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Funeral Pyre

by VioletsInSpring
Tragedy besets Ponyville after an unknown monster appears. But is it really as otherworldly as it seems?

Applejack is living happily with her siblings, parents, and grandmother in Ponyville. She has good friends, Rarity and Pinkie. But tragedy eventually comes for everypony. A previously unknown monster destroys the delicate peace in Applejack's life, leaving her broken and scarred. But, surely, there isn't anything else to be done.


Written for The Whodunnit? Youdunnit! Contest, hosted by the wonderful RB_, which ends the night of October 24th (EST). Write a story yourself! Speedwrite if you have to! (Or don't; goodness knows I couldn't.) Check out the other submissions as they are posted! Also, be sure to check out RB_'s Detective Rarity series if you haven't, which is a wonderful series of fun whodunnits. I had a lot of fun reading them as they came out. (Well, the latest one, I wasn't here for the first few.)


Content warning: Death, depictions of grief, brief depictions of characters worried about early-onset Schizophrenia in Chapter 1.

Teen
Complete
Tragedy
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Death
Alternate Universe
Drama
Mystery
 
ARP

20499 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

9 Chapters:

  1. A Beautiful Summer's Day 2023-09-30 18:15:04 UTC
    1869
  2. 2023-09-30 18:15:10 UTC
    2291
  3. In The Ashes 2023-09-30 18:15:24 UTC
    3834
  4. Running Low on Fuel 2023-09-30 18:34:25 UTC
    3030
  5. Firewood (1/3) 2023-09-30 18:34:30 UTC
    1637
  6. Firewood (2/3) 2023-09-30 18:34:36 UTC
    847
  7. Firewood (3/3) 2023-09-30 18:34:41 UTC
    902
  8. Firewood (4/3?) 2023-09-30 18:34:47 UTC
    2114
  9. Snuffed 2023-09-30 18:34:51 UTC
    3975