Sunset Do-Over her Whole Life

by TheUltimateTheater

Rating: everyone
Tags: Spitfire, Sunset Shimmer, Queen Chrysalis, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Alternate Universe, Drama, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Princess Cadance, Romance, Equestria Girls
Length: 4111

Sunset get The Change to live her life again how so and what would she change

After the destruction of the Mirror World, Sunset is given the offer to save the world by changing moments in her past life. What would she has to charge? Also what other changes can she do in the past before the time of Twilight and friends?

Published 2024-09-22 10:40:00 UTC
Last updated 2024-11-09 21:30:04 UTC

The Start of Whole New Adventure

My blue eyes open which haven't felt this tired and hard to keep open since Pinkie Pie and the others threw me a surprise birthday party when I turned 21 in the Mirror World

"Where am I", I said in a shocked voice as I saw sparking yellow clouds in every direction no matter where I looked with no end in sight

"[size=1.5em ] You are in my world ," an unfamiliar voice said, blooming and loud, which brought me melodies of reading in my journal about Princess Twilight's description of how Princess Luna's voice used to sound when she visited Ponyvile for the first time. I tried my best to look for the source of the voice but I felt like I could barely move thanks to the endless pressure on my body

"Why am I here? All I remember was", I said before my melodies hit me of seeing my friends and me hanging out like it was just any other normal day after we got our college degrees until the world started to shake and cracks were starting to form, and the next thing I knew I was in this world

"So you remember what happened", the voice said before some clouds started to move away leading it to reveal that the mirror-world planet as I knew it was now in multiple pieces that were drifted away from each other and looked like they would keep moving until the world was nothing but space dust

"What caused this", I said as I was lost in tears over the worry about the safety of all of my friends wondering if there was still alive or dead

" The magic from the other world caused this", the voice said which caused me to fall with shock and more sadness as that only could mean one thing

"So I caused this", I said as I knew I was the one who brought magic to that world by stealing Princess Twilight's crown and making sure to keep the mirror open so I could travel to the other worlds so I could see my mentor and my family members from time to time

"Yes, you and the other girls led to the death of this plant along with in inhabitants", the voice said which caused me to cry more tears as I learned that all my friends had died

"If that is true why didn't I die with them", I said as I wondered why I was still alive when I knew I didn't deserve to be the last of my kind, especially over all the good people in the mirror world

"Because you are also the only one who can save this planet", the voice said which caused me to stop my tears for a minute

"Is this for real, I said as I was taken back by what she said

"Yes it is", the voice proudly said which caused me to feel comfortable and wipe off all of my tears

"So how do we do this? I'm fine with doing anything to save it", I said as I had a big smile on my face and finally got used to the pressure leading me to be able to stand on my two legs

"The only way to this world is to change your past", the voice said causing me to be on the verge of tears again because I knew the moment she wanted me to change

"So you want me to not go through the Mirror", I said as thought about the idea that would change my whole life and most of all include me not meeting my friends

"That and I also want you to destroy the mirror after you save someone's life", the voice said causing me to wonder who she wanted me to save since every mirror copy was alive and noted except for one

"So you want to the Mirror World Sunset Shimmer But I don't know how she dies", I said as I tried to think of all the time of me getting big injuries in my life or a bad sickness that could lead to my death but I couldn't come up with one

"She died on the day you got your cutie mark", the voice said causing me to think back to that day and rember the fact that I saved my shelf from falling off the billboard thanks to my magic

"that does make sense but why did she fall in the first place since she wasn't dizzy like I was", I said as it made no sense to me why would she hurt herself at such a young age

"Oh so you don't remember that there was also a strong earthquake during the time you were dizzy", the voice said causing me to remember that I wasn't the only one having a hard time standing on the billboard that day

"that does make sense. So you not only want me to change her fate but you also want me to break the Mirror before the time I could go through it", I said as I thought about the idea that didn't invode me meeting my friend or stealing Twilight's Crown but there would be still alive and be able to accomplish their dreams

"Yes, so will you do it", the voice said as it waited for me to make the biggest decision in my whole life

"Yes I will do it but how am I going to change the past", I said as I felt confident enough to do anything to save my friends even if meant never meeting them ever again

"Don't worry that will be no problem when you have someone who can control the whole galaxy", the voice said as some clouds moved away causing the voice to reveal its shelf to be a sliver of alicorn that was as blight as the color of the richest diamonds in both worlds. The Alicorn also has a cutie mark that shows a pen over the cosmos of my world

"The name is Nebula, I thought it would be best to appear in a form that you might recognize ", she said as she was the same height as me even if I was a human form which remembers me of how tall Celestia was when I was a little girl causing me to want to be just like her to think this first wish to get taller would eventually lead to my downfall

"Wait did you say Nebula like the one name in all of the church's books", I said as I remember hearing that name being the one people pray to in both worlds along with saying that she was the one who created the universe

"Yes, that will be me", Nebula said which caused me to get down on one knee as fast as I could and bow my head so I wouldn't sure anyone disrespect

"It's an honor to meet you, I'm sorry it didn't show my respect earlier", I said as I looked at her with a smile and hoping I was not going to get punished since I didn't even want to imagine what she will be able to do to me

"Don't worry you Haven't done anything wrong", Nebula said with a smile causing me to know that everything was okay leading me to get off the floor of clouds

"So are you ready to begin your trip down memory lane", Nebula said as her horn started to spark even if I was sure she could do it without equestrian magic and it was just for show

"wait before I go what about the other magical item in the human world or the Dazzlings", I said with worry as I knew that all of those could lead to disaster since my friends would not be able to stop them

"Don't worry about it I make sure this world will be safe", she said with a smile that was as big as Celestia's when she was teaching me how to do magic making me feel that I could trust her

"Then I guess I'm ready to save the world", I said as I felt confident since I had done it before why can't I do it again just in the pony world before my downfall

"Then let's start your journey", Nebula said before she used her magic horn to teleport me to change my past!

Author's Note

Hey guys! I finally had time to change my Wattpad story and make it be able to publish on this site. Anyway, as some of you guys might know if you read this before you might be wondering where the other part of this chapter while that be for part 2. So with that done I hope you guys enjoy my story I tried my best to get more used to writing on this site

Gain and Loss

"Where am I", I said in my head as I was in a white room that reminded me of a hospital and I was in what looked like a bed meant for a baby thanks to its small size and the white bars on each side that was hard to see out of

"if this was supposed to be my past, I don't remember this", I said as I tried to move which felt wired since my body felt like it was tinier causing me to misjudge my steps on the bed leading me to fall a couple of times before I was able to get to the bars and climb on top of them leading me to see that I wasn't alone in this room since it was full of baby ponies and a mirror causing me to see my reflection

"Is that me", I said as I looked into a mirror reflecting a baby unicorn with my usual mane color of yellow and orange. This led me to touch my face with my hoof and see if the mirror version of me copied the movement which it did causing me to faint on the spot

"wakey wakey little one", the sound of a familiar voice I had not heard in years caused me to open up my eyes to see the face of the pony I hadn't seen since the day she died. The pony I was looking at was known to the world as famous for Wonder Bolts thanks to her quick speed and her amazing trick that included her moving so fast she was able to make making in the sky. These ponies call her by the name of Sundash but I called her by a different name

"Mom", I said in my head as some tears came out over the joy of seeing her face which made me know that I was definitely in the past

"oh what's wrong does your head still hurt when you fell from the height", she said causing me to look to see that there was a bandage on my head that must have come from me falling out of my baby bed

"Again, we are still sorry about that", an unfamiliar voice said causing me to look to see a nurse pony bowing her head

"It's fine as long there be nothing to worry about after she heals, am I right", my mom said as she held me up to the sky while she looked at the face of the nurse with slight anger over the accident

"no she will be all good after a day or two it just a simple cut", the nurse still worried but dissolved when she saw the smile on the face my mom

"That's great to hear", my mom said

"yeah that's all well and good but can we get to the point of naming her", another familiar voice said causing me to look at where that sound came from spouting a filly who was probably around the age of 4 or 5 who would later go up to be a future wonder bolt captain name, Spitfire

"Sis", I said in my head as I looked at her with a smile on my face before I came to realize what she said

"wait I don't have a name yet, so that must mean I was just born and the only thing I remember about my baby years was", I said as on cue the door opened leading me to the slight of a familiar unicorn pony with golden skin awn was best to know to the world as a knight name Golden Armor

"Dad", I said as I looked at him with tears in my eyes I knew I was looking at a pony who only had a couple of days to live

"There you are, what took you so long", my mom said with anger over the fact of him being late to the birth of his second daughter

"Sorry I have to finish all my paperwork before I can start my vacation", he said before giving her a kiss which showed how much the two love each other. It caused me to cry even more tears knowing the fact that it would never be the same when he had gone

"what's wrong", My mom said in worry as she saw my crying face

"Maybe she wants me to hold her", my dad said before he grabbed me causing me to feel the warmth of his body that felt so nice thanks to his body being full of energy

"so now that dad is here can we family name her", my sis said with a voice that was feeling some annoyance but I could still tell that there was joy underneath it

"speaking of that I was thinking of going with the name Sunset Shimmer do you like it hon", my mom said as she looked at her husband as about to fall asleep in his hooves thanks to his warmth

"I love it", my dad said as the last words I heard before I joined the word of dream on this memorable day.

"Do you have to go", a familiar voice said causing me to open up my eyes to see that the voice came from my sister talking to Dad as he was wearing his armor and was about to go into the rain. This image matches the one in my mind of the last time that my family will see my dad

"I have to go kid if I don't know if my man can stop the Chimera without their captain", my dad said before grabbing his shield off the well with his magic and putting it on his hoof

"Please be careful" " my mom said leading me to look up at her since she was holding me at that moment

"I will try my best", my dad said as he got ready to leave causing me to cry as I knew I could do nothing to stop him from leaving the house

I woke up to the sound of crying which caused me to look for the source of the sound and see that it came from my mom who was in her other hoof holding the source of her sadness a letter that declared the loss of my dad

"Mom, I'm home!", Spitfire said causing my mom to stop her crying so she could try her best to be strong to deliver the news to her daughter

"hon I got some unhappy news", my mom said as she looked at her first daughter looking like she break into tears at any moment

"about what", Spitfire said with a face full of worry and seriousness as she looked back at my mom

"Your father has just lost his life on the battlefield", the moment my mom finished what she said she was already back to crying multiple tears and was losing her voice

"no that can't be the truth", my sis said as I saw a slight of her getting ready to cry which was a slight I had only seen one other time in my whole life

"it is they found his body and marked him dead", my mom said as she gave my sister the note that declared the news in detail of my dad dying from a poison bite from the Chimera. Once my sister finished reading the note she had tears coming down her eyes causing my mom to hug her as the two cried. The slight of this caused me to start crying over the loss of my dad and the fact that I knew there was many more hardship to come to my family.

"to come", I said as an idea came to my head that could change the whole world

"Since I am reliving my past why don't I change their future", I said I thought about the problems that would come for me doing this and knowing it lead me to different future but as I look at my family I didn't want to see them deal with any more hardship

"Sorry Nebula, but I'm not only going to change my future but I I also going to change the future of my Family!"

My Journal of Future Events

2 and a half years had passed since the loss of my dad. Since then my mom thought it was best for us to be close to family leading us to move from Tall Tale to Our town to live with my aunt. (AN: I hate this city name so readers can you come up with a better one or should we keep it the same)

"Your control is getting a lot better," a familiar voice said as I used my magic to control a tiny ball through some lops on the ground set up like a croquet court. This voice caused me to stop and look at where it was coming from, leading me to see a pony that looked just like my mom, the only difference being that she was a unicorn instead of a Pegasus. The fact that he has a horn led me to know that the voice came from my mom's twin sister, Fire Flare

"Well that is thanks to having a great teacher", I said as I looked at her with a smile thankful for the fact that she was up for the job to be my master even with her busy schedule of working with her firework crew at night time to set up for future events

"Oh you, hopefully your mom is being a great teacher to your sister," she said as she rubbed my hair with a smile on her face as me and she enjoyed being the only ponies in her house at the time since my mom went to train with my sister since it was day off for her job. Sadly, this didn't last long since I heard the sound of footsteps coming closer to the house's front door.

"Hey, Honey, I'm home," a familiar, deeper voice said as he opened the brown wooden door. This caused me to look at the pony it was coming from, leading my smile to turn into a look of disgust. The voice came from a familiar-looking dark blue pony who was taking his knight armor off and goes by the name of Aqua Sword.

"well that's good to hear since lunch should be ready in any minute", my aunt said before she walked over to the man to give him a hug and a kiss as a sign of their relationship that I knew in the future would end badly for my aunt.

"Autie I going to go finish my training in my room", I said before I left the living room not even waiting for an answer as took my gear to a room that I shared with my older sister and used my magic to close the door.

"It's finally time", I said as I put the gear in a chest at the end of the bed and then I used my magic to grab a yellow book under my bed that I was the only one in my family who knew about it leading me to call it my secret Journal.

"I was hoping to start it earlier but I knew I needed to get full control of all my magic spells which included one that a young kid should never be able to pull off leading me to get headaches and tiring me out from time to time causing me to hold back my plans", I said in my head as I look at my journal at it listed the future events I plan to stop that have a number next to them and was listed in the order of the closet events.

"Number 1: Brake up the relationship between my Aunt and Aqua Shield after she got pregnant", I read my writing knowing that If I broke up the relationship too early it would cause my little brother to never be born. This will help my aunt move on faster than she did in the past when she didn't believe the fact that he would fake his death to be with another woman. My aunt wouldn't figure out the truth until 8 years later. This and the loss of her sister leads her to only trust people in her inner circle that only included her fellow workers and her kids leaving her to have a lonely life.

"I have only had less than 3 months to change this", I said as I remembered that Aqua Shield didn't figure out that my aunt was pregnant until she told him as she was 5 months into having a foal. He wasn't happy with the idea of being a father over the life of wanting a bachelor thanks to his so-called "good looks" and well-paying job leading him to come up with the evil plan that ruined my aunt's life.

"Number 2: Stop my Mom's death," I said in my head as I read my writing, which caused me to remember my mom's Hall of Frame performance to celebrate her career as a Wonderbolt. A night that was supposed to be full of joy, with her Cutie Mark getting hung in the stadium as she did her final performance which was a dream come true for my mom. This dream in a moment turned into a nightmare when her wing popped doing mid-transition she tried to pop it back in but she was close to the ground causing her to crash hard enough that it caused her to lose her life. This is a loss that our family never got over causing us to separate from each other over time.

"Number 3: Acommplised Nebulia's wishes of changes", I said in my head as I read my writing knowing the next event after my mom's death was me getting my cutie mark after I entered the School for Gifted Unicorns. This happened a month into the school after some older kids learned about me having the highest test score causing them to bully me for outshining them. This encounter led me to get my cutie mark.

"so that gives me a month to tie out my plan", I said in my head as I knew could sneak into the castle when Princess Celestia was visiting the school and use my magic to jump into her carriage without nobody noticing so I take a ride to the familiar building.

"Thanks to my magic I should be able to break the mirror without nobody finding out that I did it", I said before I heard the sound of footsteps coming towards my location causing me to immediately hide my journal back under my bed and bring out the magic court

"Sunset lunch is ready", my sis said as she opened the door of our room to see me using my magic to move the ball through some loop trying my best to pretend that I had been practicing the whole time

"Okay, I will be there in a minute just let me put this away first", I said before she gave me a nod in agreement before she left to head back to the kitchen as I put my stuff away.

"I hope once I change all of these I could lead to a better future for me and my Family", I said before I left to get started on the most important mission in my life