Adding Some Good to the World

by CrimsonWolf360

Rating: mature
Tags: Twilight Sparkle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Porn, Tempest Shadow, Sex
Length: 2434

Tempest has a bit of a secret... she's a virgin. Luckily, Dusk Shine is willing to help with her problem.

Tempest and Dusk Shine have been friends for a while, their relationship going back to when they met as enemies, but as the old adage goes, 'Time heals all wounds'.

What neither of them expected, however, was for time to bring them closer together than either ever expected. Tempest being in heat certainly won't make them both make impulsive decisions and change their lives forever...

Contains: R63 Twilight, heat induced lovin', musk, heartfelt admissions, loss of virginity, and impregnation.

Art belongs to trast113

Published 2023-10-12 01:20:01 UTC
Last updated 2023-10-12 01:20:01 UTC

Chapter 1

Tempest fidgeted with her hooves as she sat on the park bench beside the famous Dusk Shine, or as she better knew him as: her only friend. Nearly four years after her attack on Canterlot and subsequent hunt for the very same stallion, leading to her ultimate betrayal at the hands of the Storm King, had passed in a blur. She still found herself thinking back to that day as if it were only a few weeks ago.

At the risk of her own life, she had dove in the way of a medusa orb, taking the hit for the lavender stallion and his friends and taking the Storm King down in one swift action. As she thought back to that day, she couldn't help but feel as if even back then she knew there was more to this stallion than a cute face and a nerdy disposition. He hadn't lost faith in her, even when she herself had.

The next thing she knew, she was freed from her stony prison and allowed to help unfreeze the princesses of Equestria, allowing them to fix the damage she'd caused and help heal Equestria. Of course, that left a serious question of whether or not she would face serious punishment for her treasonous attack on the capital, a fact that she was all too aware of as she stared down the alicorns of Equestria, ready to face her judgement. However, in much the same way she'd saved him, Dusk had leapt to her defense, arguing her defense and character.

She could recall the passionate look in his eyes as he defended her, even against his own mentor and in the face of her crimes, he still stood by her side. Perhaps it was in that moment that she felt her heart be stolen by the smallest of the alicorns, or perhaps it was all those months later when she was placed into a rehabilitation program at his behest, and eased back into the world of Equestria.

Time passed like a blur as she was reacclimated to the world of Equines she used to inhabit, and soon enough she found herself a job in the quaint little town of Ponyville. The fact that Dusk Shine just so happened to live in said town was nothing more than an incredible coincidence, at least, that's what she told herself at first. As she looked over her wither to the stallion sitting beside her, a goofy smile on his face as he read through whatever book he was interested at the time, she couldn't help but feel as if fate simply willed her into this position.

Of course, being in heat was only slightly impairing her judgement.

"Hey, Dusky. What're you reading?" Tempest asked, quirking an eyebrow.

"Hmm? Oh, just another one of Starswirl's theories on magic and the impact on Equestria's sexual culture. You'd be amazed at how many of these he wrote. I'm only on volume six and I've still got at least another dozen to go that I even know of." Dusk replied, glancing up from his book.

Tempest gave a shaky nod, before looking away, her hooves frequently tapping against each other as she subconsciously rubbed her flanks against the bench in an attempt to get some measure of relief. At her flushed face and sudden shyness, Dusk closed his book and fixed her with a slightly concerned look.

"Hey, uh... Tempy? You feeling alright?" Dusk asked, genuinely.

Tempest let out a shaky sigh as she felt Dusk's full attention on her, "Uh... y-yeah. I've just... been thinking..." She trailed off.

Come on, Tempest! You can do this! Just ask him like you've planned for months now! You chased his flank half way across the world, this should be leagues easier than that was!

"Um... thinking about what?" Dusk inquired, oblivious to the mental anguish the mulberry mare beside him was enduring.

"I... well... I think it'd be better if we talked in the castle... specifically... your room." Tempest responded, hesitantly glancing up to Dusk.

After a few moments to consider the proposal, Dusk smiled brightly and hopped off the bench, "Alrighty. Let's head back, then. It's starting to get a bit too warm out here for me anyhow." He cheerily replied, before trotting off ahead of her.

Tempest hastily jumped off of the bench and trotted after the alicorn stallion. His tail swept back and forth, the purple and magenta stripes hypnotizing her as she found her eyes glued to his flanks. Surprisingly, despite his relatively vegetative nature, Dusk's flanks were toned and bore only the thinnest layer of fat. Reasoning that it was simply good genes, or his alicorn ascension working his metabolism into overdrive, Tempest attempted to dismiss the thought, only for her eyes to fall on his coin purse, just as his tail swished out of the way.

Tempest felt her eyes bulge at the sight of his shapely purple nuts, but before she could reel herself in, she suddenly found her muzzle pressing against said testes as Dusk suddenly came to an abrupt stop just in front of her. Her forward momentum simply could not be halted in time, and she froze, her nostrils instantly flaring as she inhaled his scent.

"Woah, uh, hehe... we're here, Tempy." Dusk chuckled, stepping forward as if the contact were a typical accidental bump.

Tempest stared at Dusk for a few moments, her pupils dilating as his musky, earthy scent registered in her brain, her already heat-addled body going into overdrive at the prospect of a potential mate so close and ripe for the taking.

"Your room. Now." She ordered, before galloping up the stairs to the castle.

"Wait, Tempest! What's going... on..." Dusk trailed off, his nostrils flaring as her scent wafted past him.

Whether he wanted them to or not, Dusk couldn't help his wings snapping out to attention as the smell of a very aroused mare caught his senses. He owlishly blinked after Tempest for a moment before hastily glancing around to confirm there were no other ponies present. After quickly confirming that the scent had indeed come from his close friend, he quickly rushed into the castle after her.

Within a minute, Dusk arrived at his bedroom, already finding the door open and a heavily blushing Tempest laying on his bed, her eyes bashfully aimed at the floor.

"Tempy? Are you... okay?" Dusk asked, warily. He took a few cautious steps into the room, arriving just a few few away from the unicorn with a broken horn as she nervously fidgeted under his gaze.

"I'm fine... it's just..." Tempest trailed off, her blush intensifying slightly.

"I know it's estrus season, so if that's what's got you bothered-" Dusk began, defaulting to his scholarly lecture mode, but was quickly cut off.

"It's not that! I mean... not entirely..." Tempest asserted.

Sensing that his good friend was in need of some comfort, Dusk slowly approached the bed and laid down beside her, his brow furrowed in concern.

"Then... what is it?" He asked, softly.

"I just... I've never... been with somepony before." She sheepishly admitted.

A look of astonishment formed on Dusk's face, "I... you haven't?" He asked, with genuine surprise and curiosity.

Tempest sighed, "I ran away from home when I was just a filly. After that I just... never trusted anypony or creature enough to do something like that..." She explained.

"I feel like there's a 'but' coming here." Dusk extrapolated.

Tempest bashfully looked away, "Well... I've been meaning to say something for a while now, but... I kind of think... I'd like you to be my first... if you'd be willing to have me." She offered, her entire face burning in embarrassment.

Dusk's brow shot up in shock at her response. He may have been a particularly dense stallion when it came to amorous affairs, but even he couldn't somehow miss a direct invitation to have sex. He instantly felt his eyes pulled to her muscular body and toned flanks. Even now, with her face flushed crimson, he couldn't deny that there was always a certain level of attraction to her. Also Sunset Shimmer. Starlight Glimmer too. Maybe he just had a thing for bad mares.

Regardless of the thoughts waging war in his head, his body acted on instinct as his sinuses were flooded with Tempest's pheromones' and scent. He felt his shaft slipping from his sheath with or without his permission, all but displaying himself to the muscular and sexy unicorn laying beside him.

It took less than a moment for Tempest to notice the new musky scent of Dusk's previously sheathed cock, and her nostrils flared as she inhaled his scent, her eyes darting toward their prize and making her mouth water. With the script now flipped heavily in Tempest's favor, Dusk wasted no time in accepting her offer and lunging forward, locking his lips with hers.

The taste of cherries instantly registered on his tongue as he lustfully forced his tongue past her welcoming lips. Despite his sudden amorous assault, even Dusk knew there was no way he'd got the upper hoof on Tempest. She simply wanted him there, and she confirmed as much as she moaned into his mouth while rolling her tongue over his, tasting him just as deeply as he tasted her.

"Oh, Dusk..." Tempest breathlessly moaned between kisses.

"On your back. Now." Dusk ordered, pulling away for a brief moment.

He was pleasantly surprised to find that Tempest quickly obeyed and rolled onto her back, her hindlegs splaying out to give him unimpeded access to her nethers as her forelegs curled up at her chest. Whether she was suddenly very submissive in bed, or just simply that eager to get to the main event, he couldn't tell, but he certainly wasn't going to complain about the downright sinful view of Tempest's hastily winking clit and sopping wet marehood.

Wanting to waste absolutely no more time, Dusk crawled over Tempest and lined himself up with her dripping folds. With one last look for permission, he steadily pressed his hips forward, sheathing his cock into Tempest's moist folds one inch at a time.

"Oh... buck yes..." Tempest groaned, biting her lip as tingles of pleasure shot up her spine.

"Buck... Tempy... you're so tight." Dusk muttered, shivering in bliss as each wink of Tempest's clit kissed the top of his shaft.

Tempest's only response was a deep, throaty moan as Dusk slowly hilted inside her her, his hips connecting with hers with a meaty *plap*. He slowly withdrew his cock, each inch of retreat leaving her with a horrible empty feeling she wished to be rectified immediately. Luckily for her, Dusk was happy to oblige, and just as he reached the end of her vulva, he thrust back in, hilting in her once more.

Tempest grunted in both pain and pleasure as her hymen was broken and Dusk slowly began to pick up his pace. The pain quickly melted away to a pleasant tingling sensation that grew and grew with each thrust of his wonderful cock into her depths. The sound of flesh slapping against flesh filled the air, only to be contested by the heavy breathing and moans of the two ponies as they claimed each other in their own way.

Tempest squeezed on each thrust and relaxed on each withdraw, showing her remarkable vaginal control as she essentially milked Dusk for all he was worth. Meanwhile, Dusk made a concentrated effort to angle his hips to plow down and forward into Tempest, as he quickly found her g-spot due to her increased frequency and volume of moans. He found his pace quickly accelerating as the tension in his testes tightened and the tip of his shaft began to flare.

Tempest gasped for breath as she felt the wind knocked out of her lungs every time the stallion above her bottomed out in her velveteen folds, but with each thrust, she felt more and more of him as the flared head of his tip completely filled her pussy, hitting every nerve and fold and sending her careening toward climax.

"Oh buck... Dusk!" She cried out, her eyes an unfocused mess as she looked up to her stallion.

"Nghh... where... where do you want it?" Dusk managed, grunting in effort as he slapped his hips against hers as fast as he could.

"Inside! Please!" Tempest begged, no longer caring for how submissive or meek it made her look.

With a shaky nod, Dusk thrust even faster, quickly creeping over the edge and plunging himself into ecstasy. He hilted one final time, his cock reaching all the way to her cervix as he fired spurt after spurt of liquid fire straight into her womb, claiming her as his mare and quickly inseminating her egg with sperm.

Beneath the nerdy stallion, Tempest was driven over the edge by the feeling of his cum filling her insides, and her entire body went rigid as she silently screamed to the heavens and climaxed. Her elation was quickly doubled as Dusk darted down, locking his lips with hers and deeply kissing her as they both rode out their orgasms for nearly a minute. Tingles of pleasure and ecstasy raced up and down both of their spines while they continued to kiss, both sharing a deep passion and longing that they'd never felt before.

Eventually, Dusk finally broke the kiss and looked into Tempest's eyes, his muzzle just a few millimeters away from hers.

"So... you like me, huh?" Dusk teased.

Tempest giggled before licking Dusk's muzzle, "Just a bit."

"You know, you're probably pregnant now, right?" Dusk responded, not so subtlety glancing down at Tempest's slim belly.

A pensive look formed on her face for just a moment, only to be broken up by a warm smile, "I've taken enough good out this world... I think it's time I added something good to it instead."

Author's Note

Alright, how about that? This was a short little thing for the monthly one shot. Pretty happy with how it turned out even though I feel as if the actual sex was a bit short, but then again, the focus is more on edge horse getting book horse to realize she's into him, and working up the courage to admit to herself that she's into him. I hope that makes sense lol.

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