Misanthropic Renegades of Equestria

by CyberneticLemmings

First published

Equestria is no stranger to mysterious and often malevolent forces. It's been long since theorized as to why exactly Equestria is so frequently beset by arcane anomalies but all can agree that it's usually best to just leave it alone. Ponies go missing sometimes, strangers will show up in towns with no memories of their origins, travelers will find that previously well documented paths are erased; the landscape having shifted overnight. Historically the consensus on this issue is 'don't think about it'. If even Celestia doesn't have a clue, it's probably not worth looking into. Typically the residents of Ponyville strongly adhere to this rule, the nearby forest being extra mysterious and ominous, nudging their decision along. Unfortunately for the small farming village their newest resident, a notable purple trouble magnet, isn't really the type of pony to leave well enough alone...


This fic is very AU but doesn't really deviate from major plot points often. The primary change is that Equestria is far more dangerous than in the show. Think of the entire continent being only marginally less dangerous than the Everfree with the spooky forest itself being extra volatile. There are other notable changes but they're not really essential for context and will be presented when necessary. Also just for the record, there will be romance in the story but it is not really a romance story. I know I have a tendency to get kinda dark but I'm really just a hopeless romantic at heart.

Also, pretty major content warning. I think stuff like this kills pacing so this is my one warning: this story heavily deals with themes of depression, low functioning anxiety, and a slew of other potentially triggering conditions and actions afflicting members of the story. This includes anything that these afflicted people might choose to do, to themselves or others. That being said, that is not what the story is about. Whether or not I pull it off properly remains to be seen; but this story is fundamentally hope pilled, not an edgelord fic.
TL;Dr, the most AU part of this fic is that the knives are not dull and the wars are not (usually) fought with pies, but wars will end and knives will be used for pie.

Please don't be too mean but polite critique would be appreciated. This is the first story I've published and I wish to improve.
Title subject to change. Give me recommendations, I'm bad at naming stuff.
This story has a completed plot, but I haven't finished writing it. I'm not even going to pretend to offer a schedule but if you're interested in helping to edit, or if you just want to talk, feel very free to hit me up.