Umbra’s Journey in Equestria

by Beyond_Gold

The “Ponynapping”

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It all starts on a beautiful day in equestria. The ponies are out and about doing their daily activities.

AppleJack is at the farm bucking trees, Twilight is in Canterlot, Rainbow Dash is taking the day off, Fluttershy is tending to her animals, Rarity is working on a outfit for Sapphire Shores and spike is helping her. And Umbra is doing his own thing because no pony knows about that human.

“Oh my gosh! Sapphire Shores! The pony of pop! She is awesome! I mean she’s gorgeous and Talented…” Spike says excitedly. Rarity glares at him. “A-Not even half the pony you are. I mean you’re ten times more gorgeous and talented.” Spike says calmly.

“Spike. A lady is never jealous.” Rarity says.

As they go searching around they find some gems for the outfits they hear something snap in the nearby fauna.

“What was that?” Rarity asks nervously.

“I-I don’t know Ms. Rarity” Spike says nervously as well.

“Show yourself” Rarity says Bravely.

As Rarity says that a bipedal figure steps out and steps closer to them.

“Ms. Rarity? What are you doing up here? I’ve told you to be careful and not come up here without protection.” Umbra says

Rarity and Spike sigh in relief.

“Oh goodness. You had me nervous there Umbra. I thought you were a monster.” Rarity says.

“Who’s this little guy?” Umbra says pointing towards Spike.

“I’m Spike. I’m Twilights pet dragon.” Spike says

“Well it’s nice to meet you Spike but I’m sorry you two but I’ve got to go” Umbra says.

As Umbra starts walking away he hears something.

“Bye Umbra!” Rarity and Spike say as he walks away.

“What a kind fellow but I still don’t remember where he came from but that’s besides the point. Let’s get going Spike” Rarity says as they continue.

As the hour goes by Umbra is in ponyville chatting with the ponies as Spike comes running into town trying to grab Umbras attention as he come sprinting up to Umbra.

“Help! Rarity! Dogs! Gems! Ponynapped!” Spike says out of breath.

Umbra stands up and sets spike on his shoulder.

“Point the way!” Umbra says as he starts sprinting and vaulting over obstacles.

As spike points the way they reach the location as there are tons of holes in the ground.

“Damnit… I’m-I’m going to stop this!” Umbra says as he jumps down the hole.

But as he jumps into the hole it gets filled with dirt as all of the other holes get filled.

“No! I won’t allow it!” Umbra says as he sets Spike down and walks over a hole.
“Electric Shift!” Umbra says as the ground starts to build static and the dirt starts to get shredded from the built static.

“Stay here spike.” Umbra says as he goes down the hole.

“You got it Umbra.” Spike says as he stands guard

As Umbra jumps down he lands infront of two Diamond dogs.

“You there! How did you get here!” One of the dogs shout with their weapons ready.

“Where is she?! Where’s the pony?!” Umbra yells.

“That white one? She’s down with the chief. There’s gonna be a party tonight with her.” The diamond dog turns to his partner. And they chuckle “more like in her” they say as they break into laughter.

Umbra had a smile before it deformed into a stare.

“What!” Umbra shouts as he approaches the guards and grab one by the neck and Umbra draws his sword and stabs into the dog and dropping the corpse and pulling the sword out and slashing the other dogs gut open and his guts spill out.

“I’m going to ask you one time! Are you all going to do to her!?!!” Umbra shouts

The diamond dog uses his last breath to laugh and goes limp.

“Damnit!” Umbra says as he starts sprinting down the tunnels.

“Rarity!!! Where are you?!” Umbra shouts.
“No! I won’t allow this!” Umbra shouts again as he hears a scream. “RARITY! IM COMING!!” Umbra screams as he starts running towards the source of the scream.

“NO!! Don’t touch me you vile beast!!” Rarity screams.

“Fight back Rarity!!!” Umbra shouts.

“Umbra!! Please help me!!!” Rarity shouts.

As Umbra sprints down the hall a metal door slams shut right before he can get to Rarity.

“Damnit!!!” Umbra says as he slams his fist against the door.

“You can’t get through that door. It’s five foot thick titanium.” A diamond dog says

Umbra hears the voice and turns around and sees a giant group of diamond dogs.

“You Sick Bastards!” Umbra shouts.

“It’s life. Get with it.” A diamond dog says.

“NGH! You bastards!!” Umbra says as he clenches his fists as static electricity starts to build in the area.

“W-what’s happening?!” A diamond asks.

“Apparition!!! HAAAAAHHH!!” Umbra shouts as the air begins to become electrified and it grows in power but ends shortly after.

“Ngh. I’m out of energy…” umbra says as he falls to the ground.

“Hehehe. Easy prey.” The diamond dogs say as the laugh and cackle.

“No. It’s not over.” Umbra says as he sits up onto his knees and he starts to punch the ground. “If only I was a little more stronger!!! I’m too weak!!! NO!!” Umbra says as he stands up.

Umbra draws his sword and faces the crowd and leaps towards them but after a long fought battle he prevails 1 to 200. As he approaches the door he pulls out a flask and throws it at the door and he punches the door once the liquid spills onto the door and Umbra breaks through.

“Umbra! I thought you died!” Rarity says as Umbra approaches her.

Umbra is covered in blood but it’s hard to tell who’s it is and he approaches Rarity’s cell and frees her.

“It’ll take more to kill me. I won’t die to some dumb mutts. Now let’s get out of here Rarity.

“I’m sure it will. And your right. Let’s get out of here.” Rarity says as she starts trotting up the tunnels and Umbra follows after her.

It takes them a while but they eventually find the way out with spike waiting.

“It took you long enough! I thought you kicked the bucket. Both of you.” Spike says

“Yeah yeah I know but I kinda had to get into some fights but I really need to get cleaned up” Umbra says.

“You can come by the boutique Umbra. You can get cleaned up there and I can give you some fashion choices” Rarity says.

“Alright and Thank you Ms. Rarity” Umbra says.

And once umbra gets done talking he starts walking towards ponyville with the others behind him.

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