Zitrus with my scream until the feeling suddenly returned. But this time on the inside!

This was just too much for me to hold on and take. I gasped with every breath.

Zitrus' tongue wasn't aiming for anything in particular.. He just let it explore the inside of me. Every wall it could reach. But it was enough for me to get excited again.

I tried to fight it, but it was a battle I quickly started to lose. And I guess my rising voice told Zitrus this. He did not stop. He did not take a break. He did not slow down.

I don't know how long I was able to hold out. Hours? Minutes? Barely seconds? It felt like an eternity for me.

“Zitrus… aaaaah… please… aaaah… please I…”
if he understood what I had tried to say, he ignored it. Even "worse", he bit my knob again. Softly but firm. And he did not let go of it. He kept it and the tip of his tongue played with it.

“AAAAAAH!”

I came like an overflowing pot. As soon as the dam was broken, it just flowed out nonstop. How much can a mare take until she breaks in pleasure?

I just starred at the ceiling of the tent without really looking at it. I only felt my chest rise and fall with each breath. And on my chest fell a light pressure.

Zitrus laid on me and nuzzled my neck. I gave a sudden “eeep!” as I felt something press on my belly. The first time I felt Zitrus' stallionhood on my me. (That time when he was asleep does not count!)

I looked him in the eyes and he looked into mine.

“Never had a stallion before?”

I shook my head.

“Want me to be your first?”

I nodded.

“You feel ready?”

Again I nodded.

As he stood up and towered over me, I was able to get a peek of his penis. I felt eager, exited, scared, lustful and unsure at the same time. But I could not back away now. I did NOT WANT to back away.

He was gentle. At the beginning, only his tip touched my entrance. It gave me an idea of what would come next. And then he pressed it in. My velvet expanded with a painful feeling. Even though Zitrus was going very slow.

I gave a painful scream. Not loud, but still enough that Zitrus paused.

“Too rough?”, he asked, concerned.

It was sweet how much he cared about me. That alone was enough to give me the courage.

“No, it’s alright... I was just… surprised…”, I told him. “Please… go deeper.”

Zitrus obliged and again, very slowly he pressed further. I suppressed the next scream as I felt it go deeper and deeper in me. Until he reached the end of the line.

He held the position for a moment, which gave me the chance to get used to this completely new feeling. And then he moved… Slow but steady. What, at first, started with pain, soon turned into pure bliss.

I moaned. I was sure that you could hear it even outside of the tent. But I did not care. There was nothing else besides me and Zitrus and this connection that let our two auras become one.

And then, in middle of this process I came again… I gave out a loud scream as it happened. Immediately, Zitrus stopped.

An that moment I don’t think that I was able to blush even more. I covered my face, including my eyes, with my front hooves. I felt so ashamed.

“I am sorry…”, was all I could say while still being out of breath.

“For what?”, Zitrus asked. He sounded like he had just started...

“For coming so often… I tried to hold it…”

A chuckle made me lower my hooves a bit. My face was still half covered but my eyes were free now to look at Zitrus.

“Don’t be”, he told me. “I don’t think it is something bad. I more take it as a compliment that I did my job right.”

“Really?”

He took a front leg of mine and kissed the hoof joint.

“Really!”

Oh my love. How was he always able to do the right things? I wiggled my hips a bit. Where zitrus' erect member was still planted in my marehood.

“I think I am ready to… you know…”

Zitrus smiled warmly and started to move again. He built speed up a bit faster now but still went soft on me. At first, there was the sound of smacking as his hips connected with mine, but it was drowned out by my gasping and moaning. I was not really able to keep myself quiet… If there ever is a better feeling, than making love with your true love, than I don’t want to know it.

This time I was able to hold on for longer. I was even able to hold it back for so long that I felt how Zitrus' dick suddenly started to twitch in me. Was that the moment when…?

“Blueberry… I’m close…”, Zitrus said amid his heavy breathing.

Yes that was it! The moment when a stallion came. As an alicorn I was not able to get pregnant by a pony, so I wanted to know the feeling. I wanted it inside. I wanted to tell him such, but I just wasn't able to get a word out amidst my singing moans. Instead, I wrapped my front legs around his and held him close.

He got the message and didn’t pull out. He gave a last few deep thrusts, (with which he went way deeper than anytime before) and then he came.

I don’t know how to describe it. For me it was… happiness. This warm feeling and the knowledge that it was me who helped him to come. It was enough that it made me also come again. But I didn't feel it as much as the previous times. Too many other feelings were running though my body at that moment. And on top of that I suddenly realised how exhausted I was.

I rolled to my side, not having the strength to lay on my back any longer. My eyes felt heavy, and I had to close them a bit. My chest rose and fell rapidly while I tried to get as much air as possible.

I half noticed how Zitrus laid beside me, nuzzled my mane, (which was a proper mess and I would have to brush it again tomorrow) and wrapped his legs around me.

“I love you”, he whispered into my ear.

“I love you too”, I was able to get out before sleep over came me. With a warm body pressing against my back.


Author's Note

What? Two sex chapters in a row?
Don't get used to it :P
I am sorry again for the delay. My preview proofreader got too busy in real life and lost a lot of motivation with lead that I had to get a plan B in last minute. So, I give a huge thank you to jgilley63 who was able to jump in, in such short time.
I hope you all liked this chapter and if not, let me know. Any comment will be read.

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