The Rainbow Factory 3

by Solid Twilight

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Alternate Universe, Tragedy, Crossover, Human
Length: 1507

this is made to be a cliff hanger need comments to lift the road block

this story is told by my own ideas and small parts from other very good stories i've read this is suppose to be scary and i've tried my best to be very descriptive so i hope i do well and i hope you enjoy it and FEAR IT thanks!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-09-25 01:05:31 UTC

Decent To Enter Darkness

Decent To Enter Darkness

Chapter Two, Decent To Enter Darkness

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You open the door nothing but pure darkness, except the light from the room which creates a long beam of light down the corridoor, "Oh Celestia I'm not walking down that hallway without some sorce of light, you step back and close the door, not much longer the one thing you don't want Voices coming from behind the door. You quickly think "OH NO OH NO OH NO!" you have no other options you barricade the door, whatever is outside the door is trying to break in, you pick up the pace to board it up, "SOON" it says and leaves minutes later you unboard the door nothing there execpt large claw marks on the door, "Man if i hadn't barricaded that door... oh man i'd be in for it" you look around the room a desk comes to your sight "hmmm" you search the desk to find a old rusty flashlight still barely working you think "either this, or, wait for that thing to come back. I have only one choice now" you open the door and walk out of the room, to begin... the nightmare.....

Intensive Care

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"Gah.... my head, huh? wait... where am I?" You ask yourself dazed and hurt. "AH! your awake! thank god I thought you where gone for a second." Says a man with a much different accent than most people you've seen, it sounded quite British as you think if hes from some other world, "Excuse me?" you say realizing what had happened before. "Where am I? and more importantly... WHO EXACTLY ARE YOU?" you blurt out, Looking around the room, it was actually clean and looked more like a civilized room from the others. "OH yes! sorry about before I'm the Doctor." Hes says gladly sounding like without a care in the world. "You are very lucky I found you, you'd likely be dead by now."

"Hey! this doesn't answer my other question, where am I?" you say with a tone. "Oh.. um. yes, well if you'd like to know its The Rainbow Factory... not the best of most places if you ask me.. or anyone..." In a rather quite voice this time. As he says "The Rainbow Factory" you begin losing it, visions of death and blood, murder, gore... you feel as if you're insides are going to explode, your eyes turn bloodshot, as you lay on top of exam table....

You kick and fight as if it was for your life, but the leather straps of the exam table outmatch you're strength. Quickly the Doctor grabs a Syringe from the table on the other side of the room, and stabs it into you're arm you feel terrible pain throughout your body. You feel a cold liquid running through you're blood, you regain sanity and the vision seem somewhat of nothing anymore, "MY GOD ARE YOU ALRIGHT?" Screams the Doctor. You regain some breath within a few seconds and exclaim "Yes, just give me a second to catch my breath..."

Insanity With Death

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As you look around the room with your mind back together you start getting this itch in the back of you're head like a small voice, calling out to you, you try to ignore it and focus on escaping the Factory but it just keeps slipping back in saying to kill all your friends, and abandon the plan to escape, "Heh, I found this to actually lure my attention..." as I started to listen to it, it threw the visions back in my head, only this time I didn't feel hurt, I felt apart of it like all that was me... I murdered all those people..

As it starts all making sence, the whole time, I was alone everything I saw was just my imagiation, I gave myself that shot, I stabbed the thing to death, then I realize I was the Monster.. I did it all I stabbed myself I almost killed myself then saved myself, I've been all alone this whole time, what has become of me? am I a human or a Monster....

It was already to late I had stabbed myself to many times to save myself and all those people I murdered, will haunt me for the rest of my life, So... I made the best choice of action sence I realized what was wrong with The Rainbow Factory, I Murdered myself, but as I felt that cold rusty blade go through my chest, I felt as if all that pain and suffering I caused and went through had lifted off my back, as if it was my first good deed in a very long time. but right before I passed away, the voice in my head told me "The Rainbow Factory, Where Not A Single Soul Gets Through, In The Rainbow Factory, Where Fears And Horrors Come True." now this echoed in my head till I saw the light, and I must admit It was True....

                                                                        ~The End~

Author's Note: Thank you for reading! It took me alot of time to make this and Truthfully this was my first time making a MLP related fan fiction. So I thank you again for reading! please comment and tell me what you thought! Again Thanks For Reading! ~Solid Twilight.

Wake Up Call

The Rainbow Factory 3

"eyes open" you try to move with pain everywhere "UGH!'' you scream with ageny you feel around but can't move your straped down and you can't see anything "Help!" you yell you hear foot steps getting louder and then you ask "any pony there?" nobody answers. A light flicks on a strange creature appears stands on 2 legs until the light provides you enough light to look down at yourself to notice quite at the second you appears to be no diffrent than him you freak! "Holy Celestia! what going on!" he has a happy look on his face until it turns to a red eyed creature or from your vision he does. You notice a knife in its hand, you know what its going to do. You look for anyway possible to get out of this situation, nothing seems possible to get out you give up all hope, then you just try one more effort,

     it prepares for the kill, you ready yourself. At the knick of time it goes for your hand you move you wrist and the leather strappings move where the knife has just struck "SLASH" the leather strapping is cut in half you hand is free you see that he is going for you heart then you do the unthinkable you punch the attacker! it moves back dazzed with your percious time you unstrap yourself and get off the blood stained table. The attacker notices this and attacks again you jump back, luckily it misses and you attack and punch it again it falls to the floor in pain, quickly you grab the knife and stab It 4 times, it falls and breaths out one, final, breath, and It dies. you recover from the situation and think, just think, "Oh Sweet Celestia what is that.. THING?" you look around the blood stained room two doors. "Alright i'm getting out of here!" you attempt to open a door "WHAT? LOCKED?" you try the other one...

Let The Pain Truely Begin

Chapter 3, Let The Pain Truely Begin

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As you exit the room of which this nightmare began you feel uneasy as if the darkness was ripping at you, breaking you from having hope of fleeing this nightmare. You continue walking slowly, with no way to defend yourself other than your bare hands, and your tourch you would not stand a chance in an encounter with those things around. You come to a right turn at the end of the hallway, down that hallway is pitch black you know if theres a chance of an exit it has to be somewhere, you turn the corner and continue walking the light from the room you started in is no longer uselful.

As you walk down the hall you feel a draft from behind, you slowly turn around nothing, you turn back around to your original position, there, stands a, creature of some sort. You take action and run past it, running down the dark hallway you quickly turn around and aim the flashlight down the hall, nothing, "What the? oh god i'm seeing things now how can this get any worse?" as you turn around there again stands the creature, crying and blood stained you step back 3 or 4 paces and ready yourself for whatever it has to throw at you. It Attacks and Cuts open your left arm with a iron claw or some sort of hand made weapon, the wound is deep and painful, you attempt to attack with your good arm and miss.

You start to feel tired and uneasy then " CRASH " you fall to the floor....