Brony Loner (old)

by Yurl 18

Rating: teen
Tags: Other, Violence, Dark, Death, Human, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 1317

Jack lost his job so he plays a mlp game.

Jack recently lost his job at a retail store and needs something to do so he decides to get this new brony game...
Things go very wrong.

(Warning story is old with some minor changes)

Published 2023-09-27 00:10:00 UTC
Last updated 2023-09-27 00:10:00 UTC

Lost in a better world for the worse

"You are fired!" The boss told Jack before he stormed out of the room closing the door behind him, He Pulled out a lighter and a pack of cigarettes before It started to rain, He lit the cig and pulled out an umbrella then started walking home due to his dad's hand-me-down car breaking down recently.

When Jack got home he put the cig in an ash tray and threw the umbrella on the floor, he then went to his room and hopped on his PC, Jack decided to open discord and talk with his friends but none were online, then he saw an ad.

"Play the new immersive my little pony game for FREE today!" The ad said, so curiosity getting the better of him, he decided to click the advert which took him to a website with a download button.

After clicking download, a download notification popped up telling him that the game was 1GB So he decided to go to bed while the pony game downloaded.

The next day he woke up to the sound of an alarm, It would've been for work if he hadn't been fired the day before, so he decided to check on the game he was downloading. He checked and It had finished downloading so He decided to open the game up and see what's waiting for him.

The game loaded and a menu screen popped up with the prompts Start, Options, and Exit. Deciding he wanted to play, he pressed Start.

A hasbro logo popped up as the game was loading, so he decided he wanted to get a drink of coffee. He went into the kitchen and put the coffee in the coffeemaker and waited for it to finish pouring, once it finished he went back to his room and sat in his computer sipping on his coffee, as he blinked something felt different. Jack didn't know what but something was different so he decided to go downstairs to figure that out.

As he got downstairs he looked out the window and saw a forest. Not any normal forest but It was a cartoonish looking forest like one from a cartoon. He was in disbelief and shock as he scrambled past his couch as he ran outside.

It looked like the forest from the show, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. Which he has only seen once from It streaming on TV, His house somehow teleported there when he opened the game, He saw a sign saying "To: Ponyville."

Jack heard rustling in the bushes to his left so he looked over and saw big cyan eyes right before they retreated back into the bushes continued with a quiet giggle. Confused, Jack went over to the bushes and right before he saw anything, there was a cupcake thrown at his face blinding him for a couple of seconds while trying to wipe it off, once he got his vision back, there was nothing there.

A pink horse horse named Pinkie Pie jumped out at him trying to give him a hug but instead got greeted to a knife slice in the throat, Pinkie stumbled back as blood poured out of the neck and mouth and fell to the ground while gurgling and coughing up blood.

Jack stood there not knowing what do to as he just did that due by accident because of the pink pony jumping out at him.

He came up with the idea to dispose of the evidence because he didn't want to go to pony jail...or tartarus, Jack stomped on the pink horses head till she was dead then ran inside and grabbed a trashbag then going back outside and stuffing Pinkie into the bag. Jack dug a hole in his pone-ified backyard and threw the trashbag with the pink pony in it and then covered the hole up with dirt again.

"Jesus Christ what did i just do..." Jack whispered to himself walking back inside.

The next day Jack turned on the Television and Apparently the pony world has Tv network so as soon as he turned on the Tv, He was greeted to news network.
"Welcome to Ponyville news and today we have bad news, Local Prankster and Baker Pinkamena Diane Pie has gone missing, She last seen August 12th at 8:45PM at Sugarcube Corner after closing time as reported by Ms. and Mr. Cake."

"Hm, guess they are going to be looking for her" Jack thought just before he heard a knock on the front door.

He decided not to answer it by fear they would find him so He looked through the peephole and It was a pony in a suit, not wanting to get in trouble or even arrested, He didn't answer.

The pony walked away after a while and Jack let out a sigh of relief. Jack stumbled over to the couch then he fell asleep.

The next day he decided to explore ponyville a tiny bit more so he exited his house and walked down the dirt path.

Once he reached ponyville, ponies were giving him weird looks which probably isn't surprising because he is human and they are ponies.

Before he could actually do anything, It started to get dark out so he decided it was best to go home for today.

Thinking about Pinkie Pie and what he did to her, Jack actually liked the sensation of murdering someone which was concerning at the least.

The next day, Jack scouted Ponyville and who to murder. He decided he would murder Lyra Heartstrings, a pony he saw peeking at him.

The next day he went to Lyra's house, Knocked on the door, And waited for an answer. Lyra opened the door, did a small gasp, "H-Hey what's up" Lyra said, "Are you new here?"

"Yes, and I was wondering if someone would want to come over for tea?"

"I love tea" Lyra replied, "Sure, I can come over", "When?"

"Does noon sound good to you?" Jack replied.

"Sure" Lyra Agreed on.

The Next Day, Jack waited for Lyra to appear, Just as he thought she wasn't coming, He heard a knock at the door.

He opened it and welcomed Lyra in, He brought tea to Lyra.

"Let me get something real quick" Jack told Lyra heading upstairs, Jack grabbed a wrench and a book.

"I got a book" Jack told Lyra hiding the wrench behind his back.

"What are you holding behind you?" Lyra asked Jack cocking her head to see whats behind the human standing before her.

Jack lifts up the wrench and swings it at Lyra, narrowly missing her as Lyra jumps in her seat, quickly getting up and punching him in the face causing his nose to bleed.

Lyra fled to ponyville, Jack wasn't having it so he wiped the blood off his nose and sprinted towards Lyra and eventually catching up, He grabbed her back legs causing her to fall, Jack started swinging her around holding her hind legs, once he finally got enough momentum, Jack swung her into a tree making a couple of teeth fall out and destroying her muzzle, breaking her jawbone.

Lyra trying to crawl away, Angered Jack so he Grabbed his wrench and Bashed Lyra's face in, cracking her skull, breaking all of her teeth and jaw, and making brains go everywhere.

Jack heard a noise so he turned to his right.

It was Twilight Sparkle, standing there in horror

Jack drops the wrench. "Oh f-"

Author's Note

This is my first violent story so be kind, also this story was actually going to be my SECOND story but I never uploaded it till now, this story was started on April of this year but not finished till now (sound familiar?)

The old story was mostly cringe so I changed some things near the end.