Rainbow Dash And The Bimbos

by Metal Fiction

Rating: teen
Tags: Other, Romance, Original Character, Rarity, Profanity, Random, Twilight Sparkle, Anthro, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Rainbow Dash
Length: 3443

When two unicorns are struggling to stay in business, a certain pegasus comes in and they give her the makeover of a lifetime.

At a salon in Manehattan, are two beautiful but bimbo unicorns who are struggling to stay in business as they can't get a single customer. Thankfully on this day a awesome pegasus enters asking for directions, but these think she's a customer and they proceed to give her the makeover of a lifetime.
Cover art belongs to elzzombie on Derpibooru #1882369
This story was a request by JBlaser

Published 2024-03-03 13:30:00 UTC
Last updated 2024-03-03 13:30:00 UTC

Makeover Of A Lifetime

At a salon in the lovely city of Manehattan was two beautiful but very busty unicorns who were slightly dense in the intelligence department and their names were Emerald Value, and Ruby Rich. These two are employees of a successful salon named the E And R'S Beauty Salon. But the problem was it wasn't really successful as it was empty. As barely anypony had showed up to have their mane done or checked in the following week and their were really in for it as their boss Bossy Frank told them.

"If you girls don't get a certain customer by today YOUR FIRED!" Frank yelled as he slammed the door shut scaring the two unicorns. "What are we going to do Emerald? If we don't get a customer by today we be out our of jobs!"
Ruby asked as she started to cry, Ruby got up and confronted her marefriend with a few shoulder rubs which made her calm down and kiss her Emerald on the cheek, making her blush. "Thanks I really needed that." Ruby said as she pulled Emerald into a loving kiss, as they were kissing they ran their hands up and down their bodies and nearly took their clothes off but they stopped as they realized they were beginning to waste time.
"Wow... that was close, I nearly lost focus there." Emerald said as she sat down on her chair. "Yeah me too." Ruby agreed as she sat back down. "I guess will we have to wait." "Agreed." The two unicorns agreed and they proceeded to wait until luck was in their tide.

Meanwhile in Cloudsdale, there was a cocky but beautiful mare who was reading an invitation sent by Twilight Sparkle.
"Hey Rainbow I hope your not too busy at the moment, me and the others are in Manehattan, and we was wondering if you wanted to come?" After she read the letter, Rainbow put on her athletics sportswear and she headed out.

She took off in the air and proceeded to fly towards her destination, on her way there she started having thoughts on what was important to the the point where Twilight invited her.
"I hope this invitation is about pranking somepony, or seeing who's the fastest! Cause I'm 20% percent than the fastest pony out there!" Rainbow cheered in her head as she headed towards her destination.

After she arrived she was greeted by the ponies who smiled and waved at her, and she smiled and waved back at them as she headed down the street. Confused on where Twilight and the others were, Rainbow thought of asking for some directions and she saw this beautiful that was right in front of her. "That looks like a good place to ask." Rainbow said to herself as she walked towards the store.

After she entered the bell rang and the two unicorns Emerald and Ruby jumped up in joy and saw that it was Rainbow Dash, smiling in glee they approached her and started their introduction.
"My name is Emerald! "And my name is Ruby!" "And we are... THE SALON UNICORNS!" Both unicorns said in sync as they finished introducing themselves, Rainbow laughed and clapped at the two's cheerful attitude, after she calmed down she asked the two for directions of where her friends were.

"I'm looking for Twilight Sparkle and her other 5 friends, she sent me a letter saying she was in Manehattan but she didn't specify were. And I was wondering if you know where she was." Rainbow said as she asked the two unicorns for directions, the two looked at each other and looked back at each other.

"Yeah we know where she and the others are." The two said in sync. "Really?! Oh thank you! Cause I've been searching for five minutes now!" Rainbow said with a hint of relief in her voice, but before she could get her answer she heard the two salon ponies giggling and quietly whispering to each other which confused her.
"Uh girls? Aren't you going to tell me where the others are?" Rainbow said with a hint of worry in her face. Ruby gave her a look of kindness mixed with seduction and she looked up and down Rainbow's body. "We will, but right after THIS!" Ruby exclaimed as she grabbed Rainbow with her magic forcing her to be glued to the heat shocking the pegasus.

"H-HEY! What's going on?! I asked you two for directions! Not a fucking sitting session!" Rainbow yelled as she tried her best to break out, but it was all in vain. Both salon ponies surrounded her and placed a finger on her lips shushing her.
"You see the thing is Rainbow baby... business has been slow all DAY, and we haven't had a single customer. And since your the first one to come in, we thought we could give you a MAKE-OVER!" Ruby cheered as she got a tube top and a pair of pink shorts from the cupboard shocking Rainbow.

"I AM NOT WEARING THAT period! understand?!" Rainbow shouted as she tried her best to resist but just like before it was all in vain as the magic was too strong. Emerald walked in front of Rainbow and ripped her sportswear clothing off allowing her perky breasts to be set free, both girls blushed and giggled at the sight of the athlete's chest and they made her get up.

"Try as you want Dash, but you will never break free especially when we do THIS!" Emerald exclaimed as she casted another spell which caused Rainbow's mouth to be shut and her to be under their very control, thus granting them full control and dominance over the Pegasus. "Ah, much better now she can finally put this outfit on." Ruby giggled as she gave the mind-controlled Rainbow the dress.

"Rainbow, put my tube top and shorts on please." Ruby asked as she giggled like a little filly, Rainbow nodded and started to put the tube top on by securing at her back, afterwards she put the shorts on and she put on the pair of knee-high socks that were given. Making the unicorn pair clap and jump up and down in joy as their soon to be bimbo followed their order.

"Well done Dashie! Now take a sit dear, we have hair and facials to do." Emerald said in a sing-song voice as Dash sat down on the chair. "I think it's best I take over here dear Emerald, cause after all I always know how to do hair and make-up best." Ruby said as she kissed her girlfriend on the cheek making her blush.
"Right, are you ready dear Rainbow? Cause I'm going to give you that hair and make-up do of all time!" Ruby cheered as she giggled in joy, Rainbow nodded her head and Ruby got ready.

"Right first things first babe, I think's it best I do something about the hair like tie it in a ponytail or something." Emerald said as she was unsatisfied with Rainbow having long hair. She grabbed Rainbow's hair and a pair of hair ties and started the process of tying her hair into twin tails, while this was Ruby went and grabbed a bag of make-up that would really *enhance* Rainbow's star quality.

After she placed it on the table Emerald opened the bag and grabbed a tube of lipstick and opened it, she started to apply it on Rainbow's lips and what the effect was it caused her lips to become big similar to that's of a bimbo. She then applied a bit of eyeliner, which caused her eyes to shine as bright as a diamond, and finally she applied highlighter around her cheeks which caused them to stand out. And to add the finishing touches both Ruby and Emerald combined their magic together
and casted a spell on Rainbow, which turned her into the ultimate bimbo.
As her breasts were now huge, followed by her hips becoming more wider along with her flank becoming more bigger, and finally her thighs increased in size and they became thunder thighs. After her transformation and cosmetics were done and applied the unicorns giggled in joy and hugged the brand-new Rainbow Dash.

After they stopped the hug both Ruby and Emerald released Dash, and Emerald came up with an idea. "Let's all go out and have just the three of us!" Emerald giggled as she had ideas on what to do, both Dash and Emerald and the pair headed out to start their day.

Author's Note

That's the first chapter done! Now it's time for the second.

Girl's Day Out

The three girls stepped out of the salon and looked around the streets of Manehattan and this made the unicorn couple have ideas. "Right Ruby where should we go?" Emerald asked. "The toy store! I've ALWAYS wanted to go there!" Ruby asked as her eyes lit up with joy, Emerald giggled and her and the other two went to the toy store.

Upon arriving the girls giggled with joy and looked around the various toys, stuffed animals and dolls. Emerald walked over the aisle of where they sold teddy bears. and she jumped in joy when she saw a pink one that had a bowtie. "RUBY LOOK! Isn't she just adorable?! I think this one is perfect!." Emerald jumped as she showed Ruby the teddy bear, Ruby giggled and she grabbed the teddy bear and proceeded to hold and play with it as if it was her own foal. After she gave it back she asked Ruby a question.

"Do you think we should all get the same teddy bear? Cause I feel like it fit." Emerald asked as she tightened her grip on the bear. Ruby's eyes lit up with joy and she nodded. "Yeah I agree, And plus Dash would look cute with one!" Ruby answered as she called Dash over. "Dash honey, can you get us two the same pink bear that Emerald has?" Ruby commanded as she looked at the teddy bear, Dash simply nodded her and got two of the same bear that Emerald has. After the three girls walked to the till and placed their items on the table.

"We would like to buy these three bears please!" Emerald said as she got out her bag of bits to purchase them, the stallion scanned the three bears and told the price. "That be 9 bits please." The stallion said as she placed the bears in the bag, he gave the bag to Ruby and Emerald gave the 9 bits to the stallion. "Thank you so much! and have a nice day." The stallion said as he took the bits, the girls laughed in joy and exited with their brand-new toy friends.

"Right next stop, the ICE-SKATING RINK!" Emerald cheered as she and the others started heading there, upon heading there the girls walked up to the rink and asked the mare for some ice-skates. "Hi can the three of us have some ice-skates please?" Emerald asked as she looked at the mare. "Sure! Here you go, have fun ice-skating!" The seller said as she gave the skates to the girls. "Thank you so much!" Ruby said as she and others put their skates on. The three girls went to the ice area and began their skating, Emerald grabbed Ruby and the two started to kiss as their were spinning as for Dash she was enjoying this and happily smiling throughout the activity.

As they continued to spin and kiss, both Emerald and Ruby released themselves from the kiss and they held hands, they told Dash to step in and the three of spinned and danced together. "Check these moves out Rube!" Emerald said as she performed a flawless 360 spin with one hoove off the ground, Ruby performed a pout and gave a sarcastic clap. Emerald saw how angry Ruby was and she decided to rub it in. "What's wrong Rubes? Can't handle this exotic dance from your bimbo girlfriend?" Emerald taunted as she kissed Ruby on the cheek. "I show you a MUCH better dance than the one you just did!" Ruby said as she got ready.

She stretched her arms and legs and took in a deep breath as she started her dance, performing a flawless 360 degree spin with no issue, along with performing the splits as if it was nothing left both Emerald and Dash in shock. For her finishing move Ruby jumped in the air and performed a flawless spin shocking everypony around the rink. After she finished her spectacular dance Emerald gave her a sarcastic clap and walked up to her with a look of confrontation.

"If you think your dance is superior, check out Dash's! HEY DASH! Show Rubes what you can do sweetheart." Emerald commanded the puppet bimbo as she stepped forward, Dash took a deep breath and started to perform a dance that was 20% percent cool and 80% flawless. This dance was brilliant and perfect to the point where it made Ruby's and Emerald's dances look like child's play, before Dash finished her dance she jumped in the air and performed a perfect rainbow spin Which not only gave the dance an awesome finish but it made everypony have a face of shock and approval.

After she got down both, Ruby and Emerald walked up to her and gave her the compliments. "Great dance Dash! No wonder your best pony, you got the best moves!" Emerald said as she kissed Dash on the cheek making her blush, the three left the rink and gave their ice-skates back to the mare and thought of were to go next. Before they could decide on the next location, Ruby grabbed Emerald's arm and looked deep into her eyes confusing her. "Emerald is something wrong?" Ruby asked as she looked at her marefriend in the eyes.

Emerald took a deep breath and held onto Ruby's hands with a tight grip before she started her speech. "Ruby... I'm sorry for riling you up at the rink, I guess I just let the feeling of competition get to me." Emerald said as she started to cry. Ruby ran a hand down her cheek and looked deep into her eyes. "I'm sorry too, I shouldn't have let it get to my head and show off, I'm sorry." Ruby said as Emerald looked up at her with a smile, the two pulled each other into a strong kiss of romance and forgiveness as they ran their hands down their exotic bimbo bodies.

A minute afterwards, they both stopped kissing as they needed to breath and they blushed heavily as most of the ponies looked at them. "Wow looks like we got a audience..." Right as Ruby said that a idea popped into her head. "EMERALD! Do you know what this means?!" Ruby cried which shocked Emerald. "No! What does it mean?!" Emerald asked as she was confused. "Remember when Frank asked us to get customers right?" Ruby asked as she continued to look at the audience. "Yes, what about it?" Emerald asked.

"Well I was thinking, how about we use Dash to promote our salon and get more customers? Not only we get to keep our jobs, but we make Frank happy!" Ruby cheered as she jumped in the air. "Oh my Celestia! Your right! But we need to let Dash speak so that she can promote our salon." Emerald said as she looked at the silent Dash. "Oh yeah good point, I almost forget about that." Ruby said as she walked up to Dash and performed a spell that allowed her to speak, but keep her under their control.

"Rainbow dear, can you do us a favor?" Emerald asked as she gave Dash a look of seduction. "Yes mistress Emerald, what is it?" Rainbow asked as she was still under control. "Can you tell everypony that is looking at us, to head to our salon Emerald And Ruby's Beauty Salon?" Emerald said as she batted her eyelids, Rainbow simply said yes and she started to speak.
"Hey all of ponies!" Rainbow shouted which got the attention of everypony. "Do you wanna be awesome?!" Rainbow asked. "YES!" The crowd said in sync which made Rainbow quietly laugh to herself. "DO YOU REALLY WANT TO BE AWESOME?!" Rainbow screamed which made the crowd scream YES! in sync,

"Well why every single one of you come on down to Emerald's And Ruby's Salon Of Beauty?! It's just down the street from here!" Rainbow shouted which made the crowd cheer as she got their full attention, everypony began heading to the salon both Emerald and Ruby smiled at Rainbow and gave her a big hug of gratitude. "Thank you Dash! Now not only we get to keep our jobs, but our salon is going to be booming!" Ruby said as both her and Emerald let, before Dash could say anything Emerald snapped her fingers and Dash was quiet again much to the disapproval of Ruby.

"Emerald! Why did you cast the quiet spell on Dash?! She helped us with our business!" Ruby said as she crossed her arms in disappointment, "I casted the spell cause we only needed her to PROMOTE our salon, and plus you know how much of a chatterbox she can be." Emerald said as she gave Ruby a scowl. "I guess you do have a point." Ruby said as she agreed with Emerald's point. Emerald smiled and she kissed Ruby on the cheek making her blush, right one more location and that's it WHERE do you want to go last?" Emerald asked. "Um, I was thinking the Bridleway Theater District, I was really itching to go see a film there?." Ruby said as she looked at Emerald with puppy eyes which made her giggle. "Alright Bridleway it is." Ruby said as she kissed her mare on the cheek, the three proceeded to make their way to the district.

The three made their way to Bridleway and upon arriving they arrived at the entrance of the theatre and went up to the booth to get their tickets. "Hi! Three tickets to Pony Alone please." Emerald asked as she got out her bag of bits, the stallion at the booth showed them the tickets and told the prize. "That be 15 bits please." The stallion said, Emerald got out the amount of bits needed and gave it to the stallion who in return gave the tickets. "Enjoy the film!" He said with a cheerful attitude, the three smiled and entered the theatre.

2 hours later...
The three came out of the cinema laughing and wiping tears from their eyes. "That film was AMAZING! I hope they make a sequel to it!" Ruby said as she jumped. "Yeah I agree, I could see that film over and over again and not get bored of it." Ruby said, the three looked at the clock and saw that it was 9:30PM. "Wow, we gotta get back, I forget we had customers!" Emerald said as she and the others hurried back to the salon. Upon arriving the three entered and saw that it was full of ponies who was either having their mares done or the manicures done.

Their boss Frank came out with a big smile on his face and approached the two salon beauties. "Well girls, I take back what I said. I'm impressed with what you done! And as a sign of my gratitude I be giving you a raise." Frank said as Ruby and Emerald smiled at the news. "OH THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!" Both jumped in sync as excitement overwhelmed them, Frank chuckled at their reaction and he walked back into his office.

The two mares looked at Rainbow and pondered what to do with her. "Ruby, do we reverse the spell or do we keep her as our own?" Emerald asked as she looked at the quiet bimbo. Ruby's eyes lit up with joy as she had a idea and she told Emerald. "I think we should keep Rainbow as our personal bimbo, and plus think of all the customers we could have!" Ruby said as she laughed rather manically, the two approached Rainbow kissed her on the cheek and whispered in her ear.
"Your ours Rainbow, and there's nothing you can do about it."

THE END

Author's Note

And that's that done! this story was a request by JBlaser and I hope you guys enjoyed it, don't forget to leave a like/comment and as always Brony on! And keep on reading.