The need to win

by Babycord

Rating: everyone
Tags: Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Second Person, Other, Adventure
Length: 2350

Speed is only half of the game

Car.

Tires.

Engines.

Cars.

Thees four things can either make your car or make you look like a rookie.

Blue star wasn't a rookie.

Published 2024-02-10 04:40:01 UTC
Last updated 2024-02-10 04:40:01 UTC

Winners

The midday sun beat down relentlessly on the faded hills surrounding Ponyville. Not a cloud marred the vast blue sky stretching to the horizon. Blue Star wiped his brow and peered out at the dusty flatland ahead, tracking a plume of dirt kicked up in the distance.

"I see 'em," he called to Sweetwater in the passenger seat of their battered Ford pickup. She lowered her binoculars and shielded her eyes from the glare.

Blue eased off the gas and let their truck coast, letting the trailing vehicle close the gap. It was a souped up model with gleaming custom panels, built more for show than the workaday grime that coated Blue and Sweetwater's truck.

As it pulled alongside, the driver revved his engine obnoxiously. Blue ignored him, keeping his eyes forward. But the stallion persisted in trying to goad a reaction, peeling out recklessly to block their path. Blue braked and downshifted smoothly to avoid a collision, fighting to keep his anger in check.

"Just let it pass, Blue," warned Sweetwater quietly. He couldn't afford another altercation, not with the derby a week away. Their financial future depended on finishing that race.

He eased off and leaned back silently as the shiny truck roared ahead, music pounding. Sweetwater shook her head as its taillights receded into the haze. "Show-offs. Think bits buys skill."

"Skill'll be what matters on race day." Blue nodded determinedly. But behind his stoic facade roiled doubts. Their ten-year-old Ford was long past its prime, held together by duct tape and prayer. While others spent freely modifying for speed, Blue and Sweetwater had been paring back expenses for months to cover the hefty derby entry fee.

Their meager home on the edge of town came into sight, little more than a ramshackle collection of trailers joined together. As they rumbled up the long dirt driveway, Sweetwater spotted a mess of tools and car parts strewn across the yard. "Looks like someone's been workin’."

Blue cut the engine with a sigh, peering through the windshield. "That'd be Cletus from down the road. Said he'd fix our brakes while we was out practicin'."

Climbing stiffly down from the cab, the siblings walked over to survey Cletus' progress. Wrenches and rags littered the ground around their truck's open front end. The mechanic himself leaned against the bumper, swigging from a warm beer.

"Well?" demanded Blue impatiently. Brawn grimaced and wiped his hooves on a filthy rag. "Sorry kids. She's in rough shape. Brake lines rusted through like wet tissue paper." He gestured at the engine compartment strewn with frayed metal tubes and fluid-stained parts. "Got 'er stopped for now but there's no way she'll hold up for racin’.”

Sweetwater's face fell in dismay. "You mean...we can't compete?"

Blue stepped forward, jaw set tightly. "What's it gonna take, Brawn? Money ain't no object, we gotta make this derby." His eyes burned with desperation as he awaited the answer that could determine their fate. Brawn lit a cigarette thoughtfully, blowing smoke up at the darkening sky. "Replacement lines alone would set ya back near a month's wages. But..." He glanced meaningfully at their dilapidated truck. "I might know a fella'll do the full works cheap, if ya help provide...inspiration."

His sly smirk spoke volumes about the nature of such "inspiration." Blue plants hir hoof into the ground, frustration mounting. But they had no other choice. He exhaled heavily. "...Alright, Brawn. Set it up."

Sweetwater rested a gentle hoof on his, calming him. "It'll be okay, Blue. We'll figure somethin' out."

He nodded wearily, knowing the days ahead would test their resolve to its limits. But if it took bending rules to keep their derby dreams alive, so be it. Nothing was getting between Blue Star and that prize money now.

Morning light streamed through cracks in the trailer's walls as Blue Star slowly woke. His body ached dully, each movement reawakening scratches and bruises accrued over days of grueling labor. He glanced beside him at the narrow twin bed where Sweetwater still slept soundly, hair splayed across her face in tangled strands.

Despite his exhaustion, a surge of pride swelled in Blue's chest at the sight of their newly repaired truck waiting patiently outside. The work had drained them to the bone, but their battered Ford now ran smoother than ever before thanks to Brawn's' contact. And so the Midlands Derby was still within reach.

Sweetwater stirred as Blue dressed quietly, rubbing sleep from her eyes. "Mornin'. You rest at all?" She smiled gently at his tousled appearance. Blue grinned back weakly. "Enough. Now c'mon, derby's startin' soon and I wanna do some practicin’ first.”

The open flatlands surrounding Ponyville were steadily filling with vehicles of all shapes and sizes as the siblings arrived. Thick plumes of dust rose into the air wherever trucks peeled out, showing off engines tuned to the max. Blue circled their truck slowly, eyes scanning opponents for any sign of vulnerability.

Sweetwater watched his focus intently from the passenger seat. "What d'you see?" Blue nodded toward a gleaming pickup bearing a familiar gaudy paint job. "That Red fella's drivin' looks overconfident. Bet he makes mistakes.” His eyes narrowed. “Also, that old Dodge over there's wearin’ badly. Might torque under hard turns.”

As the first heat began, Blue navigated their dirt track with caution, observing competitors’ strategies. Red gunned his engine brashly from the start in an attempt to overtake the field in one bold maneuver. But his hasty driving caused him to lose control on a sharp turn, spinning recklessly across another racer's path.

A grinding crash sounded as the vehicles collided, triggering a chain reaction pileup. Blue stomped the brakes just in time to avoid the chaos. “Toldja he was reckless,” he muttered to Sweetwater grimly. Their truck idled at the sidelines as the mound of twisted metal was cleared, both competitors’ trucks totaled.

Shaking his head, Blue eased back onto the track once it was reopened. His smooth driving soon had them near the front, passing the laboring Dodge. Sweetwater cheered each position gained until they pulled into first just before the checkered flag.

As they exited their battered truck, a brusque voice called, "Well look who it is, the Ponyville Paupers." Blue turned to see Ricky approaching, face livid beneath a freshly bandaged forehead. "That was my heat you stole, dirtbags. Shoulda been me in first," he spat.

Blue said nothing, expression stony. But Sweetwater stepped between them, eyes flashing defiantly. "We earned that win same as anyone. If you can't control your ego on the track, that's your own fault."

Red scowled down at her petite form. "Watch it girly, before someone teaches you respect." He stalked off, muttering obscenities under his breath that made Blue's blood boil.

Their quiet celebration was cut short as the overhead speakers crackled to life. "Will all participants please report for driver check-in and final registration before the main event." Blue swallowed his simmering anger and followed Sweetwater to the announcer’s booth, steeling himself for the trials ahead.

The sun blazed overhead as Blue's pickup idled in the starting line, grille facing the sweeping expanse of the dirt track ahead. Dust had long since permeated his clothes and skin, clinging stubbornly despite repeated washings. He wiped it from his eyes distractedly, focusing on the gravelly voice booming through speakers.

"Racers, start your engines!" Engines roared in response all around as Sweetwater settled into the passenger seat beside him, handing over a flask of cool water. Blue nodded gratefully and took a quick swig before capping it and returning it to her, ready for battle.

The qualifying heats commenced in a chaotic flurry of flying dirt and peeling rubber. To Sweetwater’s anxious encouragement, Blue carved strategic passes around the perimeter, assessing drivers' tells and weaknesses under pressure. By the semifinal heat, only a handful of trucks remained.

Up ahead, Red revved menacingly toward a more battered pickup that had outmaneuvered him on the last turn. With no room left to pass cleanly, he jerked the wheel aggressively, slamming his flank into the weaker truck. It careened off course out of control, flipping end over end in a massive cloud of dust.

Blue frowned as the crumpled vehicle was towed off, Red facing no penalty. "That wasn't no accident. He done it on purpose." Sweetwater gripped the door handle tightly, eyes wide. "You think he'll...try something?" Blue nodded grimly. "Wouldn't put nothin' past that snake in the grass."

They finished the heat in third, securing a place in the championship round. But the threat of sabotage now loomed over every maneuver. As the final started under another blazing sun, Blue kept his pickup tucked securely amidst the pack, hyper-alert for any treachery.

On the opening lap, Red roared up directly behind their bumper, engine revving intimidatingly. Blue ignored the provocation, keeping his focus ahead. But as they approached a sharp hairpin turn, Red gunned forward abruptly, slamming into their rear fender with a deafening crunch of twisting metal.

The impact sent Blue wrestling for control as their truck spun out into the loose gravel. Sweetwater cried out wordlessly in panic beside him. After what felt like an eternity, Blue managed to regain control just before careening off the edge, breathing heavily.

When he glanced back through the settling dust, Red smirked viciously before peeling ahead unpunished once more. Sweetwater grasped Blue's hoof firmly. "Forget him! We're still in this.” Her eyes shone with fierce determination. Growling deep in his throat, Blue shifted gears and stomped the accelerator, diving back into the race with renewed ferocity.

The grueling final laps blurred past in a maelstrom of flying grit and pounding engines. Blue clung stubbornly to third position despite Red's increasingly brazen attempts to sabotage them from behind.

Each impact shook the weakened truck's frame, but Sweetwater's steadying words and Blue's iron will kept them on the perilous trail. Finally, a daring pass around the outside surged them into second heading into the last stretch.

Just the aging Dodge ahead stood between them and victory now. Blue hammered the gas, straining every beaten system for precious extra speed. hoof by hoof they gained, Sweetwater cheering maniacally beside him. With just a quarter mile to go, their battered grille pulled alongside the Dodge's fender.

Its driver fought back ferociously, slamming into their flank in panic. Blue grit his teeth against the wrenching collision, refusing to lose ground. As they accelerated neck and neck toward the finish, Sweetwater glimpsed Ricky rocketing up behind in their dust.

His snarling face was set with murderous intent, ready to destroy anything in his path. Sweetwater screamed a frantic warning, but it was too late. Red ploughed directly into their rear end at full velocity, launching their pickup into a spiral through the air.

Blue seemed to fly weightlessly for an eternal moment before brutal impact shattered the driver's side window around him. Glass and twisted metal rained down as their vehicle rolled violently across the torn earth, coming to rest in an inverted crumpled heap a hundred yards back.

Silence fell over the desolate track as spectators watched on in horror. Sweetwater moaned dazedly and tugged desperately at her trapped seatbelt, tears streaming down her face. Blue hung limply above her, blood trickling from a gash on his forehead. Please...she sobbed. Please be okay..

A strangled gasp suddenly escaped Blue's throat, his body jerking spasmodically back to consciousness. Sweetwater's weeping turned to elated laughter as he peered around in confusion, finally gaining focus on her relief-stricken face above.

His mangled side of the cabin glared ominously around them with jagged shards and dangling wires. Through the distorted scraps of the roof, both siblings saw Ricky’s truck celebrating its undeserved victory in the distance. A deep growl rumbled in Blue's chest at the unfair sight.

With shaking hooves, Sweetwater helped him carefully free from the wreckage. Blue's back hoof buckled under his weight as they crawled clear, twisted at an unnatural angle. Sweetwater's panicked eyes searched his grimacing face. We need help NOW. Please, just hold on..!

Despite the agony pulsing through his body, Blue shook his head determinedly. He grit his teeth and hauled himself back up on Sweetwater's shoulder, refusing to give in. His burning gaze remained fixed ahead at Ricky's retreating truck. Not...done yet, he ground out through clenched jaws.

Sweetwater realized with a start what he intended. Blue, no, you're hurt too bad! But her protest fell on deaf ears. With blind determination, Blue lurched toward the engine compartment, inspecting the damage. By some blessing, the motor remained intact. He gripped the gnarled steering column fiercely.

Help me in, Sweetwater...one last run. Tears welled again in her eyes but she nodded, assisting him into the cabin. The tortured pickup’s final reserves were called upon as its engine roared angrily to life once more. With Sweetwater’s aid, Blue jammed the gearstick forward, heedless of the shrieking protest from his mangled back hoof.

Their vengeful return to the track caught the crowd utterly by surprise. Red saw them approaching in his mirrors just as the checkered flag waved, face contorting with panic and rage. But it was too late for him to avoid the righteous retaliation now bearing down at 150 miles per hour.

Blue aimed their crumpled front end precisely, launching their pickup into a final desperate collision with Red’s smug machine. The catastrophic impact caused an eruption that flung both twisted wrecks end over end in a smoking aerial somersault. They crashed to earth in an apocalyptic heap, coming to rest side by side in a mangled parody of their former selves.

Paramedics swarmed the scene, extracting the unconscious drivers from the ruins. All attention turned to Blue as his battered body was carried off on a stretcher, unresponsive but still alive through sheer grit. In the chaos, Red's unscathed figure slipped silently away into the dusk, escaping justice once more.

But as the ambulance doors closed around Blue, Sweetwater clasped his flagging hoof tightly in hers, tears of anguish turned into triumph.

you did it brother, you did it".