When Good Mares Go Bad: The Beginning

by MarilynManson<3

Rating: teen
Tags: Sex, Braeburn, Caramel, Big Macintosh, Slice of Life, Main 6, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Soarin, Spike, Romance
Length: 2214

Sugar Sprinkles is the new pony in town, and Fluttershy doesn't seem to like her. Will this end in a total tragedy or will Sugar Sprinkles win Fluttershy's lover? *UPDATE* Comment below if my story could be better and ill improve it, also I will make special request chapters.

Published 2012-01-01 20:04:24 UTC
Last updated 2012-06-01 19:31:12 UTC

New Mare in Town?!

I looked around me, everypony was looking at me, making side comments. My name is Sugar Sprinkles, my cutie mark is a music note, because I have a sweet, beautiful voice that made colts melt at the sound of it. I took off through the town to my house the princess had given me upon my arrival, it was on the ground, but air travel is faster. "It's a nice house, but I've got to put some decorations up sooner or later." I said to myself.

Fluttershy walked to the Apple farm and said to Big Macintosh, "I just saw a pony come into town, she lives near
here." "Well then, let's go meet her." Big Mac replied, his voice making Fluttershy jump a little. Fluttershy didn't want to meet the new mare that had come into town, she was afraid.

She spotted her around the center of town, wondering where she was. "There she is," She said and pointed to the brown maned pony, but when she looked over to him, he was already at the center with the mare. "Why, hello there my name is Big Macintosh, but you can call me Big Mac." I wasn't so sure about talking with this colt, but just to be nice, I did. "My name is Sugar Sprinkles, but you can call me Sugar." Big Mac just looked at me, his eyes wide. Fluttershy was looking at him from the side hearing her voice and looking at Big Mac's eyes.

Big Mac asked me if he could see where I lived so he could visit me. Fluttershy left after seeing Big Mac's eyes. "Sure." I replied, knowing he just wanted directions. He followed me and when we got there, I drew a map for him, so he would know next time. "Thanks." He said when I gave him the map,"Oh, and I'll get a map for you later."

Fluttershy paced around her cottage, mad as hell. "What if he likes her, no, what if he loves her?!?!?" She said to herself."No that won't happen, will it?" She looked at the door, heading slowly to it. "Maybe this will help..." She thought to herself while grabbing the knife on her shelf next to the door.

I headed off to the town center, seeing Fluttershy walk into the library. "I might go there later..." I thought to myself, looking at a farm. Big Mac was walking over to a tree and bucking its apples off. "Ooh, he looks hot doing that." I thought, looking at his flank. He caught me from the corner of his eye and walked over to me. "I know what you’re thinking, this is where I live by the way, and you shouldn't be thinking about that right now young missy." I did have both of those things on my mind that moment, and he just got closer to my face...

Fluttershy was talking with Twilight and the rest of the mane six. "Well it's possible he might like her more than you." Applejack said to Fluttershy after explaining the whole thing, “With what I know, he might be talking with her face right now if you know what I mean." Applejack winked at the rest of the gang. "OH MY GOSH, THAT WOULD BE TERRIBLE IF HE DID THAT TO YOU FLUTTERSHY!" Pinkie Pie yelled at the top of her voice. "That would be the worst possible thing for you darling, but I think you shouldn't worry about it that much and get your beauty rest, ok?" Rarity said to Fluttershy while walking out the door. The mane six left,Spike looked at Rarity's flank and followed her out the door, except for Fluttershy, and she asked Twilight if she could borrow some books...

Big Mac suggested that I left before it got too dark, so I wouldn't hurt myself tripping over things. I rushed to the stores with Big Mac to get the things I needed for my home makeover, Big Mac helped me lift the things home, and I helped him with the sofa. He looked around when it was done and left, without saying a word. "See ya later." I said to him, he looked back and nodded.

"The best cutting places on the pony body..." Fluttershy read to herself, Twilight hadn't even bothered to look at the covers she picked out. Fluttershy was in her cottage about now, spreading herself and books out on the floor. "Here's the one on pony relationships, I wonder if... NO WAY Fluttershy, now you're just being disgusting." She raised the knife and sliced all over herself, she knew exactly was she would do tomorrow...

Thinking about what could have happened at the farm, I took a shower to wash away the thought of me and Big Mac kissing, but I did have a big crush on him... A few minutes later, somepony was knocking on my door. "I wonder who that could be..." I thought to my myself, afraid it could be a pony killer. I opened the door... it was Applejack. She said something about watching out for the signs, whatever that means, and handed me a letter. "I think you should wait to read that..." She said to me while I was opening the letter, and I folded it again. "Good choice." She said, watching me like a hawk. She backed out the door, walking away with somepony, but the door slammed on my face before I could get a good look at him/her. "OW!" I yelled, result of door meeting nose. I shook it off and headed upstairs before I could do anything to hurt myself again.

The next morning I looked in the mirror, my nose was bruised, but not bleeding. "That's strange." I thought as somepony knocked at my door. "Hopefully I won't bang my nose again." Realizing I had shut the door on my own nose the night before.
I opened the door, and there were Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle. "You did THAT to Fluttershy?!?!?" They said in unison. "What?" I replied, not knowing this was going to be a bad scene. Fluttershy was limping next to Big Mac, cuts all over her, I stared with my mouth wide open. "You did this to Fluttershy?" He was 2 inches away from my face, a mad expression on his. "No, I wasn't anywhere near her yesterday, when I saw her, she was fine." I replied backing away from the mad ponies faces, some of them with the same expression I had on their faces.

I saw a space from them, and dashed for the door. I made it just in time, the ponies pounced on the air, and I escaped near the Everfree Forest, where Fluttershy's cottage was, and found the bloody knife and books, heading stealthy to the town, telling them to follow me back to where the truth was.

The Terrible Truth Comes Out...

I opened the door to reveal what I had previously found in her cottage, it all came pouring out from her mouth, and face. "I DIDN'T MEAN TO TELL A LIE BIG MAC HONEST!" Fluttershy yelled while tears flowed down her face."I WAS SO JEALOUS OF YOU SEEING SUGAR SPRINKLES!!!" Big Mac obviously didn't believe her and broke up with her, claiming that I was his. Everypony didn't seem to like her after losing her cool on everypony. Even Rainbow Dash never lost her cool sometimes.

Heading back to my house, I said to Big Mac. "Why in the hay would she do that?" "Because, she saw my eyes when I heard that beautiful voice of yours the other day." "Oh." I replied quietly. I felt a sudden kick on my forehoof, I looked down to see nothing, I shook my head and though it was just my imagination, then, there it was again, I looked to the side of me to see Big Mac's hoof retracting from something, me. "Big Mac, are you playing hoofsies with me?" "Yep." He replied smoothly.

Back at Fluttershy's cottage, she was on the ground, bawling her eyes out. "Ok, maybe I can get over this..." She waited for a few seconds... "NO I CAN'T GET OVER IT I STILL LOVE HIM!" She tried to run into her room, crashed into a wall, shook it off, and continued to run upstairs, still bawling. "Maybe a pomegranate will help me feel better." She said, flying out of her window and picking one off of her tree. It would keep her occupied for a while.

"Why do we have to!?" Exclaimed Rainbow Dash as Pinkie Pie was planning a party with her. "Because, she's still new, AND I LOVE THROWING PARTIES!!!" She exclaimed while picking up the invitations, and heading out the door, "Plus, I might get her married..." Falling flat on her face, tripping over a rock.

Back at my house, I received the party invitation for getting together with Big Mac. Applejack had a smile on her face, though she wouldn't know how Fluttershy would act to this. When we arrived at the party, Big Mac was grinning, showing off his pretty, new girlfriend. "WOW!" Said the other colts, staring at the cute couple. "There so perfect for each other." Rarity said. "But I must make her dresses later, OH MAYBE SHE WILL LET ME PLAN HER WEDDING DRESS TOO!" She thought to her self.

Excitement was taking over town, this would be the most spectacular party Pinkie Pie had thrown yet. She jumped on the boom-box thingy, and a awesome hip-hop song started playing. "Okey-dokey-lokey everypony, let's get our groove thangs on!" She jumped over to a colt and spun around him. "YEE-HAW!" Applejack yelled as she ran past everypony, swinging her favorite rope. "OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH!" Rainbow Dash squealed as Soarin past by her screaming at the top of his lungs, "RAINBOW DASH, BE MY MAREFREIND!" Soarin grabbed her hoof and flew back to her house, having whispered something into her ear softly.

Pinkie Pie was hopping along, singing the pony pokie. "Ya put your left hoof in, ya put left hoof out, ya put your left hoof in and ya shake it all about, ya do the pony pokie and ya turn your self around, that's what it's all about!" She did the rest, afterwards, humming and doing the dance. Rarity came up to me and gave me a look, the, "I'm so happy I could explode!" ,kind of look. "Why so happy, Rarity?" Big Mac said. Her look snapped from the look earlier to, "OMG WHAT!?" A kind of look everypony knows. She ran off to her house, having so many ideas rushing through her head.

Fluttershy was walking through the dark streets of Sugar Cube Corner. it smelled like alcohol and cupcakes. "That's funny, Pinkie Pie doesn't drink..." Fluttershy thought to herself as she took another big breath and entered the party.

Bottles and bottles of scotch and whiskey covered the floor with part of the liquid still in them. Everypony was stumbling around the room, Pinkie Pie bought the alcohol and saved it for a special occasion like this pony's party. Big Mac and me were dancing, still sober, but drinking a bottle of whiskey together. Caramel was by Fluttershy.

"How many times will I fail to ask her to go out with me? The first few times I found out she was dating Big Mac, he would've killed me. So, IT'S NOW OR NEVER!" He thought as he walked slowly towards her, his heart pounding, he was wondering if she would burst out crying if he had asked her two hours ago. No one minded that she was at the party, they had forgave her after a while, and that posting of the pomegranate covered Fluttershy picture. Very sexy. He tapped her with his hoof on her skinny bodice. She screamed quietly and turned around.

"F-Fluttershy?" Caramel shyly asked. "Yes, Caramel?" Fluttershy said with a caring voice. "W-Will you- *gulp* -be my marefriend?" Fluttershy thought for a while, his eyes on hers, their eyes met. "YES!" Fluttershy screamed louder than usual.

"Mac, will you excuse me for a second?" I said still sober, I walked past all the drunk ponies on the floor, sprawled out like meatballs on spaghetti. I went into the bathroom and opened the letter Applejack had given me that one day.

Dear Sugar Sprinkles,
I'm happy to say that Big Mac likes you, and I said 'Watch out for the signs' that meant that Big Mac will try to make the
MEGA move before proposing, kiss and then rape. the first signs are,

1. he will sit on the floor and stare at it
2. he will not eat or drink until you do.
3. he will read you a bed time story and then climb in with you to rape you.

He told me to write these warnings so you can avoid the rape.

-Applejack.

I thought to myself "Oh my..." I walked out of the bathroom and the party was over. "Oh well, at least the drunks are gone." I walked home and threw the note on my desk, I walked to my bathroom, took a shower, brushed my teeth, put on my robe, then went to bed.