Ruining Shining

by Clopfic Appreciator

Rating: mature
Tags: Porn, Fetish, Queen Chrysalis, Shining Armor, Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 2332

Chrysalis lets Shining Armor cum. He'll wish she hadn't.

In the days before the Canterlot Wedding, Chrysalis uses Shining Armor as her obedient boy-toy. And what could be more fun than teasing, edging and using him, then making sure he has the least satisfying orgasm of his life?

Contains: out-of-character Cadance impersonation, femdom, changeling domination, mild mind control, pre-marital sex, extensive descriptions of Shining Armor's stallion bits, magically assisted edging, a ruined orgasm, and generally Chrysalis being a bitch.

Published 2023-03-16 22:40:00 UTC
Last updated 2023-03-16 22:40:00 UTC

*Splort*

*Splort*

“And how do you feel now, Shiny?” Chrysalis asked in the sweet voice of the pink pony princess she had replaced. “How is my favorite guard captain holding up?”

It was a valid question, she thought, as she completed another circle around the white stallion, standing stiffly in the middle of what had formerly been his living room, but now belonged to her, just like himself. He was looking strained, and not just from those useless barrier spells he was casting daily. She had been teasing him the whole day: sultry looks and seductive smiles, “accidental” brushes of her wings and tail against his body, carefully posed glimpses of her sex and teats at the moments when nopony was looking, culminating with her flagging her tail and winking her vulva at him in the corridor outside the Day Court, right before the meeting over the security of the upcoming wedding.

And if that wouldn't have been enough already, she had also been flooding his mind with lust through the secret connection they shared, until he could barely walk straight. Yes, Chrysalis knew exactly how desperately horny he was, yet the subtle hooks of magic she had sunk into his mind and body kept him unable to express it without her consent. Good thing, too, or he would have spent half the afternoon with his cock dropped, dripping precum on the pristine marble floors of the palace, and that wouldn’t do. Not quite yet.

“I- I’m fine, Cadence,” he said, in a tight voice, his gaze fixed on the swaying hips of what he imagined as his fiancée as she passed before him, tail lifted to give him a perfect view of her pink pussy, the thick lips beaded with dewy arousal. “I just… Oh stars, you’ve been winding me up! Can’t we, can’t you… please, Cady!” he begged, a whiny note creeping into his voice as she flicked her tail, sending the scent of her arousal wafting into his nose.

“Please what, Shiny?” she asked, turning around to give him a smoldering look. “What do you want?”

He blushed, just as she’d known he would. “Can’t we… Oh, I want you, Cady,” he said.

“But I am just here, Shiny,” she said with feigned innocence. “You have to be more specific…”

He responded with a loud huff and a snort. “I… Stars and moon, I want to fuck you!”

Chrysalis’ smile widened. “There, was it so hard to say, Shiny? Of course you want to fuck me. You love me, after all.” Green magic gleamed around her horn, as she opened the emotional tap wide, coincidentally releasing the deep control that had kept Shining Armor’s cock in his sheath so far.

“Yes, I love you, Cady,” he blurted out, a wave of powerful love washing over her and making her moan with genuine pleasure. The petty pink bitch she had replaced had chosen well; Shining Armor was handsome, magically powerful, had a bottomless well of love in him… and to cap it, he had one of the nicest cocks she had ever seen on a pony!

“You love me more than anypony else,” she said, moving to get a better view of his long, mottled shaft as it swayed beneath his belly, rapidly hardening as his body caught up with his mind. It was well above the average size for a unicorn stallion, bright pink at the tip but dark near the sheath, lengthy but not too long, thick but not too girthy, shaped and sized just right to please the pink alicorn princess who had snatched him. After the invasion, she’d have to check Celestia’s secret records, just to see if he had been bred for the purpose.

“I love you more than anypony else,” he agreed, the flow of love increasing. Her pussy winked again, this time involuntarily. “Cady, please…” he said again, his cock flexing and casting off a droplet of precum.

“You want to fuck me, because you love me,” she crooned, leaning close and drawing in the scent of his arousal. It was exquisite, and together with the ethereal tastes of his love and desperation, it made her head swim. “Your cock belongs to me, and only me.”

“I want to fuck you,” Shining said. “Because I love you. My cock belongs to you, and only you…” He was trembling now, and fully erect, too, his dick bobbing gently beneath his belly as he shifted his weight.

Chrysalis let him wait as she considered her options. Letting him rut her was an obvious, and fun, choice; Shining Armor was an obedient fucktoy, and she always got a kick from the knowledge she was making him cheat on the useless pink twat she was pretending to be. It would be good practice for the time after the invasion, when she’d use him to father an entire new brood of changelings.

On the other hand, leaving him like this, blueballed and tense but unable to do anything about it, appealed to her sadistic side. She could have him eat her out and masturbate in front of him, letting his arousal build and build until he was frantic for release that was denied to him.

A nasty smirk, very unlike Princess Cadance, appeared on her face as she thought of a third possibility that combined the best parts of both ideas. “All right, Shiny. I will let you fuck me, but you can’t come inside me. We’re not yet married, after all!” she said.

His eyes crossed as the compulsion in her words clashed with his memories of previous times when she had let him nut inside her, until she tightened her magical grip on his mind, just enough to make the past memories seem like fantasies or wet dreams. “I won’t come inside you,” he agreed, staring dully ahead.

Chrysalis frowned, suddenly concerned that she had pushed Shining Armor just a little too far and broken something. After the invasion was over, it wouldn’t matter if he was reduced to a drooling idiot, only capable of pumping love and cum into her whenever she wanted, but he had to remain functional until then.

Thankfully, his eyes cleared, and an expression of delighted excitement appeared on his face. “Oh, thank you, Cady! I want you so much!” he said, even prancing a little. It was goofy, sincere and adorable, and Chrysalis could hardly wait to crush his mood.

“Then show it to me, Shiny,” Chrysalis said, giving him a lustful look of invitation as she presented her hindquarters to him, tail raised and ready. “Stick that lovely cock of yours into me, and rut me!”

He was on her in an instant, hooves resting against her back as his cockhead unerringly found its mark in Chrysalis’ borrowed pussy. The changeling queen let out a happy moan as Shining Armor entered her, burying his shaft up to its medial ring with the first thrust. Real Cadance would probably have found it rather rough, but Chrysalis' imitation of the princess was only surface-deep. Her vagina was deep and flexible, capable of taking cocks of every shape and size. Even so, Shining’s cock was a delight, his hot pony blood warming her clammy, slimy insides wonderfully.

“You love me and obey my every command,” she gasped, and heard Shining Armor repeat the words. “Deeper, now, but make it slow…”

This was something she never tired of: the thrill of puppeteering a creature with its own desires. Her drones were convenient, but sex with them was little more than using a living dildo; there was no initiative and hardly any passion, just bland obedience. With Shining Armor it was different: he followed her every order faithfully, but only as he understood and interpreted them. It added a delicious unpredictability to her pleasure as she ordered him to thrust faster or slower, go deeper or change the angle of his thrusts, so that his cock could reach every tingling, pleasure-hungry nerve cluster in her clenching tunnel.

It didn’t take long for Shining Armor, under her skilled command, to push her body to a quick orgasm. His real fiancée would have seen stars, no doubt, but Chrysalis was a changeling queen, and a jaded one at that. Still, it was a nice start, and she ordered him to fuck her harder, to draw out another orgasm. Then a third one, right after the second one, like a series of firecrackers going on inside her loins, each less exciting than the previous one but still very pleasant.

At that point, she was starting to feel physically satisfied, but she still hungered for something more. Feeling the pleasant buzz of her orgasm fade, she realized that Shining Armor had been making strangled, whinnying noises for a while now, and that his cock felt different inside her: he was flaring, getting closer and closer to cumming himself, but held back by her compulsion. Just as she’d hoped for!

“Shiny, stop,” she said. He did so, freezing in place mid-thrust. “Dismount me and let me check you out.”

He whined again but obeyed, his cock slipping out of her well-churned cunt with a wet slurp as he backed away from her. Chrysalis shook herself, stretched, and turned to watch him. He was trembling, clenching his teeth, and looking at her with mute yearning in his eyes. His cock, oozing wet with his precum and her slimy pussy juices, trembled beneath him, the cockhead flaring wide and the hole in the tip opening and closing, like a tiny winking pussy itself. She circled behind him, and grinned as she saw his balls clenched at the root of his cock, achingly tight and ready to spurt his seed out. He was a stallion only seconds away from blowing his load… and Chrysalis knew that Shining’s loads were big ones.

“You want to cum, don’t you, Shiny?” she asked – a genuine question this time, not another compulsion.

“Oh, sun and the moon, yes,” he moaned. “I’m so close, Cady, please…”

Chrysalis smiled cruelly, feeling yet another orgasm, one that would leave the previous ones in the dust, starting to build inside her squirming, squeezing nethers. It was too bad she couldn’t have him inside her when she did this, but that couldn’t be helped.

“Please what, Shiny?” she asked, positioning herself just by his side and cupping his balls gently in her magic. She rolled the heavy foalmakers back and forth, thinking of all the potent sperm built up inside the hefty orbs, and shivered with anticipation.

“Please, let me cum, I’m begging you, just let me—” Shining groaned.

Reaching out with her wing, Chrysalis ran one feather, ever so lightly, along the ultra-sensitive rim of his flare. Simultaneously, she gave his equally sensitive balls a sharp yank with her magic, pulling them down and squeezing them together. The sudden stimulation of his needy cock collided with the pain radiating from his scrotum, making the hapless stallion’s nerves short-circuit at the moment of cumming.

Shining Armor eyes flew wide open, and he let out a strangled grunt. His shaft jumped, slapping his belly, and spurted weakly, his orgasm ruined to Chrysalis’ absolute joy. She squealed with sadistic thrill and blazing pleasure, her legs suddenly wobbly and her cunt clenching with an emotional orgasm, as she watched that lovely big stallion shaft, primed for a magnificent, virile ejaculation into a warm, welcoming womb, instead twitch feebly in the cool air, and drool out his load!

"Ahh, no, noooo..." Shining Armor groaned again, standing helpless as his spoiled climax went on, his erection already flagging, while the thick white cum poured out from his dick in slow pulses and splattered to the floor at his hooves in a growing puddle of spent stud semen.

To Chrysalis’ delight and Shining’s dismay, it dragged on and on, his ejaculations growing ever weaker and more pathetic, his dangling cock barely twitching any more as his seed slowly oozed onto the floor. Eventually his limp, unsated dick began to withdraw back into his sheath, but the dregs of his thoroughly ruined orgasm were still trickling out, Chrysalis massaging his throbbing taint to ensure that every last drop of his cum was wrung out and wasted.

Chrysalis almost purred as she savored the emotional cocktail she was drawing from Shining Armor, perfectly aware of how pitifully little pleasure he’d received from his disrupted climax, and how utterly unfulfilled it had left him, even as his stallionhood was physically fully spent. He loved her – he could not help it – but now that love was mixed with shame and embarrassment, tinged with delicious hints of hurt and disappointment, and even a tiny, spicy spark of hot-burning hate.

“Oh my, what a mess you’ve made, Shiny,” she cooed, cruel mirth mingling with false sympathy. “Let me help you with that,” she continued, leaning beneath his belly, and sticking her tongue into his sheath to clean up the last drops of his seed. She heard him stifle a gasp as she slowly swirled her tongue across and around the broad head of his cock, offering him no pleasure but only teasing the stallion’s overstimulated nerves further. At least his cum was as tasty as usual, Chrysalis thought, licking her lips, as she straightened again. With her magic, she lifted his drooping head and made him face her. “You can thank me now, Shiny.”

“Thank you, Cady, for letting me cum,” he said, his face a mask of love and misery so perfect, it almost made Chrysalis laugh out loud. There were still a couple of days to go before the wedding, and she felt sure she could come up with something even more amusing before that!

Author's Note

I sure don't know where this one came from.

Ruined orgasms and such aren't my usual thing, but somehow Chrysalis tormenting Shining Armor sexually and emotionally just captured my imagination, and didn't let go until I'd written this thing!