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Outsiders

by JeSuisLaPorte
Stuck in another world as a pony, I must hide what I truly am, else they'll lock me in a dungeon. Easier said than done; I know nothing about their culture! Thankfully, there's someone else who shares my predicament. Together, we'll find a way home.

My name is Daniel Brooks. I don't know how, but I've been sent to another world. A... uh, "magical pony filled" world where humanity isn't appreciated for some reason. I haven't seen another human, so I can only imagine those who were transported here before me have all been hunted down, probably locked away in a dungeon from what I can tell. That's bad, but wait, it gets worse.

I've been turned into one of them; a pegasus with a strange motif on my flank. Now I'm stuck in this town called Ponyville with no friends, no family, no job and no home. Just my luck...

Like I said earlier, these ponies don't seem to like humans, especially those that have transformed into ponies. They despise us, constantly trying to figure out who is secretly human and who isn't. It's not easy hiding what you truly are, let me tell you! I do one stupid things and all eyes will be on me!

At least, there's somebody else in this town who shares my plight. He's been stuck there for weeks, trying to find a way home. He'll teach me all about blending in. By working together, we can avoid suspicion and get back home.

I just hope I won't be there for long...


Cover art by Mix-up (Big shout-out for the cover art and all the great comments he made!)

Teen
On Hiatus
Profanity
Slice of Life
Human
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Mystery
Comedy
 
MLOB

41287 words: Estimated about 3 hours to read

8 Chapters:

  1. 1. I'm not welcome here, aren't I? 2024-02-01 18:01:58 UTC
    4473
  2. 2. The only friends I can count on 2024-02-04 03:51:41 UTC
    3618
  3. 3. Danger on the horizon 2024-02-08 19:14:40 UTC
    3865
  4. 4. Double Whammy 2024-02-15 01:58:20 UTC
    4527
  5. 5. Knee Deep in Problems 2024-02-22 03:22:38 UTC
    4333
  6. 6. Myth and Reality 2024-03-04 19:52:05 UTC
    8090
  7. 7. Think I've Gone A Bit Crazy! 2024-03-09 16:52:04 UTC
    4635
  8. 8. Who's That Merchant? 2024-03-29 04:06:48 UTC
    7746