After spending a long time reading lots of different peoples books on this wonderful site i have come to the conclusion that i find mine to be written horribly
i have decided to cancel it after lots of thought as i see the speech written as if one person is controlling everyone, rather than multiple different characters, i am also in college now and homework is pilling up
so with those reasons, this story has been canceled

Author's Note

i hope you enjoyed the story but its over now
I hope you all have amazing rest of lives
-Average_NZ_Brony