A Strict Punishment

by EpicGamer10075

Rating: mature
Tags: Rarity, Sex, Anthro, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Porn, Moondancer
Length: 4851

Rarity has failed Moondancer's strict expectations for her, and she's soon to find out just how demanding her dom can actually be.

At a party for her marefriend, Moonancer, Rarity gets a little too energetic and needy for her own good, and Moondancer decided to put her in her place, with all the chains, whips, and sex toys that it requires.

Of course, she still has to make sure Rarity is enjoying it...

Cover Art: 1532495 on Derpibooru

A relatively romantic BDSM Moondancer x Rarity clopfic, commissioned by tailsic

Kinks:

Bondage

Gagging & Blindfolding

Spanking

Whipping

Role-Play

Punishment

Honest Romance Talk

Please leave a comment if you enjoy or take issue with this story, with constructive criticism being particularly appreciated, so that way I can improve my stories in the future!

Published 2023-03-29 02:20:01 UTC
Last updated 2023-03-29 02:20:01 UTC

To Know Restraint

“Gah! Oh, Darling, what are you do--eeyaah!”

“Shut... up...” Moondancer growled lowly at Rarity as she shortly yanked the mare’s ‘perfect’ mane with a hand, then magically hoisted her up and hauled her along. Rarity quickly put her hands down between her legs to cover the upskirt view under her dress, and flailed her bare feet around to try and find any purchase on the stairs, but only succeeding in repeatedly banging against them.

“S-stop it, please!” Rarity cried out, wincing and flinching with each hit on her feet as she was relentlessly dragged deeper down the dark and ominous staircase, wrestling in the other mare’s grasp as she tried to escape it and keep her feet from banging on the floor any more, but to little avail on either front.

Not even grunting in response, the sheer frustration present in Moon’s heavy boots stomping on each frail, wooden step also powered her magic to hold up and keep such a tight and unbreakable hold on an entire other pony as she kept venturing downward, the lighting growing dimmer and the walls becoming darker with each step.

“W-why must you be s-so... savage, Darling?!” Rarity shouted in another fruitless attempt to get something out of the other unicorn, who continued down the last few steps until the hallway opened out into a wide open, yet very dark basement. Moondancer’s boots were still stomping against the floor, which sounded more like stone now, much like the black stone brick wall she was approaching.

However, the wall itself wasn’t what caught Rarity’s attention, as within the darkness that was only being penetrated by Moon’s lilac-coloured magical aura, there was lengthy shimmers of metal chains attached to the wall, manacles at their ends. “D-Darling, I-I...” Rarity sputtered, starting to sound truly terrified, “P-please, y-you don’t have to this!”

A laboured and enraged growl came lowly out of Moondancer’s throat, silencing the other mare’s pleas as she continued over to the chains and, when she was only about a dozen steps away, thrust Rarity forward in her magic and slammed her against the wall, her magic swiftly transitioning to grab hold of Rarity’s arms and pulling them up to the manacles, clasping them around Rarity’s wrists, and leaving her pinned next to the wall with her arms restrained above her.

“D-Darling, p-please sto--mmph!” Rarity’s cries were quickly muffled when a ball-gag was stuffed into open maw by Moon’s magic, and the straps of the gag then got yanked back, slamming the back of her head into the wall behind her. Recovering from the shock as Moon’s magic fastened the gag around her head while still keeping it pulled backward somewhat, leaving her eyes unable to see much but for the silhouette of the cheekily-sweater-clad unicorn before her via the light coming in from the staircase behind her, as well as Moon’s own face lit by her horn’s magic, eyes looking with fury back at Rarity’s own.

“You... know everything you did,” Moondancer almost whispered at her, growling with that fury as she was, “And during my own birthday party no less..... So... why the fuck are you whining about this punishment!?”

Taking a moment to breathe amongst her intense seething, Moon continued to stare deep into Rarity’s terrified eyes for several seconds before speaking again, “You’re not supposed to talk about that stuff in front of my friends...” Reaching a hand forward and stroking along the thick black leather choker around Rarity’s neck that was actually much more of a collar, Moon sighed in irritation and plucked at the silver ring at the collar’s front that could easily have something chained onto it, and then said, “I am your owner... and you have no right to disobey me...”

A borderline evil grin slowly grin grew on Moondancer’s face as she pulled away from the other mare a short ways, her horn still lit up and bringing something else into view before Rarity’s face; a blindfold. Muffled whimpers made their way out through the gag in the restrained unicorn’s maw, and she wriggled and tried to pull away in a desperate attempt to not lose her sight, but that only made things worse...

Slapping Rarity hard across the face, Moon left her stunned for enough time to quickly wrap the blindfold around her head to cover her eyes, then let her recover and whimper amongst her now obscured vision, only for the telltale sparkling sensation of Moon’s magic to then graze the majority of Rarity’s body, starting from just below her neck and going down around her chest and waist until it reached just above her thighs...

Gasping as she realized what was about to happen, she didn’t have any further time to think or react before her dress was ripped right off of her, a stale draft of the basement’s less-than-fresh air prickling across her exposed body, with no bra or panties to cover any of the many light scars and bruises across her entire form. She quickly winced and hissed in pain as a relatively fresh one across one of her meager, yet attractive breasts was suddenly traced across by one of Moondancer’s fingers, only to leave it alone a second later...

And then be swiftly followed by a harsh slap across both of her breasts, making her gasp sharply and pull back, pressing her back against the cold stone wall behind her. It was nowhere near far enough to keep her away from Moon’s assaults though, as she hissed at yet more pain from her breasts as they were gripped tightly by the other unicorn’s ruthless hands, the untrimmed nails atop them starting to dig into her tender fur and flesh.

“MMMHS!!” Rarity tried to cry out through the gag robbing her of easy access to whatever air there was, practically screaming at the other pony to please stop hurting her, but those hands across her breasts did not stop; instead they kept a tight, firm hold and started squeezing ever so slightly, the small size of her breasts with their many scars forcing tears to start dripping out of her eyes with the pain she was in.

However, she was granted a sudden reprieve, a left gasping through her gag for a few seconds before that, too, was pulled away from her maw, though not off her head as a short whisper came out of Moon’s mouth: “Medal,”

Taking a couple more seconds to regain her breath, Rarity replied with a calm, “Platinum.”

A large, laboured sigh came next out of Moondancer’s mouth as her angry, angsty facade dropped as she was left as an exhausted and reserved mare, and carefully addressed her submissive marefriend, “Rarity, I really don’t think you should be agreeing so readily to this... stuff.”

Tilting her head, Rarity asked confusedly, “What do you mean, Moony?”

Taking a moment to process her thoughts, Moon then replied, “While I... am aware you are enjoying this, a-and I am too to some degree, I...” Licking her lips nervously and gripping one of Rarity’s raised and restrained hands with one of her own, and wiping her quickly drying tears away with the other, she continued, “I-I just don’t want you to get hurt by any of this...”

Smiling heartily at the emotion coming from her beloved, Rarity said with passion, “Oh, please, I love this, Darling, and I know you’d never hurt me.”

“That’s... not what I mean,” Moon said relatively seriously in response, using her second hand to slowly trace around her other other mare’s exposed and scarred body, noting worriedly to her, “I-it’s just... w-with all the scars here... I-I’m just afraid that you’re shirking any sense of responsibility as you try to... chase this high of sadomasochistic pleasure, and... I-I feel like that’s gonna end badly for both of us...”

Inhaling and taking a moment of her own to think, Rarity soon replied casually, “It’s just my kinks, Moony. I can hardly be expected to go down from whips and gags and still enjoy it, no?”

“No,” Moondancer said firmly, making her marefriend pull back in surprise. “N-no, you really should be able to... k-know restraint here, ‘cuz I...” Heaving out a tired sigh, she rested her second hand on Rarity’s shoulder and said, “I really don’t want to hurt you.”

Smiling and sighing lovingly, Rarity assented, “I can try, but I do believe you are the one in control here.”

“Maybe, but...” Moon considered, tentatively grabbing the gag on Rarity with a few fingers of her second hand, “Just, please don’t immediately say ‘Platinum’ when you are actually kinda worried about something, alright?”

“Of course, Darling,” Rarity replied with a nod, though it still made her marefriend hesitate.

Eventually, though, Moon calmed herself and asked Rarity, “Are you ready?”

“Mm-hm!” Rarity replied eagerly, nodding more in excitement as she opened her mouth back up, letting her marefriend then push the gag back into her maw, muffling her voice once more.

Clearing her throat and pulling her body and both hands away, Moondancer resumed her dominant persona and stayed silent for a few seconds, though unlike the awkward and somewhat uncomfortable quiet between her normal self’s stuttering words, this silence made Rarity’s fur stand on end as she felt her Mistress’s eyes trace all over her body, sinking in every little bump, blemish, or scar upon her face, breasts, and thighs, before finally landing on her belly.

A short scoff made its way over from Moon, reeking with disappointment even before the unicorn’s fingers grabbing a tight hold on her pudgy, scarred belly, making Rarity wince again and flush in embarrassment at the harsh and demeaning treatment. Of course, that was to say nothing of the words that came next...

“Absolutely pathetic,” Moon stated condescendingly as she grabbed and molded Rarity’s belly like it was made of clay, squeezing the pudge with cruel and dexterous hands, “I thought you were supposed to be a perfect model figure, slob.” Delivering a sharp slap to her marefriend’s belly, making her let out a muffled yelp and forcing her belly to jiggle and wobble a bit with its--‘unladylike’, as Rarity would put it--pudge stinging with the impact.

“This is what all those late night crying your eyes out and drowning yourself in soap operas and ice-cream lead to, bitch,” Moondancer said incredibly casually, the statement of the fact sounding no more serious than a comment about the weather, but her tone quickly turned a bit more dangerous and seductive as she continued, “At the very least, it does give me...” Her magic soon lit up and grabbed Rarity’s whole body again, startling her as she got flipped around with her tits smooshing into the cold wall and her already-reddened rear exposed to the devious mare behind her, “...A nice fat ass to slap.”

SLAPP!!

“Mmmph-phhk!” Rarity cried out in pain as the bruises on her bottom stung with the fierce, yet restrained and fleshy impact against it, and she huffed and writhed slightly as she knew more was soon to come, but was forced to lay tensely in wait before--

SMACK!!

“Mmmmmph!” She winced and flinched harder as the next slap came, though this time it was much stiffer; clearly a paddle rather than her Mistress’s hand. Quickly trying to calm herself--or at least just keep her butt cheeks untensed--before the next slaps came, she found herself ready for these ones.

SMACK!! SMACK!! SMACK!!

“Mmph...” Rarity groaned as she felt them start to come in succession, the firm paddle smacking against her ass again and again, the loud clapping of it against her cheeks stinging her senses alongside the harsh burning in her ass as she felt them come.

SMACK!! SMACK!! SMACK!!

The swings and smacks against Rarity’s plump and bruised booty were coming faster and harder now, and she tried her best to keep herself untensed lest it be even more painful. Grunts and groans spilled forth out through the gag stuffed in her maw, the pleasure in them clear as day as she struggled to keep herself standing under the flames in her cheeks and the juice starting to run down her legs...

“Fucking slut...” Moondancer called out from behind her with a scoff, having ceased with the spankings for a moment, leaving Rarity to recover and worry about--

“NnnnNNH!!” She cringed and cried as she felt a pair of fingers trace up her legs and smearing the slippery stuff coming from her marehood, then getting stuck into her Mistress’s mouth and loudly sucked on, the tantalizing and lewd noise only making her legs shudder more as she struggled to keep herself from collapsing.

“Filthy little bitch can’t keep herself from spilling all over my floor, huh?” Moon sneered as Rarity felt more of her marejuice slowly trailing down her legs, gasping quietly as she recovered from the teasing. “I guess I’ll need something to plug that hole up, then.”

The faint sound of her Mistress’s magic could be heard above Rarity’s worried and muffled gasps for the few seconds before something cold and slippery got pressed against her pussy, drawing another, much sharper gasp from her as she realized what her marefriend meant.

Slowly--almost tauntingly slowly--Moondancer pushed the dildo up into Rarity’s snatch, leaving her to groan in pleasure and irritation as she felt it get pushed more and more into her, but unable to feel any strong pleasure from the teasing motions.

Eventually, after what must’ve been at least thirty seconds of torture, she was finally able to feel all of the dildo’s length within her wet, drooling pussy, and going by what she had just been told, she knew she was meant to keep it inside. However, that was going to be far from easy...

CRACK!

Rarity winced and let out a short ‘Mmph,’ at the sharp crack of a riding crop hitting her back, warning her of what was to come.

CRACK! CRACK! CRACK!

Several more swings of that riding crop soon stung across Rarity’s rear, some short pauses allowing them all to hit about in the same place to make it sting even more, and it made her struggle to keep up the balancing act of keeping her rear untensed while having her pussy clenched around the dildo, but with previous experience on her side, she managed.

CRACK! CRACK! CRACK!

The next wave of cracks really started to test her, though, as they came faster than the previous ones, yet remained bunched up at the same point on one of her butt cheeks, making the pain there really flare up, whines and cries of pain being involuntarily blurted out of her gagged maw, tears beginning to sting at her eyes at the whips kept coming and coming.

CRACK!CRACK!CRACK!

Faster and harder they continued to come, and Rarity was practically sobbing from the pain at this point, tears overflowing and dousing the blindfold covering her eyes, all while her hips were clenching and unclenching sporadically in a desperate attempt to keep the dildo inside of her, even with how much that started to hurt from her burning rear.

Eventually, though, it did all come to an end, with quite some time passing before Rarity even realized the whips had ceased due to how pained and numb her ass had gotten, but she was given enough time to realize she still had the dildo stuffed into her snatch. After all that pain and punishment, she had done it; she had appeased her Mistress...

Resting her head against the cool brick wall and wiggling her hands a bit around in their binds, Rarity tried to let her tears dry for a moment, but soon got jerked out of that accomplished reverie as magic soon enveloped her body and whipped her back around to press her back against the wall, flinching hard when her stinging ass cheeks pressed against it.

“You really think you’re being impressive, slut?” Moondancer muttered with a disgusted scoff, pulling Rarity’s attention back to her while she kept her rear from contacting the wall, “Obeying my orders isn’t impressive; it’s the fucking baseline.”

Suddenly, a loud gasping moan erupted out of Rarity’s mouth as she felt a hand gripped onto her horn, the sensitive nerves getting marehandled blasting pleasure through the masochistic mare’s mind, making her cry out in submissive pleasure as her horn started getting yanked around by her Mistress. Her legs wobbled like jelly under the overwhelming sensations, and they were made all the worse by how the pain would sting again at her rear if it so much as tapped the wall behind her, along with the continued stress of keeping her vagina clenched around the dildo.

“Stand up, bitch!” Moondancer commanded as she kicked Rarity’s bent knees to straighten them, forcing even more stress on the poor mare as her horn continued to get abused, the overwhelming sensations making it hard to tell just how tense her loins were getting until her orgasm was almost upon her. That piled up on top of everything already present, including the threat of getting kicked again, for her shaking, spasming, and wobbly body to get rocked by pleasure from her suffocated horn, burning booty, convulsing pussy, and all the scars and embarrassment across her entire body to be.. too much for her to take.

“MMMMMMMMMPHHHH!!!” Rarity howled through her gag as she came, her pussy spasming wildly as she shook madly in her binds, her horn involuntarily sparking and blasting short, frenetic bolts everywhere from the mental overload she was drowning in. Her legs wobbled even more violently than before, knees repeatedly knocking together while fluid poured down them from her frothing snatch, the dildo stuffed inside getting pushed out more and more from the slickened lips and the uncontrolled pressure bearing down on it.

Her senses were numbed to feeling that, however, due to the overwhelming pleasure and pain that surged through her body, and all the marecum that gushed out from around the dildo and urging it along only made things worse. The jizz dripped and splattered all over the floor and beneath Rarity’s shaky feet, making it yet harder to keep herself upright while retaining her pussy’s grasp on the dildo, and as such, it kept getting pushed out more and more until there was so little of it in her grasp that...

Splat!

...It fell onto the wet floor below, the distinct noise managing to even cut through Rarity’s reverie and sour her pleasure as it soon faded, and with all of her energy and enthusiasm sapped, she collapsed and hung her head downward, being held upright by nothing more than the manacles around her arms as her failure reverberated through her dulled and recovering mind, barely able to understand the weight of it, and yet being crushed under its pressure.

With a breath sucked in through her teeth, Moondancer soon spoke to her in a dry, disappointed tone, “You failed.”

Rarity couldn’t do anything but nod solemnly and wearily at the fact that she had indeed failed her Mistress, crumbling under the pressure and unable to comply with the other mare’s simple commands.

Sighing in irritation, Moon soon added, “Well, I guess I’ll have to use something that won’t come out this time...”

Sharply jerking her head up in fear and confusion, Rarity was hardly given a moment to think before her arms were magically freed from the manacles, only to got gripped firmly and yanked up by the magic itself to force her stand, then having her almost trip over her own feet as she was dragged forward with the dread of what her Mistress may have planned forward weighing heavily on her mind.

She was to find out soon enough, as she almost tripped over a metal table, and Moondancer’s magic quickly grabbed ahold of her entire body and heaved her up onto the table facing upwards, forcing a sharp wince out of her from how her still-singed ass contacted it and remained there. Her arms were pulled back down under the table, then restrained by a pair of cuffs on each wrist that bound her to the table, her legs getting yanked apart by Moon’s magic to get the same treatment, leaving her marecum-glazed pussy fully exposed to the stale air of the room around her.

Pulling uselessly at her bindings, Rarity’s breath picked up as she heard her Mistress’s boots thump heavily on the stone floor, walking across the room before some ruffling noises were heard, clearly caused by her looking for something as she left the other mare to shiver and lay in pitiful wait. It was several seconds before a quiet ‘Here it is...’ was heard from Moondancer, and she then walked back to the pony still bound to the table, and let what she had fall and SLAM! onto the table between Rarity’s legs, shaking it and her from its sheer weight.

Rarity quickly found out exactly what that thing was, as it was then pressed up against her pussy lips to make it clear that it was a huge canine dildo; far larger than the manageable one she had just accidentally forced out of her, and it was the largest one the both of them owned, with an even bigger knot near the base that would be sure to wreck her if her Mistress managed to shove it inside of her...

Taking a deep, wavering breath, Rarity was shaking in fear as she felt the tapered tip get slowly pushed harder and harder against her pussy, and while she could still feel how wet her snatch was, the lack of any clicking and shifting of the dildo made it clear that Moondancer didn’t put any lube on it, and was leaving the marecum itself do all of the lubrication work for her.

Her breath picked up even more at the realization, and her heart felt like it was beating out of her chest as she shivered and writhed against the cuffs holding her down, fear surging through her form and forcing beads of sweat to drip down her face as she was on the brink of panic, yet the dildo still kept getting pushed harder, coming closer and closer to breaching her snatch’s entrance until...

“...Medal,” Moondancer said, sounding slightly perturbed while her magic pulled away the gag from her marefriend’s maw.

Panic slowly fading away as she felt the love in the other mare’s actions, Rarity’s heartrate and breathing gradually calmed down to a more natural, yet still somewhat aroused state while she paused to think about the situation, knowing that the dildo pressed to her pussy would indeed cause her a lot of pain, but still wreck her with pleasure. The lack of lube made things a little different, and while she still wanted the pleasure, the added pain made her a little more wary, and so she answered, “Golden.”

Moondancer didn’t immediately respond to that, staying silent for a few seconds as she presumably thought about the response, but then her magic lit up again and pulled away the slightly damp blindfold from Rarity’s eyes and off her head. Wincing and blinking for a few seconds as she readjusted to her returning vision, she looked over to her marefriend standing beside the table with a disappointed and... concerned look.

“...Your eyes are telling me ‘silver’ at most, Rarity.”

Glancing away for a moment in guilt, Rarity tried to excuse herself in a hoarse voice from her previous screaming, “I-I’m sorry, Moony, but--”

“No,” Moondancer cut her off, looking dead into her eyes, “No buts. I can tell you’re actually afraid of this and want something a bit different.” Lighting her lilac magic and pulling the huge dildo away from her marefriend’s snatch, forcing a slight gasp from Rarity before the dildo was set down onto the floor out of her sight.

“We set up these safewords for a reason, Rarity,” Moondancer admonished, tentatively putting a hand on her marefriend’s shoulder, “I know you like going for new stuff a lot, but you do still need to know your own limits. I... really don’t want this to actually hurt you...”

Taking in a deep breath, and exhaling it slowly, Rarity nodded and replied, “I know, Moony, but I still do desperately want to be ravaged by you, and I am away of how dangerous that tool could be for somepony less experienced. But, you’ve trained by quite nicely down there,” She said with a keen and warm smile, “So I ought be able to take it with little worry.”

Moondancer didn’t look all that convinced, though, and after a couple seconds, pulled her hand away and folded her arms, pointedly asking the other mare, “You have actually taken that dildo before, right?”

“Yes, I have, Moony!” Rarity answered quickly, eager to get back to what they were doing before.

“And I imagine that you’ve only taken it a few times, in slow controlled manners, with lube, right?” Moondancer shot back, silencing her with her deadpan stare.

Trying not to show her fear or embarrassment at being so easily outed, Rarity stayed silent for several seconds as her marefriend’s gaze bored into her, weakening her resolve with the annoyance and worry within it until she finally broke. “I... that’s correct, Darling...” She admitted, eyes wandering away as she started to realize what the other mare was getting at.

“That’s what I thought,” Moon further admonished, keeping her gaze on her marefriend for a bit longer before sighing heavily and lighting her magic again, unlocking the cuffs binding Rarity to the table and pulling them away from her limbs.

Slumping her head back and closing her eyes, Rarity moved her arms and feet a bit to get used to it again while wallowing in her foolishness for a short while, before deciding to acknowledge what she did wrong; “I’m... sorry, Moony. I... suppose I got a little to into it all and just wanted more, regardless of what it may have meant for my body or yourself.

“I really ought to know better at this point, Darling,” Rarity continued in disappointment as she carefully pushed herself up into a sitting position on the table, Moon’s keenly worried gaze still on her. “I can tell weren’t purely acting when you angrily pulled me down here, and... I should be better aware of how you actually feel about the way I act in public.”

Reaching out and slowly settling a hand on Rarity’s back, Moondancer watched her for a moment, then let her gaze drop and muttered, “I probably should be making you more aware of that myself, honestly...”

Jerking her attention back towards her marefriend, Rarity saw her solemn expression and hesitantly reached out herself to cup the other unicorn’s face with a hand, slowly bringing her eyes back up again. “It’s alright, Moony. We’ll work on this together.”

Staring into each other’s eyes for a couple seconds, Rarity noticed the Moon’s eyes subtly twitching and biting her lip, and she suppressed a giggle; her marefriend, after the incredibly hot and dominating display of whipping Rarity until she cried, was still adorably awkward when it came to romance.

Instead, she simply leaned forward and kissed her on her lips, and closing her eyes as she held the both of them together, she quickly felt Moon’s face heat up as she shivered and twitched from surprise, but eventually managed to compose herself enough to try and kiss back. It was still somewhat weak from her embarrassment, and while Moon’s hands could only hesitantly settle on Rarity’s waist, there was an underlying eagerness to her kiss that showed how much she really wanted the other mare.

While they both certainly wanted to continue the kiss for as long as physically possible, Rarity had to swiftly pull and and turn her head to the side as a tired yawn forced itself out through her maw, and without any of the adrenaline she was running on earlier, she suddenly felt just how exhausted she was.

“Ugh, sorry about that, Darling,” Rarity mumbled out, turning back to her marefriend and wrapping both arms around her shoulders.

“I-it’s alright...” Moondancer replied, looking back towards the basement door for a moment before adding, “It was pretty late when we left the party, so...”

“Mm,” Rarity grunted and nodded in assent, then pulled herself off of her marefriend to try and hop off the table to stand up, but was caught before she hit the floor by Moon’s magic.

Heaving out a breath from the strain, Moon shook her head and muttered, “Nah, that’s alright. I gotcha.” Taking some slightly lethargic steps towards the basement door, she added a short, “Come on, let’s go to bed.”

Hmphing and crossing her arms at the lack of control she suddenly found herself with, Rarity playfully retorted, “Well, it’s not like I have much choice in the matter, do I?”

Biting her lip and almost stumbling, Moon quickly regained her footing and carried Rarity alongside her as she headed for the stairs, muttering a quiet, “I guess not...”