Little Dusk Shine’s Big Adventure
Chapter 6: An After Party with Dusk’s New Girlfriends
Previous ChapterNext ChapterTrue to her word, Pinkie threw an absolutely fabulous celebration in the town square, where all were free to attend and greet their new queen. Any connections to the recent terroristic threats were glossed over in favor of cake and ice cream.
Barb, having finally recovered, stampeded through the crowd to retrieve her Dusk, whom Rarity tactically tossed in the air to avoid being trampled. After catching him, the drake suddenly resembled a serpent as she seemingly tried constricting the life out of her stallion brother, but Dusk appeared unbothered and let her do her thing.
“You’re filthy,” Barb observed. “What happened, and why is Nightmare Moon suddenly a lot smaller?”
“Iiii am still not clear on the second part,” Dusk admitted. “I’ll tell you the details later, but for now, let’s just say we saved the day.”
“We?”
Dusk gestured to the five mares he’d met in Ponyville. “Barb, I’d like to introduce you to my… girlfriends?” They nodded. “Yeah, these are my new girlfriends, Pinkie, Fluttershy, and—Gah!” he gagged as the drake’s grip tightened.
“Girlfriends? You mean you finally met some ponies you really like?”
“Well, they’ve been talking almost nonstop about the things they want to do with me, and I don’t hate it,” Dusk admitted. Then, on noticing Barb’s happy eyes suddenly droop in slight sadness, he added, “Yeah, it looks like it’s gonna be the seven of us for a while.”
Barb blinked. “Seven?” And she quickly counted the six ponies before her scales fluttered in excitement. “Seven!?”
“It was the only way to get Fluttershy to agree,” Dusk joked. “Also, I apparently need energy drinks to satisfy three of my five pony girlfriends.”
“Ha!” Barb laughed in her throat.
The party continued in relative peace with ponies mingling, asking questions of the new alicorn, and a few were even brave enough to approach Dusk’s group.
One notable case occurred as the festivities began winding down and ponies began leaving. Big Mac approached with calm serenity, unperturbed by the toothy reptile, as he witnessed his younger yet bigger sister bunched up with a bunch of oddballs. “Ya’ll together?” he asked succinctly.
“E’yup,” AJ replied, imitating her brother’s deep baritone.
Big Mac nodded. “Good. See ya’ll at dinner.” And he left.
“A stallion of few words,” Barb observed with a mild chuckle.
“I like him,” Dusk stated as he sat in Barb’s claw, having not left her possessive clutches since the celebration began. It was a little like a booster seat that put him at eye level with his new girlfriends. “Whoa, girlfriends. I never thought I’d see the day,” he admitted. “So, uh, h-how do we do this?”
“To clarify, we’re staying in Ponyville?” Barb asked.
Dusk nodded. “Celestia okayed it. She gave me an assignment to study the magic of friendship, which I know sounds like a bullshit, do-nothing job, but I think she might be onto something. Friendship was what activated the Elements, after all.”
“Where are the Elements, anyway?”
“Celestia sent them to Canterlot for safety,” Dusk replied. “Now, back to my initial question about girlfriends…”
“Do you really not know?” Rainbow inquired. “Didn’t you have, like, siblings who showed you the ropes?”
“This guy has had his nose in a book for as far back as I can remember, with next to zero interest in girls or even friends,” Barb answered. It might have been wrong, but seeing Dusk wither under the mares’ disapproving glares made the drake a little happy, as it meant the little guy actually cared what they thought.
“Well, there are no set rules, per se,” Rarity began. “Dating is more a matter of experience than scholarly pursuit, so I’d better not catch you reading a how-to guide while we’re having dinner at a fancy restaurant.”
Barb snickered. “That’s totally something he’d do.”
“Well, um, not to be rude, but it’s a little easier for the stallion,” Fluttershy quietly added. “You just have to sit back and let us show you a good time. For example, I enjoy starting my mornings with a refreshing nature walk. You should absolutely join me!”
“Okay, no harm in trying,” Dusk allowed.
“And, if you get tired, I could always… carry you,” Fluttershy added while sitting up and rubbing her exposed tummy, blushing. “Obviously, you’re more than welcome to join us, Barb. Although, sorry, but I’m not sure there’s much I can do if you get tired.”
“Hey, no worries. If worse comes to worst, I’ll just sit on both of you ‘til I feel like moving,” Barb assured with a toothy grin.
“Hah, I like this one!” Rainbow said to AJ while gesturing at Barb, only to face her directly. “Also, we’d talked about this last night, but do we have to get your permission, like, every time we wanna do something with Dusk?”
Barb wobbled her head as she thought. “I’d prefer it, but I guess it’d be fine for something small, like a walk in the park. Anything more than that, and you might trigger my draconic greed, and I won’t be held responsible for anything that might happen, especially not any heads shoved up butts.”
Rainbow pointed fervently at Barb and proclaimed, “Challenge accepted!” And everyone laughed.
“Okay, I think I’m getting a grasp for the rules,” Dusk said. “Although, I’ve got one issue. Just because I’m a stallion doesn’t mean I’m deadweight. If you guys need help, I want you to ask.”
“No offense, but Barb’s not the only one who could take you out by sitting on you,” Pinkie informed, wiggling her enormous rump. “What can you do, anyway? She asked, knowing that fancy title isn’t just for show, and she just wants to see her future hubby do some tricks,” Pinkie stated, beaming in anticipation.
Seeing Barb shrug, Dusk decided to give the lady what she wanted. Without leaving the drake’s clutches, the small stallion lit his horn and began packing up the party supplies in areas where ponies had already gone. It had taken Pinkie roughly two hours to set everything up, and would have probably required thirty ponies twice as long to clean it all. However, thanks to Dusk’s magic, every unoccupied bench was folded, every discarded piece of trash tossed in the appropriate receptacle, and every forgotten item of importance returned to its proper owner. By the end, the party was clean, and only Dusk’s group remained as he lay down in Barb’s grasp.
“Okay, I cannot be the only pony wondering what kind of sex spells you know,” Pinkie stated, eyes still wide in awe.
“None,” Barb answered, setting Dusk on her back as she began the trek home to the treebrary, the others following around her. Holding her head high, she proudly informed, “He’s been quite satisfied with just me.”
“Yo, that challenge is still in place,” Rainbow reminded as she hovered above the drake and stallion. “Seriously, though, nothing?”
“Not all unicorns are experts in kink,” Rarity stated. “In fact, most of what I do can be chalked up to simple levitation, not actually any spells specifically for sex.”
“That’s jus’ fine with me. Keep it all natural where possible, Ah say,” AJ remarked. “Though, so long as it ain’t technically sex-specific, there any spells ta keep the li’l guy stiff?”
Intrigued, the corner of Rarity’s mouth curled upward. “Which part of him?”
“The whole thing. Ah wanna try usin’ his body like a double dildo with one ‘f yawl.”
“Tsk-tsk, darling. Such limited imagination,” Rarity gently chided. “Why share him with only one lover when he has four limbs and a head?”
“Ohhh, good idea,” Fluttershy excitedly praised. “You always have the best ideas, Rarity.”
“Thank you, darling. But, yes, it’s true.”
“I think you miscounted,” Barb informed with a grin. “Dusk has four legs, a head, and his fifth leg, so that’s one for all of us at once. Also, Dusk definitely knows a spell for that.” She then added, “Sound good, Dusky-Wusky? You ready to be a six-way sex toy?”
“Uh… c-could we put a rain check on that?” Dusk nervously requested. “I don’t want to disappoint anyone, b-but that sounds like a little much for me.”
“Which is a major thing fer the stallion in a relationship,” AJ stated. “Ya gotta be sure ta tell us yer limits so we don’t end up traumatizin’ ya.”
“Hey, I may be small, but don’t forget I’m still an adult,” Dusk asserted. “I’m not some delicate little colt who needs coddling.”
“So yawl’d be fine if Ah bring out the strap-on Big Mac likes me ta use sometimes?”
Dusk blinked and averted his gaze from the honest question. “Okay, so I might be a little delicate.”
“Darn,” Pinkie huffed and kicked the dirt in disappointment.
Finally, the seven returned to the treebrary. Barb led the way and opened the door, gesturing the others inside before escorting them upstairs to her and Dusk’s room.
“Uh, Barb, why is everyone here?” Dusk asked as his familiar set him in the bed’s center, right in the middle of the assembled ladies eyeing him up like a piece of meat.
“Because you little perverts have been talking about sex almost nonstop since the party started, I can smell the horny, and it’s driving me nuts. So, we’re dealing with this right here, right now.”
Dusk gulped as his eyes scanned from one mare to the next, feeling his pulse quicken as their desire grew almost palpable. Despite seeing them start giggling, he noted how other things had grown, and reflexively covered himself.
“Darlin’, we’ve all seen it. Why so shy?” AJ asked, grinning at the stallion’s cute reactions.
“J-just nervous, I guess.” Dusk gulped again. “I-I’ve n-never done this b-before.”
Frowning, Rarity glanced from Dusk to the drake. “Really? He’s never been with another pony?”
“Just his moms and sisters, but nothing too major. He’s gone the furthest with me,” Barb explained, low-key bragging.
“Ya don’t say.” Rainbow crawled atop the bed, stalking around Dusk and teasing his muzzle with her tail. “So, you’ve never mounted a mare’s butt and held on for dear life?” When the stallion shook his head, the mare’s grin split her face. “Whoa, you really are a virgin, then,” she realized, licking her lips.
Dusk winced and pulled away, but his ears didn’t splay, and his tail didn’t retract. So, while he was nervous, his body language confirmed that he was willing.
“Well, then you’re going to need a mare’s expert guidance to show you what’s what,” Rarity decided as she grabbed Rainbow’s mane and pulled her into an open-mouthed kiss. The pegasus’ surprise was short-lived as she quickly retaliated, wrapping her hooves around the white mare’s neck while overpowering her tongue. Pleased by this, Rarity pulled away just enough for their lips to part, so Dusk had a clear view of their dancing oral appendages.
“Ohhh, look at how their tummies grind together,” Pinkie informed while pointing. “See that? Their nipples got hard after their teats started smashing together. You ever played with a mare’s teats, Dusky?” When Dusk silently shook his head, unable to tear his eyes away now that he’d noticed, Pinkie addressed the other out-of-towner. “What about you, Barbie? Any teat action?”
“Uh, I know the basics,” Barb answered uncertainly, going wide-eyed when the pink mare plopped on her back before the drake, front legs curled up, back legs spread, and exposing a round tummy that tyrannically demanded rubbies despite its owner’s cutesy expression.
“Wanna show me?” Pinkie squeaked, shaking her hips to make her teats wobble.
Licking her lips, Barb reached for the pink masses. Her claws could easily eclipse the mounds, yet that did nothing to diminish how good they felt in her grasp. “S-so soft,” she marveled as she began playing. The drake squished and rolled the bulbs in her grip, loving how the sharp nipples stabbed into her palms. Wetting her suddenly dry mouth, Barb added, “Whoa, these are a lot bigger than I’m used to.”
“You’re welcome,” Pinkie replied, eyes closed as she moaned and squirmed. “B-but don’t just rub. Can’t those claws do anything else?”
“Sure can,” Barb confirmed, grinning as her palms slipped off, only for her fingers to linger and snatch up the nipples, fiercely pinching them.
“Ngh!” Pinkie cried. “H-harder!”
“Hey, if we’re doin’ education, then we can’t ignore the most important part,” AJ declared, making Fluttershy squeak when an orange arm wrapped around her yellow middle. AJ then flipped the pegasus around and pushed her head down, though the pink tail flipped up on its own. Smirking at this, AJ faced the nearly overwhelmed stallion and said, “A mare without class jus’ sits on a stallion ‘til she’s done, ‘n a stallion who don’t know better jus’ lets her. But, if yer wantin’ ta prove yer more ‘an jus’ a toy, then ya gotta put that purty mouth ta work.” Adjusting Fluttershy to ensure Dusk had the best view, AJ spread the yellow mare’s bountiful ass cheeks to reveal her tight pink pucker and dripping pink slit. “Tell me ya at least did some ‘f this,” AJ requested, looking at Barb as her hoof gently rubbed Fluttershy’s marehood.
Barb paused her licking around the pink teats to look up, triggering a disappointed whine from Pinkie. “Yeah, we did. Tell ‘em, Dusky.”
Dusk’s erection had swollen to a painful aching as it pulsed between his legs. He could hardly decide which pair more deserved his attention as he tried processing the words. “I-I kn-know a little about m-mouth stuff,” Dusk stammered as he swallowed, hoof on his cock as he watched Rarity really get into it with Rainbow. The mares’ hooves had grown as persistent as their tongues, exploring one another’s bodies with fervent desire, mostly between their stomachs. “I-I know about the, um, th-the clitoris, a-and how Barb likes it,” he added as he shifted his attention to her. The drake’s lips had parted to begin suckling from the nipples like a newborn foal, making Pinkie thrash and wail in pleasure while Dusk felt his mouth run dry. “J-just like that, actually. Barb l-likes it when I s-swirl my tongue a-and g-get deep.”
“What about this part?” AJ asked, half her face pressing against Fluttershy’s compressed ass cheek so her nose was up against the mare’s drooling nether lips. Lightly licking the honey and humming in delight, her hoof migrated north to prod her helpless lover’s anus, eliciting another adorable squeak. “Ya ever get down ‘n dirty down here?”
“S-sometimes,” Dusk admitted. “Barb is so big, s-so I have to grab her tail.”
“Ngh, I wanna see that,” Fluttershy moaned. “Her tail’s base is even thicker than you, and she’s definitely too tall for your hooves to reach the ground. That sounds s-so haaaught!”
“It fucking is,” Barb confirmed, breathing heavily to assault Pinkie’s sensitive middle with her hot breath. “S-sometimes I get a mirror to watch him work. He makes the cutest faces when he’s determined,” she explained while rubbing Pinkie’s adorably rounded belly with her nose. “It’s the only time he gets more focused than when he’s reading. Of course, there’s no point in a mirror when he mounts my pussy.”
“T-tell us!” Rainbow demanded, momentarily breaking from the kiss before Rarity pulled her back.
“B-Barb’s butt is t-too big,” Dusk stammered, licking his lips as he brought both hooves to his shaft. “I-I know a stallion mounting a mare isn’t supposed to touch the ground. It, uh, i-it’s s-supposed to be s-sexier to show off the size difference, b-but I can’t get a good angle fr-from up there. M-maybe if her butt’s on the ground, I c-can get some leverage, b-but sh-she—”
“I spread my ass!” Barb declared, transferring one claw from Pinkie’s nipple to her winking marehood, while the other shoved a finger in the mare’s mouth like a pacifier, which she happily suckled. “I can’t help it. I pull my cheeks apart, and he fits like a glove, nose wedge right up against my pucker in a full-body butt job.”
It was Rarity’s turn to break the kiss. “D-does he—Agh!?” she cried, unable to finish the question when Rainbow spanked her to make that white plot jiggle.
“Oh, yeah. He knows how to work his tongue on a butthole,” Barb confirmed as her nose trailed up along Pinkie’s stomach, hot breath sending ripples across the pink fur before finally arriving at the mare’s lips. She waited for her lover to open her eyes and smile before snatching those lips in a brief kiss. “Course, he’s a little too good, and I can’t stand it for long,” she added while Pinkie bravely navigated the drake’s sharp teeth to grab her tongue.
“Ya sit on ‘im, don’t ya,” AJ guessed, her free hoof between her legs while her mouth and other hoof attended Fluttershy’s slit and anus, respectively. “Jus’ hearin’ ya talk about it, Ah can’t see anythin’ else happenin’.”
“Got it in one.”
“Nope!” Rarity cut in, her magic slapping Dusk’s hoof from his cock. “Sorry, darling, but you were almost ready to burst, and that’s just poor form.”
“I-it is?” Dusk questioned, panting while slightly offended at being cock-blocked.
“Oh, definitely,” Rainbow agreed, untangling from Rarity as both mares approached the confused stallion. Looming tall over the little guy as they circled him like hungry lions, she added, “Warming up is one thing, but since you’re our stallion, your dick and everything in it belongs to us. That means no blowing your load without our say-so, and especially not by yourself.”
Dusk’s expression strained as his groin ached with need while he processed this new rule. “This never came up with Barb,” he grunted in frustration. “Th-then again, it had kinda gone without saying that finishing in her was the only polite course. I never even needed to masturbate until now because Barb took such good care of me.” Noting the drake’s appreciative smile, he continued. “However, the more I think about it, the more this rule makes sense. Stallions belonged to mares,” he reluctantly conceded. “That’s just how it is, so it made sense that intercourse would include rules that further subjugated the males to the females. Then again, if I had to choose, I’d be lying if I said finishing inside one of my sexy lovers wasn’t the more preferable option. However, I’d have still liked it to be a choice.”
“Then let’s do that,” AJ said with husky breathing. Releasing Fluttershy, she closed the distance and gently pushed Dusk’s chest until he fell to his back. “Ah ain’t gonna lie. Thinkin’ ‘bout mah stallion wastin’ his seed on nothin’ gets mah tail in a knot.” She scooted forward until her marehood hovered directly above the pulsing spear, her ass ready to drop as she stared down at her anxious lover. “But Ah want ya ta want ta do what’s right. So, make the choice. Ah ain’t half bad at butt jobs, so Ah can finish ya that way. Or, ya can choose the way we both know will be best,” she finished, almost nose-to-nose with the smaller pony beneath her.
“Shit, why is that so hot?” Rainbow demanded, her face beside Dusk as she awaited her chance to steal his lips the moment AJ gave her room.
“Because, despite all appearances, Apple Jack knows a lady’s etiquette,” Rarity answered as she sat tall and guided Dusk's hoof to an inch from her twat, letting him decide to close the remaining distance.
“Thanks, Ah guess,” AJ allowed at what almost sounded like a backhanded compliment. However, she was distracted from her ire when she felt movement behind her. Fluttershy kept her chin to the sheets as she zeroed in on Dusk’s balls. The look she gave AJ confirmed that she’d wait until they started, but her swishing tail betrayed her impatience. So, the orange mare grinned and resumed staring at the stallion beneath her. “We want ya, Dusk. ‘N Ah think ya like bein’ wanted.”
Too overwhelmed to move his facial muscles, Dusk noted the almost claustrophobic walls of mare bodies surrounding him. They wreaked of sex and mild sweat, and their combined radiating heat made him feel like he was inside a dry stomach. However, no matter how much he looked into AJ’s eyes, he could find no trace of scheming. There was an utter lack of intent to use him for some grand ploy to advance an agenda. All she wanted was him, and the same went for the others. Having Barb around was also a comfort, as her presence further reassured him that this was more than mere politicking. Finally, realizing that he’d been stuck in his head for too long, Dusk nodded.
AJ dropped her butt faster than she’d intended, hilting Dusk’s cock to the base in one go. His shaft went deep, not as deep as her brother’s, but still pretty damn deep, and it even left a slight bulge in her tummy. AJ clenched her jaw and sucked in a hissing breath as she felt the male’s girth stretch her insides. However, the faint stinging quickly morphed into divine pleasure, further amplified when she wiggled her hips. Both the mare and stallion moaned from the friction, stimulating their most sensitive parts until they finally locked eyes. “Ya ready ta start?”
Dusk groaned. It was hard to not compare AJ to Barb. She was lighter, and her insides weren’t as hot, yet there was a rightness to the way their parts fit so perfectly. Even so, Dusk was further distracted when it seemed the others had assumed they’d already begun. Rainbow started licking the corner of his mouth before slowly turning his head to face her. Her tongue breached his lips with overpowering force and utterly dominated his smaller appendage. She tasted differently from Barb, but not unpleasantly, almost sweeter, and the lack of sharp teeth wasn’t unwelcome, either. Rarity’s wet sex descended upon Dusk’s hoof, enveloping his frog with little effort as she moaned, sliding closer as she pulled him deeper. He watched the white mare’s teats bounce as she bucked, yanking his shoulder as she seemed determined to swallow his entire limb with her lower lips. The swishing pink tail behind AJ confirmed that Fluttershy’s tongue was on his balls as her nose buried between where his base met the farmer’s spread vulva. Her melodious humming was difficult to distinguish over the myriad of moans and wet squishes that filled the room, but was a welcomingly sweet sound to enhance everything else. Likewise, AJ had an involuntary physical response as her marehood winked, gripping Dusk’s length with an upward massage that encouraged him to thrust. However, even amidst so many overwhelming sensations, and despite having never done this before, Dusk hesitated to answer, feeling that something was off.
“Aww, were you waiting for me?” Pinkie inquired as she came into view and plopped her butt between Rarity and AJ. Dusk could only watch with one eye as Rainbow kept hold of his head, but he saw her happy grin morph into a lustful craving as she grabbed his hind leg. Licking her lips, she sampled her treat. Surprisingly, her broad tongue wasn’t ticklish, so she repeated the action. Each time, her mouth dropped further down his appendage, swallowing his limb similar to Rarity, only to pull back as though fellating a cock. “Yeah, I just found my new favorite treat,” she said with an appreciative lip lick.
“You doing alright in there?” Barb asked, her large head hovering directly above the tall cage of pony bodies. “Heh, that’s a good look for you.”
Dusk finally found his voice. “Y-you’re, uh, n-not j-joining?” he asked, mostly to be polite, as he dreaded feeling another body atop his small form. He then winced when AJ added a hip twist to her winking, clearly encouraging him to put his money where his mouth was and start participating as more than a toy.
“Nah, I’ll let the newbies have their fun,” Barb allowed. “Besides, after all these years of resisting, it’s good to see you’ve finally learned your place in the world,” she said with a shit-eating grin.
Dusk narrowed his eyes at the large predator. “I’m going to remember this.”
“Speakin’ ‘f rememberin’, Ah’m pretty sure Ah said Ah’d smack the shit out ‘f ya fer gettin’ down on yerself,” informed AJ as she twisted her hips again. Not seeing Barb’s WTF expression, she elaborated with a hip wiggle, “Ah didn’t say it’d be with mah hoof, though. So, ya ready?”
“I, y-yes,” Dusk croaked, finally signaling the others to start. And boy, what a start, as their initial actions seemed like merely a prelude.
AJ started by raising her butt until only the last inch of Dusk’s shaft remained inside her, and she dropped with a bed-shaking force that made the stallion grunt. It wasn’t long before the mare found a rhythm, showing off her expertise by alternating between drawn-out ascensions and swift drops. Sitting on her back knees, she pressed one hoof to her tummy to show Dusk the bulge he made.
Dusk didn’t know how it happened, but Rainbow Dash lived up to her boast as the fastest in town. He’d closed his eyes to blink, breaking contact with the world for only a fraction of a second. And when his eyes next opened, the blue face he’d been smooching had switched out for a different set of lips. Rainbow’s pussy winked around Dusk’s nose as her hoof pushed on the back of his head, tickling her crotch boobs with his ears. She crowed like a rooster for him to ‘do his thing,’ so he did. The stallion extended his tongue and tasted the mare’s vaginal walls, finding her nectar surprisingly spicy as she humped his face.
“Excellent move, darling,” Rarity praised, having finally consumed Dusk’s entire arm with her snatch. One hoof touched his frog through her tummy, letting him know how deeply he’d gone, while her vaginal walls pulled and massaged his limb. “I’ll admit, I was enjoying seeing you dominate little Dusky’s mouth, and while I’m sorry to see that stop, I can’t be upset at such skill.”
“Ha! You know it, babe,” Rainbow cheered as she lunged forward, stealing Rarity’s lips. “Ya wanna taste?”
Rarity nodded and returned the kiss, casting Dusk in shadow as the mares made out while riding him. Barb had to crane her long neck in search of a hole to watch through, but didn’t seem to mind. After all, Dusk saw her shoulder move in a manner that couldn’t be mistaken for much else. It further annoyed the stallion when he realized Barb wanted him to see, to know that she was masturbating while he was denied the privilege. She might have been his familiar, but she was also like his sister, meaning she had a moral obligation to be a pain whenever it suited her.
Pinkie’s extreme was also fairly straightforward. She’d only pulled Dusk’s hoof in her mouth up to his ankle at first. However, she now felt free to demonstrate her skills and drop her lips to Dusk’s lower knee joint. She only swallowed afterward to show off that she hadn’t until then, her throat muscles pulling his limb into her darkest depths while her tongue savored his flavor. Pinkie never stopped moaning as she rose and fell, dropping a little further each time, her tongue ever exploring her stallion’s tasty limb. She couldn’t wait to have all of him inside her, curled up safe and warm, as she felt his mild weight hang from her middle. All mares loved swallowing stallions, but Pinkie enjoyed eating ponies of all sorts, even gulping down some of the larger mares just because she felt like it. All tasted delicious and felt divine as they wiggled against her tingly insides. And even though Dusk was on the small side, she already knew he’d be a special case, because he was more than just a friend; he was hers. Technically, all seven of them belonged to each other. So, while Pinkie loved the idea of sharing with her new wives, and she didn’t mind how Barb basically got first dibs on the little guy in all circumstances, deep down, her instincts still compelled her to view Dusk Shine as hers, and she couldn’t wait to act on that fact.
That just left Fluttershy, who wasted no time in engulfing Dusk’s balls in her mouth. They were bigger than most stallion’s testicles, suggesting he was from strong stock and could produce many healthy foals once she was ready. The orbs were also pleasantly round as she rolled them across her tongue, moaning as their flavor washed across her taste buds. The experience was enhanced each time AJ dropped down and splashed a little fem-cum on the scene below, which Fluttershy eagerly licked up to blend the flavors into something magnificent. Her tummy rumbled as she imagined taking things a step further, but she hurriedly quelled those desires. Dusk was still a novice, and it would take time before he was ready to satisfy all her cravings. However, figuring there was nothing wrong with a teaser, Fluttershy abandoned her stallion’s testicles, nosed under his butt, pushed his hind legs back a little, and engulfed his cheeks in her maw. She’d always loved eating the butts first, especially with small stallions. Everyone had previously praised the sounds she made, but for Fluttershy, nothing beat the music of a foal with her tongue probing his anus, which she demonstrated, making Rainbow shudder from the vibrations.
If Dusk’s brain hadn’t gone white-hot with pleasure, he might have considered going one at a time with his lovers would have been preferable to a gangbang for his first time. However, because he was too overwhelmed with sexual bliss to think straight, he had no choice but to go with the flow. He moved his muzzle as deeply as he could within Rainbow’s sex, wiggled his limbs in ways that Rarity and Pinkie seemed to like, thrust his hips to match AJ’s rhythm, and relaxed his anus so Fluttershy could explore to her heart’s content. And while he didn’t know why he held eye contact with Barb throughout this ordeal, it still seemed important that he never look away, so he did what made her happy. She might have been a young dragon, but in Dusk’s sex-addled mind right now, she was a mare, and generations of social conditioning (apparently mixed with powerful magic) compelled the stallion to make his mare happy. That she was also his familiar was less than an afterthought.
Finally, as if by magic, it all happened at once. The mares, stallion, and drake orgasmed. Rarity and Rainbow gushed over Dusk’s shoulder and face, respectively, covering him in their sex juices as they climactically cried into each other’s mouths. Pinkie and Fluttershy had been too fixated on their oral work to attend to their pussies, but that didn’t stop them from bursting all over the sheets and down their thighs. As the only pony with a free mouth, AJ’s jaw dropped in a silent scream as she felt Dusk shoot his massive load directly into her cervix. It was hot, thick, and wouldn’t stop. She glanced down, slightly worried, when she saw the swelling in her middle continue growing. However, being filled with such a powerful climax also felt incredible, nothing like her brother or any other male she’d taken. Then again, that should have been obvious, as Dusk wasn’t just any other male. He was hers. That just left Barb as the odd one out, yet still feeling connected as she watched the rapture play out across everyone’s faces. Her heart soared, and her pussy’s dam broke as she watched Dusk’s visible eye roll into the back of his head. The pleasure had taken him, and he hadn’t fought back. He’d given himself fully to the moment and these mares, just as Barb’s mothers promised would one day happen, and it made the drake happy beyond measure to have shared in this moment.
Alas, Dusk hadn’t been able to bask in the moment for long, as he soon passed out. Having so many mares at once for his first time might not have been the best idea, but he’d hardly call it a mistake. While he’d never been dissatisfied with Barb, being with ponies like this filled a hole that he never realized had been vacant. In the brief span between his overwhelming orgasm and his loss of consciousness, Dusk pondered that, of course, these mares weren’t a replacement for his favorite drake, but an addition to his life. While admittedly apprehensive in their first meetings, Dusk had grown fond of the mares over their short time together. And although the thought of spending more time with them and breaking from his routines was frightening, it also excited the small stallion in ways that had only been matched by the announcements of new books in his favorite series.
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Meanwhile, back in Canterlot…
“I’m-sorry-I’m-sorry-I’m-sorry!” cried the tall pink alicorn as she held Luna’s motionless body in her forelegs. Eyes darting desperately between the blue mare and her white sister, the pink mare pleaded, “I-I wasn’t thinking. Sh-she was so cute, and an alicorn, a-a-and I couldn’t help myself. Then I grabbed her, and then there was a snap, and now she’s not moving. What do I do?” begged the pink mare as she looked around the assembled ponies who stared at her in various states of shock, with most unable to meet her eyes. When none were willing to offer any help, she turned to the one pony she hoped could make everything alright. “Shiny, please.”
A white stallion with a blue mane and a shield on his flanks approached. He was tall for a male, roughly as large as Big Mac, and with just as bulky a frame despite being a unicorn. Standing stoically in his golden armor, the stallion extended a hoof up to Luna’s neck to check her vitals. “Yup, no pulse,” he dryly stated, noting how Celestia buried her face in her hoof.
“N-no pulse!?” screamed the pink alicorn as her own heart threatened to burst from her chest. “Shining, please, you can’t be serious.”
“I’m one of the few ponies here who is serious,” Shining deadpanned to the pink mare’s confusion. “Cady, please, I know you’re smarter than this. See for yourself,” he finished by lighting his horn without casting a spell.
Taking the hint, the pink alicorn cast a sequence of medical diagnosis spells on the immobile mare. One of the first things she found was that Luna’s pulse hadn’t stopped. Instead, it had merely been slowed to almost imperceptible levels by what she realized was a kind of meditation. There was no sign of damage to the smaller mare’s spine, and now that she’d quieted enough to hear herself think, the pink mare also heard snorts, sniffles, and… barely restrained chuckles. Snapping her head in a double-take, it finally clicked in Princess Cadence’s head when Shining Armor nodded at her.
“Bitch!” Cadence growled as she threw Luna to the ground with enough force to crack the tile.
“Ow! There’s no need to be rough,” Luna whined, rubbing the back of her head after miraculously returning to life. “It was just a joke.”
“A joke? I thought I’d killed you!”
Luna rolled her eyes as she stood and smirked. “My, somepony has a high opinion of herself.”
A thud drew Cadence’s attention to Celestia, who had buried her face into the floor like an ostrich to unleash a torrent of guffaws and deep belly laughs. Shuddering in horror as she made a second realization, Princess Cadence looked between the queens of the sun and moon and declared, “Two. We now have… two.”
Rolling his eyes, Shining approached the newest and most naked of the alicorns, and saluted. “Queen Luna, I am Shining Armor, Captain of the Canterlot Royal Guard. It is my honor to meet and serve you.”
“A stallion as captain?” Luna questioned as her eyes trailed across his form. He certainly didn’t look half bad in that armor, even with a physique that matched what used to be a male teenager. He had no collar, but a faint scent drew Luna’s attention from Shining to her would-be killer, and she raised an accusatory eyebrow.
“Shining earned his position strictly through merit,” Cadence asserted defensively. “Do you honestly think anypony would follow him if he was promoted through fraternization with royalty? Maybe that’s how you did it in the old days, but modern times have adopted more civilized standards.”
Luna nodded and faced Celestia, who’d finally come up for air. “This is the adopted daughter you were telling me about? She’s more spirited than you’d led me to believe.” Facing a fuming Cadence once more, Luna stated, “I like it.”
Shining nodded to Cadence. “Princess, I believed you wished to ask about Dusk.”
“Oh, quit using your booty call as a proxy and just ask, yourself,” Celestia huffed. “Honestly, it’s always protocol with you.”
“Only when I’m on duty,” Shining corrected. “However, if you must know, I already miss my brother. You actually behaved when he was around.”
“Oh, I like him, too,” Luna stated. Facing Cadence, she asked, “He’s yours, right? Mind if I borrow him? I usually prefer shorter males, but if he’s related to Dusk, I wouldn’t mind getting a preview of the main event.”
In stark contrast to protocol, Cadence positioned herself between Shining and Luna, her body language saying more than words ever could. Unfortunately, this just made Luna’s grin broaden, which infuriated Cadence to no end.
“Okay, fine,” Celestia huffed as she moved between the alicorns. “Before you actually try killing each other, you’ll be happy to know that everything went better than I predicted. The Elements have new wielders, and they’ve all agreed to be Dusk’s girlfriends.”
Cadence finally smiled and sucked in a happy breath. “G-girlfriends? Wait, what about Barb?”
“She approves,” Celestia matter-of-factly informed.
“Yes!” Cadence pumped her hoof in victory. “Finally. I knew the little guy had it in him.”
Even Shining allowed himself a small smile. “So, does this mean you’ll finally let the rest of us in on your plan, Your Highness?”
Celestia scratched her chin in thought, opened her mouth for several seconds of quiet, and finally answered, “Nope.” A round of groans echoed around the room as the queen’s inner circle expressed annoyance with her enigmatic eccentricities, with some ponies even exchanging a few coins over lost bets. “Sorry, but you know how fortune-telling works. Too many ponies knowing what’s to come risks unexpected alterations. All I’ll say is that Equestria is in for some rough patches ahead, but it’ll all work out.”
“Your confidence is enviable, Your Majesty,” Shining stated with a go-fuck-yourself tone.
Luna snickered some more. “I don’t smell you on this handsome specimen,” she said to Celestia while pointing at Shining. “Might he also have a noteworthy destiny?”
Celestia frowned at her sister. “After what I just said, you honestly think I’d answer that with him in earshot?”
Luna nodded and resumed facing Cadence and Shining. “If you don’t know that means ‘yes’, I’ll be very disappointed in both of you.”
“LUNA!” Celestia roared and tackled her sister. The pair began rolling around the room, trading blows, bites, and grunts while the other ponies backed away for safety.
“There are times when I wish to take pictures of moments like these, memorialize them forever, and send them to papers so Equestria can see who is truly calling the shots in this kingdom,” Shining bemoaned beside Cadence. “All confidence in the queen would fall, and your ascent to the throne would be quite expedient,” he casually explained his blatant plan for treason for all of Celestia’s most capable agents to hear.
Cadence shook her head as she watched the new queen kick the old queen in the teats. “It’d never work. My mother’s mask is too convincing, and the love from the masses too genuine. If I hadn’t seen the truth for myself, even I would think such photos were fake. Besides, I don’t want Celestia’s throne. Have you seen her office? Dusk would have a conniption if he saw that labyrinthine mess, and I’m not too thrilled, either.”
“She’s carefully crafted a system that can only be navigated by a mad genius on par with herself,” agreed Withers, the smartly dressed stallion with a bushy mustache that comprised 20% of his face. Despite being closer to Dusk’s size, he was much older than Shining, as indicated by his deep voice that spoke with the wisdom of the ages. “Equestria is run by crazies, and the only thing that separates us from other countries is that, despite all appearances, our crazy usually knows what she’s doing. Nothing to do but go with the flow, my boy.”
“T-tell me at least heee’s freee,” Luna strained to say as Celestia pulled her into a chokehold. “H-honestly, I-I don’t care anymore. Just give me a dick already.”
A grin spread across Celestia’s face, more toothy and terrifying than even Barb could manage as she whispered into her sister’s ear. “Oh, you want a dick, do you?” Her horn lit as a similar glow manifested between her legs.
“Evacuate!” Shining shouted as chaos erupted around the room, ponies teleporting away, running to the doors, and that one pegasus who made a hole through the wall as she flew away. And while being captain meant Shining was duty-bound to stay behind and ensure everyone else got to safety first, his fiancé had other plans, scooping him up in her magic as she fled through the newly expanded hole in the wall. They’d just barely made it out in time, watching the walls shake while hearing lustful grunts from within the room.
All things considered, as far as Equestria’s ruling elite were concerned, this was a day ending in Y. And as far as the hapless heroes in Ponyville were concerned, this was the first day of the rest of their lives.
Author's Note
And that concludes my lewd parody rewrite of the first two episodes of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. The original two-part story is pretty solid, and I see why so many writers enjoy recreating it. It’s a character-driven story, and the characters are so strong and compelling that they can still hold their own even after a bunch of perverted tweaks.
As a discovery-type writer, I don’t know what’s going to happen until seconds before it does, so the sex scene pretty much did its own thing. Overall, while I’d have liked to do more, I’m fairly satisfied. Everybody gets a piece of Dusk, with most girls getting some characterization for liking the little guy. Although, while I’d initially planned to close with some actual vore, describing it seems sufficient for now. Plus, it leaves things open to do more later.
When I’d started, I wasn’t sure how far I wanted this to go, initially leaning toward just the first two episodes. However, seeing as I’ve now reached almost 30K words between six chapters, I’m curious how far this might go. The characters are fun to write, the world is begging to be fleshed out, and I don’t think I’ve seen this premise featured on FiM before, so that’s something. Granted, this story heavily features fetishes that I know aren’t the most popular, but I still want to give it a shot. Although, as I’d previously said, I’d prefer to do more original stories instead of following the episode plots as I did with MLO, but we’ll see.
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