Just my first ever writing proyect, so this is mainly a way to get criticism

The story is gonna be really short, the events start and end the same way as in the episode "The Cutie Remark P2". But I´ve decided to changed it up a little since I always though that the episode version of the story could use a little more drama when talking about Starlight´s past or when showing the overrall battle between the two ponies

Enjoy :)