BigMacxColgate

by seefefwf

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Dark
Length: 761

Big Mac has a surprise visit from everyones favorite dentist, Colgate!

Big Mac is due for a surprise dentist appointment from Colgate, the one and only dentist in ponyville. But little does she realise the horror that awaits up at the barn of the Apple family.

If you are not a fan of creepy shit or other stuff like that then please may I politely redirect you to the humour section.
My personal catagories: rape, fear, puns, horror, sex, blood, shit, semen, and guts.
(General disgusting stuff…)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-10-13 14:54:36 UTC

surprise

WARNING:contents in this story get pretty messed up, so if you can not handle divastation or fret that one of your favorite characters in the shows satus might be ruined, then i sugest that you leave..

One hot sunny day in ponyville there was a red pony out in the tree orchad and he was bucking down some apples from trees, this certain pony if you havent guessed already is Big Mac. Big Mac was out in the orchard when he suddenly saw a familiar face from a distance at the front gate, it was his favorite dentist Dr. Colgate with a bag in her mouth. Big Mac had walked up to Colgate had said "Hello doc, whats with the surprise visit?" Big Mac had asked questionly. "oh nothing to worry about Macky" colgate had to said using his nickname she had made.

"oh ok" Big Mac had said

"ok Macky I need you to open your mouth big and wide" she said to Mac as he started to open his mouth. Then Big Mac had opened his mouth to let the pony check his teeth and when she had looked into his mouth she saw the most well brushed mouth in equistria, but she did see something by his maulers. "Oh i forgot my tool!" said Colgate turning around and going over to the table in the barn showing her flank to Mac as she grabed her utensil. Big Mac had noticed something he had only felt around his sister Applejack, his member was growing. "ok Ma....." Colgate had stoped because she noticed Big Mac's penis fully extended and hardened. "Uh I got the tool" she had said blushing and returning to the teeth checking. Big Mac had smelled her hair and caught the smell of tooth paste.......his favorite smell. "ok everything looks good Macky" colgate had said backing into the barn to put the tool back into the bag. "You know what else looks good?" Big Mac said with a romantic glance. What Macky?" Colgate had said with a questioned face. "You" said Big Mac with a evil grin and had closed the barn doors.

Big Mac had made Colgate put her front hooves on the hay stack or she would be killed said Mcintosh. Without hesitation Big Mac had forced his member into Colgates pussy, making sure every inch was inside of her and with that she had let out a quite yelp. He had started thrusting more and more, Colgate on the other hand was in a pain of tears and a shear riping of her vagina. Colgate had taken a shit because of the massive pain, Big Mac did not like this one bit so he took out his goo, shit, and blood covered cock and had forced it into her anal region. "AHHHHHHHH STOP!" Colgate had said yelling in extreme pain, as her anas was being torn apart and how the blood and shit mixed, why that only made Big Mac even more stronger and evil with sex. By now the back side of Colgate had been nothing but fecises, and blood.

Big Mac had thought of something simply devastating that had made him the evil stallion he is today. He had shoved his shity, bloody covered cock into Colgates mouth with full force, in which doing so he had broken her wind pipe and all she could do now was to stare and whatch as her  world had turned to black. Big Mac was not pleased with this and had twisted her neck until it turned all the way backwards, he then walked behind her and mounted his penis inside into a massive hole which had been once Colgates anus. He then started pumping furiosley and had made out with the head making sure he had licked up every bloddy and fieced liquiod that had droped. After a while Big Mac had felt that he was about to cum, and with so he had grabed a knife and tore into her stomach leaving guts to fall to the wooden floor. Whith that he had jabed his penis into there and had came. After which he had pulled out and shoved it into Colgates mouth trying to clean her teeth with the cum.

Big Mac had carried the body down to the basement in wich he had tossed the body onto a 4 others, 3 of them were fillies and the fourth was a mare that had a cowboy hat on. He had left. cleaned up, and went back to work with the apples.