The First Star I See Tonight

by KirinNirikarereallyc001

Rating: mature
Tags: Sex, Human, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Second Person, Starlight Glimmer, Romance, Self Insert
Length: 3199

You are a human in Equestria. Starlight proposes to you and you accept.

Edited by Mocha Star
Proofread by Spyder27
Written by KirinNirikarereallyc001

A Trail of Candles lights your path down the corridors of Twilight’s Castle. It seems to be the work of Starlight Glimmer, your Marefriend. From there the Night gives way to a beautiful future, with the pretty Lilac Unicorn.

Published 2023-05-09 21:50:00 UTC
Last updated 2023-05-09 21:50:00 UTC

Giving Your Heart to Starlight Glimmer (Original Layout)

As you walk to Twilight's castle you stretch your back that was aching after the horrendous amount of pencil pushing you did today. “Ugh, my back.” You say. I can’t wait to see Star, she always makes me feel so happy. So welcomed. So loved. You think to yourself, momentarily forgetting about your back pain. Ever since winding up in Equestria as the only human, she’s always been the only one there for you.

You begin daydreaming about the mare you love. Her slick lilac coat. Her hips that sway with each step when she’s around you. Her strength. Her protectiveness of your heart. It did not help that she is the prettiest mare in all of Equestria, inside and out; Starlight Glimmer.

Before you make it to the castle doors you pop your back and get rid of most of the pain. While your job does not require physical labor, you had a bad habit of hunching over when you did your work. Starlight caught you doing this when she came to surprise you one afternoon and laughed, flustering you. “You look like a colt being defensive of your homework,” you recall her saying. You eventually laughed it off with her and you both shared dinner that same afternoon after work.

Snapping out of your flashback you open the castle doors and, to your surprise, find a long, single trail of candles leading you deeper into the castle. You close the castle door behind you and let your eyes follow the candles before you start to follow them. Noticing the specific flame color of light blue, you have a feeling this is Star’s doing. “Heh, looks like somepony is in a playful mood.” You say, going along with the game your mare has set up. As you follow the candles down the corridor, you find yourself feeling more excited and curious to see what this is all about.

After walking for almost five minutes the candles ended in a bed room. The candle trail suddenly disappears in a puff of blue behind you, making your curiosity grow even more. Sensing she is telling you to come inside, you knock, and then open the door. There you see Starlight waiting for you. “Hey, babe.” She says.

“Hi,” you say back. You walk to her and kiss her. You push against each other with your lips, passionately kissing the other and showing the other how much they meant to each other. “Hmmmm…” you moan, letting her know you're happy to be back in her presence. You slowly pull away. “I missed you, Star.” You say, placing your hand underneath her chin and scratching gently. “I missed you so, so much.”

She brings her hooves to your scratching hand and pulls it down much to your surprise. “Then you’re going to love what I have planned for tonight…” she says seductively.

“I was wondering if you had something planned for tonight. The candles weren’t exactly subtle, you know.” You say, lightly teasing her with your words.

“I wasn’t going for subtleness, unfortunately for you,” she says, using your first name. You blush, trying not to melt to her words. “So, what did you have planned for tonight, lyubimaya?” You ask her, using her favorite romance language.

“Well, I was sorta hoping you and I can talk for a minute, if you don’t mind?”

“Why would I mind talking to the mare I love so much? Ask away, star.” You tell her.

“Well, I’ve been thinking.” She begins. “Dangerous, I know, but I’ve been thinking about dating for all these months. I have loved and cherished each moment I have spent with you and could not ask for a better boyfriend, or a better human counterpart for that matter. I remember, when we first met, that I was so scared about you resenting me when Twilight and I told you my story. When you did not do that, I was just caught off guard. At first I thought you did not understand the gravity of everything I did, but then you told me-”

“Who you were is not who you are.” You interrupted.

“Heh. That’s right.” She says, wiping at her eyes. “I… honestly can’t believe you remember that. You said that two years ago.” She said laughing. When she finished and straightened herself up she sounded like she was coming in for the final blow. “Okay, so, like I said, I’ve been doing some reminiscing and, honestly, Toby, I can’t see myself with anypony else. So, I made a decision that I hope wasn’t too hasty.” She says, going down on her front knee. You immediately know where this is heading, but you keep your excitement inside.

She pulls out a little black box and opens it. Inside is a ring made of silver. Starlight then asks the golden question, starting with your first name. “Toby, will you take me as your wife? Will you marry me?” She asks, hope practically exuding from her very being.

You bent down to express your answer. You bring her into a kiss and hold her. You pull back and give your verbal answer. “Yes, I will marry you and call you my wife.” You tell her, going back into your kiss. You hold onto your fiance, never wanting to let her go. She then pulled away from you, her hoof on your chest. You met her gaze, which was a pair of seductive bedroom eyes. She then moved her hooves from your chest to your hands. You grab them and she stands up.

She guided you to stand up and put a single hoof on your chest. She began to gently push you backwards as well as walk against you. You let her push you, giving her your own pair of bedroom eyes. You feel your thighs come into contact with the bed and its silky soft comforter.

“Are you sure?” You ask. She gave you the answer in the form of another soft kiss, her lips parted and let her tongue brush your lips before you opened your mouth and you let your tongue touch hers.

She was being surprisingly gentle, which was a good thing. You try to press harder into the kiss, but she pulled back a little, telling you she is content with giving you the attention right now. Her tongue brushed firmly against your canines and front teeth, making her shiver in excited fear, the same fear she told you about being hunted by a predator, and the same excitement at being caught.

You then felt the comforter behind your thighs being pulled back. Starlight quickly removed your shirt and jeans using her magic, leaving you standing in the underwear Rarity had made for you. She then placed her hoof on your chest and pushed you backward with force. You let yourself fall backward onto the bed and you both giggled a little as she climbed over you.

You put your hands around her shoulders as the sensation of her fur rubbed you the right way. She started another kiss with you, this one a little more passionate, forceful, than before. She pulled back once again and gave you such a sweet smile. You bring your left arm to her right cheek and you begin rubbing it with your thumb. She lifted a forehoof and held onto your arm like it was the last cheek rub she would ever receive and began kissing your arm with her warm, wet lips; from your wrists to your forearm. Starlight looked at you again and you kept rubbing her cheek. She then asked, “Babe, you are a virgin, right?”

You nodded, unashamed that you had been saving everything for this moment with your future wife. You knew she was a virgin too, so as you took your other arm and wrapped it around her bottom hips, just above her flank, you knew it was going to be special..

Starlight's horn glowed and she cast a spell on the room. You hear the doors lock, but nothing else seems to happen. “What was that?” You ask.

“A sound barrier spell, a protection spell on the doors and window, and a ward to let me know if somepony is knocking on the door so I can tell them to bug off, if they insist,” she smirks. “I want this to be just you and me.” She said more sultry.

All the while you did not remove your hands or arms from where they were. “Hey, Star? You do know it’s okay to take this slowly right? I want you, but I don’t want you to feel scared or uncomfortable. So it’s totally fine if we take this slow.” You reassured her.

She smiled at you and put her hoof into your cheek holding hand. She leaned down and kissed you more, which made you so happy. “Mmm,” she moaned into your mouth.

The vibrations dance on your lips and bounce on your throat. “Mmm,” you moan back, sending her the same sensations. You moved your hands to her mane and began to caress her scalp and hair, gently stroking the locks of hair your fingers rub against. Unsurprisingly, you found no tangles. Like a knife through butter, your fingers glided through her locks smoothly and without stop.

Starlight took the chance to bring her hooves to brush down your chest as her tail brushed your thighs. The touch alone was finally enough to give you an erection. Your penis bulged high enough to touch her teats and it got Starlight's attention. “There we go. I was starting to wonder what it would take to get you excited.”

“Turns out your tail touching my legs is enough. Surprise, surprise.” she takes the chance to pull your underwear off. You are now fully naked in front of your fiance. You didn’t expect to feel so comfortable with this though. The feeling of your excited manhood being freed relieved you, relaxed you, even. Enticed you.

Starlight stared at it like it was the greatest treasure she had ever seen. She began caressing its head and underside, making your erection a little harder. Eventually your erection began to throb and beat to the pulse of your heart.

Your nostrils were greeted by the scent of Starlight’s arousal. She was clearly aroused earlier, but now she was outright horny. “Seems like we’re both pretty much ready now.” You say, sweetly. She smiles, knowing full well the scent of her pussy got your attention. She looked down and then grew a worried face. You know what that face is indicating and slowly squeezed her hoof. “Hey, it’s okay. If you’re not ready, I won’t force you to do this.”

“No. No, I’m ready. It’s just… I can’t believe this is happening.” She said with a grateful smile. You lean up and hug her. Her marehood and your manhood come into contact, one getting the other slightly wet. “Thank you. Thank you for choosing me.”

“Thank you, Starlight, for choosing me. I will always be loyal to you and only you. Everything I am is yours. I love you Starlight Glimmer.” She cried a little at your confession. You kiss her neck and nuzzle the side of her face.

When she pulls away she stares into your eyes and rested her forehooves onto your shoulders. She brings her entrance to your manhood, and slowly falls down. “Ohhh, Starlight.” You said in ecstasy. She grimaced at the sudden pain inside of her as you forced her tight snatch open enough to take your hard cock, but you stopped when she whined ever so slightly.

You were quick to comfort her and bring her lips to your own. You caressed her mane again and rubbed her back. You pulled back from the kiss and brought your forehead to her snout. “It’s okay. I’ve got you. I’m here. I am here. I am here for you, Star.”

You sit there for a moment with your wife and stare into her eyes. She then asked, “Do you think it’s possible to have a baby?”

You blinked and then smiled. “Let’s find out together.”

Starlight came in and kissed you with so much force she managed to make your head press into the pillow. You then feel her hind legs give out and she took you all the way inside of her, ignoring the pain. She began to bounce up and down your manhood, her walls tightly clenching their grip around the tip, length, and base of your penis. She backed off your lips and focused her efforts on your penis. She kept a healthy pace, but you wanted something you’d seen in movies back on earth. You placed your hands on her buttocks and helped guide them front and back, in rhythm with her motions, getting her to slide and bounce, sending both of you into a new realm of ecstasy.

“Ooo… Starlight, that feels so good. I am yours! Ah! Mmm! Yes! Right there.”

She called out your name and mewled as she looked up, enjoying the feeling of having a real cock inside of her. She slowed to a stop and looked down into your eyes, her winking clit brushing the base of your cock. “I love you… I need you,” she blushed, “to breed me. Fill me with your cum, you naughty stallion.”

You wrapped your hand around the back of her head and pulled her forehead to yours, your eyes an inch apart. “You’re mine to do with as I see fit, my broodmare.”

She shivered at your words and she gasped, eyes wide. “I… can feel it, your penis is throbbing inside of me. For me. It’s mine, you’re mine!” She stated and started rocking forward and lifting up, then slid down and back, her forehead not leaving yours as both of you connected through the magic of Harmony.

You felt yourself reaching climax and you pulled her head back enough to look into her eyes, down her muzzle. “I’m going to breed you until you’re pregnant with my foals.”

Her eyes lidded and then closed just as you pressed your lips to hers and moaned as your throbbing cock tingled from base to tip. Her tight pussy slapped rhythmically as your hips met, the sound sending you past your peak. You moaned into her mouth, giving her a taste of your first orgasm inside of her.

Stream after stream of cum filled her body as she stopped to press herself against you, the feeling of her cervix against the tip of your penis sending thoughts of shooting your load right into her fertile womb making the experience even better.

“Sweet Celestia,” she whispered, breaking your kiss, “I can feel it inside of me. It’s so warm,” she shivered and her eyes watered, “it’s so you.” She sniffled and started bouncing up and down again, her tail tickling your spent balls as she moaned and pressed herself up on your chest, forelegs straight. “Right there, Toby, right… there.”

She gasped and looked down at you with wide eyes as her body spasmed and a warmth ran down your cock and soaked into the bed under you. She lifted a forehoof and gently pounded on your chest. “Buck yeah!”

You both shared a laugh and your pull her to your body and rolled to the side, sliding out of her and leaving a wet trail of white cum on her inner thigh.

“You are amazing Starlight. Thank you for choosing me.”

“I… don’t think… I could have chosen… a better first,” she said between panting breaths. You both laughed again and you rolled her to her back. You placed a hand on her belly and looked at it. “Now we just have to keep trying, waiting to see if we can have a foal together.” You expected her to say or do something sweet, instead you are answered with a quiet snore. You kiss her lips and say, before you fall asleep, too, “Only time will tell…”

The hospital lobby was very comfortable. The only thing you can think of that would be more comfortable was to be there for your wife while she is in labor with your child. Fortunately, you possess a cool head and have your friends Twilight, Spike, Discord, Trixie, and even Thorax there to support you and keep you calm.

Discord helps to keep you distracted from the pain your wife was enduring for you and her. The changeling king reassures that Starlight is one of the toughest ponies he knows. Twilight, Trixie, and Spike simply never leave your side, giving they were all equally as close with her, as friends. As her husband your worry is very high.

You kept your happy thoughts of the night she proposed to you and officially made her your mare, and you her man. The wedding day sealed the deal verbally with a beautiful ceremony in the town hall in Ponyville. She wore her ring everywhere she went, and you did as well. And at the bottom of your blessings, everypony in every place you’ve been to in this world, found your relationship charming.

Even a few of the snobs in Canterlot supported your relationship. The more traditional ponies, like Starlight's father, did not exactly agree with the relationship, but accepted you into the family, regardless of your species. Not a single pony gave you trash about your relationship, so you counted your blessings and let a good thing be a good thing.

At last the moment arrived. A nurse came and got you and led you back to Starlight and your baby. As you walked with the nurse, you noticed the nurse was pretty much all smiles, which is always a good sign. “Alright, hun, here she is.” She says.

You take a deep breath and enter the room. “Star? Sweetie?”

“I’m over here, baby..” Starlight quietly says. You take the hint and come to Starlight and your foal as quietly as possible. You see your wife in her hospital gown and tucked in with a brown blanket. In her arms is a tiny pink blanket swaddling yours and her foal. You come to the left side of the bed, where the baby’s head is.

You stare down at your beautiful baby filly, and admire her silver coat with indigo hair. She opened her eyes and revealed that she had big teal irises. “Oh, honey… she’s beautiful.” You say with tears.

Starlight says your name and introduces you to Starbright. You can’t stop yourself from having a proud papa moment and cry tears of sweet joy. Starlight turns to you and without even thinking about it, you kiss her lips, gently, knowing full well that she would be fatigued and weak from the delivery. Together you bring your hand around her arms that were cradling the baby, solidifying a promise that you will always be there for her, and your child too.

Author's Note

I want to make another shout out to Mocha Star for their expert craft in editing. Thank you so much my friend.