FOUNDING, RISE AND FALL OF THE TAMBELON EMPIRE

by Kaliber

Rating: everyone
Tags: Mystery, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Grogar, Drama
Length: 18875

The history of the founding of the Tambelon Empire by Emperor Grogar and his associates, Tambelon in just one century turned from a small fortress into the Capital of a Huge Empire, but only 10 years of uprisings, intrigues and civil strife were need

"Chronicles of the First Centuries of the History of the World from the Creation of the World by Elem to the Fall of Tambelon" written by Elarion Telgmar chronicler Describing the events in which he was a participant, he traveled throughout his long history throughout the Ancient World, he recorded the entire history of Tambelon from the Foundation to the Golden AgeDecline and Death of the Empire, after defeating Grogar, he went to his Castle Telgmar and remained there until the end of his life; after many Centuries, the Ponies discovered his Library and moved it to Canterlot
Prequel story Revival of Tambelon

Published 2024-03-10 23:20:00 UTC
Last updated 2024-10-01 11:59:27 UTC

Prologue

In the beginning there was the Void, boundless and formless, immersed in eternal darkness, where the sparks of the future world smoldered. Thus began the Creation, when Ea, the Supreme Creator, came from the abyss and the light to create the world out of nothing. his word was law, his breath was life, and his will commanded the world to arise from darkness.

From the rays of the first light, two higher races arose - Alicorns and Eterns, essences of light and magic, the crown of Creation and keepers of secrets. Alicorns, with wings that shone with fire and horns that shimmered with gold, rose to the skies, becoming the defenders of true wisdom. Eterni, with flame in their hearts and magic in their eyes, gained their power on earth, dominating the elements and creations.
Boreas, Eternus, the lord of the winds, created the Griffins, warlike and proud. Zandra, the alicorn keeper of knowledge, created the Zebras and Antelopes of the Southlands

Chiron, the Etern teacher of quests, called upon the Centaurs, entities with strength in their hearts and wisdom in their eyes. Arcturius, Eternus, lord of the skies, wove the Hippogriffs and Harpies, the essences of the airy spaces.
Eir, Eternus the patron of metallurgy, found his wisdom in the creation of Minotaurs and Diamond Dogs, embodying strength and devotion in them. Lorana, the alicorn personifying Light, filled the World with Magic with her light, giving life and strength to everything that touched her breath.

Together with the Alicorns and Eterns, a great wealth of magic descended to the earth, filling the world with its miraculous breath. magic flowed through every vein of the earth, giving life and strength to everything that touched its magic. It was a time when rivers of light and shadow began to flow together, creating amazing creatures and phenomena.

But on the path to Perfection we encountered darkness and betrayal. Maar, an ethern, immersed in the darkness of the Dark Dimension, intended to subjugate the world to his power. With the power of the League of Dread, he tried to capture the hearts of the Alicorns and Aeterns, fomenting war and chaos.
Coming together in a fight, the Alicorns and Eterns were able to defeat Maar, an Etern who turned to Evil in his greedy desire for However, even in the darkness of darkness, the light of truth could not be extinguished.
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in the last battle, they defeated the League of Terror, expelling evil into the Dark Dimension, where it should have resided.

After defeating evil, the Alicorns and Eterns settled across three continents - Equus, Griffonia and Zebrika, continuing to elevate their peoples and fill the world with magic and wonders. ea, the creator of the universe, helped defeat the League of Terror, but then went into silence, leaving the world freedom of choice and independent development.

Thus began the first centuries of the world, where light and darkness, good and evil, wisdom and betrayal intertwined in the great dancing symphony of fate. and the Chronicler, Elarion Telgmar, became the guardian of history, recording the annals of creation and predicting the fate of worlds and races, wisely connecting the past, present and future in the eternal cycle of time
After the victory over Maar and the League of Terror, the world was shrouded in grace and peace. Alicorns and Eternas, having joined forces, restored balance and harmony on earth. The great wealth of magic that permeated every corner of the world became a source of strength and inspiration for all inhabitants.

Over time, new generations of Alicorns and Eterns began to emerge, possessing their own unique abilities and gifts. The wisdom of older generations was passed on to the young, and the knowledge and secrets of magic became more accessible to study and understanding.

On the continents of Equus, Griffonia and Zebrika, diverse civilizations and cultures flourished, each with its own traditions and customs. Trade and the exchange of knowledge between nations became commonplace, contributing to the development and prosperity of all societies.

However, in the shadows of the world, new threats began to awaken. rumors of strange entities calling on power from the depths of Darkness spread among the nations. Mysterious portals leading to unknown worlds began to appear in various parts of the earth, causing concern and anxiety.

Should a new generation of Alicorns and Aeterns confront these new threats? will they be able to maintain the peace and harmony that their predecessors fought for so long? Only time will tell what trials and adventures await the peoples of this wonderful world in their quest for a bright future.
Two centuries after the victory over Maar, three powerful Eterns - Grogar Krogan and Quirin - decided to go on a long journey to the continent of Equus. Their hearts were filled with a thirst for new discoveries and the desire to create something great.

upon reaching the shores of Equus, they discovered a unique place, which was washed by a sea of magic and filled with the power of ancient elements. It was here, at the junction of heaven and earth, that they decided to found a city, which became known as Tambelon.

Tambelon became a symbol of wisdom, strength and prosperity. majestic buildings, combining elements of magic and architecture, towered over the city, as if addressing the highest heavens. The inhabitants of Tambelon were the heirs of the wisdom of those three Aeterns who laid the foundation for this earthly paradise.

Grogar, Krogan and Quirin became teachers and protectors of the new city, passing on their knowledge and skills to younger generations. Under their wise leadership, Tambelon became a center of magic and knowledge, attracting scholars, adventurers, and those who sought to understand the secrets of the universe.

Thus, Tambelon became not only a city, but also a symbol of the unity of different peoples and races, where magic and wisdom reigned over everyone. Building their civilization on the basis of ancient knowledge and the power of the elements, the inhabitants of Tambelon continued to explore and understand the world in search of harmony and perfection.
The kingdom from which Grogar, Krogan and Quirin came was called Etherion. Wisdom and power reigned in Etherion, and its inhabitants, possessing unique abilities and knowledge, sought to create a civilization based on the principles of justice and light.

Having arrived in the empty lands of Central Equus, the Etherions decided to found their new kingdom and take on the role of Rulers of these lands. A small army and a group of colonists arrived with them, ready to take part in the construction of a new city.

they declared themselves Rulers and protectors of these lands, promising to create a place where magic and wisdom would rule over all. Beginning with the construction of a small fortress that would later become known as Tambelon, the Etherions set about creating a new center of knowledge and culture that would become a symbol of their great heritage.

Thus, the Etherions, who arrived from the distant Kingdom of Etherion, brought with them their wisdom and power to create a new harmonious society in the empty lands of Central Equus, where Tambelon became the personification of their ideals and aspirations

Aetherion was a kingdom inhabited by various creatures, among which were Capricorns, Sheep and other amazing creatures. It was a developed and powerful kingdom in which the inhabitants were enlightened and highly cultured. they had their own architecture, writing and wisdom, which was passed down from generation to generation.

Grogar, Krogan and Quirin went to the empty and wild expanses of Equus with the goal of developing these lands and creating a new center of civilization. For many years they traveled throughout Griffonia, gathering their followers and preparing for the great undertaking.

During their travels they met Argos, a powerful Arimaspian and sorcerer who was renowned for his knowledge and power. Argos joined Grogar, Krogan and Quirin, seeing in them leaders capable of leading their common cause to success.

Together they began construction of a fortress that later became known as Tambelon. it was the start of the great history of this great city, which became a symbol of wisdom, strength and unity between different peoples and races. Thus began Tambelon's path to becoming a great and powerful center of magic and knowledge in the land of Equus

Author's Note

I apologize for the poor quality of the text, if the story becomes I will try to improve the quality, this is a prequel to my story, write your opinion and criticism in the comments, this is very important to me

Etherion

On the tops of the mountains of Griffonia, where the heavens touched the earth, lay the great Kingdom of Etherion. After the victory over Maar, the Aeterns, possessing the wisdom and power of the ancient elements, founded this kingdom as a symbol of power and enlightenment.

Aetherion was the personification of beauty and grandeur: high towers and castles buried in the clouds, exquisite temples that served as places of worship for magic and knowledge, and wooded valleys filled with secrets and wonders. stunning landscapes where elegance and the wondrous power of nature merged together, woven into an amazing pattern that personified the greatness of Etherion.

The inhabitants of Etherion, among whom were Capricorns, Aries and other amazing creatures, had intelligence and magic that made them unique. their culture was rich and varied: ancient rites, exquisite arts, wise teachings and colorful festivals that enveloped Etherion in an aura of grandeur and mysticism.

The view of Etherion was striking in its magnificence: golden sunsets painting the skies in warm shades, moonbeams penetrating through dark leafy groves, and the starry sky revealing its endless beauty in the night. this world was merciful and generous, filling the hearts of the inhabitants of Etherion with hope and inspiration for great deeds and exploits.
on the snow-capped mountain peaks, where an eternal cold permeated the air, lay the magnificent Kingdom of Etherion, inhabited by Aries - ancient creatures possessing wisdom and the power of the elements. in their luxurious houses, built of crystal ice and decorated with crystals, the songs and joyful laughter of children sounded, recalling the riches and abundance of this wonderful world.

the inhabitants of the Kingdom were engaged in agriculture, growing amazing plants that flourished in the snowy fields thanks to the magic and wisdom of Aries. Their harvests were abundant and varied, containing healing properties and unique flavors that delighted the hearts of the people of Etherion.

In addition to agriculture, Aries and Capricorn were also involved in crafts and art, creating exquisite jewelry, luxurious fabrics and precious objects that reflected their talent and taste. Their works were a delight for the eyes and a delight for the soul, immersing everyone in a world of beauty and harmony.

Thus, the Kingdom of Etherion on the snow-capped mountain peaks was a place of amazing fusion of nature and creativity, where Aries lived in harmony with magic and wisdom, creating a world filled with abundance and beauty. their luxurious homes and creations reflected the grandeur of this amazing kingdom, where every day was a celebration of life and creation.
Grogar, with dark blue fur, stood at the top of the Mountain, his gaze directed into the distance, where unexplored spaces stretched. Thinking about the Lands beyond Etherion, he felt a thirst for new discoveries and adventures. Suddenly, two other Capricorns approached him: Quirin with white fur and Krogan with dark red fur, their serious faces expressing determination and desire for new goals.

Discussing the plan to leave Etherion and go in search of a new land to found a new civilization, the three brothers felt strong and powerful, ready to take on the challenge of fate. Only two centuries had passed since Maar's exile, and much of the world remained uninhabited, leaving room for opportunity and new beginnings.

Alicorns and Eterns created many civilizations, but the empty lands still beckoned with their mystery and promise. Grogar, feeling the desire to declare himself the ruler of these lands, felt that fate was leading them to those places where they could realize their dreams and ideals, creating a new kingdom in undeveloped spaces.

Thus began the great journey of the three Capricorn brothers, filled with dangers and trials, but also with hope and faith in a bright future. Their determination and courage would pave the way for a new civilization that would bring peace and prosperity to these uncharted lands.
grogar: (looks into the distance, thinking) Brothers, do you imagine what opportunities await us beyond Etherion? Our hearts burn with a thirst for new lands, where we can found a new civilization, bring light and progress to those lands that have yet to be explored.

Quirin: (calmly) Yes, Grogar, I share your dreams and ideals. I am confident that our path will be illuminated by the light of wisdom and kindness. We can bring peace and prosperity to the lands that await us.

Krogan: (hot-tempered) But why waste time on thoughts and empty words? we need to act, take what is rightfully ours! I don't believe in dreams, I believe in strength and action!

Grogar: (thoughtfully) Krogan, your determination and aggressiveness may be useful to us in our future trials, but do not forget that strength must be combined with wisdom. we need to act intelligently and coherently to achieve success in our endeavors.

Quirin: (patiently) Yes, each of us has our own path and our own strength. But only by uniting and acting together can we overcome all difficulties and achieve our goals. let's move forward together as brothers and overcome all obstacles on our path to a new civilization.

Grogar: (seriously) Brothers, our path is filled with many unknowns and dangers. We know little about the lands beyond Etherion, and we need to make the right decisions about our future actions.

Quirin: (with generosity) We can turn to the Supreme Aeterns, such as Boreas, Arcturius and Eir, they have wisdom and knowledge that can help us on our path. their help can be invaluable in our endeavors.

Krogan: (with aggression) No, I'm against it! These mountain valleys were designated by the Eterni for our people, their anger will be terrible if they learn of our plans. We need more land to provide for our people and find our place in the sun.

grogar: (nods in agreement) Krogan, you're right. We need to act carefully and judiciously. I suggest we start looking for allies among other beings who can share our ideals and help us in our endeavors. our unification with other races may be the key to success on our path to a new civilization.

Grogar: (with determination) Brothers, the time has come to act. We will set off in a week, whoever does not want to go with us will stay here. our destiny leads us to the east, to where new lands and unknown adventures await us.

Quirin: (with confidence) I am ready to follow you, Grogar. Our strength is in unity and mutual understanding, and I believe that together we can overcome all difficulties in our path.

krogan: (with steadfastness) I am also ready to go. We need to achieve more for our people, and I am ready to accept the challenge of fate and move forward to new horizons.

Grogar: (with gratitude) Thank you, my friends, for your determination and faith in our cause. May our journey be filled with courage and wisdom, may every step lead us closer to our dream of a new civilization.

(A week later. The three Capricorn brothers gathered at the gate, ready to set out on their journey. The people of Etherion gathered before them to listen to Grogar's speech.)

grogar: (loftily) Residents of Etherion, today our hour has come. We, three Capricorn brothers, set out on a journey to seek new lands and found a new civilization that will bring prosperity and peace not only to us, but to the whole world.

(Grogar's gaze sweeps over the crowd, his words filled with determination and hope.)

Grogar: We don't know what lies ahead, but we are ready to face all challenges with courage and dignity. our path will be difficult, but we will not be afraid of difficulties, we will move forward, together, as one whole, a single community, ready to overcome all obstacles.

(The inhabitants of Etherion listen to Grogar's speech with admiration and respect, pride in their leaders is reflected in their eyes.)

grogar: May the wisdom and kindness of our people accompany us on this journey, may our strength and determination be our allies. We are leaving, but we will return to share with you our discoveries and achievements. remember us as brothers who went forward to bring light and progress to our land.

(Grogar's words fill the hearts of the people of Etherion with hope and inspiration, and they accompany the Capricorn brothers on their journey with blessings and prayers for their safety on the way.)

under the morning sun, when the rays pierced the skies and illuminated the buildings of Etherion, tens of thousands of inhabitants gathered at the gates, ready to leave their native lands. carts loaded to capacity with valuables and jewelry stood waiting, surrounded by crowds of townspeople who saw off their brave travelers.

the inhabitants of Etherion carried with them everything that was dear to them: artifacts from distant lands, manuscripts of ancient knowledge, precious stones and jewelry, evidence of the past and hopes for the future. The floats are hung with colorful fabrics and decorations, reflecting the wealth and beauty of this amazing city.

Tears of farewell and joyful smiles mixed on the faces of the residents, ready to hit the road with the Capricorn brothers. Men, women and children looked at their homes, at their home streets, at the places where they grew up and lived their lives, with mixed feelings of nostalgia and anticipation of new adventures.

When the last wagons left the gates of Etherion, the city was left behind, but its spirit and strength lived on in the hearts of those who set out on the journey. their exodus was like a great procession, filled with emotion and hope, they moved forward, ready for new challenges and trials, ready to bring light and progress to new lands, leaving behind the legend of brave and determined travelers who went in search of a new homeland

Author's Note

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Journey through the Unknown Lands

The Aetherions entered the Deep Forests of Griffonia with a sense of wonder and awe. The forest was thick, green and full of life, with trees tall and mighty, and the foliage formed a screen from the sun's rays. Having set off along the forest path, they felt the fresh smell of grass and flowers, heard the singing of birds and the sounds of forest creatures.

The Etherions walked along twisted stitches, carefully avoiding trees with braided roots. they admired the amazing variety of vegetation: blooming flowers, lush bushes and herbs, fruits and berries, captivating their eyes and stimulating their senses with aromas.

But they were also careful and vigilant, always ready for possible dangers. In the dense foliage, spider sentries wove their webs, and predatory animals lurked in the shadows, trying to protect their territory. The Etherions overcame these obstacles with the knowledge of the power and wisdom of nature, allowing them to be in harmony with it.

The Aetherians felt small and vulnerable before this beauty and grandeur, but they also understood their own strength and uniqueness. they admired the beauty and diversity of the Deep Forests of Griffonia, but also tried to maintain balance and harmony with nature, connecting with the wisdom it offered.

The Etherions continued their journey through plains, gorges and rivers, always maintaining respect for this natural wonder. they stopped in open fields to enjoy the fresh air and peace, to reflect and be inspired by the beauty around them.

Finally, their journey through the Deep Forests of Griffonia came to an end. they left traces of their presence in this amazing place, they admired its beauty and wisdom, but also understood that this was only part of an insincere and fantastic world. They left the forests, taking with them unforgettable impressions and a feeling of connection with nature.

Having climbed a steep slope, Grogar, Krogan and Quirin, proud and powerful Capricorns, entered the Mountain Gorge. The rocks rose high above them, forming narrow passages and formidable caves. Silence reigned all around, interrupted only by the sound of distant water and wind rushing between the narrow walls of the gorge.

The Capricorn brothers moved through the gorge, overcoming the rocky and uneven road surface. They were careful, trying to find the safest paths to avoid possible traps. Grogar led his brothers with courage and determination, always ready for any challenge.

grogar: (with an appeal) My brothers, let us be vigilant! The gorge may hide many dangers, but we can overcome any obstacle with our unity and determination. Stay close and nothing can harm us.

Krogan: (belligerently) I agree, brother. We are invincible as long as we act together. let's prove our strength to this gorge!

Quirin: (calmingly) There is no danger that we cannot overcome together, brothers. We have inner strength and magic that will protect us from any threat. Let's move forward, sticking together.

passing through the gorge, they admired its beauty and grandeur. They stopped to study the carved stone images on the walls of the gorge, which looked like symbols of ancient wisdom and power. Their steps were reflected in the echo of the gorge, creating a feeling of mystery and power.

suddenly, as they moved through the gorge, they heard strange rustles and sounds. They looked at each other, feeling that something was wrong. And then, from behind the rocks, several griffins armed with claws and beaks jumped out, attacking them unpredictably.

grogar: (with determination) My brothers, get ready for battle! (Summons a magical shield to protect himself and his brothers from the attack of griffins)

Krogan: (with a mighty leap) I'll get the attention of these griffins! (He hits one of the griffins with his powerful hooves, forcing him to retreat back)

Quirin: (spinning his magic) No one will pass here! (Creates a whirling storm of magic, causing the griffins to retreat)

An epic battle begins. Grogar, Krogan and Quirin, used their skills and magic to defeat the griffins and protect each other. the battle was intense and tense, with bright flashes of magic and the sounds of weapons clashing. Each Etherion showed his strength and skill, fending off attacks and striking back with his horns and magical abilities.

Between the interweaving of attacks and blocks, the griffins begin to retreat, realizing the power and determination of the Etherions. The brothers stand at the shield, watching as the griffins fly away in horror, leaving the gorge.

Grogar: (exhales) We dealt with them, brothers! Our strength and determination proved invincible. Let's continue on our way, proudly moving on.

Krogan: (laughs) They were powerless against our horns and magic! Let our path be illuminated only by victories!

Quirin: (smiles) We managed to repel the attack, none of us were hurt. Hold on, brotherhood! Many more challenges await us ahead.

Thus ended the epic battle in the Mountain Gorge. These three powerful Capricorns continued their journey through Griffonia, ready for new challenges and adventures, reassured in their strength and unity. New challenges await them ahead, and they will face them with determination and brotherhood.
The captive griffin, forced to tell the truth in front of Grogar, Krogan and Quirin, reveals to them the secret that they mistakenly mistook the Etherions for allies of the Minions of Maar. This unexpected information stuns Grogar, who realizes that the threat from Maar and his minions still looms over Griffonia, threatening the peace and balance of power.

Grogar, filled with determination and a desire for justice, decides to travel to the North of Griffonia to find and eradicate the minions of Maar before they can cause further harm to the world. The krogan and Quirin, supporting their brother and believing in the common cause of protecting Griffonia, agree to join this dangerous but necessary journey.

armed with their strength, magic and ancient knowledge, the Capricorn brothers travel north, through dangerous lands and uncharted territories, where new challenges and battles await them. They know that the path will be difficult and full of dangers, but they are ready to go through everything to protect their world and defeat the evil that threatens its existence.

With pride and determination in their hearts, Grogar, Krogan and Quirin move forward, knowing that their strength, unity and faith in the righteousness of their cause will make them invincible in this new battle to come. Their connection to nature and ancient mysteries will help them meet challenges and overcome obstacles on the way to their great destiny - protecting Griffonia and defeating evil in the name of light and peace.
Tens of thousands of Etherions, led by Grogar, Krogan and Quirin, are slowly moving north, trying to find Maar's minions. At this point, the Capricorn brothers begin to talk about their neutral attitude towards Maaru and their desire only to meet with his minions without entering into hostility.

Grogar, expressing his attitude towards Maar, says: “We do not seek conflict with Maar or his minions. Our goal is only to meet them, understand their intentions and find a peaceful solution to our differences. We strive for dialogue, not battles.”

The krogan, supporting his brother's position, adds: "Our strength lies in wisdom and the ability to find a compromise solution. We are ready to meet with Maar's minions, hoping for a peaceful resolution of our differences."

Quirin, strengthening his brothers' resolve, concludes: "Our goal is to maintain peace and harmony in Griffonia. We move forward with the hope of dialogue and understanding, striving for a peaceful resolution to our conflicts."

upon reaching the Northern Wasteland, the Capricorn brothers discover an ancient fortress surrounded by high walls and guarded by powerful guards. Approaching the gate, they are met by guards ready to block their path.

The guard, looking menacingly at the brothers, asks: “Who are you and what do you need here?”

Grogar, standing on the boat, replies: “We are Capricorn brothers, we came with peaceful intentions. We are looking for a meeting with Maar’s minions in order to resolve the differences that have arisen and find a path to peaceful coexistence.”

The guard, looking at the brothers in amazement, thinks for a moment before opening the gates of the fortress. The Capricorn brothers enter, finding themselves inside powerful walls, surrounded by ancient architecture and a mysterious atmosphere.

Inside the fortress, the brothers discover intricate corridors decorated with symbols of ancient battles and victories. Light penetrates through narrow cracks in the walls, creating a play of shadows and light across the lands. In the distance you can hear noise and hubbub, indicating life and movement inside the fortress.

Passing through the mysterious halls and chambers, the Capricorn brothers feel growing tension and anticipation, leading them to the upcoming meeting with Maar's minions. their hearts are filled with determination and hope for a peaceful resolution of the conflict, leading to a new stage in their journey and struggle for peace and harmony in Griffonia.
approaching the main Hall of the fortress, the Capricorn brothers stop in surprise when they see the Huge Arimaspi in a Black Cloak with a Staff and Palantir, towering among the darkness. he turns to them, his eyes glowing with the reflection of the flames, and he menacingly declares: “My name is Argos, one of the three very first Cyclops. I know who you are and what you are looking for.”

The Capricorn brothers, stunned by his appearance, ask: “Why were we expelled hereWe came with peaceful intentions to resolve our differences with the minions of Maar."

Argos, looking at them with contempt, replies: “After defeating Maar, the Eterni decided to expel all his supporters and followers into these wastelandshere you will live in exile and isolation, deprived of light and hope of a return to peace."

The Capricorn brothers, realizing the difficulty of their situation, look at Argos with determination in their eyes. They realize that a powerful and ancient being stands before them, but their resolve does not weaken. “We came not for war, but for conversation,” says Grogar with firmness in his voice. "We are seeking a peaceful solution to our differences and hope for your understanding and assistance."
In the main Hall of the Fortress, Argos offers Grogar an alliance and the opportunity to become a leader for all the exiled supporters of Maar. he proposes to build a fleet and go East to Equus, claiming that the Aeterns of Griffonia are too strong, and a new Empire must be founded in this mysterious world.

Quirin asks the question: “Isn’t it better to go through the West?”

Argos replies: “No, in the West there is Hyperborea, the Kingdom of Boreas and Griffins. Only through the East can we get to Equus.”

Krogan retorts, "Isn't the world flat?"

Argos states: “No, this is a fallacy. Maar said that the Creator Ea created the world round. Through the Eastern Ocean we will get to Equus.”

Grogar, having considered Argos’ words, says: “I agree to your terms.”

Thus, the Capricorn brothers accept Argos' offer and are ready to go East to Equus to found a new Empire and find a new place for themselves and their people. A new adventure begins, filled with hope, danger and the possibility of a new beginning in this mysterious world.

Author's Note

Unfortunately, I couldn’t write due to my bad mood. I see there are few views if there’s any point in continuing the story?

Search for Power

A month has passed since the Capricorn brothers left their native lands and entered the dark corridors of the fortress. The time spent in new conditions brought them together, but also brought many questions and uncertainty. At a meeting convocated by Argos, the brothers gathered in the main hall of the fortress, which was again filled with tension and anticipation.

Argos, majestic in his black cloak, stood before them, his eyes sparkling like coals in a fire. He raised his hand, calling for attention: “Listen carefully, brothers. we are on the threshold of a great test. To realize our dream of a new Empire, we need strength. The power that can be obtained by finding Maar’s artifact - the Rainbow of Darkness.”

There was a whisper in the hall. the brothers exchanged glances, and Quirin was the first to break the silence: “But wasn’t this artifact lost forever after the victory over Maar?”

Argos nodded slowly, his expression becoming serious. “Yes, he disappeared. But I found out that Etern Eir keeps it in his forge. it is a powerful being, and whoever can harness the power of the Rose of Darkness will gain the power to create whatever monsters they desire.”

The krogan became more interested as he listened. “Creating monsters? this could give us a huge advantage against any enemies that might stand in our way,” he said, his voice sounding confident.

Quirin, straining his forehead, continued to doubt. “But how can we get into the Eyre Valley? this place is guarded, and the creature itself may be more powerful than we can imagine.”

Grogar, listening to the discussion, finally spoke. “I agree with Argos. We cannot miss this opportunity. if we want to build an Empire, we need power, and the Rainbow of Darkness may be the key to our success.”

Argos turned to Grogar, his voice becoming more confident: “We must act quickly and carefully. I suggest going to the Eyre Valley secretly so as not to attract the attention of the guards. we must prepare a plan and gather the necessary equipment.”

Quirin was still wary, but his doubts began to dissipate. “If we decide to do this, we will need to be prepared for any eventuality. This is not just a search for an artifact, it can be a test for all of us.”

The krogan added enthusiastically, “I agree! We will be able to use our strength and magic to overcome any obstacles. There's nothing we can't do together.”

Grogar looked at the brothers and, feeling excitement overcome him, said: “Then we must prepare. we have a goal, and if we act as one, we can achieve success.”
The road to the Eyre Valley

Fog shrouded the land as the Capricorn brothers, led by Argos, walked through the narrow paths leading to the Valley of Eira. the trees entwined with old vines seemed to be guardians of ancient secrets. There was a scent of magic in the air, and their every movement was filled with a slight thrill.

Quirin, looking around, felt his heart pounding in his chest. “It’s so quiet here... too quiet,” he said, his voice trembling with worry. “Is this really the place where the Rainbow of Darkness is kept?”

Grogar, walking ahead, stopped and turned around. “Silence is a sign. there is magic here, and it can be both our protection and our destruction,” he said, trying to hide his own excitement.

Krogan, on the other hand, seemed more confident. “We came for strength. We can't let fear stop us. If the Rainbow of Darkness is truly here, we must take it. we can handle it!” - His voice sounded decisive, but doubt flashed in his eyes.

Argos, majestic and mysterious, with one eye, watched the brothers. “Each of you must remember: the power of the Rose of Darkness is not only a gift, but also a burden. If we fail to control this power, it may consume us,” his words were full of weighty warning.

Quirin sighed, his hooves trembling slightly from tension. “I understand, but how can we be sure that we can control what Maar created? he was a master manipulator and we could become his victims.”

Grogar approached Quir and, trying to support his brother, said: “We are not alone. We are together, and together we can overcome any obstacles. Don't forget that we have already defeated Maar. We are capable of more than you think.”

The krogan nodded, nudging Quir. "Yes! Say it again! We are brothers, and our strength lies in unity. If anyone can harness Rose’s power, it’s us!”

Argos, watching their interaction, felt hope flare up in his heart. "Fine. There will be challenges ahead, but if we act as one, we can overcome any challenge.”

Suddenly, a gust of wind came from the sky and the clouds began to thicken. Quirin, feeling uncomfortable, looked around. "What is this? Isn’t this an omen?”

Argos frowned. “This is just a manifestation of the power of the place where we are. But be careful. We are close to the Eyre Valley.”

As they approached the entrance to the valley, a majestic arch appeared in front of them, made of sparkling stone that shimmered with all the colors of the rainbow. Grogar stopped, looking at this spectacle. “Is this… this is the Valley of Eyre?” — his voice was full of admiration and nervousness.

Krogan, feeling the adrenaline begin to rush through his veins, said: “Yes! We are on the verge of our greatest adventure! Let's take what is rightfully ours!”

Argos, his heart full of determination, said: “Remember, brothers, we must be careful and focused. The Rainbow of Darkness does not just lie on the surface. She is guarded. And only those who have proven their strength and determination will be able to obtain it.”

The Capricorn brothers, full of determination and hope, began to discuss the details of their plan, realizing that many challenges lay ahead, but also great opportunities. The new Empire they dreamed of might be closer than they thought.

Argos nodded, his eyes glowing. “Now that we have reached a consensus, let us begin to prepare for our journey. We will soon travel to the Valley of Eira and begin our search for the Rose of Darkness.”

The Capricorn brothers, full of determination and hope, began to discuss the details of their plan, realizing that many challenges, but also great opportunities, lay ahead. The new Empire they dreamed of might be closer than they thought.

In the Eyre Valley

the Capricorn brothers, following Argos, carefully made their way through the narrow paths leading to the Valley of Eira. The wind whispered its secrets, and the air was filled with the smell of hot metal and sweat as they approached the city, hidden in the depths of a majestic mountain.

Argos, with one eye, carefully examined the surroundings. “Be on your guard. The spies reported that Eyre was not in the Valley. He may be somewhere else, and we need to find out what happened,” his voice sounded serious and authoritative.

Quirin, feeling the growing tension, asked: “But how can we find the Rainbow of Darkness without his help? Air is the key to our success!”

“We must act quickly,” Argos replied. “If Eir is missing, it could mean someone is trying to use his power for their own advantage.”

When they reached the city, which was full of the sounds of a hammer striking metal, the Capricorn brothers saw minotaurs and diamond dogs working in the forges. The huge figures of the minotaurs, with their muscular bodies, worked tirelessly, creating armor and weapons, and the diamond dogs, with their shiny fur, helped them, bringing tools and materials.

Grogar, watching the hard work of the minotaurs, felt remorse. “It’s so difficult for them here,” he said, his voice full of sympathy. “Shouldn’t Eyre protect its artisans?”

Argos, looking at them with understanding, replied: “Eir, as the Creator of these creatures, takes the best craftsmen to himself. he uses their talents to create powerful artifacts and weapons. Here in the Valley they work themselves to the bone to please him.”

Quirin, frowning, continued: “But if Eir really uses them to his advantage, perhaps he is not so different from Maar...”

“Don’t rush to conclusions,” Argos interrupted him. “Eir is evil, Maarnet, He simply adheres to his principles, which may seem cruel. But we cannot afford to deviate from our goal. We must find the Rainbow of Darkness.”

Grogar, full of determination, added: “If Eyre really is not here, then we must find out where he is and what is happening. Perhaps someone is trying to use his absence for their own purposes.”

they then began to move around the city, listening carefully to the conversations of the minotaurs and diamond dogs, hoping to find some information about where Eir might be. Each step brought them closer to the solution, but also to possible dangers.

they soon noticed a group of minotaurs discussing recent events. One of them seemed to be more knowledgeable, and Grogar, coming closer, asked: “What happened to Eir? Why isn’t he in the Valley?”

the minotaur, looking at them with disbelief, replied: “He went in search of a new metal that could supposedly enhance his strength. But we work here, in his forge, as before. We must continue to create until he returns.”

Quirin, exchanging glances with his brothers, realized that they were on the right path. “If Eir is looking for a new power, perhaps we can use this to our advantage to find the Rainbow of Darkness,” he said, full of hope.

Argos nodded, his face expressing determination. “We must act quickly. let's find a way to find out exactly where he's looking, and how we can best organize our plan.”

The Capricorn brothers, full of determination and hope, began to make a plan, realizing that many challenges lay ahead, but also great opportunities. The rainbow of Darkness was closer than they thought, and they were willing to risk everything to achieve it.

-The Capricorn brothers made their way through the streets of the city, full of determination, but their plans collided with reality. Minotaurs and diamond dogs, busy with hard work, showed no interest in strangers. each of them was focused on their duties, and any interference seemed dangerous.

Argos, noticing this, leaned towards the brothers. “Here we can’t just come up and ask questions. These creatures are devoted to Eir. They won't talk to us."

Quirin, perplexed, said: “But how can we find out where Eir’s forge is located? We have to find a way to activate it!”

Grogar, looking around, noticed how glances of discontent and fatigue flashed among the minotaurs and diamond dogs. “If Eyre is taking the best artisans and separating them from their families, perhaps they are not so happy about their situation. We could use this to our advantage.”

Argos, crossing his arms, added: “But to convince them to rebel against the Creator, we will need strong magic. this magic can activate Eir’s forge, and we can use it as a bargaining chip in our confrontation.”

At that moment, a minotaur approached them with a wary look. He clearly didn't trust his brothers, but there was a spark of interest in his eyes. “Who are you? why are you here?” — his voice was deep and low.

Grogar, feeling that this was their chance, replied: “We come in peace. We know how difficult it is for you here. Eir uses you for his own purposes, separating you from your families and forcing you to work tirelessly.”

The Minotaur frowned, but did not look away. “Eir is our Creator. We must serve him. What do you know about our purpose?”

Quirin, gathering his strength, added: “You work for Eir, but he uses you. He doesn't care about you, he only cares about his own interests. You deserve freedom!”

the minotaur thought, his expression became less confident. “And what do you suggest?”

At this point, Argos, sensing the potential for change in the air, said, “I can help you. I was a servant of Maar and I know the power that can be used. we have a spy among yours who can help you organize a rebellion. If you are ready to fight for your freedom, I will help you activate the forge to harness its power.”

The Minotaur looked at Argos with respect, but also with distrust. “Why should we believe you?”

“Because I know what submission is,” Argos replied, his voice becoming harsher. “I have seen how Eir uses you, how he takes the best craftsmen and leaves you in the dark. I don't want you to become his puppets. I want you to be free.”

the conversation attracted the attention of other minotaurs and diamond dogs. They began to gather around, listening to the words of Argos and the Capricorn brothers. Grogar noticed a spark of hope flickering in their eyes.

“If we can truly regain our freedom,” said one of the diamond dogs, “then we must try. But how can we support you?”

Argos, sensing that the moment had arrived, said: “We must join forces. You will need to find everyone who is unhappy with their situation. we can together create the power to overthrow Eir and activate his forge.”

Quirin picked up: “We can help you. But this will take time and trust. We must act carefully so that Eir does not suspect what we are up to.”

The Minotaur nodded, his eyes filled with determination. “We will work on this. But you must prove that you can give us what we are looking for.”

Gathered together, the Capricorn brothers and the minotaurs began to develop a plan, full of hope for a future where they could free themselves from Eir's rule and regain their independence. this was only the first step towards the creation of a new Empire based on freedom and unity.

Preparations for the Eire Valley Rebellion

After a tense conversation with the minotaurs and diamond dogs, the Capricorn brothers knew they needed time to prepare their moves. They decided to split up: Krogan and Quirin would go explore the city and learn more about its structure, while Argos and Grogar would stay behind to plan a rebellion against Eir.

Krogan, his red fur standing out against the gray stones, said, “We must see how the city works. perhaps there are places where we could hide if things go wrong.”

Quirin, his white fur sparkling in the sun, nodded in agreement. “Let's try to find someone who can tell us more about the forge and what's going on in this city.”

Meanwhile, Grogar, a blue-furred capricorn with large curled horns, looked at Argos and said, “We can't just wait. If Eyre returns, we need to be ready to act.”

Argos, the majestic Arimaspi with one large eye, dark yellow-green skin and a black cloak, replied: “I understand. But first, we need to understand how we can activate the Rainbow of Darkness. With Eyre out, this gives us a chance.”

Grogar nodded, his horns swaying slightly. “How do you intend to do this?”

Argos, leaning closer, continued: “I can call upon the spirit of Maar. Its power will help us activate the Rainbow of Darkness. But for this, you, Grogar, will have to curb the energy of the artifact. I don’t know how much power you can summon, but it’s a risk we must take.”

Grogar felt determination flare up in his chest. “If this is the only way, I'm ready. I'm not afraid to take on this responsibility.”

Argos, looking at him with respect, said: “You need to be careful. the energy of the artifact can be unpredictable, and you must be prepared for the fact that it may try to absorb you.”

During this time, while Krogan and Quirin were exploring the city, they noticed how the minotaurs and diamond dogs continued to work, not noticing their fatigue. they looked depressed, and this only made the brothers more eager to help them.

Krogan, stopping at one of the stone buildings, said: “How oppressed they are. If we can collect them, perhaps we will have a chance of success.”

Quirin nodded, his white fur slightly ruffled by the wind. “We have to find a way to convince them that Eir doesn't care about them. But how?”

Meanwhile, Grogar and Argos continued to discuss the details of their plan. “We need to gather as many supporters as possible,” Grogar said. “If we create a force capable of resisting Eir, he will not be able to ignore us.”

Argos, listening to his words, added: “But for this we need time, and we cannot allow Eir to be returned to the Valley. We must be ready for his arrival.”

The Capricorn and Argos brothers understood that many trials lay ahead of them. While Krogan and Quirin searched the city for information, Grogar and Argos began to make their plans, full of hope that they could free the minotaurs and diamond dogs from the power of Eir and activate the Rainbow of Darkness.

each of them understood that this was only the beginning of their journey, and that both dangers and opportunities lay ahead that could change their destinies forever.

Grogar and Argos continued to discuss their plans when Grogar, full of internal struggle, said: “I have always been dissatisfied with the order in this world established by the Alicorns and Aeterns. I saw how they play with the destinies of beings, not caring about what happens to us, to those who work for them.”

Argos, listening carefully, nodded. “You are not alone in your feelings. This is what caused Maar's rebellion against the Alicorns and Eterns. He saw the injustice and could not remain indifferent. You must continue his work, Grogar. You have the opportunity to change this world.”

Grogar, feeling the burden of this responsibility, said: “I understand, but how can I become the one who overthrows Eir? He is strong and his influence extends throughout the Valley. I don’t know if I can be like Maar.”

“You're already on your way,” Argos assured him. “Your determination and understanding of injustice is the first step. You must inspire others, show them that they can change their destiny.”

Meanwhile, Krogan and Quirin returned, their eyes glowing with excitement. “We learned that Eir went to Hyperborea, to Boreas and Arcturia!” Krogan exclaimed, his voice full of energy. “This means there will be less security in the Eyre Valley now!”

Quirin added: “But that’s not all. Tonight there will be a meeting of the leaders of the minotaurs and diamond dogs at Eira Castle. this is a great chance to reach out to them and call for an uprising!”

Grogar, hearing this, felt the flame of hope flare up in his chest. “If we can convince them, we will have a powerful alliance. But how can we approach them?”

Argos, rising, replied: “We must act quickly. if we can prepare a speech and convey our ideas to them, it can be the start of change. It is important that they understand that Eyre is taking advantage of them.”

Krogan nodded. “I can help you with this. I know how to talk to minotaurs. They respect strength and integrity.”

“And I can help with the diamond dogs,” Quirin added. “They value logic and reason. We must combine our efforts.”

Grogar, feeling the excitement take over him, said: “Then it’s decided. We must prepare for the meeting. This is our chance to change everything.”

Time flew by, and the brothers began to prepare for the upcoming meeting. They gathered in a secluded place where they could discuss their strategy.

“We will need to talk about how Eyre is taking the best artisans and separating them from their families,” Grogar began. “And how we can combine our strengths to achieve freedom.”

Argos, listening carefully, added: “Don’t forget to mention the power of the Rose of Darkness. This can be a powerful symbol for minotaurs and diamond dogs. if they see that there is an opportunity to use this power for their own purposes, they will be ready to support you.”

Quirin, pondering Argos’ words, said: “We must be prepared for the fact that they may not immediately agree. their loyalty to Eir may be strong, and we will need to convince them that unity is the only path to freedom.”

“We must act decisively but carefully,” Krogan added. “If we make a mistake, everything will be lost.”

When night fell, the Capricorn brothers, full of determination and hope, came out of hiding. They knew that a dangerous path lay ahead of them, but they were willing to risk everything for freedom and justice.
Entrance to Eira Castle

The lively hall of the Castle of Eira was full of the leaders of the minotaurs and diamond dogs, who heatedly discussed their affairs. Loud voices echoed off the high ceilings, and there was an air of tension in the air. each of them was serious, in their eyes one could read the desire for power and respect for traditions.

Suddenly the doors to the hall swung open with a dull sound, and three Capricorns entered. Grogar, with blue fur and large curled horns, walked ahead, his gaze full of determination. Krogan and Quirin followed him, ready to support their brother.

When Grogar found himself in the center of the hall, all eyes turned to him. The minotaurs and diamond dogs began to whisper to each other, their whispers resembled a rumble that gradually grew in volume. Grogar raised his head, his voice loud and confident: “I come from Etherion. My name is Grogar, and I have come to free you!”

Grogar's words hung in the air, causing a storm of emotions among those gathered. The minotaurs exchanged glances, some of them looking incredulous, others looking curious.

The leader of one of the clans, a massive minotaur with powerful shoulders, stepped forward. “Free us? From what? From Eir, who gave us power and status? Do you dare to say such things here?”

Grogar, without backing down, said: “Eir is using you as a tool. He takes the best of you, separates you from your families and forces you to work until you are exhausted. You deserve freedom, and I have come to help you achieve it!”

The purring in the hall intensified. the diamond dogs, with their shiny fur, began to look at each other. Quirin, feeling the tension, added: “The world you live in does not give you the opportunity to be who you really are. We can change this, but we need your support to do this.”

“And what do you suggest?” - asked another minotaur, his voice full of skepticism. “How are you going to confront Eir?”

Argos, standing next to Grogar, stood up and said: “I can summon the spirit of Maar, who will give us the power to activate the Rainbow of Darkness. this could be the beginning of a new era where you will be free beings and not slaves to your Creator.”

Those gathered began to discuss Argos' words, their whispers becoming increasingly tense. The leaders of the minotaurs and diamond dogs felt conflicting feelings: fear of Eir and hope for the possibility of change.

Grogar, without waiting for an answer, continued: “If you act as one, if you combine your forces, you can overthrow Eir and regain your rights. we can create a new empire based on freedom and justice.”

The Minotaur who had been the first to confront Grogar frowned. “You promise a lot, but how can we be sure that you are not just another manipulator?”

“Because we have a common enemy,” Grogar replied, his voice sounding confident. “We can show you how strong we are if we stand together. This is your time, your right to freedom.”

Those gathered began to realize that there was more to them than just words. this was an opportunity to change their destiny, an opportunity they could not miss.

Grogar looked at his brothers, then back at the leaders, feeling that the moment had come. “What will you choose? Should we remain under the yoke of Eir or fight for our freedom?”

Tension filled the hall, and silence hung in the air. The eyes of all those present were fixed on Grogar, awaiting an answer. Grogar's speech

The silence in the hall was tense, and the gazes of the minotaurs and diamond dogs continued to remain focused on Grogar. however, dissatisfied voices began to be heard among those gathered.

“This Argos is Maar’s advisor!” - one of the diamond dogs shouted, his voice full of rage. “How can we trust someone who served our enemy?”

The other minotaurs began to whisper, their confidence wavering. “Grogar, do you really believe that we can betray Eir? He gave us power and status. We can’t just give it up!”

Grogar, seeing how some began to doubt, felt that his words might not reach the hearts of these beings. he raised his head and began to speak, his voice loud and full of determination.

“I understand your fears and doubts. I was in this trap too. I grew up in a world where we were always under the rule of those who considered themselves our Creators. But is this true freedom? Is this what we deserve?”

Grogar paused to give the crowd time to consider his words. “We all know that Eir is using you. He takes the best of you, and your families are left defenseless. How many times have you seen your brothers and sisters rush off to his forges with no chance of returning? how many times have you felt like just tools in his hands?”

Consonant voices began to be heard among the minotaurs and diamond dogs. “We are not slaves!” - One of the minotaurs exclaimed, his voice filled with anger. “We are warriors! We deserve better!”

Grogar continued, his passion growing. “Yes, you are warriors! You are powerful beings capable of great things! But you need to realize that real strength is not just physical strength. True strength is unity, the ability to unite and fight for your rights!”

He looked at Argos, who nodded in support. “Eir may be your Creator, but he is not your savior. He is using you like he used Maar. We live in a world where power and control reign. But we can change this if only you decide to unite!”

“What are you suggesting?” asked one of the minotaur elders, his voice sounding serious. “How can we be sure that you are not a deceiver like many before you?”

Grogar, realizing that this was the key question, replied: “I am not asking you to trust me blindly. I ask you to open your hearts and minds. I ask you to think about your families, your brothers and sisters who are suffering in this order. together we can create a new world where everyone will be free, where we will protect each other, and not be puppets in the hands of the Creators.”

The crowd began to chatter, and Grogar felt excitement fill the room. “We can become who we are meant to be. we can build a new empire based on freedom and justice.”

The minotaurs and diamond dogs began to show interest. “But what should we do? How can we make this happen?” - asked one of them, his voice was already less confident.

Grogar, sensing that the atmosphere was changing, continued: “Now that Eyre is away, we have a chance. We can organize a rebellion, gather those who are dissatisfied and oppose it. I can summon the spirit of Maar to activate the Rainbow of Darkness. this will give us the strength and ability to resist Eir!”

There was silence in the hall again, but this time it was full of anticipation. Some of the minotaurs and diamond dogs began to nod, their hearts filling with hope. “If we combine our forces, if we act together, we can deal with Eir!” - said one of the elders.

Grogar, feeling his words begin to take effect, continued: “We can take back our power! we can become those who will control our own destiny, rather than those who will obey others!”

The hall was filled with a roar of agreement, and Grogar felt that this was the moment when he could change the fate of these creatures. “Come with me! Unite with me and we will fight for our future!”

the leaders of the minotaurs and diamond dogs began to raise

debate and debate, and soon one of them, a tall and powerful minotaur, stood up and said: “I support you, Grogar! We will be with you!”

The crowd became noisy, their voices filled with determination. “We will fight for our rights! We will no longer obey Eir!”

Grogar, surprised but full of joy, felt his heart fill with hope. “This is just the beginning. We will gather all the dissatisfied, and together we can overthrow Eir and regain our freedom!”

at that moment Argos, standing next to Grogar, said: “This is the time of change! We must act quickly. We need to prepare a plan to take advantage of this chance before Eir returns!”

the gathering began to discuss the details of the plan, and Grogar, feeling that their fate was now in their hands, knew that they were on the right path. This was the moment when they began a new journey, full of dangers and opportunities, and he was ready to lead them forward.

Author's Note

I'm back after a long break and continuing the story, waiting for your comments

Aire Valley uprising

Several hours after Grogar and his brothers were able to inspire the leaders of the minotaurs and the diamond dogs, a tense atmosphere reigned in the air of the hall. The discussion of the plan for the uprising continued, but everyone's thoughts were occupied with one thing: what will happen when Eir returns?

outside, under the cover of darkness, the Capricorns took cover on an eminence overlooking Eira Castle and its environs. The stars twinkled in the sky, but this could not distract them from their anxious anticipation.

Quirin, carefully watching the horizon, said: “I feel that it is close. we must be prepared for any eventuality.”

The krogan, his red fur glistening in the moonlight, nodded. “We can't let him know about our plan. If he senses that we are about to rebel, he will stop at nothing to destroy us.”

At that moment, a rumble was heard from afar, and all eyes turned to the gates of Eire Castle. Suddenly they swung open and a figure shrouded in light entered the hall. It was Eyre.

He appeared in ethereal form, his appearance shining like the stars, and at the same time it was an image that inspired fear. eyr, Etern, took the form of a minotaur-like creature with shining eyes that seemed to be able to see through the souls of everyone present. In his hands was a huge hammer, sparkling like the star itself, ready for action.

Grogar and his brothers, watching from above, held their breath. “It’s him,” Grogar whispered, his voice trembling with emotion. “Eir is back.”

Quirin, feeling a surge of fear and respect, added: “He looks more powerful than we could have imagined. How can we deal with it?”

The krogan, his red eyes glowing with determination, said, “We cannot let fear stop us. We must be ready for his arrival. He doesn't know about our plan."

Meanwhile, Eyre entered the hall, and his bright light spread throughout the room, blinding everyone inside. his voice sounded like thunder in the hall: “I’m back! My subjects, I have brought you strength and new opportunities!”

The leaders of the minotaurs and diamond dogs, feeling the power of Eir, instantly retreated back, their confidence shaken. the light of his eyes pierced them, and they realized that their Creator had incredible power.

“Gather together, my warriors!” - Eyre continued, his voice sounding like a melody full of power. “I know you have suffered in my absence. I have come to give you back the power you deserve!”

Grogar, observing all this, felt determination ignite within him. “We need to act now,” he said, trying to remain calm. “We must use what we have learned and not allow Eir to divide us.”

Quirin nodded, his white fur fluttering in the wind. “We have to pull together and prepare for what he might do. If he starts to act, we must be ready.”

The krogan clenched his hooves and said, “We must make him doubt our resolve. He must know that we are not afraid of him.”

Meanwhile, Eyre, continuing his speech, said: “I feel that someone here is opposing me. But remember, I created you and I can easily destroy you. The power I brought will help you become even more powerful. Together we will create the Empire you dreamed of!”

Grogar felt his heart fill with anger. “He's manipulating them!” - he whispered to his brothers. “He wants to keep them at bay!”

“We must intervene,” Quirin said, his voice full of determination. “We can't let him continue this madness.”

“Let us,” said Grogar, “get ready to go out to them. We have to show them that there is another way.”

Once gathered, the Capricorn brothers began to move towards the entrance of the hall, ready to confront Eir and open the eyes of the minotaurs and diamond dogs to the true nature of their Creator. There was a fire burning in their hearts, and they knew that this was their only chance to change the fate of everyone.
Eir, surrounded by a glow, began to move towards the massive doors that led to his Forge. Capricorns watched with bated breath from their hiding place as Eir cast a spell and the doors swung open with a dull sound, revealing the entrance to the dark depths of the mountain.

There was a magical atmosphere inside the Forge. the walls were lined with luminous crystals that shimmered with all the colors of the rainbow, reflecting the power and grandeur captured in this place. The air was filled with the aroma of hot metal and magic.

Eir stepped inside, and his majestic appearance became even more impressive. he raised his hand and sparkling magic appeared in the air, creating waves of light that illuminated every crevice and corner of the Forge.

“This is where dreams are born and legends are made,” Eyre said, his voice loud and powerful as thunder. “Here, in the depths of the mountain, I have created a weapon that will serve you and make you stronger.”

The assembled minotaurs and diamond dogs, following Eir, watched his actions with bated breath. he walked up to a large pedestal on which lay a piece of shining metal, sparkling like the stars in the night sky.

“This is metal created by Ea himself,” Eir said, his voice almost trembling with pride. “A unique material that can embody power and magic. I dreamed of him when I became the Creator. With its help, I created what you see around. It will become the basis for the greatest weapon you will ever have.”

Grogar, watching this, felt his heart beat faster. he understood that this metal could become a decisive factor in the fight against Eir. “We have to stop him,” he whispered to his brothers. “If he creates a weapon from this metal, his power will become invincible.”

Quirin, his white fur reflecting the faint light, nodded. “We can't let this happen. We need to get into the Forge and destroy this metal, or at least take it with us.”

The krogan, his red fur sparkling against the magical light, added, “But how can we enter? Eir guards this place like a treasure.”

Meanwhile, Eyre, continuing his speech, headed towards the piece of metal. “With this metal, I will be able to create weapons that can subdue even the most powerful of enemies. We will be invincible! I will give you the power you have dreamed of.”

the assembled minotaurs and diamond dogs began to chatter, their eyes sparkling with curiosity and fear. Eir, seeing their reaction, raised his hand and cast a spell. The metal began to glow even brighter, filling the Forge with a blinding light.

“You must understand,” Eyre continued, his voice sounding like a melody full of power, “this is your destiny. I created you and I will give you everything you need to be great! Together we will create an empire that no one can destroy!”

Grogar, standing in the shelter, understood that time was running out. “We need to act now,” he said with determination. “We must enter the Forge and stop him.”

Quirin looked at his brothers, and a flame lit up in his eyes. “We have to be careful, but we can't miss this chance. If we can get to the metal, it will change everything.”

The krogan, confidently squeezing his hooves, said: “Then let's do it. We must be united when we act.”

Gathering their strength, the Capricorn brothers decided that the time had come to act. They knew that many dangers lay ahead, but they were determined to stop Eir and change the fate of their people.

With these thoughts, they began to move towards the Forge of Eir, full of hope, ready for the decisive battle for their freedom.

As Eir continued to talk about his plans to create powerful weapons from the shining metal, Grogar, Quirin and Krogan knew that they had no time to delay. Their original goal, the Rainbow of Darkness, remained in the back of their minds. To activate it, they needed to prepare a ritual.

The Capricorns were quietly discussing their actions when Argos, standing in the shadows, said: “We have a unique opportunity. I can begin the ritual of summoning the spirit of Maar. Its power will help activate the Rainbow of Darkness and give us the power we need to confront Eir.”

Grogar nodded, his horns swaying slightly with tension. “This may be our only chance. Let's do this. We cannot allow Eir to complete his plans.”

Quirin, his white fur reflecting the light, said: “But we need to be careful. if Eir suspects what we're up to, he might try to stop us.”

The krogan, clenching his hooves, added: “We must split up. Quirin and I will keep an eye on the minotaurs and diamond dogs. They are waiting for a signal to start the uprising. If we can activate the Rainbow of Darkness, that will be our signal.”

Argos, realizing the importance of the moment, said: “I will begin the ritual here in the Forge while you monitor the surroundings. If everything goes according to plan, the spirit of Maar will help us gain strength and confidence in our fight.”

Grogar, feeling nervous, said, “We must act quickly. let’s prepare everything necessary for the ritual.”

Having gathered, the brothers began to prepare the place for the ritual. Argos took off his black cloak and laid it on the ground, creating a circle into which he was going to summon the spirit. he began to form magical symbols using the glowing crystals found in the Forge to create the atmosphere needed for the ritual.

Meanwhile, Quirin and Krogan stepped aside so as not to attract attention. They watched the minotaurs and diamond dogs who were still under the influence of Eir, but their hearts began to fill with doubts, and this gave hope.

“Our chance will come soon,” Krogan said, his voice sounding confident. “We must be ready when the time comes.”

Quirin, carefully watching what was happening, added: “If everything works out, we can join forces and start an uprising. Air can't stop us."

Meanwhile, Argos began to cast spells, his voice sounding loud and confident. “Listen to me, spirit of Maar! I call upon you, appear and give us strength! show us how to activate the Rainbow of Darkness!”

Sparks of magic began to gather around him, and the air became filled with electrical energy. Grogar and his brothers felt their strength growing, and this gave them confidence. They knew that now everything depended on the success of Argos.

Soon a luminous circle formed around Argos, and shadows began to rise from it, which slowly formed into the image of the spirit of Maar. Its power and greatness could be felt even from a distance, and Grogar could not contain his delight.

“I am here,” said the spirit, his voice was like thunder, echoing in the hearts of all those present. “I feel your determination and your thirst for freedom.”

Argos, looking at the spirit, said: “We need your help. we want to activate the Rainbow of Darkness to gain power and free our people from the power of Eir.”

The spirit of Maar, looking at the crowd, said: “The power of the Rose of Darkness is great, but it requires true determination and unity. You must be prepared for the challenges that await you.”

Grogar, full of determination, said: “We are ready. We will fight for the freedom of our peoples and end the tyranny of Eir!”

At this time, the minotaurs and diamond dogs, who were watching everything from afar, began to whisper among themselves, feeling the magic in the air. they felt that something was changing and it gave them hope.

Quirin, noticing that the minotaurs were beginning to show interest, told Krogan: “It seems they are beginning to realize that Eir is not the only way. We need to be ready for the signal.”

Argos, concentrating on the ritual, continued: “I call upon the Lord of Darkness.”

In the Forge of Eir, when the spirit of Maar slowly emerged from the magical light, his voice sounded eerie and powerful, like thunder breaking the silence. “You seek the Rainbow of Darkness,” he said, his words filled with ancient power. “It is kept in the depths of this forge, hidden from the eyes of Eir. Search in the furnace, where the power of metal intertwines with magic.”

Grogar, feeling a surge of confidence, nodded. “We know what to do,” he said, his voice becoming firm. at the same time, Eyre, not noticing what was happening, walked up to the huge furnace, preparing to place a piece of shining metal for layout.

Rays of light reflected from his minotaur-like form, but at that moment Grogar, concentrating on magic, gathered all his strength. he cast a spell, and suddenly a deafening explosion was heard in the forge. Flames and magic engulfed the space and a powerful wave of energy swept through the room, signaling the beginning of the uprising.

Eyre, turning to the source of the explosion, exclaimed in surprise: “What’s happening?!”

Grogar and Argos, taking advantage of the moment, attacked Eir. Argos, remembering his old responsibilities, sent force to strengthen Grogar's attack. “You can't stop us, Eir!” - he shouted, raising his hands to the heavens.

Eyre, recognizing his former adviser, said in bewilderment: “Argos? are you alive? I thought you were missing!”

“I have returned to free those who suffer under your tyranny!” - Argos answered, his voice sounding with determination.

At this moment, the minotaurs and diamond dogs, having received a signal from Grogar, began to attack. They ran out of their hiding places, full of determination and rage. War cries rang out in the hall as the rebels began to attack Eyre's supporters, who were in confusion.

Eyre, realizing that his plan was collapsing, shouted: “You are all traitors! I created you and you dare to rebel against your Creator?” his hammer flashed in his hands, and he began to fight the rebels.

The battle flared up with renewed vigor. The minotaurs, feeling their strength and unity, fought with unknown determination. The Diamond Dogs, with their cunning maneuvers, supported their brethren by attacking those who remained loyal to Eir.

Grogar, fighting alongside Argos, felt the power of the Rose of Darkness begin to awaken within him. “We need to get to the oven!” - he shouted, pointing to the place where, according to the spirit, the artifact was kept.

Argos nodded and they began to fight their way through the battle. Eir, realizing that his power was beginning to weaken, rushed to attack Grogar and Argos. “You can't take what's mine!” — his voice sounded with rage.

Grogar, gathering all his strength, replied: “This is not yours, Eir! This belongs to all of us and we will take it!”

At this time, the minotaurs and diamond dogs continued to fight, their hearts full of anger and determination. Every blow was full of meaning, every cry an expression of the freedom they were looking for.

Eir, surrounded by enemies, began to lose control of the situation. At that moment, Grogar and Argos finally broke through to the furnace, where the Rainbow of Darkness sparkled.

“We found her!” - Grogar shouted, his eyes sparkling with excitement and determination. He extended his paw towards the artifact, and at that moment power flooded him like never before.

“Now we can change everything!” - he said as the Rainbow of Darkness began to glow, filling the Forge with magical energy.

Eyre, realizing that his time was running out, rushed towards them. "No! You can’t take it away!” - he shouted, rage and fear mixed in his voice.

Gathering all his strength, Grogar felt how darkness and light intertwined within him. He knew this was his moment. With the Rose of Darkness, he could become what he had always dreamed of being - a dark lord who would take his destiny into his own hands.

With these thoughts, he activated the power of the artifact, and the Forge was filled with light, breaking the darkness. This was the moment when everything changed. The rebellion had begun and they were ready to fight for their freedom.

In the Forge of Eir, when the spirit of Maar slowly emerged from the magical light, his voice sounded eerie and powerful, like thunder breaking the silence. “You seek the Rainbow of Darkness,” he said, his words filled with ancient power. “It is kept in the depths of this forge, hidden from the eyes of Eir. search in the furnace, where the power of metal intertwines with magic.”

Grogar, feeling a surge of confidence, nodded. “We know what to do,” he said, his voice becoming firm. At the same time, Eir, not noticing what was happening, walked up to the huge furnace, preparing to place a piece of shining metal for layout.

rays of light reflected from his minotaur-like appearance, but at that moment Grogar, concentrating on magic, gathered all his strength. He cast a spell, and suddenly a deafening explosion was heard in the forge. Flames and magic engulfed the space and a powerful wave of energy swept through the room, signaling the beginning of the uprising.

Eyre, turning to the source of the explosion, exclaimed in surprise: “What’s happening?!”

Grogar and Argos, taking advantage of the moment, attacked Eir. Argos, remembering his old duties, sent force to strengthen Grogar's attack. “You can't stop us, Eir!” - he shouted, raising his hands to the heavens.

Eyre, recognizing his former adviser, said in bewilderment: “Argos? Are you alive? I thought you were missing!”

“I have returned to free those who suffer under your tyranny!” - Argos answered, his voice sounding with determination.

At this moment, the minotaurs and diamond dogs, having received a signal from Grogar, began to attack. They ran out of their hiding places, full of determination and rage. War cries rang out in the hall as the rebels began to attack Eyre's supporters, who were in confusion.

Eyre, realizing that his plan was collapsing, shouted: “You are all traitors! I created you and you dare to rebel against your Creator?” his hammer flashed in his hands, and he began to fight the rebels.

The battle flared up with renewed vigor. The minotaurs, feeling their strength and unity, fought with unknown determination. The Diamond Dogs, with their cunning maneuvers, supported their brethren by attacking those who remained loyal to Eir.

Grogar, fighting alongside Argos, felt the power of the Rose of Darkness begin to awaken within him. “We need to get to the oven!” - he shouted, pointing to the place where, according to the spirit, the artifact was kept.

Argos nodded and they began to fight their way through the battle. Eir, realizing that his power was beginning to weaken, rushed to attack Grogar and Argos. “You can't take what's mine!” — his voice sounded with rage.

Grogar, gathering all his strength, replied: “This is not yours, Eir! This belongs to all of us and we will take it!”

At this time, the minotaurs and diamond dogs continued to fight, their hearts full of anger and determination. Every blow was full of meaning, every cry an expression of the freedom they were looking for.

Eir, surrounded by enemies, began to lose control of the situation. At that moment, Grogar and Argos finally broke through to the furnace, where the Rainbow of Darkness sparkled.

“We found her!” - Grogar shouted, his eyes sparkling with excitement and determination. He extended his paw towards the artifact, and at that moment power flooded him like never before.

“Now we can change everything!” - he said as the Rainbow of Darkness began to glow, filling the Forge with magical energy.

Eyre, realizing that his time was running out, rushed towards them. "No! You can’t take it away!” - he shouted, rage and fear mixed in his voice.

Gathering all his strength, Grogar felt how darkness and light intertwined within him. He knew this was his moment. With the Rose of Darkness, he could become what he had always dreamed of being - a dark lord who would take his destiny into his own hands.

With these thoughts, he activated the power of the artifact, and the Forge was filled with light, breaking the darkness. This was the moment when everything changed. The rebellion had begun and they were ready to fight for their freedom.

The battle in the Forge flared up with incredible force. Grogar, Quirin and Krogan fought with full tenacity, each of them using all their strength to confront Eir and his supporters. The minotaurs and diamond dogs, divided into two sides, clashed in a fierce battle, but the rebels began to gain the upper hand.

Eyre, realizing that his power was beginning to crack at the seams, clutched the hammer in his hands. His shining eyes burned with rage, and he rushed to attack Grogar, who was barely holding the Rainbow of Darkness.

“You are all traitors!” - Eir shouted, his voice sounding like thunder. “I created you and you dare to rebel against me? I will destroy you!”

Grogar, gathering all his strength, raised the Rainbow of Darkness. “We are not your slaves! We are fighting for our freedom!” - he said, but at that moment Eir struck with a hammer, and Grogar, not having time to dodge, was knocked down. his body flew several meters away and he landed on the ground with a dull groan.

Krogan, watching Grogar fall, rushed forward, his red fur sparkling in the light of magic. “Grogar!” - he shouted, but Eir, leaving no time to think, directed his anger at him.

“You'll be next!” - said Eir, his voice was full of hatred. He raised his hammer and struck Krogan hard, leaving him wounded on the ground next to Grogar.

Quirin, seeing his brothers fall, felt anger burning in his heart. “Don’t you dare touch them!” - he shouted, rushing to attack. He used his hooves to hit Eir's side, but he dodged and pushed Quirin away with ease.

At this time, Eir's supporters, the minotaurs, began to gain the upper hand over the rebels. some of them, succumbing to fear, began to retreat, not believing in victory. The Diamond Dogs, fighting alongside Eir, used their agility and cunning to counterattack.

Argos, with a magical scepter in his hands, tried to support his allies. “Get yourselves together! Don’t let fear take over!” - His voice sounded like thunder, and he channeled magic to help Grogar and Krogan. He sent flashes of light towards the minotaurs, trying to restore confidence to the rebels.

but Eyre, seeing that his followers were beginning to lose confidence, again rushed to the attack, striking blows with his hammer at all who stood in his way. “You will all be destroyed! I won’t let you destroy what I created!” - he shouted, his anger resounding in every word.

Grogar, lying on the ground, felt his body filled with pain. He knew he couldn't give up. “Krogan! Quirin!” - he shouted, trying to rise on his hooves. “We must fight on!”

Krogan stood up next to Grogar, breathing heavily. “We can't stop! we must fight to the end!” — his voice sounded full of determination.

Eir, noticing that the brothers were getting up again, angrily pointed the hammer at them. “I will end things with you now!” - he said, raising the hammer for the decisive blow.

but at that moment Argos, having gathered all his strength, pointed his scepter at Eir and cast a spell, filling the space with bright light. “Don’t you dare touch them!”

The light hit Eir, causing him to freeze for a moment, giving Grogar and Krogan the opportunity to jump out of the way.

"Now!" Grogar shouted, joining forces with Argos. They knew they had to use all their resources to oppose Eyre and his supporters.

Gathering together, they directed the light of the Rose of Darkness at Eir, and at that moment a storm of magic erupted around them. the battle had reached its climax, and each of them knew that their freedom was at stake.

Eir, sensing the growing strength of his opponents, let out a loud roar that shook the walls of the Forge. “You can't beat me!” — his voice sounded with furious rage.

but Grogar, with his head raised and his heart full of determination, said: “We will fight to the end! We will not retreat!”

At that moment, they realized that a decisive battle lay ahead of them, and they were ready to take on this responsibility. It was their destiny and they couldn't allow it

Let her go.
gPT-4o Omni Mini: Chapter 15: The Darkness Awakens

Eir, having gathered all his magic, raised the hammer and let out a deafening scream that shook the walls of the Forge. the light emanating from the Rose of Darkness began to dim under the pressure of its power, and everyone gathered, including Grogar, Quirin and Krogan, were thrown back like straw dolls in the wind.

“You all thought you could change the world?” - he said, his voice sounded like thunder, full of contempt. “You don’t understand what order is! I created this world and I will rule it!”

Argos, standing on his feet and feeling increased anxiety, rushed towards Grogar and Krogan. “We have to stop him! If he continues, he will absorb the Rainbow of Darkness!” - he shouted, his magical scepter sparkling in his hands.

Air, seeing Argos rushing towards them, directed his magic at him, creating a powerful blow. “You can't stop me, Argos!” - he shouted. They began to duel, magic colliding in the air, creating flashes of light and darkness.

Grogar, still lying on the ground, tried to get up, but his strength was leaving him. He watched as Argos and Eir fought, their magic exploding around them, creating chaos. But Eir was stronger, his hammer shook space, and he soon gained the upper hand.

“You have always been nothing but a traitor, Argos!” - said Eir, delivering a crushing blow that threw Argos back. “You can't save your friends!”

The gathered minotaurs and diamond dogs continued to fight, but Eir, filled with rage, used his magic to suppress them. The battle had reached its climax, and Grogar, feeling his strength leaving him every moment, knew that he could not allow Eir to win.

Finally, with Argos defeated, Eir turned to Grogar, who lay on the floor, bleeding and bleeding. “You and your dreams of freedom are nothing!” - he said with contempt. “The world must be under the control of the Eterns, and you cannot change it!”

At that moment, as Grogar felt his life fading away, he saw the Rainbow of Darkness sparkling in the light. “No... I can't give up,” he whispered, and a spark of hope flared in his heart.

Gathering his last strength, he activated the Rainbow of Darkness, and at that moment the power of the artifact fell upon him. Dark magic engulfed him, consuming his body, and Grogar screamed in horror and pain. it was a transformation that changed his essence.

The forge filled with an eerie light as Grogar began to change. His fur turned dark blue and his eyes glowed blood red. He grew in size, becoming a formidable creature full of darkness and power.

“We will not be slaves of the Eterns!” - he said, his voice became deep and menacing, like a clap of thunder. “We will become the new rulers of this world!”

Eir, seeing Grogar transform, could not contain his surprise. “What have you done? This is impossible!"

Grogar, now full of strength and determination, looked at Eyre, a fire burning in his eyes. “I will not obey you! I will take my destiny into my own hands!”

With these words, he rushed to attack Eir, ready to fight for his freedom and the fate of his people. A new battle began in the Forge, full of darkness and light, where every blow was full of determination, and every cry was an expression of freedom.

The minotaurs and diamond dogs, seeing Grogar transformed, regained their confidence. They began to fight with renewed vigor, realizing that they now had a chance to win.
Eir, realizing that his power was crumbling, tried to retreat, but Grogar, now full of power, rushed towards him with incredible force. This was their last battle, and no one was going to give up.
Grogar, sensing the power emanating from the Rose of Darkness, rushed to attack Eir with incredible speed. his dark blue fur sparkled, and his blood-red eyes burned with a burning light. Eyre, aware that his control over the situation was weakening, prepared for battle.

Grogar's strength increased with every step, and he attacked Eir, delivering a powerful blow with his hooves, which now seemed like sharp blades. Eir, dodging, responded with a powerful blow from his hammer, which shook the air and tore apart space.

“You can't beat me!” - Eir shouted, his voice sounding in unison with the roar of the hammer, which he brought down with force on Grogar. The impact echoed deafeningly as the hammer collided with the dark magic emanating from Grogar.

Grogar, feeling his powers collide with Eir's energy, pushed aside and rushed to attack again. “You don’t understand that I’m capable of more now!” - he said, gathering darkness around him like a powerful storm.

Their attacks continued to intermingle, creating a whirlwind of light and darkness. Hammers and hooves collided, emitting sparks of magic that rent the air. Each blow was full of fury and determination, and both opponents knew that this was their last chance.

Eyre, regaining his confidence, said: “You challenge the natural order! I created this world and you can’t change it!”

Grogar, clenching his teeth in anger, replied: “I will no longer obey you! I will take my destiny into my own hands!” He released a powerful stream of dark energy that struck Eir, forcing him to retreat several steps.

Eir, with rage in his eyes, raised the hammer again and shouted: “I will not give up! I will rule this world!” He brought the hammer down on Grogar, creating a massive wave of force that shattered the space around them.

Grogar, feeling that his strength was beginning to dry up, gathered all his remaining strength. “I will become the new lord! I will take everything that is mine!” - he shouted, releasing the full power of the Rose of Darkness.

At that moment, the darkness around him began to thicken, and visions of his future appeared in the air - a world where Capricorns and other creatures could be free. This gave him strength, and he again rushed to the attack.

Eyre, seeing Grogar gaining power, felt fear. "No! I won't let you!” - he shouted, trying to push Grogar away. But the dark energy emanating from Grogar was too strong.

Their forces collided in a deafening explosion, and the Forge shook from the impact. Eir, feeling the darkness engulf him, screamed in rage and fear. “You can't destroy me! I am eternal!”

Grogar, full of determination, said: “I do not destroy; I release! You are not my Creator, and I will not be your slave!”

With renewed vigor he confronted Eir, and their forces met again. The cries of battle were heard all around, and the minotaurs with the diamond dogs continued to fight, feeling that the fate of their people depended on the outcome of this fight.

Grogar, experiencing the full power of darkness, gathered the remnants of his strength, and, at the last moment, released a powerful stream of energy aimed directly at Eir. he knew this was their final battle and he couldn't afford to lose.

Light and darkness collided in a deafening explosion, and the space around them shook with force. Grogar, now full of the magic of the Rose of Darkness, shouted: “We will not be slaves of the Aeterns, but will become the new rulers of this world!”

At that moment, everything around them froze, and everyone felt how their fate depended on the outcome of this confrontation. Grogar and Eir, two titans, fought each other in a decisive battle that could change the world.

The forge shook under the pressure of battle as Grogar, gathering all his might, faced Eir for the last time. His dark blue fur sparkled in the light of the Rose of Darkness, and his blood-red eyes radiated rage. Eyre, aware that his control over the situation was crumbling, was not going to give up without a fight.

Having gathered his strength, Grogar rushed to the attack. “You can’t oppress us anymore!” - he said loudly as he rushed forward. But Eyre, hammer in hand, was ready.

“You won't change the world!” - Eir shouted, bringing his hammer down on Grogar, but he, gathering his strength, dodged. An epic clash of magic and power erupted in the Forge, filling it with a deafening roar.

At this time, Argos, seeing how his ally was fighting, clutched the magic scepter in his hands. “Grogar, we must combine our forces!” He shouted, raising his scepter to the heavens, summoning magic to support his friend.

But Eir, feeling that his power was beginning to weaken, rushed to the attack again, his hammer flashing like lightning. “You can't stop me, Argos!” - he barked, attacking with incredible fury.

Grogar, using all his strength, rushed at Eir. “We will not be slaves of the Eterns!” - he said with complete determination, but Eir, dodging, struck, and Grogar flew to the side, landing heavily on the ground.

“You can't win!” - said Eir, his voice full of contempt. “I created this world, and you cannot change it!”

Gathering his last strength, Grogar felt determination flare up in his heart. “I activate the Rainbow of Darkness!” - he shouted, gathering magical energy, but Eir attacked again, delivering a powerful blow with a hammer that shook the air and made the walls shake.

Meanwhile, Argos, seeing Grogar struggling, gathered all his magic. “Don't let him gain the upper hand!” - he shouted, sending magical bursts towards Eir, trying to distract his attention.

Eir, feeling the growing pressure, turned his attention back to Argos. “You have always been a traitor!” - he screamed. “I will destroy you, just like your friends!”

At this time, Quirin, watching the battle, realized that the time had come to act. He charged at Eir, using his hooves to try and knock his opponent down. “You can't stop us!” - he shouted.

but Eir, bitter and full of malice, pushed Quirin away with ease, as if he were just a straw. “You are all nothing!” - he said, again pointing his hammer at Grogar.

Grogar, aware that his time was running out, summoned all his energy. "I will not Give Up!" - he shouted, and at that moment the Rainbow of Darkness began to glow brighter than ever.

Eyre, feeling that the situation was getting out of control, said: “You cannot change the world order!” His voice was filled with furious fury as he raised his hammer again, preparing for the final blow.

but at that very moment Grogar, having gathered his last strength, activated the Rainbow of Darkness, and a powerful stream of darkness fell upon Eir. “I'm not afraid of the dark! I will accept it!” - Grogar shouted, and the energy from the artifact filled the Forge.

dark magic engulfed Grogar, and he felt his strength increase, his body transformed. Eyre, realizing that he was losing control, froze in fear.

Grogar, now full of power, rose to his feet, his dark blue fur sparkling and his eyes burning blood red. “We will become the new rulers of this world!” — he said, his voice becoming menacing and full of power.

Eyre, sensing the growing threat, tried to retreat, but Grogar, full of determination, rushed to the attack. “You were a ruler, but now it's time for a change!”

The assembled minotaurs and diamond dogs, seeing Grogar transformed, regained their confidence. They began to fight with renewed vigor, realizing that they now had a chance to win.

Grogar and Eyre faced each other in a final battle, and it was a battle that would determine the future of the entire world. the forge was filled with light and darkness as their forces joined in an epic showdown, with neither one willing to give up.

Grogar, having gathered all his power, finally defeated Eir. His dark blue fur sparkled, and his blood red eyes radiated strength and determination. Eir, defeated, lay on the floor of the Forge, bleeding out with magic and power. His hammer fell to the ground with a dull sound, and he himself could not restrain his angry screams.

“You don't understand what you're doing!” “he said weakly, his voice sounding full of contempt. “I am just one of the Aeterns. I'll come back!"

Grogar, not paying attention to the threats, turned to Argos and Quirin. “Now we have a chance. Let's take advantage of this opportunity!”

They headed to the furnace, where, according to ancient legends, a powerful artifact created by Ea himself was kept. Argos, raising the hammer, said: “We must forge a Bell, which will become a symbol of our new strength!”

Grogar and Quirin began to aid Argos, each blow of the hammer resonating with their resolve. They worked in unison, filling the forge with sparks of magic and light. the bell they created was not just a weapon; it became a symbol of their new beginning.

When the work was completed, Grogar, feeling excited, raised the Bell. “Now we will create a new reality,” he said, his voice loud and confident.

Argos, looking at the Bell, said: “This artifact will be our protection and strength. It will give us the ability to control magic like never before.”

At that moment, Grogar approached the wounded Eir, who, unable to get up, looked at them with hatred and fear. “You can no longer oppress us, Eir,” he said with determination. “Now we will control our destiny.”

Eyre, realizing that his time was up, shouted: “You don't know what you're doing! I am your Creator!”

Grogar, picking up the Bell, activated its power. At that moment, a green portal appeared around them, emitting light and magic. “Now you will know what it means to lose your power!” - he said as the portal began to suck magic from Eir.

Eir's screams echoed throughout the Forge as the magic he had accumulated over the years flowed out of him. "No! I can’t disappear!” - his voice sounded with horror, and he tried to resist, but the portal became more and more powerful.

The assembled minotaurs and diamond dogs, seeing Eir begin to disappear, felt their hearts fill with hope. they fought not only for themselves, but also for the future they could build.

Gradually, Eir's magic was depleted, and his screams became quieter. A minute later, when all his power was absorbed, Eir disappeared into the light of the portal. The forge froze and silence reigned in the air.

Grogar, standing at the stove with the Bell in his hands, felt the power filling him. “We did it,” he said, his voice sounding relieved. “Now we are free.”

Quirin and Argos, standing next to each other, exchanged glances full of hope. “This is just the beginning,” Quirin said. “Now we can create a new world.”

Grogar, realizing his new power, said: “We will be the new rulers of this world. We will no longer be slaves of the Eterns!”

With these words, they left the Forge, ready to face a new future, full of determination and hope. their journey was just beginning, and they knew that many challenges and opportunities lay ahead of them. But now they were ready to take their fate into their own hands.

-

Grogar, standing at the stove with the Bell in his hands, felt his new power cover him like a wave. his dark blue fur sparkled, and his blood-red eyes radiated magic that filled the space around him. He looked at the rebel minotaurs and diamond dogs, his voice became menacing and powerful.

“Take the wounded and leave!” - he shouted, his words sounded like thunder in the mountains. “I will destroy the Forge and everything that is here!”

Those gathered, sensing his power and determination, began to raise their wounded comrades. The minotaurs and diamond dogs, full of passion and determination, began to act, realizing that this was their chance to escape the tyranny of Eir and start a new life.

Grogar, having gathered all his magic, directed his power towards the Forge. “I will no longer submit to this place that has become a symbol of oppression!” - he shouted, activating his magic. There was a powerful roar around him that shook the walls of the forge.

The forge began to shake, and cracks spread along its walls. Grogar, burning his energy, continued to destroy what had once been an instrument of Eir's power. “You will all witness a new era!” - he said as the walls began to collapse.

The volcano inside the mountain began to erupt, and Grogar's magic burst out. the flames engulfed the space, and the Forge began to crumble into pieces. Grogar knew that this moment would be decisive for the entire Vale of Eyre.

“Go away!” - he shouted, feeling his strength growing. “I will destroy everything!”

The gathered minotaurs and diamond dogs, seeing the Forge being destroyed, began to leave it. they couldn't help but feel both fear and hope in the air at the same time. Grogar, freed from the shackles of his past, opened a new chapter in his destiny.

As the final collapse of the Forge was heard with a deafening crash, Grogar, surrounded by flames, began to transform. his form changed, becoming even more sinister and demonic. His eyes sparkled like diamonds, and his aura filled the space around him, creating an atmosphere of fear.

He emerged from the flames, and his new appearance was terrible. Grogar has become the embodiment of strength and darkness, ready to take his destiny into his own hands. he knew this was his time and he wasn't going to waste it.

“I am the new ruler of this world!” “he said, his voice sounding like thunder, filling the hearts of those gathered with trembling. “We will no longer be slaves of the Eterns! We will become masters of our own destiny!”

The volcano erupted and lava flows began to flow down the mountain, destroying everything in its path. Grogar stood engulfed in flames, feeling his powers reach their peak. He knew it wasn't just the end; it was the beginning of a new era.

those gathered, watching the destruction, felt hope ignite in their hearts. This was their salvation, their new life. Grogar, full of darkness and light, was ready to lead them into this new world, full of opportunity and power.

With the destruction of the Forge, the eruption of the volcano and new opportunities, they began a new chapter of their history. Grogar, now a dark lord, was prepared for what lay ahead, and he knew that he was no longer alone.

waves of magic and lava merged to create a new landscape, and Grogar, proud and powerful, strode forward, ready to take on the challenge that the new world presented to him. This was their destiny, and they were ready to accept it.

Author's Note

I apologize for the large number of mistakes, I'm interested in your reaction to this chapter

Arrival in Equus

A month has passed since Grogar and his companions - Capricorns, Minotaurs, Diamond Dogs and Griffins - defeated the powerful Eir and destroyed the Valley that bore his name. Now an armada of hundreds of ships under the command of Grogar has reached the mysterious continent of Equus.

Grogar himself stood at the bow of the flagship, his gaze fixed on the approaching shores of the new land. At his side was Argos, a powerful cyclone sorcerer who played a key role in their victory over Eir.

“We have finally arrived,” Grogar said, feeling excited. “Equus lies before us, waiting for us to conquer it and found a new empire here.

Argos looked at him with concern:

Grogar, we need to act carefully. we have heard legends about Boreas, the divine ethern who rules Hyperborea in the north of Griffonia. His kingdom is extremely powerful, and we should not underestimate his strength.

Grogar frowned, but then nodded, acknowledging the wisdom of Argos' words.

You are right. first we need to strengthen ourselves in these lands, build fortresses and gather an army. Only then will we be able to decide how to confront Boreas and other rulers.

Argos was pleased that Grogar managed to contain his ardor. After all, as the legends said, Boreas possessed truly terrifying divine power.

Soon the first ships began to approach the shores of Equus. Capricorns, Minotaurs, Diamond Dogs and Griffins were eagerly waiting to set foot on the new land, ready to conquer it and establish a strong base here.

Grogar stood at the stern, watching the landing. he was filled with anticipation - soon they would begin to explore these uncharted lands. Equus will learn the power of their alliance, even if they must be careful at first due to the threat of Boreas.

Grogar's fleet quickly reached the wide and sandy shores of Equus. As soon as the first ships landed, Capricorns, Minotaurs, Diamond Dogs and Griffins hastily went ashore, ready to begin exploring and developing new possessions.

Grogar, standing at the head of his comrades, looked around the landscape that opened before them. In the distance, majestic mountain ranges could be seen, and closer to the coast stretched vast plains covered with lush vegetation.

An excellent place to found our empire! - Grogar exclaimed, his eyes burning with a thirst for conquest. - We will quickly build fortresses and cities here to establish our presence in these lands.

Argos, standing nearby, placed his clawed paw on Grogar's shoulder.

Let's not rush, brother. We must first explore this continent in detail, identifying its resources and landscape, before deciding where exactly to establish our new kingdom.

Grogar frowned, but then acknowledged the wisdom of Argos's words. Impatience will be inappropriate here - they must act carefully.

Soon, reconnaissance detachments were sent in different directions to begin studying Equus. The Capricorns took careful measurements of the area, the Minotaurs examined the nearby forests, and the Griffins rose into the sky to inspect the situation from above.

After a few days, the scouts began to return, carrying valuable information. They discovered several fertile river valleys, as well as huge mineral deposits in the mountains. But the most remarkable discovery was an amazing valley located at the foot of the majestic peak.

This is an ideal place to found our capital! - exclaimed one of the Capricorns. - The valley is protected on all sides by rocks, there are sources of water and rich lands for farming.

Grogar nodded approvingly, his gaze lit up with new inspiration.

So, it's decided. we are establishing our main city here, which will become the heart of our future Tambelon empire!

The Capricorns, Minotaurs, Diamond Dogs and Griffins immediately began to build, their hands full of energy and determination. Equus will be conquered, and their peoples will take a strong place here.

Grogar watched this bustling activity, feeling his power and greatness growing every day. Now that they have a foothold on this continent, nothing will stop his quest for dominance. Tambelon will soon become a reality.

Under the leadership of Grogar and his Capricorn brothers Krogan and Quirin, as well as the powerful Arimaspi Argos, an armada of settlers quickly began to develop and develop the ideal valley that was chosen to found their new city.

Capricorns - intelligent rams with great stature and impressive magical potential - have launched active construction activities. Their strong hooves and mastery of elemental magic made it possible to quickly erect the first buildings. Griffins hovered in the skies, observing and helping to coordinate the work. Minotaurs and Diamond Dogs were engaged in the arrangement of the territory, the development of resources and defense.

It will be a majestic city! - Grogar exclaimed, observing how the valley was being transformed. - Tambelon will become the proud capital of our empire, which will soon spread throughout Equus!

Argos, standing nearby, nodded with satisfaction. It was his idea to name the new city Tambelon - in honor of their common goal of building a powerful state.

“Yes, Tambelon will become our base,” said Arimaspi. “From here we will expand our influence and subjugate one region of Equus after another. Nothing can stand against our combined strength.

Grogar grinned, his eyes blazing with a thirst for power. Capricorns, Minotaurs, Griffins and Diamond Dogs worked tirelessly, filling the valley with the sounds of creation. Within a few weeks, the first impressive outpost grew here, surrounded by strong walls and towers.

Argos looked around the new fortress approvingly.

Tambelon will become an impregnable citadel. No one can threaten our dominance from here.

Grogar felt power and greatness filling him. Capricorns, Minotaurs, Griffins and Diamond Dogs bowed before him in unison. Equus begins to submit to them, and this is just the beginning.

soon the construction will be completed, and Tambelon will appear before the world in all its splendor. Then Grogar and his associates will begin to further expand the borders of their empire. Equus will fall under their dominance!

I stand on the top of the mountain citadel of Tambelon and survey the view before me. It is truly an impressive sight - our city, built according to my vision, now stands majestically in this valley.

Looking around, I remember those first days when we first set foot on these lands of Equus. I, Grogar, leader of the Capricorns - a people of intelligent rams with dark blue fur and glowing red eyes, possessing impressive magical power.

Next to me stood my brothers Krogan and Quirin, as well as the powerful Arimaspi Argos, a former ally of the Lord of Darkness Maar, who has now sworn allegiance to us. It was Argos who suggested calling our new kingdom Tambelon.

Then, looking at the stretching lands that opened up to us, I felt an irresistible desire to immediately begin the conquest. But the prudent Argos tempered my ardor, reminding us that we first need to strengthen ourselves, build impregnable strongholds and gather an army in order to be able to withstand any opponents.

and now, after months of hard work, Tambelon appears in all its splendor. Our Capricorns, with their magic and skillful hooves, built powerful walls and towers to protect the city. Nearby are the first agricultural lands, where trained Minotaurs are working.

and beyond the walls of the city stretch endless plains, covered with dense forests, in which Diamond Dogs live - the faithful guardians of our borders. And on the horizon rise majestic mountain ranges, in the depths of which, as our scouts say, countless riches are hidden.

it all now belongs to us, Tambelon and our growing empire. We cannot be broken, because I have a powerful artifact, the Bell, whose voice is capable of crushing anyone who dares to challenge us.

Equus will fall under our rule, and the whole world will know the greatness of Tambelon! I, Grogar, will lead our armies to victory until every piece of these lands becomes ours. Thus begins a new era!

I stand on the top of our mountain citadel and survey the domain of Tambelon, stretching in all directions. In just a thousand days, we managed to turn this valley into a prosperous fortified city, surrounded by fertile lands and rich deposits.

Our Capricorns, Minotaurs, Diamond Dogs and Griffins worked tirelessly to subjugate these lands to our will. Now Tambelon has become an impregnable stronghold from which we will extend our influence throughout the vast plain of Equus.

I feel strength and greatness filling me. After all, we have not only impregnable walls, but also my mighty artifact - the Bell, the voice of which is capable of crushing anyone who dares to oppose us. No one can resist our combined might!

I look into the distance, imagining how the armies of Tambelon go to conquer new lands. soon all of Equus will belong to us. Various races - ponies, griffins, minotaurs, centaurs and many others - will bow to our dominion. They will unite under my leadership, forming an invincible empire.

No one will dare challenge us. After all, we are unshakable, like the rocks surrounding our city. Our will is indestructible, and our military power is insurmountable. Equus will soon be ours!

I grip the handle of the Bell, feeling its magic pulsate through my veins. From now on, the fate of this continent is decided here in Tambelon. Great new achievements await us! May the Tambelon Empire be glorified from now on and forevermore!

Author's Note

I don’t understand why there are no discussions in the comments? you are not interested in this stor