Dancing In The Dark

by Emporor Of Zombies

Rating: mature
Tags: Comedy, Romance, Slice of Life
Length: 3344

Big Mac and Fluttershy have the strangest friends and family follow there life

In Big Macs life he has met many pony some were strange some were normal none have an impact on his life like his sister and her friends in particular Fluttershy follow Big Mac. Fluttershy, Applejack, Rarity and the rest as they go through the trials and tribulations of life and love.

The title is based off the Bruce Springsteen song of the same name

Character list will change over time

On Hiatus until further notice

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-01-11 22:28:14 UTC

Hello Darling part 2

When Big Mac and Fluttershy arrived at the restaurant they where greeted by a sight they did not expect but wasn't that uncommon in Ponyville it was Octavia and Vinyl Scratch arguing over what may have been of the utmost importance to them but seemed trivial to any other pony. More often than not they would end up glaring at each other for what seemed like eternity then twenty minutes later be seen making out like nothing happened part of the strange love hate relationship they had.

"Can you two just stop arguing so we can go in and prepare for the performance." a nearly soft voice said in the chaos this was the black pony named Ivory. "Not until she apologizes for insulting my playing style!" she retorted, the black pony simply shook her head and walked into the restaurant her brother Ebony following behind her. "Seems like you can't take constructive criticism can you.. . She was cut off by Ebony dragging her by into the restaurant by the back of her neck his sister following suit with Octavia both kicking and yelling as they where dragged into the restaurant "Well that was rather strange" Big Mac said with a hint of sarcasm in his voice.

The restaurant had a nice atmosphere to it most of the patrons ate and or talked amongst themselves "This seems rather nice." Fluttershy said "Ya its a really quiet place it seems." soon they were seated and began to try to think of something to order.

Back at Sweet Apple Acres

Applejack was about to turn in for the night when she heard a knock on her door "Now who in the hay could that be at this time of night?" she walked towards the door as the knocks grew louder "Hold on to your haystacks I'm coming!" she opened the door to find her friend Rarity "Rarity? What in the hay are you doing knocking on my door at this time of night?" Rarity cleared her throat and began to speak "I needed to talk with you Applejack it is of the utmost importance I assure you." "Well what is it ?" Rarity lowed her head and blushed and spoke softly "I need a model." "What?" "I said I need a model for a dress I'm making and your the only pony who fits the physical description." Rarity said blushing harder "So you need me to model a dress for you?" "Yes." "A dress?" "Yes a dress." Applejack facehoved and shook her head "Why cant Twilight Sparkle do this?" "She is going to be out of town for a few days." "Pinkie Pie?" "She had to help Mr and Mrs Cake all week and couldn't." "Rainbow Dash?" "She declined unfortunately." "Fluttershy?" "I didn't bother since she would most likely say no." defeated Applejack sighed and shook her head again "Fine when should I come by the boutique?" Rarity hugged her friend " Oh thank you Applejack come by tomorrow morning at around eight o'clock !" and with that Rarity left her friend's house. "Oh for the love of Celestia why can't anything be simple." and with those final words she closed the front door and went promptly to bed.

Back with Fluttershy and Big Mac after there date

"I never guessed Vinyl could have such a hard left hook." Big Mac said rubbing the sore part of his face he was one of the few bystanders who tried to stop the fight that broke out between Vinyl Scratch and Octavia and ended up battered and bruised. "I just hope Octavia and Vinyl can work out there differences I'd hate to see such a couple break up for trivial manners" Fluttershy replied with concern in her voice, " Eh they'll probably end up getting drunk again and not even remember what they's was arguing about." Big Mac replied "I guess your right is your face still sore from where Vinyl hit you?" "Not really just stings more really." they made it Fluttershy's house and Big Mac was about to kiss her goodbye when she stopped him mid kiss "Um Big Mac I um.. would oh geese this is." "Yes Fluttershy?" he asked raising an eyebrow "Um would you like to stay the night?" she finally manged to spit out "I would love to spend the night over at my favorite mare in all of Equestria."

At Vinyl Scratch's and Octavia's apartment

clutching her broken sunglasses Vinyl scratch was sitting on a chair her red eyes were focused on her fillyfriend/roommate Octavia who was nursing a black eye "I'm so sorry Tavi I didn't mean to hurt you its just that I kinda went overboard." Octavia laid her head on the couch "Its okay V I shouldn't have called you a disk flunky it was very out of character for me plus I broke your sunglasses but I must say your eyes are very beautiful and I wish you would show them more often." Vinyl leaned in on her fillyfriend and lightly kissed her on the cheek "Because my little violin these are for your eyes only." Octavia blushed at the pet name Vinyl gave her "Thank you I wish I could come up with such a great pet name like that." "I like V just fine." they both kissed lightly and went to bed.

Can't Help Falling In Love part 1

Rarity could hardly contain herself as she walked home her mind was racing with the thought of confessing her love to Applejack. It was such an intoxicating feeling that she could hardly sleep, her dreams clouded with the light auburn pony. She woke up even more giddy with excitement, but she had to calm herself. She prepared herself some 'special' tea as she was finishing a knock came at the door

"On my way!" she said in a sing song voice, she opened the door to see Applejack

"Alright, I'm here. What is it that you need me to do?" Applejack asked walking into the boutique and wiping her hooves on the welcome mat

"Well darling, I afraid you've arrived an hour too early, I haven't even had breakfast yet." Rarity calmly walking to her kitchen

"Well can you at least tell me how long I'm gonna be doing this for?" Apple Jack said, annoyed.

"Well Applejack, I'd say...about four days." Rarity answered rummaging through a drawer for some cooking supplies.

"Four days! You got to be kidding me! I cant skip off farm work for four days," Apple Jack said outraged.

"I'm pretty sure Big Macintosh and Fluttershy could cover for you." Rarity reassured her friend.

"So Applejack...mind staying for breakfast?" Rarity offered.

"Nope, not hungry ," Apple Jack said, still a little peeved.

"Well, would you mind joining me at the table for some light conversation?" Rarity coaxed.

"Fine," AJ said, taking a seat next to her friend.

They conversed about things such as the budding relationship between there friend Fluttershy and Big Macintosh, and Twilight Sparkles most recent experiment that went wrong.

One hour later

"I am not getting in that thing." Applejack said to her friend who was holding a southern belle style dress

"But you said you'd model a few of my dresses, and this is one of them." Rarity said trying to desperately get her friend in the dress.

"No I am not wearing it!" AJ yelled with her friend clinging on her as she was trying to walk out the door

"Please I'm begging you!" she yelled as Applejack tripped and landed face to face with Rarity

"Um I..I... ." was all Rarity could spit out before she forcefully kissed Apple Jack.

Applejack's eyes shot open as she desperately tried to shove the unicorn off of her, but began kissing her back out of sheer need and impulse alone. They parted and Rarity spoke

"Um...sorry darling, I got carried away," as she got up off her friend.

AJ said nothing, she just slowly backed out of the door of the boutique.

"Oh Rarity, you've messed it up now," Rarity said to her self, as she ran into her room to sulk.

At Sweet Apple Acres twenty minutes later

Applejack was trying to digest all the thoughts floating through her head. One minute she was arguing about a dress, the next she was making out on the floor with one of closest friend, the thoughts were swirling through her head like a cyclone.

"Oh Celestia what do I do! Oh, this is just not my day," AJ said to herself

"What in the hay talking about?" Big Macintosh uttered, accompanied by his fillyfriend Fluttershy.

"Oh Big Mac I have a big problem," Apple Jack said, pacing.

"And would this problem involve a certain unicorn named Rarity? You know sis you can tell me anything, and if not me Fluttershy," big Mac reassured.

Applejack clammy walked over to Fluttershy and whispered the days events into her ear.

"You made out with Rarity on the floor of her boutique!" Fluttershy shouted with surprise.

"Fluttershy what the hay!" Apple Jack shouted back.

Big Mac facehoved and shook his head.

"Uh Fluttershy...don't do that again, and AJ what in the hay is going on," big Mac said, exasperatedly.

Applejack explained the situation, Big Mac shook his head again. He came to the conclusion he was going to be doing this a lot over the net few weeks.

"AJ all I can really tell you is do what your heart tells you is right. Now if you truly do love Miss Rarity no need beating around the bush."

Applejack with a new found confidence instilled by her brother she ran off to Rarity's house.

"This is going to be a long day," Big Mac said as he walked to the fields.

"Hey wait for me!" Fluttershy yelled following behind him.

Can't Help Falling In Love part 2

Applejack ran as fast as she could towards Carousel Boutique and began knocking on the door and yelling.

“Rarity open up please I need to talk to you!” Applejack pleaded.

Her yelling stopped when she heard the tumblers on the lock of the door and the door opened reveling Rarity’s younger sister Sweetie Belle.

“Sweetie Belle is your sister still here?” Applejack said.

Sweetie Belle narrowed her eyes and shot Applejack a dirty look.

“She's here but she doesn’t want to talk to you!” Sweetie said closing the front door, but Applejack stooped it with her hove.

“Sweetie Belle, I know you’re angry about me making your sister cry, but I’ve come to fix that,” Applejack said it in the most sincere tone she could come muster.

“Fine, but you better make my sister stop crying. Promise,” Sweetie said, and Applejack smiled.

“I promise Sweetie Belle,” Applejack said putting a hoof on her heart.

“Good,” Sweetie said, and with that Sweetie Belle led Applejack to her sister’s room.

Applejack slowly opened the door she glanced around the room there were used tissues and magazines as well as a few pictures on the ground with Applejack’s face cut out of them, she then noticed her friend slumped on the 'dramatic' couch, her face buried deep in a pillow.

“Rarity…you okay?” she asked as she tapped the white unicorns shoulder

“Rarity I’m sorry okay,” Applejack pleaded

Rarity continued to not respond.

“Rarity please, speak to me,”

Rarity turned her head to Applejack the mascara on her face having smudged due to crying

“Why should I!?” Rarity yelled with sadness in her voice.

“Because Rarity I just needed a moment to think,” Aj replied.

“Rarity I...” Aj was cut off by Rarity’s kiss, an action that caught Applejack off guard, but soon she began kissing back. When they did finally part Applejack had a huge grin on her face

“Rarity…I love you,” was all Aj spoke before bringing the unicorn into another passionate kiss.

Two days later

Applejack fidgeted as Rarity tied another lace around her waist. Applejack was keeping the promise she made to her now marefriend to help her with some dresses. While most were easy to slip on, model, and then slip them off. Some on the other hand a where very tedious process that even Rarity began to get tired of.

“Alright Applejack my dear, it’s done,” Rarity spoke wiping sweat from her brow.

“Now try walking around in it, and tell me how it feels,” Rarity said.

Applejack took several steps in the dress.

“It feels mighty restricting with all these here straps,” Applejack said pointing to the straps that   connected the dress to her form.

Rarity then let out a heavy sigh.

“Well I guess that one goes back to the drawing board,” the unicorn said as she helped her marefriend out of the dress.

“Well Applejack you’re done for the day, do you want to perhaps go out for lunch or…something?”

“Sure sugar cube,” the blonde work horse answered back, as she stretched.

At a small diner in Ponyville

“So Rarity what do you plan on doing tonight?” Applejack asked eating a daisy sandwich.

“Oh I don’t know maybe take a long bath, do my hair…why did you want to do something tonight?” Rarity said, smoothing her mane.

Applejack leaned forward and whispered into Rarity’s ear.

“I want you tonight,” Applejack said seductively, causing Rarity to go wide eyed and blush.

“Applejack…a-are you alright I thought I just heard you say...” Rarity stopped mid-sentence when she saw Applejack nod her head in an affirmative yes.

Rarity let out a small squeak that caused other patrons at the diner to look at her funny she then covered her mouth with her hooves.

“So should we meet at my house or yours?” Applejack said batting her eyelashes.

“Yours!” Rarity replied with a squeak Applejack smiled at her marefriend's shyness at the whole situation.

“Okay sugar cube, I’ll see you tonight then,” Applejack said, as got up, paid for their meal,s and parted ways both giddy for the nights event.

Later that night

Applejack was waiting at out on the front porch for Rarity. She was thankful Big Mac, Apple Bloom, and Granny Smith went to bed early. When she saw Rarity her heart nearly skipped a beat…it was her first time with any pony.

“Hello darling, a-are you ready?” Rarity asked, a crimson red blush on her face.

Applejack kissed her on the cheek, took her by the hoof, and lead her into her room.

In Big Mac's room.

Big Mac was trying his best to sleep, but was finding it very hard. He was so used to sleeping with Fluttershy by his side, but alas she had to attend to a sick Angel bunny. When he finally closed his eyes, he heard a giggle coming from his sister’s room.

“What the hay is that?” big Mac as he did his best to ignore it. Then another giggle followed by a sensual moan came from the room he sat up and glanced at the door.

“Oh not tonight,” he said with an exasperated tone, but the straw that broke the work horses back was an even louder moan from  his sister to which he hoped out his bed, walked out the door, and began the long trek to Fluttershy's house.

Back in Applejack's room (Sex Scene Immanent)

Rarity was moaning in pure ecstasy as Applejack gingerly kissed and sucked her horn.

“Apple-jack ah-,” Rarity said as her marefriend continued to tease her.

Rarity could feel a pressure building in her head, and moving to her horn. Her breaths ragged and shallow until she couldn’t stand it anymore. She let out a long high pitched moan, and blew the magic residue that came out of her horn into Applejack's unsuspecting mouth, causing her to hack and cough uncontrollably.

“Oh Applejack, I-I’m so sorry…I’ll just leave,” Rarity said as she began to get up from the bed, but she was taken by the flank and pulled into a kiss.

“Don’t worry sugar cube, it’ll take a lot more than that to turn me off,” Applejack said, holding Rarity at arm’s length.

“At least let me make it up to you,” Rarity said blushing.

“Well how do you plan to do tha-aah,” Applejack said as Rarity lowed herself to her partners fem slit and began to lick the wet organ.

Applejack bucked her hips as the parade on her sensitive sex went onwards. She found herself moaning louder than she ever had. She felt the pressure was too unbearable, and she let out a cry that could match Princess Luna's royal Canterlot voice.

“I love you…” the work horse said as she passed out due to exhaustion brought on by the ordeal she just went through.

Rarity smiled as she laid her head down next to her lover’s.

“Oh Applejack, always so tough…but have an organism and you go soft,” Rarity giggled and went to sleep, cuddled up to Applejack.

The Next Morning

Rarity and Applejack where the first in the house to wake up. Applejack found it strange as Big Macintosh was always the first to be up, usually in the fields.

“Where do you suppose big Mac is?” Applejack said, her question was answered in the form of big Mac walking in the door with a strange combination of a frown and a smile on his face.

“Hey big bro, where did ya go?” Applejack said, not noticing the awkwardness in the air.

“Fluttershy's,” he answered as he sat down at the breakfast table.

“So where's Apple Bloom?” big Mac said, concerned at what she’d been exposed to.

“School,” Applejack said simply

“Granny Smith?” big Mac said, wondering what his grandma had to say about Aj’s…marefriend.

“Still sleeping,” Applejack said, eating a piece.

Big Mac then took a slice of toast in his mouth then went on his merry way leaving the two love birds alone.

“Well my dearest Applejack, I must go the boutique. It won’t open itself, you know,” Rarity said, kissing Applejack on the cheek, and leaving for her boutique.

Hello Darling Part 1

It was a sunny day in Ponyville particularly Sweet Apple Acres where Big Mac was bucking apples but unbeknownst to him he was being watched from afar by an unknown figure,the figure slowly crept up to him almost silent then pounced on him from behind knocking him down. The figure was his fillyfriend Fluttershy who showered him in light kisses as she finished her onslaught of kisses Big Mac he asked "What was that for Fluttershy?"he asked blushing she replied sheepishly "Just to show my love to you" she removed herself from him and hugged him tightly. The sun was slowly setting on the farm they stared lovingly into each others eyes he kissed her on the cheek and smiled Fluttershy blushed and said "Um I need to go check up on Angel" and she ran off leaving Big Mac with a big goofy grin on his face "She is the strangest Mare I have ever met." and he continued bucking apples.

Some time later in the evening at Fluttershy's cottage

"Oh Angel what should I do? even I though we're dating I'm still so shy around him." Angel just stared at Fluttershy and shook his head then a knock came to the door "Who could that be?" when she opened the door she saw Big Macintosh wearing a black tuxedo with a ruby read corsage on his chest ,and he said in the best suave country voice to her "Hello darlin' nice to see ya" and he stepped into the cottage and he lightly kissed he. "What was that for?" she asked him blushing profusely "Just to show you how much I love ya." he replied and kissed her again "Rarity helped me make reservation's for us at this new fancy restaurant that opened up." he held out his hoof and lead her outside to a small carriage that was waiting and as they drove of she laid her head on his shoulder lovingly and he placed his arm around her.