DO YOU DOUBT ME TRAITOR

by Miro MM

Rating: mature
Tags: Sex, Suicide / Self Harm, Tragedy, Profanity, Violence, Dark, Death, Sad, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Rarity, Non-consensual
Length: 1430

Rarity remembers the Stallion that ruined her life.

Rarity is assaulted by a Stallion, and nopony believes her. All she can do now is dissolve and drain away into the rainwater.

Warning: Vent story, contains rape, blood but no gore & disturbing metaphors

Reading by Nomi Bunni: Can be found here.

'Art By plotcore on E621'

Published 2023-08-21 23:30:00 UTC
Last updated 2023-08-21 23:30:00 UTC

How Do I Break You?

How can you doubt me now?

How do you break me? how do you discreate me? how have you created your masterpiece?

Your smell, my body. You rape me, you rape me. You have eaten my body from the inside out. I can feel you press into me, I can feel you press against me. Your powerful body, your face of twisted delight. Why are you like this? I know there is no answer to that useless fucking question.

How can you doubt me?

I've hated myself ever since, I've hated myself ever since. Ive hated my lies, but I know I don't lie. Why do you throw me away like a broken toy. You prickle my sides, you pulse inside me. You throb inside me. Why are you the one thats crying? are you crying because of what you are doing?

You don't make sense, I don't make sense.What have I done.

Oh rarity how are you?

Rarity are you okay?

Rarity why do you hate me?

Rarity why do you hate me?

"Rarity"

Twilight surprised me, the rain tickles the window I hear it so clearly now.

You are not a friend in need

"Yes?" I respond, looking down at a half acre of ash in my food bowl.

"Why?" Twilight responds, with genuine concern in her tone.

I am surprised for the first time since-

Why should I trust a word that comes out your fucking mouth?

I am wailing at the bottom of the ground, I can feel his dick inside me. I am nothing but a broken toy, thats why he calls me. I don't know his name, but I've seen him before.

How could that even happen?

How can you doubt me?

How can you doubt me now?

I am wailing, I am crying but nopony hears the cries of the raped mare, oh how I have forgotten my name in time of distress. What have you done? nobody hears my rape. They have all forgotten about it by now right?

My generosity is torn and black, its raped and full of mold. My little hole has been dug and dug, it bleeds out from my mouth. I hear you in my ears, I hear you in my mind. I feel you wiggling in my throat, sliding down my wet and moist throat. Pulling on my veins and ripping all my pins, just pull them out and toss them to the side. My pins and needles no more, what use will they do other than pierce my furry skin.

You are a liar

Rarity you are a liar without morals

You won't manipulate me like this, not with emotion and pain thats just wrong

How can you doubt me?

I am not moving, I am fragile, frail and weak. I haven't eaten in weeks, how am I alive. What happened to that little filly inside you? gone.

I am reduced to nothing, I eat ash for breakfast. I feed your soul with my painful screams, your dirty soul. Your fractured health, you've made me a whore. A whore without morals, a whore without reason. I suck your filthy cock, your dirt enters my mouth, shoots into the back. You're fluids stain my mane, my fur sticks together. Oh you have created art how wonderful for you.

Rarity what is your name

Rarity what is your name...

Rarity what is your name?

Every stone on every mountain. Is etched with my name. Every vein of every leaf of every tree. Is slaked with poison.

I am wailing at the bottom of the hole, I've been smashed into the wall so many times I cannot tell you. I speak inside my mind, I let out only mist. I suckle your tip, I feed on your cum. My only source of food then. I am nothing but a horrible mare, I lie and I lie and I deserved what happened. I deserved everything that happened. I am nothing, I am nopony. I am not a mare. I love you this much.

He would be so proud of what he made, no wonder he called it his masterpiece. I am wailing, I am calling for him and him alone. To please stop, to stop it. Stop it, I beg and plead and scratch and claw and punch and yell and moan and cry, cry, cry, cry. But I see you, rise up into heaven and I can only wish I could turn Celestia's sun to blind you.

But if you are to sleep in the pits of hell, then I will give the demons chains to bind you there. But I know that isn't true.

How can you doubt me now?

After everything we've been through Rares, how could you say such a thing?

How can you doubt me?

I believe you Rarity, I just don't believe it could of been him.

How can you doubt me now?

You fucking bitch, I fucking hate you. I fucking loved you, you can't understand a goddamn fucking thing

How can you doubt me?

You push me into your mouth, my lips soak your sweaty salty teeth, your yellow bitter teeth they taste fowl. But I am forced to applaud you, and stand up for you. Your art is beautiful, it changed my life.

Satan, Satan

You are there, and you hit me. Satan, get beside me. You rape me. Satan, Satan. I love you this much. Yes, hit me please. I need it, I fucking rape myself inside out. Satan, fortify me I beg of you. Just this once I need you. But it's slowly coming to an end, I feel myself slowly dissolve and drain away into the rain so slightly, it has begun for me.

I don't eat, I don't sleep. I don't eat, I don't sleep. I don't eat, I don't sleep. I don't eat, I don't sleep. I don't eat. I let it consume me. Chain me up and feed me gasoline, my tongue burns of the achiness. My entire body has been filled to the brim, I can feel you in my womb. I let you penetrate me, I let you destroy me. I let you do whatever you want to me.

How do I break you, before you break me? how do I break you, before you break me? how do I break you? how do I break you? what I cannot realize, is that I cannot break you.

How?
How?

How do I fucking break you?

No, it's been you this entire time. Ive been thrusted inside over and over and over and over and over and over. I am counting sheep, I am counting sheep. How? how do I break you? how do I break you? how do I...

Rarity stay with me

Before you break me?

How do I break you?

How shall I break you dear?

How?

How?

Help me, I'm sorry for everything I've done. I will make amends with every pony that I hurt, every creature I could of wronged in my entire fucking life just please, please, please release me. Release me from this hell, I beg of you. But I know nothing will hear me in the deepest moment of suffering.

How do I break you?

How?

How can I break you?

Well, you did it...

"When all this is ended my sweet Rarity, as cruel as I am, as cruel as I have done you. Remember just how much I loved you."

They all said it to my faces, I can see what they real said even to those who tried to hide. They all didn't believe me, they called me a liar. What happened to my friends? That nothing can stand tall behind me, in-front of me. The nasty foal that it is.

My friends all wear your colors, and I see your flags flies above all their doors. Every single one of them, I made sure to count them just for you. But I wish I could just smell you bleed from every orifice. You mate my unconscious body. That is how much you really loved me.

I wish I knew where you slept.

Do you doubt me traitor? I could throw your body in the river, if I had the strength and power in me.

And I don't eat, I don't sleep. I don't eat. I don't sleep.

But now I see it, right there. The rain has devoured me.

I am a pool now.

I go under.

Just like that.

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