The Tale of Comic Field
Comic's Rising
Previous ChapterNext ChapterComic and the others awaken. The other attendees of the party had already left and put their armies near the sea of the Syndicate. Comic gets a division together. It was time. Comic would finally put this to rest. He was going to have vengeance for what Aldeus did to his nation, his Princess, his wife, and his dignity. Comic and his comrades are put on the beaches, along with the soldiers of the other nations.
"Let's do this. One Equus. One people." Said Comic, cannons blast, destroying the walls. Aldeus looks and laughs.
"You really think you can defeat me? I am...inevitable." He said. Comic gets pissed at this taunt, and his Shadhavar bloodlust fully comes out.
"CHARGE!!!!" He shouts, as the soldiers fight against the Dramatic soldiers, Comic mainly focusing on Aldeus. They occupy much of the island. Aldeus panics and sneakily escapes to his tower. Comic and his other units just tearing through the enemies, ripping and tearing, blood completely covering Comic Field. He couldn't even speak. He was that angry. He truly wanted revenge. Some other soldiers distanced themselves from Comic as to not be caught in the crossfire.
In the no man's land, there are nothing but Equus Soldiers with blood on them, and the corpses of the enemy. Comic finally calms down, and gives a new order.
"Occupy this island, completely. Leave no stone unturned, not one step behind. We will find that bastard that killed my- Ahem, that tried to destroy our nations. And I will fucking murder him." They go forward, each brigade trying to find him, until they eventually reach the tower.
"Comic, we've found it." Said Shining Armor.
"Finally. Now to destroy that damn book, put him down, and finally end this mess ONCE, AND FOR ALL. MOVE OUT!" They go into the tower, and attack many guards. Comic finds the Dark Magic book on a pedestal, guarded. Comic and the others take out the guards, and Comic grabs the book.
"Now to destroy what corrupted me into this...this monster I've become." As Comic realizes, "I've...become a shadow of my former self. I've become so violent. So merciless...if I destroy this book, than the darkness that plagues Equestria in secret will finally go away! Together!" Comic holds up the book, and the other ponies destroy it, black magic exiting through Comic horn, and vanishing away. Comic looks at his troops and smiles happily.
"We will win this war!" The others cheer, as Comic enters Aldeus' office. Aldeus looks at him.
"Looks like you've destroyed the book Comic. He he...now that means you're powerless! For I...have had my soldiers create a copy of the book! Now I have ultimate power, and you don't!" He says as he cackles manically.
Comic looks at Aldeus, "You may have the evil magic of that black book, but you don't understand, that the book corrupts people! Makes them completely insane! And despite you having an army, I have an army too, and you know what I have that you don't? Friendship. Friendship is Magic, Aldeus, don't you understand? It is. Now, for us to fight!" Comic readies his magic, but Aldeus punches him into a wall.
Aldeus and Comic punch eachother a few times, Aldeus knocks a fang, and pulls it out. He than plants a scar next to Comic's eye. Comic bites his hand, Comic uses his magic to reattach his fang to his mouth.
"Is that all you got?" Asked Comic, "Not even...close..." Replied Aldeus. Aldeus shoots a blast of pure dark magic at Comic. Than, Aldeus rises, and dark magic is shown throughout his body, his eyes go red, and his teeth get sharp, he's gone completely insane at this point.
"Y-you can't be changed now...the book has completely corrupted you...it's irreversible...I'm glad that never happened to me, but..." Comic grabs the book, and puts a flame on the ground, and puts the book into the flames, ingulfing it. Aldeus laughs.
"Ha ha...I have it ALL memorized! You can't defeat me-" Soldiers from Comic's division come in and surround him.
"We'll shoot on command, General Field!" Said Flash Sentry. Comic thought about it...
"Contain him." He said.
"What? But my general-" Said Parts, who was cut off by Comic.
"I'd rather see the bastard rot in prison, than see him die now. I'm a changed pony. I can't let the death of an enemy corrupt me. That's what the book gave me the idea to do. But now, I've changed. Contain him, and take him to the Royal Dungeons, her Majesty the Princess will decide his fate." Explained Comic.
The soldiers return to their homes, Shining, Flash, Parts, and Comic take Aldeus, who's been tied down, and with a face covering to the Canterlot Courtroom.
"Princess Twilight Sparkle, what shall we do with him? General Comic Field said to spare him. Saying killing the enemy shouldn't go to one's head." Said Flash.
"And he's right. Lock him in the dungeons, his fate shall be life in prison. You are dismissed after he is imprisoned." Said Twilight. They take him to the dungeon, the deepest cell, and drop him there.
"I will return one day, Unicorn, and when I do, you will DIE." He said.
"HA! Hilarious." Replied Comic, who locks the cell. Comic goes to Twilight, "What now, your majesty?"
"By the grace of Celestia and Luna, Comic Field, I decree that you are now the high-chief officer of the Royal Army. You are also rewarded with your own room in the palace, your son has one too. Yes, that is right, you're moving in. You are a hero, Comic." Twilight replied to him, Comic goes into his room to check it out.
Meanwhile, in the Canterlot parliament building, the leaders of Equestria, the Crystal Empire, Yakyakistan, Stalliongrad, the Changeling Kingdom, Hippogriffia, New Mareland, Wingbardy, Aquelia, the Dragon Lands, Griffonstone, the River Republic, and the Griffonian Empire are meeting, they declare a new world organization, "One Equus, One People", where they have different sets of rules of war, diplomacy, and the such. One Equus, One People would hopefully bring eternal peace to Equus. Those 13 members are the founding members of the organization, and promise eternal peace.
As for Comic, he is happy now, knowing he is at peace, his wife may remain dead, but that is okay, because he knows he'll join her one day. He is now an Equestrian Hero, one who will die for his princess, and die for his nation, the Equestrian nation.
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