Shine from the Inside out

It had been six months since you began to train Nelly in order for her to be back on track with her life, as well as trying to lose weight at the same time. In the first two months, you began to train Nelly, and she had shown much determination, and commitment to losing weight in order to reach her ideal weight, and to be in shape. However, at the end of the second month, the royals were successful in opening your gym, which you were very grateful. Thankfully, you gained a working staff to help you out, as well as the place to help train the royal guards, and those who start things out.

But during that time, you focused on helping Nelly first. For thanks to all the equipment all around you, you now have the means to help train her. And even though she gets exhausted very quickly, you’re proud to see how well she is doing. And once she was able to lose more weight, you were able to move to the serious training. You used jump ropes, you used smaller weights, you used treadmills, that thing that looks like oars with weights. You never could figure out what those were called, but it doesn’t matter, as long as they helped. Then boxing, which for the record would sound ridiculous, but if it meant helping her, it’s worth it.

And it shows that she’s fully committed to it, which is a step in the right direction.

But during that time, you ended up having feelings for her, but you didn’t tell her yet, for you needed her to be focused on what she was doing. But by the fifth month, you couldn’t hold out your feelings for her any longer, so you confessed to her. Nelly was so overjoyed she ended up welcoming it with a kiss. Now she even had a bigger goal in mind; to help get into shape for him.

By the sixth month, Nelly had complete her goal by losing a full 121 pounds, and the work had really shown it. After she became slender, she also became blessed with an hourglass figure, her posterior were very luscious, and her breasts were at least GG-cup breasts. You couldn’t help but blush madly at that.

Through all that hard work, every pony in Canterlot were shocked to see Nelly changed so drastically, even the elites were greatly surprised to see her change so drastically. You decided to take her shopping in order for to have clothes that now matches her body. When you popped by the boutique, the owner and the manager of the store were shocked to see Nelly as it took them by surprise.

Rarity, along with her human husband Silver, which still surprises you to this day, began to design clothes that would fit her personality, and they were more than happy to make those kinds of clothing. You were glad you were able to get her clothes that she can now wear.

The two of you then decided to move in together and Nelly decided to help you out from time to time by managing the gym in order for most of the members to be civil at the same time.

Then one day, the two of you decided to have fun on a date, and decided to eat at a restaurant for this special occasion. For it had been exactly seven months since the two of you met.

“Thanks again for taking me out to this place, Achilles.” Said Nelly. During your conversations, you told her of some of the best athletes in your world, as well as a few warriors. You even told her about a legendary warrior of Greece, who could go the distance, so she decided to call you Achilles.

And the dress she wore was darker than her fur color, which you have to admit, looks really great on her, though it could barely hide the bosom for you to look at. Though what really changed ever since she lost weight was her voice. For it also changed, and it also had a certain allure to that too.

“Thanks,” you replied. “I figured that this would be a great celebration.”

“What kind of celebration?” asked Nelly curiously.

“Two things really.” You said to her. “The first one, to celebrate the hard work you put in.”

“Only because you were there by my side.” Said Nelly with her grateful smile, “To which I’m very grateful.”

“And the other,” you said, “To celebrate our one-month anniversary of the day the two of us started to date.”

“Wow, time really does fly, huh?” asked Nelly.

“It sure has.” You said. You raised a glass and said “So how about we both toast to our success.”

“I’ll definitely drink to that.” Said Nelly as they tapped their glass together before taking a sip.

Suddenly, Nelly noticed something on stage and noticed that there were ponies singing on the stage. You looked at the stage and you saw how they were singing. You then had some idea what she was thinking.

“Do you wanna sing too?” you asked Nelly.

Nelly blushed at this and said “I don’t know…I’ve never sing before.”

“First time for everything.” You replied, “But seeing that it’s the first for both of us, why don’t we try to sing one by one, then sing together?”

Nelly was a little bit nervous, until you stood up and walked over to her. You crouched from behind her and wrapped your arms around her waist.

“Don’t worry, I’ll be with you every step of the way.” You whispered. “And if that is not enough motivation.”

You slowly slipped your hand under her arm and slipped into her dress, allowing you to gently grope her breast, which made her slightly gasp and fluster at the same time. She moaned a little, but not too loudly as she doesn’t want to gain any unwanted attention. If that wasn’t enough, he was gently going to somewhere more sensitive, before Nelly grabbed him and looked at him with some lust of her own.

“I do want you.” Whispered Nelly. “But let’s do this first before we have some fun, okay?”

“You got it.” You whispered back.

The two of you got to the stage. You encouraged Nelly to sing first, for this will be great for her, in order for her to help build up her confidence. Once she was on stage, she looked below and saw you standing there in order for you to support her up close. Nelly took a breath and began to sing.

(Insert Inner Steel)

As she sang, everyone was amazed by how amazing Nelly sounded, even the guys began to cheer for her. But Nelly was more focused on you, as you told her to. Which helped her gain more confidence along the way.

After the song was over, everyone clapped their hands for Nelly, which she shyly waved and stepped down the stage. She stood near you and hugged you.

You also began to take a turn, but this time, you sang one of your favorite songs back in your world.

(Insert 2 to 2 step)

Everyone quite enjoyed the song, especially since everyone is dancing all around you.

Afterwards, the two of you began to sing together a duet of sorts.

(In a moment like this)

Everyone cheered at the two of you singing together, with Nelly grabbing you and planted a kiss on your lips, which you happily returned. For this was quite the way to celebrate one’s anniversary.

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After your date, the two of you walked home together, for that was quite the night that you don’t want to forget anytime soon. And I’m sure Nelly feels the same way about this too. Soon enough, the two of you had finally arrived at home.

“Now that was a lot of fun.” You said.

“It sure was.” Said Nelly before giggling, “I’ve never sung in front of a large crowd before.”

“But in the end it felt good, didn’t it?” you asked, “You were able to face your fears.”

“I have, didn’t I?” said Nelly with pride.

“Though there’s only one more thing that you need to conquer.” You told her with a smirk after you unlocked the door.

“And what’s that?” asked Nelly.

You planted your lips onto her, taking her by surprise, as well as you grasping onto her nice luscious flank. She ended up passionately kissing you back whilst holding you close. She even moaned whilst you kept groping onto her posterior. You slowly broke it as you looked right at her flustering eyes.

“Going all out with me.” You replied whilst you blushed.

You once again groped onto her posterior, which made her moan.

“Oh, I’m up for it.” Replied Nelly.

She then lunged herself onto you as she both hungrily and passionately made out with you. Both of your tongues wrestling with one another, which caused the both of you to slowly move. Thankfully, you were able to open the door, allowing the both of you to go inside and closed the door and locked it.

You turned the lights on and continued to make out with her. You both made your way to the living room, which caused the both of you to collapse onto the couch whilst you couldn’t help but give a playful smack to her posterior, making her yelp, but found it very sexy, causing her to invade your tongue within her again.

The two of them ended up breaking the kiss, with her looking at him seductively.

“You know, I’m certainly hungry for something.” Said Nelly. “But for this…you’re gonna wanna have to sit up straight.”

“Oh?” you responded whilst you were curious with a smirk at the same time.

You then did as you asked. However, before you did, she ended up loosening your belt, as well as your pants and underwear, leaving your member out. Nelly couldn’t help but lick her lips whilst you sat down. She then took your member and gently placed it in her mouth.

‘Wow,’ you thought, ‘Who’d thunk she’d be that skilled in it?’

She began to suck on it whilst she wrapped her tongue around it at the same time. She continued to

Nelly gave a few more licks before she sank your shaft into her mouth and began sucking on the entire thing. She used her hands to gently massage your balls, making you feel even better. You felt the urge to ask Nelly how she was able to do this, but you decided not to interrupt her. Besides, with all this pleasure, you found it hard to talk anyway.

Nelly’s tongue once again circled around your cock as she kept bobbing her head. Moaning at the slight change of pace, you slowly reached down and began to stroke your mare friend’s soft mane. In response to your gentle touch, she moaned softly, sending shivers up your spine.

You were happy that you were both being gentle with one another, especially since you’re both virgins. To make Nelly feel better, you moved your hand and began to scratch behind her ears, making her giggle and moan. Curious of what might happen, you moved one hand up to her horn and stroked it gently.

You soon began to stroke Nelly’s horn and stroked it. Nelly began to moan even loudly. Her loud moaning on your shaft made you moan with her.

As you continued stroking her horn, you saw a small amount of magic come out, which slightly tickled your hand. Nelly took in your whole shaft, deep throating you and licking your balls. Your legs started to twitch from her incredible skills. Despite being a virgin, she pleasured you like a pro.

Unfortunately, all good things, including a blowjob must come to an end. Your climax started to build up. Nelly was also getting close, judging by how fast she was sucking on your cock.

“Nelly... I-I’m about to...” you tried to warn her, but your climax suddenly hits and explodes inside her mouth, inflating her cheeks. She moaned loudly and shot out mini magical sparks out of her horn in response to her pleasure. Nelly swallowed your load in big gulps instead of spitting it out before she finally pulled away, panting heavily.

“That... was incredible...” you sighed, making Nelly smile and blush.

“That was pretty tasty.” Said Nelly, “I never knew you tasted this good.”

You couldn’t help but chuckle and held her cheeks before stroking them. “Now I believe it’s my turn now, is it not?”

Nelly couldn’t help but blush at this, and was suddenly nervous at the same time.

“I’ve…never have anyone do this before.” Said Nelly.

You were able to stand up and helped lifted her hup whilst the two of you were standing. You then held onto her flanks, causing her to moan slightly, with him saying “First time for everything.”

You then turned her around and have her move against the wall. You then made her place both her hands against the wall whilst she was leaning forward. He lifted the back of her dress, until he was able to see her luscious booty contained in her Emerald Green panties. You slowly pulled her panties down, exposing her wet and delicate flower.

You carefully approached Nelly’s flower and stuck your tongue out, giving it a few good licks before finally traveling your tongue on every nook and cranny. Nelly gasped and moaned from your skilled tongue.

Her juices tasted so good, they tasted sweeter than any honey you’ve ever tried. She kept on shouting out loud every time your tongue circled laps around her flower and flicking against her sensitive clit.

“Oh buck! That feels so good, Achilles! Keep going! I want this so badly!” she moaned loudly. You stared up into the eyes of your beautiful mare with love and passion as you were eating her out and pleasuring her with everything you’ve got.

You hummed into her soaking, wet flower, sending vibration up her spine. She shuddered and gasped in ecstasy. Nelly’s love juices sometimes either dripped down your chin or squirted onto your face, but they were only small squirts. Though, at the pace you were going, she could give out any second.

But you wanted to make sure this moment would last a little longer. You brought one of your hands onto her luscious flank and massaged them while you occasionally inserted your tongue into her dripping vulva. Nelly couldn’t get enough of the pleasure and kept blushing intensely and moaning loudly.

She would keep on panting heavily the more you quickened your licking. “Achilles...” she moaned. You looked up at Nelly immediately as she called you out. “I... I’m so close! I’m about to...”

Before she could finish her sentence, her juices exploded right in your face. You gulped down every drop that your lovely mare friend offered. She shrieked from the top of her lungs as she released her juices inside you.

After few more seconds, the nectar stopped spraying and Nelly slumped onto her pillow, panting heavily, yet happily. You slightly coughed as some of her juices went down the wrong tube. When the coughing stopped, you and Nelly looked at each other with caring smiles.

“That… was so… amazing,” you panted, wiping your face of the leftover juices. “You were amazing, Nelly,” you said wholeheartedly.

“T-Thank you... Achilles,” Nelly panted.

“Now then,” you said as you stood up, “Shall we take it to the bedside?”

“Oh, please do.” Said Nelly as the two of them went to the bedroom.

The two of them were able to make it upstairs and closed the doors and curtains behind them, with Nelly using a sound blocking spell so that nobody can hear the two of you. You made your way towards the bed, with Nelly being the first to bent over and playfully moved her posterior to draw you in, whilst she looked at you seductively at the same time.

“Take me, Achilles.” Said Nelly whilst looking at you with full lust.

You moved towards her and lifted her dress up, though this time without her panties, considering you removed it from her when you wanted to pleasure her. You then held onto your member and carefully placed it inside her wet flower, making her squirm a bit.

“Sorry about that.” You told her.

“It’s okay…I…I can take it.” Said Nelly as she really wanted this.

Soon enough, your entire member was inside of her. You then whispered to her and said “Prepare yourself for the ride of your life.”

This caused her to blush bright red as you proceeded into ploughing her.

You then moved your hips back and forth, thrusting her as her flank began to shake against your body as she couldn’t help but bite her lip whilst she enjoyed the feeling at the same time. She enjoyed you thrusting inside of her as she never realized how amazing it felt. When she was overweight, she didn’t know if she’d ever enjoyed the feeling, but because of the hard work she put in thanks to you, she was able to enjoy that feeling that she wanted to try out for so long.

“Oh, oh my.” Said Nelly as she enjoyed your thrusting as her flank bounced from your thrust, whilst her GG-Cup breasts had been bouncing, even if she was still wearing the dress.

You then pulled out member out, until you pushed her and she was fully on the bed, which confused her, but once you were on top of her, you placed your member from behind her again, allowing you to thrust inside of her as she enjoyed the feeling, whilst at the same time, you were holding her flank in order to make sure your member could still go inside of her. What she also enjoyed was that you were constantly massaging her flank as she continued to enjoy every bit of feeling inside of her.

“Oh…oh…fuck me.” Said Nelly as she rolled her eyes from every bit of thrusting you were giving her.

You couldn’t help but smack on her flank playfully, which got her to moan again as she enjoyed the feeling.

“A-Achilles.” Said Nelly whilst you were still thrusting, “C-can we r-remove our c-clothing before we continue, I don’t w-want anything e-else to distract us.”

“You got it.” You replied.

The two of you were able to remove your clothing completely, which allowed you to see her fully naked, whilst you also enjoyed seeing her perky breasts. More importantly, you couldn’t help but be proud, for you were able to help her a long time ago, just like your brother did for you when you were little.

‘Bro, if you could see us now.’ You thought to yourself as you couldn’t help but smile with pride.

The two of you were back on the bed again, this time, Nelly was on her back whilst you lifted her legs up and ended up thrusting her again, which she enjoyed. Nelly couldn’t help but moan from the amazing feeling that you were giving her.

“Oh yeah.” Muttered Nelly as she couldn’t help but stare at you whilst you were staring at her back.

During the thrusting, you then reached out for her breasts and massaged them, which she couldn’t help but moan once more whilst you were massaging her what others would say, lovely melons. However, she ended up holding onto your hands as she looked at you.

“A-Achilles.” Said Nelly whilst she was panting. “C-can I please switch. I’d like to be on top.”

You could tell Nelly really wanted to do this, for back then from what she told you, she really wanted to do it, but couldn’t because of well, you know. But now that all her hard work has paid off, you then obliged to her whilst kissing her cheek.

“Of course.” You replied.

Both of you switched, with you at the bottom, and her at on top. She turned around as you were staring right at her flank and took your member and placed it inside of her love tunnel, which made her moan again. Soon enough, she began to bounce on you as she enjoyed her insides being massaged by your rod. She began to bounce in a fastening pace. You couldn’t help but grasp onto her lovely breasts and began to massage them at the same time.

“Oh, sweet Celestia.” Moaned Nelly whilst she was rolling her eyes at the same time. You then ended up pinching her nipples, making her squeak as she enjoyed the feeling.

You then did more of the work and thrusted upwards, which she enjoyed greatly at the same time.

You then felt that you were going to be at your limit, but you made her stop as she looked at you.

“Wait,” you said to her whilst you sat up as your member was still inside of her, “Before we hit the finale, let me face you before the grand finale.”

Nelly couldn’t help but kiss you on the lips, then smiled once she broke it.

“Okay.” She responded gently.

She pulled your member out and turned around, then placed it back inside. You then looked up and saw her face, whilst she looked down on you as she somehow enjoyed seeing that face of yours.

She then began to move up and down whilst she kept her hands on top of your chest. During that time, you massaged her breasts, making her lift her head and moan at the same time. Then she began to bounce on your lap whilst she moaned greatly at the same time as her breasts bounced. You then couldn’t help yourself as you then grabbed onto her luscious flanks, making her moan whilst she lifts her head at the same time.

You continued to thrust upwards as you were in full control whilst you kept thrusting upwards whilst holding onto her flank cheeks.

“I…can’t think…straight!!” exclaimed Nelly as her tongue was out, “It’s…so big…and it…feels so…good!!”

“Then let’s…finish this!!” you said loudly.

Nelly then hugged you as her breasts were against your chest, whilst she was moaning in your ear at the same time, which in turn makes you pump into her faster. You kept putting all of your stamina into your thrusts, which would make any girl feel numb. But Nelly was a special case as she lasted this long.

“Nelly…it…it’s coming!!” you exclaimed as you felt you were going to explode.

“I…feel it too!! I think…I think I’m going to…!!” exclaimed Nelly as she was also feeling the same way.

With one last thrust, both you and Nelly released your load, making the both of you moan very loudly at the same time. After the tenth climax, both of you panted heavily and landed together on the bed, with Nelly still remaining on top, but then got off and were next to him with a smile on her face.

“Wow…” said Nelly, “I exercised and worked out for months, but I wasn’t prepared for this.”

“Same here.” You replied. You then held her close and said “But I’m glad that my virginity’s broken by the mare I love and care about.”

“Aw, I feel the same way.” Said Nelly as she placed her hand against her belly and giggled. “Heh, this is the first time I’ve swollen a bit because of our fun time, and not because of the food.”

You chuckled with her and said “Still, I’m glad to have met you Nelly.”

“No, I’m glad that I met you.” Said Nelly, “If it weren’t for you, I wouldn’t be where I am right now.”

“Only for the best.” You said as you felt your fatigue is about to kick in.

“I think that’s a sign that we’ve had our fun for the night.” Said Nelly, who then embraced you after she used her magic to put the blanket over the both of you. She kissed you on the lips and said “Goodnight Achilles, I love you.”

“Love you too.” You responded back.

Soon enough, the fatigued kicked in and the both of you were soon fast asleep, as you thought about one thing that could come true one day; the art of parenthood.