Breaching past for control
“Ngh. Finally. I’m free” I say to myself while chuckling “But. This isn’t earth but it’ll do for my hostile take over.” I say. I look around to try to find anything and I see a town so I start walking to it. I look down at my so called body.
“Hm. It seems I’m naked? Can’t have that.” I snap my fingers and a pair of clothes appear on me.
“But to act the takeover of this land I need to find something to control” I say before walking.
(Meanwhile at canterlot castle)
“Sister may I please have a word with you for a moment?” Luna says
“Yes. What is it Luna?” Celestia says.
“I fear that there is a creature here to take over equestria. I could be wrong but I have sense it.” Luna says.
“Hmm. Alright Luna. I will send a scroll to Twilight and her friends.” Celestia says as she starts to walk away to her room.
“Thank you Sister.” Luna says as she walks away to her room.
(Meanwhile in ponyville)
Spike burps and a scroll appears. “Twilight! The princess sent a scroll.” He says
“She did? Read it!” Twilight says excitedly.
“It says…” “Dear My Faithful Student Twilight.
My dear sister Luna has sense an evil presence that appeared just a few hours ago. I am asking you and your friends to be careful and to let me know if you see this creature.
From your Princess Celestia.” Spike says
“A hostile creature? Are you sure spike?” Twilight asks.
“Twilight. When have a ever misread a scroll?” Spike says.
“Never.” Twilight says with a little bit of a nervous chuckle.
“Twilight. Shouldn’t we go tell the others?” Spike asks.
“Your right spike. Let’s go.” Twilight says as she sprints out of the library.
(Back to the main character’s perspective)
As I approach the town I see people? “People? Is that what they look like? No. I don’t think their supposed to be blue and purple and other colors. Horns? And wings?” I say as I enter the town.
“Hey you!” A feminine voice calls out. “You were the one twilight talked about. With that evil presence. But I’ll defeat you!” The feminine voice shouts.
“Rainbow Dash! We’re supposed to tell the princesses!” Another voice calls out.
“Your lucky this time creature.” Rainbow dash says as her and Twilight run off.
“What?” I say as I see them run off.
As I stand there confused I see a bright flash of white light and two creatures appear and are standing in front of me.
I start to chuckle maniacally as the two “special” beings are nervous but not showing it.
“You’re perfect!” I shout as I point at Princess Luna.
“What do you mean by that creature?” Luna says.
As Luna finishes talking I set my hand on her head.
“I don't just infect you... I control you. In other words, I BECOME you!” I say as I disappear.
I look down and I see that I’m in Princess Luna’s body.
"It's finally time! My long-awaited vengeance will soon be realized!” I say with my voice speaking over Luna’s.
“What did you do with my sister!” Princess Celestia says.
“I took control of her body. But don’t worry. She’s locked away. Now. To take over this world!” I say while laughing.
“We won’t let you!” Twilight says.
“Oh yeah? Try and stop me!” I say while laughing.
“We will!” Rainbow dash shouts as she starts running towards me.
As rainbow dash runs at me I form a magical barrier that stops her and I use the barrier to slam her onto the ground.
“Agh! That hurt!” Rainbow dash says
“Obviously I would. And now it’s time to end this!” I say as I start to form a giant ball of electricity.
“Eat this!!” I say as I throw my hands down and the ball disappears. “What?!” I say as I grab my head
“No! Impossible! I, won’t lose!” I shout
“Get out of my body!” Luna says.
“No!” I shout as I slowly get removed from Luna’s body.
In a bright flash me and Luna are separate.
As I fall to one knee and out of breath. “N-no. You shouldn’t have won. I am a being of code! I am superior! And you are a biological failure! I have lain in wait for far too long! I won’t fail! I am… incapable of loss.” I say as I black out.
“Serves you right. Sister? Are you okay?” Celestia says.
“I’m okay sister. Thank you. But what did it mean by a being of code?” Luna says
“I do not know sister but it might be what it is or came from. That will remain unknown for now. But we must return to our royal duties.” Celestia says as she turns around. “You six may return to your activities and Twilight Sparkle. I am asking you to watch over this thing for the time being and study it. If it does anything I’m sure you and your friends will defeat it. But if it’s too much to handle you may call upon my assistance. Farewell my little ponies.” Celestia says as she and Luna fly off.
“You can count on me Princess.” Twilight says
“Okay girls you are free to go now.” Twilight says while her friends wave and say goodbye to return to their daily activities.
“Now for you.” Twilight says as she looks at my unconscious body and she lifts me up with her magic and Carries me to her home.
As the hours go by I finally wake up.
“Ngh. My… head. Where am I? Who am I? What am I?” I say as I look and I see a mirror on a door so I approach it and I look in my reflection and I see something.
“Is this what I am? Just a being a code? Locked away and sent back to another place. This isn’t right. I should be powerful but I feel empathy and compassion for these creatures. Maybe I don’t want to be a villain.” I say
“I see you’ve woken up. Now I have one question to ask you. Who are you?” The person asks
Author's Note
This isn’t being petty at this point but if you try to become a story writer just get everything right. If you don’t the community will treat you like dog shit even though you do the exact required amount for it to be published and yet if it has one thing wrong with it, it’s a terrible story. This community is dog shit.