The Story Behind the Rose

by Faust Fan Five

Rating: teen
Tags: Slice of Life, Roseluck, Main 6, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Rarity, Romance
Length: 1751

Can Roseluck win the mare of her dreams?

Rarity is in dire need of a break, and when that break arrives in the form of a pony named Roseluck, a pony who has secretly admired her for years, will she uknowingly use that attraction to her advantage? And will Roseluck be able to win Rarity's affections before a certain stallion does?

Published 2012-10-05 17:10:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-04-08 19:53:12 UTC

A Stunning Surprise

The Story Behind the Rose

Chapter 1-Just another day in Ponyville

Roseluck shifted her position in the bush, after once again being poked by the thorny plant. “Ouch! Gee, whoever cleared the dead branches last time did a horrible job…” Roseluck muttered to herself. She peered out of her “hiding spot” to see if the pony she had been watching was still there. No luck.

She sighed to herself. It had been three weeks, and she still hadn’t worked up the courage to tell the other pony how she felt. Although in my defense, she thought to herself, the pony I’m after is arguably the prettiest mare in Ponyville.

Roseluck decided that she had better get back to helping Daisy back at the stand. There was no telling what that pony could get up to when Roseluck wasn’t there to watch her. She smiled to herself. Daisy usually meant well, but darned if that pony wasn’t just a pain in the flank sometimes…

She got up and moved out from her prickly hiding spot, just as a certain somepony just happened to be walking by. “Oh, Roseluck, hello!” said the friendly pony. Roseluck froze at the voice. She knew that voice all too well. It was the mare of her dreams. She slowly fumbled for a response, blushing slightly. “H-Hello, Rarity! Uh, how is it going? W-With you, on such a fine day?” She mentally beat herself for such a pathetic response. Rarity gave a small smile, noting the slight blush on Roseluck’s cheeks. “I could ask you the same question, darling. Are you alright? You look a little pale.” Roseluck searched her mind for a response. “I… Uh… I’m sick? Yea, sick. I ate one of AppleJack’s cupcakes, and I’m still recovering a little. Heh heh…” She gave a nervous laugh. Rarity gave a small nod. “Yes, those cupcakes were quite…. Rancid. But what were you doing in that bush?” Roseluck went pale. She had no answer. There was no answer…

“Hello Rarity!” A light blue colored Pegasus stallion came down from the sky, and landed a short distance away from them. Roseluck silently thanked Celestia for the interruption.

“Oh, Rogue, how are you? If you are here for an update on your order, I haven’t finished it yet. I was hoping that Rose here would have had the flowers ready.” Rarity said. Roseluck was watching Rarity’s face carefully, and she noticed that she was blushing slightly. Oh no… She thought, I should have known that I would have to compete with stallions for her affections. Can a pony be too perfect?

“So, Rarity, I was thinking that me and you could go out sometime, get to know each other better…” Rogue said, casually. Rarity was completely blindsided by this, and she started blushing madly. “Uh… Ummmm-Hwha?” she stuttered. Roseluck was losing her. She had to think fast, or she would lose the mare of her dreams faster than you could say Sonic Rainboom.

She started to speak: “So sorry to interrupt, Rogue, but Rarity and I have a lot to discuss. About your ‘order’”. She glared at him slightly. Rogue cringed under her gaze, and took that as his cue to leave.

“I’ll talk to you later, alright Rarity? I gotta go… Do something. Bye!” He flew off without another word, leaving Rarity and Roseluck alone. Rarity was standing there, mouth slightly agape.

Roseluck, slightly worried, nudged her a little, breaking Rarity out of her spell. “We should go and discuss this in a more private place, preferably somewhere that ponies won’t be hitting on you all the time.” She said. Rarity giggled a little, and nodded. They started off in the general direction of Roseluck’s house.

Luckily, her house wasn’t too far away. They got there in a relatively short amount of time. Roseluck was pleased to notice that her sisters weren’t there. The house was small, only two stories tall, and the front door opened straight into the kitchen, with the joining rooms being a living room with a couch and flower-scented rug, and a bathroom in the opposite direction. Roseluck led her guest to the first of the two rooms, lying on the rug. The news she was about to deliver was not going to be easy, especially because of who she was about to say it to. There had been a bad drought that summer, and the flowers that Rarity had ordered had to be used to finish another order that had been placed before hers. Roseluck hated delivering bad news.

“So, about your flowers Rarity, I’m afraid I have to be the bearer of bad news…” She was about to continue, when she looked at her guest closely. Rarity looked like she was about to have a stroke. She had a far off look in her eyes, and she was hyperventilating. “Rarity? Rarity! Are you ok?” She practically yelled, getting up.

Rarity shook her head slowly. “No…. No I am not alright, Rose. If I don’t fill this order, I’m through. Done. Finished.” She spoke these words cautiously, and tears started rolling down her cheeks. “What are you talking about Rarity?” Roseluck asked. Was it possible that Rarity, THE Rarity, was having financial troubles?

“I-I’m having a bit of a money crisis, as strange as that might sound. It all started because of that whole Sisterhooves Social thing… when Sweetie ruined the gold fabric, I had to buy the supplies so I could make more. The prices were… less than desirable. When my buyer found out what happened, he was furious. He refused to accept his order. I’ve been in dire straits ever since… my friends don’t know, there is no need to have them worry over me and my problems…The only one who might understand would be AppleJack, but me and her don't get along too well.”

Roseluck gaped, her mouth hanging open. She had had no idea that Rarity was in such a bad place… You can help. The voice in her head told her. You have what she needs… She needs you, you need her, it’s almost too perfect. Roseluck thought very carefully. Was the happiness of her special somepony more important to her than the happiness of other customers?

It was the quickest decision of her life.

“Rarity”, she said, “I am going to get you those flowers if it’s the last thing I do.” (I’m so sorry to leave this on a cliffhanger! I hope that you will forgive me… I probably wouldn’t. Stupid writers block…)

The Novel

Chapter 2~ The Novel

Rose ran faster. She needed to see Diamond again, for fear that she was just an illusion; a stunningly beautiful one at that. She picked up the pace, not really concerned for how lost she was getting. It almost felt like if she stopped thinking about Diamond for more than a few seconds, Rose would forget she even existed.

‘What if she doesn’t remember me?’ Rose’s panicked mind told her. ‘You only spoke with her for a few minutes... she’s probably forgotten you even exist.’

Rose stopped suddenly, breathing heavily, desperately trying to catch her breath. Rose’s head was suddenly plagued with doubts that weren’t there a few seconds ago. She tried to continue running, but found herself unable to move. Her heart and mind are at war, both fighting for control over her body. Rose tries to move forward once again, but she’s lost control over her limbs... she can barely breath.

‘You don’t deserve happiness,’ her mind tells her. ‘Why would a girl like her stoop to your level? You’ve always been alone... a simple crush won’t change anything.’

Rose crumples to the ground, tears forming in her eyes. She simply laid there, paralyzed with fear, pain and loneliness, her warring emotions fighting for control.

And then, it snapped.

She snapped.

‘I’m done with this... I can’t keep going on like this, being afraid to try, being afraid to walk out the door every morning. I’ve lost so many opportunities in the past because I am such a wimp... a coward. Well, not this time.’

She got back to her hooves, slowly. She could feel her resolve hardening. She knows what she has to do and how to do it. Rose starts running again, faster than before. She could see Diamonds house-actually, mansion or castle would be more fitting terms.

The place is huge. At least fifty feet tall and constructed of mainly cobblestone walls and marble columns. Rose entered the abode through the massive wooden-probably oak-front doors.

The inside of the fortress-er, house-is even bigger than what you would think looking at it from the outside. There is a high-vaulted ceiling and portraits of Diamond and her family everywhere.

She could hear a radio playing in the room right in front of her. Curiosity piqued, Rose walked forward and in the room she found-

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Rarity yawned as she put the book down on her bed. She patted Opal on the head casually as her cat slept on her lap. The book she had been reading had been recommended to her by Roseluck, who had said the book would be right up Rarity’s ally. Rarity would hate to admit it, but she was enjoying the novel...scandalous as it was. But hey, everypony loves a good scandal now and again, right?

Rarity yawned again. It was fashionably late, but she had to finish the chapter. She just had to know what happened next. She picked up the book and continued reading~

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Rose opened the door and found the love of her life, Diamond Snow, in.... the shower. She was taking a shower.

If the color of Rose’s coat hadn’t been naturally red, the scene before her would have made it permanently that color. She blushed profusely and attempted to leave the bathroom without being discovered. However, in her haste, she knocked over the radio, slipped on the wet floor, and bumped her head on the ground. She quickly lost consciousness, but not before she heard the water in the shower stop and a beautiful purple maned, white coated unicorn looking down on her with those breathtaking blue eyes...

‘Rose?’

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Rarity put down the book once more, yawning even louder this time. She resolved herself to finishing the book later, or else she wouldn’t have enough time in the morning to properly style her coiffure. And then there was the lunch date she had with Roseluck tomorrow as well.