Immaculate Sin

by Pascal

Rating: mature
Tags: Fluttershy, Sex, Twilight Sparkle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark
Length: 3991

After receiving a very special book, Twilight plans to save the world. Can she outsmart God?

After receiving a very special book from Fluttershy, Twilight comes up with a plan to save the world. Can she outsmart God?

Published 2012-09-27 09:54:03 UTC
Last updated 2012-09-27 09:54:03 UTC

Vade Retro, Deus!

Immaculate Sin

By Pascal

Shortly after coming to Ponyville, Twilight Sparkle was pleased to learn that Fluttershy also had a quite an extensive fondness for reading herself, though she had little interest in non-fiction, preferring prose and poetry.

Every Tuesday, Twilight would spend her lunch hour with Fluttershy at Sugar Cube Corner to discuss their latest books. They'd taken up reading the same books, and meeting once a week to discuss them.

Fluttershy was particularly excited this week, because it was her turn to choose the next book to read. She nodded and mm-hmm'd patiently thought Twilight's ramblings about Don Quixote, until Twilight finally asked the question.

"Alright, Fluttershy. What should we read next?"

"You're really going to love this one," Fluttershy replied. "I got into this book a few weeks ago. It completely changed my life for the better, and I want you to have it."

Fluttershy eagerly pushed the book across the table, and Twilight read the cover.

"The Holy Bible. Wow, this book must really be something," Twilight said. "You know, I've had one of these for the longest time, but I've never gotten around to reading it."

Twilight took it home and began to read.

***

The next week, Fluttershy waited patiently for Twilight in their usual booth.

"Hello, Twilight. Did you read it?" she asked when Twilight arrived.

"Yes, I did," Twilight answered. "The whole thing."

"Wow! In just one week? It must have really been a page turner for you," Fluttershy chucked.

"It was . . . um . . . interesting?" Twilight replied. "I mean… wow. I didn't expect you to be into this kind of thing, actually."

"What do you mean?" Fluttershy asked with a frown.

"Well . . . it's a bit . . . um . . . violent, isn't it?" Twilight replied. "I'm not sure I completely understand what you see in it, to be honest."

"Really? I think it has a lot of very good things in it, like about how you should always be kind and loving," Fluttershy said.

"But look!" Twilight exclaimed, flipping through the book. "The first half is just God killing hundreds and hundreds of people over and over again!"

"Well…" Fluttershy muttered uncomfortably. "God is loving, but He must also be just. Justice isn't always clean, especially in such a fallen world. It might seem terrible sometimes, but you have to look at it in context."

"But look at this!" Twilight said. "He punishes ponies with an eternity of torture, even if all they do is have a single lustful thought. Why should a crazed mass murderer who kills hundreds and hundreds of ponies get the same punishment as a little filly who stole a candy bar once in her life?"

"Um… well… When you put it like that it sounds kinda… I mean, all have sinned . . . and . . . um . . . God cannot dwell with iniquity?" Fluttershy stuttered. She felt like Twilight was missing the point, but wasn't sure exactly how to explain it to her. "He gives everypony a chance at redemption," she argued.

"By doing what? Giving ponies an opportunity to escape a punishment by believing something without evidence? There are hundreds of religions! What are all the ponies raised to believe Islam, for example, supposed to do? They're screwed from day one, because they're taught that Christianity is false!"

"Um…"

"And why should the punishment be eternal?" Twilight continued. "Even a mass murderer can only do so much evil. Maybe I could understand it if Hell was some kind of place where bad souls were given a chance to reform before going to Heaven, but it lasts forever. What purpose does it serve? None. It's just pointless cruelty from an iron-fisted tyrant who rules the universe through fiat and treats all his creations like toys. Furthermore, He advocates things such as racism, genocide, slavery-"

Twilight stopped as Fluttershy's lip began to tremble, realizing too late that she had been ranting.

"Oh dear. I'm sorry, Fluttershy. I didn't mean to get carried away like that."

Twilight kicked herself under the table for being so careless with her friend's feelings.

"What I mean to say is that I just don't think this is for me," she finished hastily.

"Well, did you . . . did you pray about it?" Fluttershy asked timidly.

"Uh . . . well, no. I mean, I don't really believe-"

"Twilight, please just try it one time. I'm really sorry if I'm making you uncomfortable, but this is very important to me. I think it could make you really happy. If it doesn't work, then I promise I'll never bring up religion again. We can still be friends and everything."

"Well . . . ok. Just once!" said Twilight.

"Just once," Fluttershy agreed.

***

The week after that, Fluttershy waited expectantly, but Twilight did not return to Sugar Cube Corner. Fluttershy eyed the clock anxiously, not touching her coffee, but Twilight's lunch hour came and went.

"Pinkie, do you know where Twilight is?" she asked apprehensively.

"She's been locked up in that stuffy tree all day!" Pinkie chirruped from behind the counter.

"Oh, no. I must have been too pushy. I've offended her," Fluttershy moaned. "Oh, why couldn't I have just left it! She probably thinks I've turned into some Bible-thumper."

"Aww, don't say that! You were a super-duper, totally awesome witness for our Lord! She was just being a mean old atheisty atheist-pants!" Pinkie said.

"Are you a Christian too, Pinkie?" Fluttershy asked.

"Mm-hmm! The Lord is my shepherd! I just converted the other day!" Pinkie replied.

"Wow, congratulations, Pinkie! I'm sure the angels are throwing a really great party in Heaven for you."

"Thanks! I was gonna throw myself a huge baptism party, but when Twilight told me that God had talked to her, I totally decided that we should totally get baptized together!"

"Wait, when was this?" Fluttershy asked. "Last week she seemed really put off about the Bible."

"A few days ago, when I converted to Christianity. She's actually the one who converted me! She didn't want to come to my baptism party, though. Oh hey, you're invited to my baptism party, Fluttershy!"

"Great! I'd love to come, Pinkie. But why isn't Twilight coming? Didn't she convert too?"

"She said she was too busy to come," Pinkie replied with a shrug.

"Hmm. Maybe she's just taking some time to come to terms with her new life."

Fluttershy rose from her seat, and made for the door, only to find Pinkie blocking her way.

"You forgot to drink your coffee, Fluttershy," Pinkie chided. "Don't be wasteful. There's starving zebras who'd give their right hooves for that!"

"Oh, I don't really feel like having it anymore, Pinkie," Fluttershy replied, trying to shuffle her way around Pinkie.

"Drink your coffee," Pinkie commanded, frowning and putting her face right up against Fluttershy's.

Fluttershy was taken aback by Pinkie's sudden forcefulness.

"I really think I should go check on Twilight, just to see if she's ok. I mean, she hasn't been out of her house all week!"

"Oh, you're going to see Twilight?" Pinkie asked, brightening instantly. "That's ok then. See ya later!"

***

Fluttershy went to Twilight's treehouse, and rang the bell several times.

"Twilight, are you ok in there?" Fluttershy called.

There was silence for several seconds, then the door opened slowly, and Twilight cautiously leaned her head out. Her mane was tangled and unkempt, and there were dark circles underneath her eyes, yet she seemed alert and twitchy.

"Oh, dear," said Fluttershy. "I wanted to come visit you to make sure you were ok. I was worried I might have been too pushy with my religion the other day. I just wanted to-"

Twilight held up a hoof, silencing the pegasus.

"It's alright, Fluttershy. In fact, it's better this way. Why don't you come inside, and we can talk about this?"

"Oh, I don't want to bother you or anything. You seem like you're under a lot of stress, and-"

"Come," Twilight repeated, more forcefully.

Fluttershy bit her lip and followed Twilight into the library.

"Um… So, how are you feeling, Twilight?" Fluttershy asked.

"Tired," Twilight replied, walking toward the basement door. "I'm so tired, Fluttershy. I had a revelation a few nights ago."

Twilight pushed the basement door open, and began to descend the staircase.

"I stayed up all night reading. I tried to figure out what you see in that book. Finally, I just thought, 'what the hay?' and then I prayed."

"And?" Fluttershy asked eagerly.

"God revealed himself to me," Twilight replied. "I felt the holy spirit touch my heart."

Fluttershy swept Twilight up into a great big hug.

"That's wonderful, Twilight! If we hurry, we can still make it to Pinkie's baptism party before all the water balloons get-"

"No it isn't!" Twilight yelled, pushing the pegasus off of her. "It's the worst thing that's ever happened to me! Everything I said about God is still true, Fluttershy! God is the most loathsome and contemptible monster that has ever existed! He is the epitome of evil! There's no way I could ever love Him!"

"You're not doomed," Fluttershy replied, putting a comforting hoof on Twilight's shoulder. "Everypony has a chance for redemption. You're just confused. God isn't a monster. He loves you more than you can imagine, and He wants you to be with Him. If you really want to be saved, then God won't abandon you!"

"Don't worry, Fluttershy. I'm going to be saved. I have a plan. Follow me."

They reached the basement. In the middle of the room, a large, white blanket covered an unidentifiable lump.

"What is that?" Fluttershy asked.

Twilight's horn glowed, and the sheet was whisked away.

Fluttershy gasped.

Scootaloo lay bound and gagged on the floor. Her legs and wings had been amputated, and silent tears streamed down her cheeks as she trembled.

"Twilight! What did you do?!" Fluttershy asked in horror.

"I've been working on a solution to the whole 'salvation problem.' I'm pleased to say that I think I've succeeded. Observe."

She pulled the gag off of Scootaloo.

"Just tell me what you want!" Scootaloo whimpered. "I'll do anything! I'll say anything! Just please stop hurting me!"

"Was it God's will for me to torture you?" Twilight asked.

"Yes! Yes it was! I'm bad, and I had to be punished!" Scootaloo howled.

"She's just saying that because I told her I'd electrocute her if she didn't," Twilight explained. "But she doesn't really believe it."

"Yes I do!" Scootalo squeaked.

"Shut up."

Twilight withdrew a syringe filled with a clear liquid from a shelf.

"This is a chemical I have been developing. It causes the recipient to enter a temporary mental state wherein they become extremely susceptible to certain types of suggestion. Watch this."

Twilight inserted the syringe into Scootaloo's neck. Scootaloo squealed and thrashed, but in less than a minute, she began to calm. Her grimace of pain faded, and a placid look spread across her face. Twilight leaned forward and stared into the filly's eyes.

"Who are you?" Twilight asked.

"Scootaloo," the filly replied.

"No. You are Rarity. Who are you?"

". . . Rarity."

"Where do you live, Rarity?"

"I live at the Carousel Boutique, where everything is Chic, Unique, and Magnifique!" Scootaloo replied, doing a flawless impression of Rarity's accent.

"Do you hate me for torturing you and cutting off your limbs?" Twilight asked.

"No."

"Why?"

"Because you didn't torture me or cut off my limbs. You tortured Scootaloo and cut her limbs off, but you were doing God's work like you said, and even if you had tortured me, I'd still love you, because Jesus said to pray for your enemies and love those who persecute you."

"Very good, Scootaloo."

"I am Rarity, dear."

"Oh, right. Sorry, Rarity."

Twilight's horn glowed, and the ropes that bound Scootaloo slithered around her neck, constricting her throat. Scootaloo twitched and gurgled, but did not struggle. After a few seconds, she grew still.

"You see?" Twilight said, turning back to Fluttershy. "Even after all the abuse I gave her, the drug still made her pliant enough to convince her that what I did to her was perfectly justified. In fact, I could make her believe anything. All I have to do to save somepony is give them a dose of the chemical, tell them to accept Jesus Christ as their lord and savior, and kill them before it wears off. Spike, Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle have also been successfully saved in this way. Fluttershy? Are you paying attention?"

"You . . . you monster! You killed her! You killed Scootaloo!" Fluttershy shouted.

Twilight rolled her eyes.

"Oh, come on, Fluttershy. All I did was send her to Heaven. It's not like that's a bad thing, is it?"

Fluttershy's jaw dropped. What twisted logic had Twilight come up with that made cold-blooded murder a good thing?

"You still shouldn't kill! It's wrong!"

"Murderers can be forgiven, yes?"

"Yes…"

"So what's the problem?"

"You still shouldn't do bad things!"

"Morality is binary, Fluttershy. You're either perfect or you're not. Murder is no worse than telling a lie or stealing a candy bar. I am no more Hell bound now than I was before I murdered Scootaloo."

"You rejected God! You'll go to Hell!"

"Oh, Fluttershy. Don't you get it? I'm going to use the drug on myself and force myself to be sorry for what I did and repent before I die! It's the perfect plan!"

Fluttershy just stared at Twilight in horror.

"Ah, but I know what you're thinking!" Twilight continued. "What about all the other atheists in Equestria, or ponies of other religions, or Christians who doubt their faith? Well, I have a solution for that too! You see, I've used the chemical to indoctrinate several ponies, and I've given them a very specific set of instructions."

"Pinkie!" Fluttershy gasped.

"Exactly. I've ordered her to sell spiked coffee and doughnuts, and command everyone who ingests the chemical to use it to recruit more followers, who will recruit yet more and so on until I have enough to carry out my plan. My followers will distribute the drug to every water supply in Equestria, and then I will broadcast a special message on every T.V. and radio station: God loves you, and he wants you to be with him in Heaven, so therefore you must kill yourself. It'll be the biggest mass suicide in the history of the world! Everypony will go to Heaven!"

"You're insane!" Fluttershy yelled.

"If there is some flaw in my logic, then I would be delighted to hear it, Fluttershy."

"You…"

Twilight just stood there with a satisfied smile like she'd just solved a particularly difficult Sudoku puzzle. She was clearly insane. Fluttershy wracked her panicked brain for anything she could possibly say to change her mind before she killed more innocent ponies.

"You can't be saved like this! You have to come to Jesus willingly. You're taking away ponies' free will with your drugs!"

"Free will of any kind is an illusion," Twilight replied smoothly. "Our brains are constantly being bombarded by chemicals and stimuli that influence our decision making. Many ponies drink coffee for a boost of energy when they're sleepy. You drink coffee, and it puts you in a mental state that causes you to act differently than you would have otherwise. Does coffee not take away your free will? When you get tired, you are forced to sleep and enter a mental state which forces you to spend hours a day doing absolutely nothing when you'd rather be productive. Does sleep not take away your free will?"

"That isn't the same!"

"Why not?"

Fluttershy was speechless. How could Twilight be equating sleep with deliberate brainwashing?

"You . . . you don't know that you really had a vision from God! You said you stayed up all night studying. Maybe you just fell asleep and had a dream!" Fluttershy tried desperately.

"I had considered that, but it doesn't matter," Twilight said dismissively. "You still profess that Christianity is true, yes?"

"Yes!"

"Then nothing changes. God is still a monster, and there are ponies out there who will still die without accepting Jesus Christ as their lord and savior and still burn in Hell forever for no good reason."

"Stop it!" Fluttershy wailed. "Just stop it! You're crazy, Twilight! You need help!"

"Fluttershy, I've gone over my notes very carefully, and there are no mistakes. I am quite sane. This is simple logic. And it can't be stopped, either. My plan is already underway. I'll be broadcasting the command for suicide in a few moments."

The ropes that bound Scootaloo came alive again, and leapt onto Fluttershy.

"NO! NO PLEASE DON'T KILL ME TWILIGHT! PLEASE DON'T KILL ME! I DON'T WANT TO DIE!" Fluttershy screamed at the top of her lungs, struggling as the ropes bound her tightly. "HELP! SOMEPONY HELP ME! TWILIGHT'S GONE MAD!"

"Shh," Twilight said softly, putting a hoof over Fluttershy's mouth. "I've got it all worked out, Fluttershy. Just leave this to me."

She produced a second syringe, and jabbed it into Fluttershy's neck.

"No! I don't want to die! Please just let me go. Please . . . let me go…" Fluttershy murmured, her head slowly drooping.

There was a pause.

"Twilight?"

"Yes, Fluttershy?"

"I just wanted to say that you're doing a really wonderful thing to bring people closer to Jesus. All your arguments make perfect sense now."

"Thank you, Fluttershy."

Twilight turned to the corner of her lab, where a webcam and microphone sat on a desk surrounded by computer banks.

"Brothers and sisters, the time has come to join our Lord in Heaven!" she said to the camera. "It is God's will for you to kill yourselves and enjoy everlasting happiness with Him!"

Suddenly, the sounds of hoof steps came echoing down the staircase.

"Hey, Twilight, where you at? I need the next Daring Do book," Rainbow Dash called from the library.

"Aha!" Twilight yelled. "I knew God would send somepony to stop me! He want's everypony to go to Hell, Fluttershy, but I won't give Him the satisfaction!"

"There you are!" said Rainbow as she glided down the staircase. "I've been looking all over for…"

She trailed off, looking around at the scene. Scootaloo lay dead and limbless on the floor, while an extremely demented and disheveled looking Twilight held Fluttershy up with magic ropes.

"Uh…" she stammered, slowly backing away.

"Are you a Christian, Rainbow Dash?" Twilight hissed, her eye twitching spasmodically as she began to advance, matching Rainbow's pace.

"Twilight, what's going on? What was all that about God wanting people to kill themselves? What happened to Scootaloo?!" Rainbow demanded.

"ANSWER THE QUESTION!" Twilight screamed. "Rainbow," she began again more softly. "I know this looks bad, but I'm trying to help. Just answer the question, please."

"Uh . . . no. Twilight-"

Twilight pulled out a third syringe and charged with a roar. She launched the syringe with telekinesis, but Rainbow Dash rolled to the side with her athletic reflexes, and leapt forward to meet her.

They came together with a crash, and collapsed into a screaming pile of legs. Twilight uncoiled the ropes from Fluttershy, who was staring curiously at the melee, and sent the them whipping through the air. Her aim was poor, and she succeeded only in binding herself and Rainbow together.

"It's no use!" Twilight snarled. "I've commanded everypony to kill themselves! Even if you told them to stop, they wouldn't listen to you! They are completely preoccupied with their religious fervor. Look, Fluttershy's killing herself right now!"

Clop clop clop.

Rainbow looked up.

Fluttershy was staring at the two bound, wrestling mares on the floor with her eyes bulging out of her skull as she masturbated furiously.

"Kill yourself!" Twilight commanded.

"Um… Ooh," Fluttershy mumbled as she had an orgasm.

"There's something stronger than religious conviction!" Rainbow said, a slow grin spreading across her face.

She forced Twilight down and started licking her belly.

"What the hell are you doing?!" Twilight yelled.

"Ooh, yeah! You're a dirty slut, and all you want to do all day is fuck! Nothing but fucking twenty-four hours a day! Just fuck everything in sight!" Rainbow shouted.

There was a flash of light, and Princess Luna appeared in the basement with Big Macintosh clinging to her back, pounding her in the ass with his huge, immensely long, throbbing, mouth watering, vein covered, hairy, rectum wrecking, diamond hard stallion cock.

"THUS SPOKE THE GREAT PROPHET TWILIGHT SPARKLE!" Luna boomed in the Royal Canterlot Voice. "THY KINGDOM CUM, THY WILL BE DONE, ON EARTH AS IT IS IN HEAVEN!"

"Wait! No! It wasn't me! You need to kill yourself to be with Jesus now!" Twilight screamed, but it was too late.

Luna pounced on Twilight and began furiously humping her face while Rainbow Dash spanked Twilight's big purple ass with the Bible.

"Everypony look at this!" Rainbow yelled to the camera. "Don't kill yourself! You have so much fucking to do!"

Luna squealed in an explosion of ecstasy as she began sexually penetrating herself on Twilight's horn.

Suddenly, the basement door came flying off of its hinges with a crash, and Pinkie Pie's baptism party came storming in.

Derpy Hooves shoved muffins up Rarity's ass who tied up and spanked Cheerilee who sucked Caremel's cock who fisted Lyra and Bon Bon who took a huge dump on Rainbow Dash's adopted father from the human world who fingered Nyx who electrocuted Applejack's clitoris with a stolen car battery who stuffed The Great and Powerful Trixie's asshole full of apples who pissed all over Gilda's face who raped Fluttershy's butt with a strap-on who ate out Derpy's vagina in gigantic circle of drug-crazed sex.

Pinkie Pie had a huge cock for no apparent reason, and started jerking off on all eleven Doctor Whooves's, who had teleported in from every time period to have a big gay orgy with each other, and Celestia stuffed Rainbow Dash full of vibrators.

"EEAAAAAAUUUGUHG!" Discord moaned as he plowed Queen Chrysalis's spike-filled insect vagina, which lacerated his demon penis painfully but in a way that appealed to his sado-masochistic tendencies. The changeling queen's belly bulged sickeningly as the powerful love around her made the Discord-fertilized eggs mature at a terrifying rate. She pushed the King of Chaos off of her, and her vagina blasted a spray of slimy eggs in every direction, which hatched into hideously deformed goblins.

"NOOOOOOO! Rainbow, what have you done?!" Twilight howled. "You've doomed us all to an eternity of never-ending torment and suffering! You've-"

Big Mac interrupted her by shoving his moon goddess shit encrusted erection down her throat, where he emptied his gigantic testicles in an explosion of thick white semen with a "EEYUP," while Luna drilled her in the butt with her horn. The pressure built up inside Twilight's body, but the cum could not get out of her plugged anus, so it came shooting out of her nose, ears, vagina, and tear ducts.

The orgy lasted for eight hours, and by the time it was over, Twilight Sparkle's entire library was drenched in cum, urine, feces, changeling afterbirth, vomit, and other various bodily fluids.

"Whew," said Rainbow when all the fucking was over. "We did it! We saved Equestria!"

"And I think we all learned a very special lesson about friendship!" Fluttershy added. "Spirituality is more than just reading the words on the page of an old book. You have to feel the words of love that God has written on your heart. Would you like to write the letter to Princess Celestia, Twilight?"

Twilight coughed and gurgled semen out of every orifice in her body.

"Um, maybe you should have a bath first," Fluttershy said with a grin that made a little squee sound effect.