A Carriage Ride with a Succubus

by Lux Tenebris

Rating: mature
Tags: Fetish, Horror, Non-consensual, Sex, Dark, Alternate Universe, Original Character, Porn, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 4126

Scion believes he has escaped all consequences from his previous sins, but he is about to learn they follow you everywhere.

Scion is a young stallion that is known for seducing mares and allegedly assaulting a mare that rejected him. After his father pulled some strings Scion is now on his way to the Stonewood Military Academy, believing himself to be free from his past actions. But Scion will learn that sinners attract the most beautiful of beasts, and they are always hungry.

Tags: Femdom, Succubus, Soul-draining, Blowjob, Reverse cowgirl, Relucant orgasm/Forced orgasm, Edging, And a dark ending

Published 2023-05-30 17:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2023-05-30 17:50:01 UTC

The ride

The middle-aged mare adjusted the round glasses on her snout with a scoff as she eyed him. Her silver locks pooled around her cheeks and her dark eyes seemed akin to ocean depths. The tight-fitting black shirt around her front legs and chest was adorned with pins denominating great magical and military accomplishments and her pristine white fur looked like it had never known any dirt or filth.

Iron Will was striking for an older mare and certainly held far more grace than any filly Scion had been with before. It was just too bad she looked at him with such disgust and discomfort. It probably did not help he could not keep his eyes away from her well-toned flank, her iron heart cutie marks making his mouth water.

“Normally you’d be sent to prison for what you did. But due to your age and lack of previous offenses, it was decided you could have a second chance at the academy. But let me make myself clear, you are not off the hook. I will be watching you closely and any misstep will be your last, is that understood? Not even during this carriage ride will you be safe! I will not have perverted young stallions like yourself sullying the academy’s reputation,” Iron Will said with a huff.

Scion rolled his eyes at her threats and leaned back into the faux leather seat of the carriage. Iron Will leaned in through the open door with a glare and he let out an annoyed sigh. “Yeah sure, I won’t do anything.”

“You better or I’ll...” Iron mumbled under her breath before she continued, “You may use the curtains if you wish for some privacy when we travel. They are enchanted with a soundproofing spell so that you sleep in peace and I won’t have to listen to your voice. I suggest you use them,” she said and slammed the door shut.

The carriage shook as Iron got into the driver’s seat outside and soon it began to move, the magically carved wheels moving on their own. Such was the magnificent artistry of the mages at the Stonewood Military Academy. Soundproof curtains and self-moving wheels were but two of many great inventions the academy had given the world. Scion eyed the enchanted wheels for a second before he pulled the curtains closed and leaned back into his seat. There was a small slit on the wall opposite of him that allowed him to see Iron Will’s neck and he pulled a small curtain over that too.

Finally, he had some peace.

Scion was a young stallion who had recently reached his nineteenth winter. He had been favored by the mares at his old school for his luxurious black coat and his hypnotically beautiful light blue eyes. Of course, he'd been able to bed many by promising to help with paying their families' debts or by pressuring them with his noble bloodline and prestigious title.

Scion was not just gifted in bedding mares, but he had also cruised through classes on magic and there had been barely any effort on his part during the rest. Bits made teachers' grading systems ever so loose. But of course, a mare had ruined it all for him. His father had always warned him not to let mares get too close and now he knew why, they would act like snakes and use it for their own advantage. Scion could not help but let out a 'tsk' at the memory. Some mares were ungrateful even in the presence of greatness, especially in the presence of a duke's son.

The mare had been a new member of his class and had avoided his advances for weeks. When he had finally snapped after the seventh rejection and pressed her against a wall… Bah, it had all come crashing down after that. She accused him of rape when had done no such thing, though the wound to her head and back had not helped his case. In the end, it had been his father who saved him from prison. By having him sent to a prestigious but harsh military academy his father hoped to curb his more prideful tendencies. Not that Scion intended to grovel before some military mare that was far beneath him.

As the carriage continued its journey over the grounds of his father’s estate an odd scent began to fill the carriage. The shaking of the carriage hitting cobblestones and the small vibrations in his seat made Scion twist and turn. His nostrils became filled with the scent of strawberry and lime and his vision grew hazy. Soon the vibrations stopped, meaning the carriage had exited onto the forested dirt road outside the estate. Soon his vision darkened and he fell asleep.

By the time he awoke hours had gone by. What little light the sun had provided through the curtains was now gone and replaced with the minuscule shine of the moon. The scent still lingered in the cabin, but now there was a warmth over his stomach and thighs.

“What in the world…” Scion mumbled and sunk into his seat with a lazy smile.

Slowly, at first without his notice, his cock began to swell. The stallion let out a groan as his member grew hard as stone and he watched his black penis throb and twitch. He watched in stunned silence with half-lidded eyes as a pair of lips and two striking green eyes appeared in the darkness of the carriage. The lips caressed his length and the eyes gave him a cute innocent look as a long forked tongue slobbered over his swelling tip.

“W— What is this?” Scion said with a swallow as the forked tongue wrapped itself around his member and his balls. “Miss Iron there is a—”

The tongue constricted around his sack so hard it stole Scion’s breath away. The stallion wheezed in pain as the lips kissed his throbbing cock.

“Say another word and I will take your balls, pervert~ Not that the good madam can even hear you, “ the lips said with a sultry tone.

Slowly but surely a head and neck appeared out of the darkness as well. Nestled on the floor between Scion’s legs was the head of a mare with a red mane, white fur, and two ram horns growing from her head. Scion went pale as he realized he was looking upon a succubus, and she giggled at his expression as the rest of her body became visible in the dark cabin.

“Mmm~ I love the taste of fear~ It adds to the arousal~” she purred and leaned in and kissed his cockhead.

Scion's chest rose and fell in rapid succession as he watched the creature with wild eyes. What was it doing in his carriage? How had it gotten inside? What did it want? And why could his cock just not stop throbbing?

The succubus let go of his balls with her snake-like tongue and she wrapped it all around his length instead, slowly jerking him off. It drew a sigh of pleasure from his lips and precum spurted from his cockhead. The thick oily liquid poured down the sides of his large member and coated the succubus’ tongue, making her hum in pleasure.

“Who are you!? What are you doing here!?” Scion demanded with an angry huff and tried to sit up straight. Only to then realize with a shocked expression that he could not move his limbs. His legs felt stuck, as it affixed by a vice. Scion pulled on and strained his legs to free them, but they only seemed to sink deeper into the seat.

The succubus watched his fruitless endeavor with an amused smile before she kissed his cock again, drawing a whimper from him. Her lips burned like fire but left behind a cold longing worse than Fimbulwinter. She withdrew her tongue and proceeded to slobber all over his heavy nuts, humming and moaning as she smelled his musk and sweat. The succubus refused to relent and eventually opened her mouth wide and swallowed his member.

“Sweet Celestia!” Scion groaned as the succubus bobbed up and down his cock. “Gods please stop~”

The succubus pulled back with a cocky grin and let go of his cock with a wet ‘pop’. She leaned her chin against his leg and looked up at him with those big green expressive eyes of hers. His cock throbbed against her snout and she smiled as a drop of precum ran down his length. “I am Melusine. I am a demon.”

Scion growled. “That much is clear! You let me go or I’ll—”

“Or you’ll what? Assault another poor mare all for the sake of quenching your bruised ego and insatiable libido?” Melusine asked with a wry smile and kissed one of his balls. “No, No I don’t think I am going to give you the chance. You see, pervert, I punish stallions like you. I tease you until you can’t hold it anymore and then I gobble down your soul along with a torrential amount of seed~”

Scion swallowed thickly and shook his head. “I— I didn’t—”

“Say whatever you want, I know the truth. After all, you don’t think you can keep a demon out of your mind right?” Melusine smiled. “I know how you rubbed your aching cock alllll over her nice flat stomach~ I know how her fear egged you on until you had to cross your legs around your cock and that still wasn’t enough~ And I know how you groaned as you came with the most submissive whine that mare must have heard in her life! Haha, you are pathetic! But you’re lucky because I like pathetic~”

“You bitch!” Scion hissed, his face red from shame. But his cock throbbed at the memories, especially as he remembered the moment the orgasm hit. The mare had whined at him as copious amounts of seed hit the bathroom floor and her fearful sounds had just egged him on more and more, drawing rope after rope of cum out of his poor cock.

Melusine gave him a teasing smile and swallowed his cock once more. Scion gasped and moaned as the velvety lips bobbed up and down his member. The succubus went faster and faster, even going so far as to push his length into her throat. The wet and guttural sounds that escape Milusine’s lips made Scion see stars and his breathing grew more and more labored. His cock swelled and Scion desperately pulled on his back legs, trying not to cum.

Melusine pulled her lips off his cock with a heavy gasp for air. Drool ran down her chin and she coughed. As she recovered she eyed him with a wry grin. “Awww~ Did that feel good~ Almost too good, right?~”

Scion panted for air and he eyed the succubus with a snarl. “If you know the truth why are you doing this!?”

Melusine leaned in as she spoke so that her every warm breath hit his engorged cockhead. What also did help Scion’s hard cock was how she shuddered in pleasure at every syllable. “Because I know you’re still a pervert~ Because I know you have forced mares into bed through money and lies~ Because I know I am going to fucking cum when I taste your sinful soul in that foul pervert seed~”

Scion gritted his teeth and lit his horn. Maybe just maybe he could disable the spell that soundproofed the carriage. But the magic sputtered out and died as Melusine wrapped her tongue around his cock and began to wildly tug on his length. Scion moaned and thrust his hips with quick and panicked breaths. He felt a familiar pressure in his lower stomach and his cock strained.

“Oh gods I’m gonna!—”

Melusine quickly let go of his cock and laughed cruelly as it bobbed and flexed in desperation. Scion moaned and thrust in hips in frustration, but he fell back from the edge of orgasm. For now.

“Oh by Lilith I love teasing and edging young stallions. Always so happy to give me what I want~ But not yet. No, I don’t like to just overwhelm and take like so many of my sisters. If Vilin was here she would have just made you warm and ready with the pheromones and then ridden you until you were nothing but a husk. But I like the struggle you see~ I like it when the male has a chance. Why not do a little challenge then, eh? I will tease you and edge you from here until this carriage arrives at the academy grounds. If you can hold back your orgasm until then, then I will let you go. But if you fail I will eat your soul and condemn you to be my pet in Tartarus. What do you say? Just know if you say no I am gonna make you cum right now and eat your soul anyway,” Melusine giggled.

Scion panted for air and watched his cock with a barely restrained whimper. There was no way he could hold it for long, but if he said no he was as good as dead. With a shuddering breath and teary eyes, he nodded. “Deal.”

“Good boy~” Melusine giggled and lit her ram horns. A wide but small square was conjured out of the ether and it glowed invitingly.

“What is that?...” Scion asked as Melusine grabbed his cock with one hoof and pressed it against the square.

The cool magic surface made Scion shudder and his cock spurted a rope of precum over the square as Melusine caressed it. The succubus rubbed the slimy length back and forth over the square until it was as covered in precum as Scion’s cock. Then she looked up at him with a grin.

“Did you know that past a certain point, there is a cobblestone road from here to the academy? And that with the right kind of magic one could have an artificial construct vibrate in time with each cobblestone hit by the wheels?”

His eyes widened and his lower lip trembled in fear.

“Good luck, my little pervert~” the succubus said and kissed his cock.

And then the wheels of the carriage hit the cobblestone and the square began to vibrate.

“Urghh!~” Scion screamed in pleasure and twisted until his muscles were cramped as the magic construct teased his cock. “Stooppppp!”

“It’s just some vibrations! You can do it!” Milusine giggled and pressed his cock even harder against the square.

Scion let out a gargled choked cry and threw his head back. The knot in his stomach felt larger than ever and his balls were swollen to the point they would break. He slammed his head back against the cushioned seat but it did little to stop the pleasurable assault. His stomach flexed and he wheezed as the vibrations only increased.

“Please let me rest!” Scion sobbed and gave Milusine a pleading look.

The succubus pouted at him in faux sympathy and then nodded with a bright smile. “Okay!”

She removed his cock from the square, leaving him panting and twisting against his invisible bonds. And then she promptly swallowed his cock with a laugh. Scion once again pleaded for her to stop as she bobbed her head up and down his cock, her giggle vibrating around his member. Milusine kept up her blowjob until his groans became strained, upon which she pulled away and pressed his cock against the vibrating square. Scion could only sob and cry to the gods for mercy.

“There are no gods here but me~” Melusine said with a sadistic smile.

As the minutes passed Scion became numb to the world. He was constantly switched between the pleasure of the magic construct or Milusine’s devilish throat. In the end, his mind became blank. He simply sat there with vacant teary eyes, only allowing one thought in his mind.

Don’t cum don’t cum don’t cum don’t cum don’t cum

Melusine on the other hand rested her head on his thigh as she magically pressed his cock against the square. She panted for air after the many blowjobs and looked up at him with a stubborn glare. “You are only prolonging the inevitable! But if you want to play hard to get? Fine!”

The succubus crawled up from her seat between his legs and the magical construct vanished. Scion let out a cough from the strain and cried in relief as the vibrations were finally gone. But he then looked upon the succubus’ flat stomach and whimpered. She rubbed her hot nether lips against his cock with a smug grin and then slowly sank down on his member. Scion’s eyes rolled back up into his head and she kissed his lips. Her pussy was so warm Scion swore he was ablaze.

“You always did have a breeding fetish, right?~”

Scion’s cock pulsed and shot a rope of cum into the mare’s womb. He strained his stomach and jaw until he felt his muscles cramp, and his member throbbed and flexed, but no more cum escaped his cock. He looked up at the succubus with a whimper and she giggled.

“In the spirit of the game, I’ll ignore that. After all, it’s not like you’re gonna survive this~” Melusine said and her body became smoke.

Scion watched as the succubus rematerialized, her pussy once again squeezing his cock like a vice. But now he looked at her back. She looked over her shoulder with a grin and spread her bat-like wings and let her tail whip his belly in excitement. Scion felt his last hope vanish into his soon-to-be-eaten soul. Melusine was gonna ride him reverse cowgirl.

“Buckle up, pervert~” the succubus giggled and began to bounce.

“Oh, goooodddsss!!!!” Scion screamed and thrust his hips against the mare.

With every wet smack, the succubus' delectable large flank would bounce and jiggle. Her laughter at his desperate cries filled the carriage and Scion sobbed for someone to save him. Melusine only bounced faster as he begged for salvation. The succubus panted in pleasure, her expression becoming more and more warped by ecstasy. Scion could feel how his inevitable orgasm rose and he gritted his teeth to concentrate. He looked at the curtain next to him and desperately pulled on his front leg.

And he realized he could move it!

Scion yanked the curtain away with a shout and moonlight washed over the cabin. Melusine disappeared without a sound and Scion watched with tears of joy as the cabin passed by a metal gate. He had reached the academy! Scion got up on wobbly legs and pulled aside the curtain to Iron Will’s seat, his cock still throbbing, on the verge of releasing his pent-up cum and soul.

“Miss, please stop the carriage! There was a succubus in here and she almost killed me—”

Scion stopped as he noticed there was no one driving the carriage. An ill foreboding spread through his bones and he kicked open the cabin door. Maybe he could find help in the academy? He had to find someone before the succubus returned. Scion got out of the carriage and froze.

Once he stood outside the carriage he looked upon Melusine. The succubus panted and eyed him with a cruel smile. “I told you he was cute, girls~”

Scion’s breath caught in his throat as he realized he looked upon a courtyard of ruined buildings. The dark grounds were filled with horned mares with hungry smiles and glowing eyes. He began to cry. The succubi giggled at his fearful tears and they slowly approached him like a group of lionesses.

“But I won! I won…” Scion cried and backed up against the carriage. “You said if I could last until we reached the academy grounds!”

Melusine strutted up to him and licked one of his tears away. “I'm afraid we are not at the academy. The academy is far away from here. You still haven’t beaten my game, prey~”

Scion tried to run but he was thrown to the ground by Melusine’s magic. He looked up at her with a whimper as she took the form of a very familiar middle-aged mare. “Let us finish this, no?~”

Scion had no time to run as the disguised succubus turned around and sat down on his cock. This time he did not try and hold back. He cried and sobbed as ‘Iron Will’ rode his cock and his orgasm built even faster than before. The other succubi watched him with a giggle and licked up his tears as Milusine rode him faster and faster. Her fat flank etched itself into Scion’s mind and a terrible groan began in his throat.

"It's ok, let go~" one of the succubi whispered and kissed his neck.

Melusine looked at him over her shoulder her tongue hanging from her mouth in sinful pleasure. "Breed me!~"

Scion began to convulse and immense pain filled his body as he tried to clench his every muscle, but Milusine just bounced faster with depraved moans.

"Cum~" one of the succubi said and kissed him deeply.

The young stallion came with a scream that pierced the heavens. Rope after rope of cum filled the Milusine's womb until she cried out in pleasure and she too finally reached nirvana. Scion kicked and screamed as he tried to get away, but the demons held his limbs in place with giggles and moans. Soon he felt the most pleasurable and painful tug in his balls and his ropes of cum became much thicker. His cum, aglow with his soul essence, pooled around his stomach and Scion watched with tired eyes as his body became more and more frail with each rope of cum leaving his body.

“Sleep, pervert~” Melusine said with a sadistic smile. “You have earned your rest~”

Scion closed his eyes and lost consciousness as the succubus just continued milking.

"I'm sorry Madam Will, but you were already here and picked up my son on the academy's behalf! I can not say it in any simpler terms! In fact, I am starting to get worried! If you were not the mare who picked him up then who was!?" Erudite Gloryseeker said with a huff and slammed his hoof into the ground.

Iron Will watched the stallion with uncaring eyes, her lips a thin line. "If your son has run away then he is liable for punishment under Equestrian law. I suggest you find him."

"What!? It was your carriage that took him! If anything it is your responsibility to find him! He is your charge!" Erudite huffed.

"No Sir, your son is not my problem until he gets on academy grounds. Until then he is your ward and no one else's. So find him yourself," Iron Will said and got up onto the driver's seat of the carriage.

"You can't get away with this!" the stallion said and ran up to stand beside the seat.

The carriage began to move but Iron Will stopped it for just a second so she could turn and eye Erudite. "Remember, Sir, the academy only wants the best. And stallions sullied by sin are hardly the best you can offer. In fact, your son deserved a harsh punishment for his actions. And you pulling strings to get him into the academy just made his sin so much worse. He tried to escape justice."

Erudite growled. "Where is my son?"

Iron Will shrugged. "I'm not sure. After all, you sent him away with someone you claim looks like me, but I was still on academy grounds by the time you said I arrived here. I suggest you forward an incident report to the crown about possible changeling activities."

Erudite grew red-faced in anger and he opened his mouth as if to speak, but he simply muttered and walked away.

Iron Will urged the enchanted carriage to move and soon it rolled away from the Gloryseeker Estate and out onto the main road. The military mage contemplated how useful the lord's son would have been in the academy and then shook her head. Criminals had no place in the academy. There was only one place where sinners deserved to go, and the academy made sure they made it there.

After all, the academy was a prestigious institution. It could not have perverted stallions in its ranks.

With that thought Iron Will rolled down the main road with a wry smile and set course for the Stonewood Military Academy.

Author's Note

I hope having a short lewd story will make up for my lack of posts on the normal stories. Have a good day you wankers! :raritywink: