Sunset Do-Over her Whole Life

by TheUltimateTheater

Gain and Loss

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"Where am I", I said in my head as I was in a white room that reminded me of a hospital and I was in what looked like a bed meant for a baby thanks to its small size and the white bars on each side that was hard to see out of

"if this was supposed to be my past, I don't remember this", I said as I tried to move which felt wired since my body felt like it was tinier causing me to misjudge my steps on the bed leading me to fall a couple of times before I was able to get to the bars and climb on top of them leading me to see that I wasn't alone in this room since it was full of baby ponies and a mirror causing me to see my reflection

"Is that me", I said as I looked into a mirror reflecting a baby unicorn with my usual mane color of yellow and orange. This led me to touch my face with my hoof and see if the mirror version of me copied the movement which it did causing me to faint on the spot


"wakey wakey little one", the sound of a familiar voice I had not heard in years caused me to open up my eyes to see the face of the pony I hadn't seen since the day she died. The pony I was looking at was known to the world as famous for Wonder Bolts thanks to her quick speed and her amazing trick that included her moving so fast she was able to make making in the sky. These ponies call her by the name of Sundash but I called her by a different name

"Mom", I said in my head as some tears came out over the joy of seeing her face which made me know that I was definitely in the past

"oh what's wrong does your head still hurt when you fell from the height", she said causing me to look to see that there was a bandage on my head that must have come from me falling out of my baby bed

"Again, we are still sorry about that", an unfamiliar voice said causing me to look to see a nurse pony bowing her head

"It's fine as long there be nothing to worry about after she heals, am I right", my mom said as she held me up to the sky while she looked at the face of the nurse with slight anger over the accident

"no she will be all good after a day or two it just a simple cut", the nurse still worried but dissolved when she saw the smile on the face my mom

"That's great to hear", my mom said

"yeah that's all well and good but can we get to the point of naming her", another familiar voice said causing me to look at where that sound came from spouting a filly who was probably around the age of 4 or 5 who would later go up to be a future wonder bolt captain name, Spitfire

"Sis", I said in my head as I looked at her with a smile on my face before I came to realize what she said

"wait I don't have a name yet, so that must mean I was just born and the only thing I remember about my baby years was", I said as on cue the door opened leading me to the slight of a familiar unicorn pony with golden skin awn was best to know to the world as a knight name Golden Armor

"Dad", I said as I looked at him with tears in my eyes I knew I was looking at a pony who only had a couple of days to live

"There you are, what took you so long", my mom said with anger over the fact of him being late to the birth of his second daughter

"Sorry I have to finish all my paperwork before I can start my vacation", he said before giving her a kiss which showed how much the two love each other. It caused me to cry even more tears knowing the fact that it would never be the same when he had gone

"what's wrong", My mom said in worry as she saw my crying face

"Maybe she wants me to hold her", my dad said before he grabbed me causing me to feel the warmth of his body that felt so nice thanks to his body being full of energy

"so now that dad is here can we family name her", my sis said with a voice that was feeling some annoyance but I could still tell that there was joy underneath it

"speaking of that I was thinking of going with the name Sunset Shimmer do you like it hon", my mom said as she looked at her husband as about to fall asleep in his hooves thanks to his warmth

"I love it", my dad said as the last words I heard before I joined the word of dream on this memorable day.


"Do you have to go", a familiar voice said causing me to open up my eyes to see that the voice came from my sister talking to Dad as he was wearing his armor and was about to go into the rain. This image matches the one in my mind of the last time that my family will see my dad

"I have to go kid if I don't know if my man can stop the Chimera without their captain", my dad said before grabbing his shield off the well with his magic and putting it on his hoof

"Please be careful" " my mom said leading me to look up at her since she was holding me at that moment

"I will try my best", my dad said as he got ready to leave causing me to cry as I knew I could do nothing to stop him from leaving the house


I woke up to the sound of crying which caused me to look for the source of the sound and see that it came from my mom who was in her other hoof holding the source of her sadness a letter that declared the loss of my dad

"Mom, I'm home!", Spitfire said causing my mom to stop her crying so she could try her best to be strong to deliver the news to her daughter

"hon I got some unhappy news", my mom said as she looked at her first daughter looking like she break into tears at any moment

"about what", Spitfire said with a face full of worry and seriousness as she looked back at my mom

"Your father has just lost his life on the battlefield", the moment my mom finished what she said she was already back to crying multiple tears and was losing her voice

"no that can't be the truth", my sis said as I saw a slight of her getting ready to cry which was a slight I had only seen one other time in my whole life

"it is they found his body and marked him dead", my mom said as she gave my sister the note that declared the news in detail of my dad dying from a poison bite from the Chimera. Once my sister finished reading the note she had tears coming down her eyes causing my mom to hug her as the two cried. The slight of this caused me to start crying over the loss of my dad and the fact that I knew there was many more hardship to come to my family.

"to come", I said as an idea came to my head that could change the whole world

"Since I am reliving my past why don't I change their future", I said I thought about the problems that would come for me doing this and knowing it lead me to different future but as I look at my family I didn't want to see them deal with any more hardship

"Sorry Nebula, but I'm not only going to change my future but I I also going to change the future of my Family!"

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