Deep Massage

by GorisTheDeathclaw

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy, Other, Romance, Sex
Length: 1694

Lotus and Aloe decide to give you a special service at the Spa...

(2nd Person story with Aloe and Lotus, the spa ponies)

When you enter the Spa in a somewhat downtrodden state one stormy morning, the gorgeous sisters running the spa offer you a special service...

Rated M for some sexual content ;)

Published 2012-10-06 03:40:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-10-06 03:40:01 UTC

Deep Massage

It’s freezing cold out.

Plus, it’s raining.

Every raindrop that hits your face feels like a sharp icicle jabbing into you. The sky is completely covered in dark clouds, the sound of the storm obscures any other noise, and nobody except you is out here on the street.

You quicken your step and break out into a sprint. The sooner you can get inside the nice warm spa and away from the freezing rain, the better.

Of course the fact that a male would want to visit the spa drew some pony’s suspicions, but who cares what they think? You like the spa. You like the warm, steaming waters. You like the smell of all kinds of flowers.

You like the two beautiful women who run the spa, Aloe and Lotus.

Just as the building enters your sight through the harsh storm, a huge stallion bumps into you. He falls into a filthy puddle on the ground. He doesn’t look very happy about it.

You try to apologize (even though it was him who bumped into you), but he talks over you.

“What the hell?! Why don’t the stupid hicks in this shitty backwards town watch where they’re going?!” he yells.

You try to apologize again, but he yells at you again.

“Do you know who I am?!” he squawks. “Yeah, that’s right, idiot, I’m Nightshade.”

Oh shit. You’d heard about this guy – the leader of the Equestrian criminal underworld.

Which, really, had so little influence or presence that it was almost a total joke. That doesn’t stop you from almost pissing yourself in fear right now though.

“Listen, you moron,” he says, moving in closer to intimidate you. “Because it’s such a nice day,” he says with a sarcastic tint to his voice, “I’m gonna let you off the hook for now. Most people who bump into me would be missin’ a few teeth by now. But I’m lettin’ you go – but if I ever even SEE you again, I’ll get my boys to END you. We clear?” he says.

“Y-yeah,” you stutter, “w-we’re clear. I-I’m sorry I bumped into you…”

He smiles a totally dickheadish smirk. “Good,” he says. “Now get out of my way.”

He pushes you aside and storms off down the street.

Sweet Celestia, that was scary. That was one of the most terrifying things that’s ever happened to you.

But it’s soon forgotten as you remember you have a spa visit waiting for you!

You head into the spa’s reception area, and are immediately greeted by sweet-smelling warm air, contrasting sharply with the horrible weather outside.

Aloe, the Spa Pony with the blue fur and pink mane, notices you.

“Oh!” she says in her adorably thick accent, “you’re shivering! Are you okay?”

She rushes out from behind the counter and wraps a huge fluffy towel around you. You aren’t sure whether you’re shivering from the cold or your encounter with the dangerous mob boss, but Aloe is right – you can’t seem to stop shaking.

Lotus, the other Spa Pony with the pink fur and blue mane, walks out from a back room and stares at you. “Oh, you look terrible!” she says in an equally thick accent as her sister’s. They were sisters right? You’re pretty sure they’re sisters.

“I’m fine,” you assure them. You’re not even convinced by your own lie.

Lotus puts her gentle, soft hoof on your back and stares into your eyes, her own sparkling indigo eyes filled with concern.

Suddenly, her expression completely changes and she smiles mischievously. “Hey, Aloe,” she says. “He looks like he needs the ‘special treatment’.”

Aloe looks confused for a second, before her eyes briefly go wide as she understands what her sister has said. She then gets the same mischievous smile.

“Uhhh,” you say, “what are you two talking about? What’s the ‘special treatment’?”

Lotus laughs. “Come, follow me,” she says, swishing her tail behind her so that it rubs over her plot.

That was… an unusual thing to do. You reason that she probably didn’t even realize she was moving her tail seductively, and you’re just reading too deeply into simple things as usual.

Aloe walks behind you as you follow Lotus into a sauna room with a comfy-looking massage bed.

“Hey,” you say, feeling witty, “it’s like a sauna in here!”

They both stare at you for a second before continuing as if you hadn’t said anything.

“Here you go,” Lotus says, her smile growing even bigger. “Lay on that.”

You gingerly climb up onto the bed and lie down. You’re still not really sure what’s going on, but hey, free massage.

Aloe grabs your left hindleg and Lotus grabs your right hindleg and they begin massaging you in unison.

Just as you’re almost falling asleep from the relaxation, they both simultaneously move their hooves rapidly up your leg so that they’re just below your… you know.

“Uhhh, hey,” you say, “this is, kind of, uhhh…”

Lotus puts her hoof to your lips. “Sshhh,” she says, “just enjoy it.”

You have a fairly good idea what’s going on now. And you’re liking it.

Aloe leans forward and wraps her lips around your erect, waiting cock.

Lotus circles around the massage table and kisses you on the lips.

Oh god, this is amazing! This is fantastic! This is the best thing that has ever happened to anyone, EV-

…you need to pee.

“Uh, hey girls,” you say, pushing Lotus off you. “Hold on just a second.”

Aloe moves her mouth off your penis for a second. “What’s wrong?”

You laugh nervously. “Um, nothing. I just have to leave for a sec. I’ll be right back.”

She laughs adorably. “Oh, come on. You don’t have to be shy. Just relax,” she says. She lowers her head and wraps her lips around the tip of your penis again.

“No, seriously,” you say more urgently, “stop it for a second.”

She lowers her eyelids at you and returns to sucking your dick.

“Seriously!” you say again. “Quit it!”

She withdraws, looking very hurt. “I… I’m sorry, did I do something wrong…?” she says.

“No,” you assure her. The look in her eyes is heartbreaking. You sigh. “Keep going,” you tell her.

She smiles and goes back to sucking you off while Lotus starts kissing you again.

“Okay,” you think to yourself. “This is bad. I just have to hold in the piss for a LITTLE while, and I’ll rush to the bathroom right after I cum. Perfect plan!”

You mentally congratulate yourself on your superb logical thinking skills.

You try to relax and enjoy the ‘treatment’ you’re being given, but you find it ridiculously hard to be aroused when you really have to piss so badly.

Aloe starts sucking harder and Lotus slips her tongue into your mouth. Still, your need to piss grows ever stronger.

“WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON IN HERE?!”

Aloe and Lotus jump backwards and back away to the end of the room, their eyes full of fear.

You turn to the source of the enraged shout. You see Nightshade stood in the doorway.
“What the hell?!” you scream. “This is outrageous! You can actually see my penis! What are you doing here?!”

He snarls deeply, clearly letting the rage grow inside him. “These two girls,” he says, gesturing to Aloe and Lotus, “are…” his eyes fill with fire, “my DAUGHTERS.”
“What does th… oh, fuck,” you say.

Nightshade smirks. “Yeah, fuck indeed. Do you know what happens to people who plow my daughters?” he says with a sadistically evil twang to his voice.

“Uhhh…. They’re given a lot of money and allowed to leave without any consequences?” you weakly suggest.

“Nah,” he says, “I kill them. Painfully. Slowly. So they have days to think about what they’ve done, and when that’s all over they’re begging for death.”

“But… but… but,” you start, “I… I didn’t want to do it! They raped me! That’s literally what happened, they were raping me! I’m a rape victim!”

This is a frigging pathetic attempt at damage control, but you decide to roll with it anyway.

It only seems to make Nightshade even angrier, as if that were possible.

He storms over to you. “Stand up! NOW!” he orders.

Perhaps it’s the fear, or perhaps it’s just the fact you’ve been holding it in for ages, but you start pissing yourself right there.

All over his face.

“Oh, GOD!” you scream as piss continues to shoot out of your cock and all over Nightshade. “Sorry! I’m sorry, I’m really sorry!” you say.

You finally halt the torrent of piss and look up to see Nightshade staring at you with a murderous rage in his eyes. He says nothing, but his eyes demand an explanation from you.

“Uhhh,” you say, “it’s… uh… it’s not piss?”

You don’t even have time to react before he brings his hoof smashing down into your face.

You groan as you force your eyes open.

“Ugh… now where am I?” you ask.

“In hospital,” replies a familiar voice. You turn to see Nurse Redheart.

“Hey,” you say.

She smiles at you, although the smile is full of the usual malice she seems to hold towards you. “Hey. I thought you should know 2 things,” she says.

“What are they?” you ask.

“Well, firstly, you have a broken nose,” Redheart says, “but it’ll heal soon.”

“So what’s the second thing?” you ask.

“Some men came over to the hospital and asked about you.”

You freeze in fear.

“They looked pretty fancy, and very dangerous. They even had guns. Anyway, they wanted to know where you lived. They said you’d offended their leader, and they wanted to ‘make you pay.’ Those were their exact words.”

You look at Nurse Redheart. Her expression is unreadable. “…you didn’t give them my address, right?” you ask hopefully.

She resumes her usual sadistic smile. “Well, of course I did! They said they were good friends of yours and wanted to check up on you.” She laughs maniacally.

You’re torn between screaming at her and hitting her, but you settle for falling unconscious again.