Sister...

by Mellow Mare

Chapter 6: Hostile Host...

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As Luna and Celestia approached the frozen kingdom, a sense of foreboding settled over them, heavy and oppressive like the blanket of snow that covered the land. The gleaming towers that had seemed so inviting from afar now loomed menacingly, their beauty tainted by an undercurrent of hostility. The sisters exchanged uneasy glances as they continued forward, their hoofsteps crunching in the snow, every sound magnified in the eerie silence.

Just as they were about to take another step, a commanding voice shattered the stillness. "Halt! What business do unicorns have in our kingdom?"

Startled, Luna and Celestia spun around to see a group of armored pegasi descending from the sky, their powerful wings cutting through the icy air. At the forefront was a stern-looking Pegasus whose gaze was as cold and unyielding as the storm clouds above. Beside him stood a younger pegasus, her expression less severe, her eyes filled with a hint of uncertainty.

The two unicorns stood frozen, staring in awe at the sight of the winged ponies. They had heard tales of pegasi in foalhood stories, but never in their wildest dreams had they imagined they would meet them face to face. Luna couldn't help but smile, excitement momentarily overriding her fear. But Celestia, sensing the tension in the air, remained wary.

"I am Commander Hurricane of the Royal Guard," the stern Pegasus declared, his voice cutting through the frigid air like a blade. "Unicorns are not welcome here. State your purpose, and be quick about it."

Celestia stepped forward, her posture regal despite the cold biting at her. "We seek answers and aid. Our home is trapped in an unending winter, and we believe there may be knowledge in your kingdom that could help us."

Commander Hurricane’s gaze hardened, his jaw clenched as he exchanged a glance with his fellow guards. "Your kind brought this curse upon yourselves," he spat, bitterness lacing his words.

The younger pegasus beside him stepped forward and whispered something into his ear. Commander Hurricane’s expression remained severe, but after a tense moment, he nodded. He flew closer to the two sisters, his shadow looming over them.

"If you seek answers," he said, his voice cold and unyielding, "you will come with us to Pegasopolis. But know this: you will be treated as prisoners until we decide what to do with you."

Luna felt a knot of fear tighten in her stomach, but she knew they had no other choice. With a heavy heart, she and Celestia followed the guards through the imposing gates of the kingdom.

"Luna? This feels like a bad idea," whispered a familiar voice.

Luna glanced down and lifted the edge of her cloak, revealing James, the talking dagger, tucked against her side. His single eye gleamed with disapproval. "I know," Luna whispered back. "I can’t shake the feeling that this is more dangerous than that monster we faced earlier..."

"Quiet!" barked one of the guards, jabbing the sisters with the tip of his lance. Luna quickly dropped the cloak over James, muffling his indignant "Rude!"

She glanced up at Celestia for reassurance, but her sister’s expression was as uncertain as her own. They had entered unknown territory, and the hostility of their surroundings did nothing to ease their fears.

Inside the kingdom, the streets were lined with pegasi who eyed them with open distrust. Cold glares followed their every step, and muttered curses reached their ears as they were led deeper into the icy city. Luna felt the weight of each stare, and her heart clenched with fear. The cold seeped into her bones, chilling her from the inside out.

At last, they were brought before a towering figure seated upon a throne made of clouds. Her icy blue eyes gleamed with malice, and her presence filled the room with an aura of power and coldness. "I am Queen Dormant Thunder," she announced, her voice as sharp and cold as the frost that clung to the walls. "What brings unicorns to my kingdom?"

Celestia stepped forward, her voice steady despite the tension in the air. "Your Majesty, we seek aid for our home, which has been cursed by unending winter. We believe there may be a connection between this storm and the magic that surrounds your realm."

Queen Dormant Thunder’s gaze turned even colder, her lips curling into a disdainful sneer. "Unicorns are not welcome here," she spat, venom dripping from every word. "Your kind has always been a blight upon this land with your frivolous magic and arrogant ways."

Luna felt a surge of anger rise within her, but she forced herself to stay calm. "Please, Your Majesty," she said, her voice firm but respectful. "We only seek answers. Our home is in grave danger, and if there is anything you can tell us, we would be forever grateful."

The queen’s eyes narrowed, and she leaned forward on her throne, her expression dark and dangerous. "You expect me to help those who have brought nothing but suffering to my people?" she scoffed. "Leave this kingdom at once, before I decide to rid myself of your presence permanently."

Luna and Celestia’s hearts sank. Their hopes of finding aid here seemed to vanish into the cold air, leaving them with no choice but to retreat. With heavy hearts, they turned away from the queen’s icy gaze and began to make their way toward the outskirts of the kingdom.

“At least we’re alive,” Luna said, trying to put a positive spin on their situation, though her voice wavered.

“But we’re no closer to understanding the storm,” Celestia replied, her voice laced with frustration. “We discovered something big here, Luna—something we were led to believe didn’t exist. And yet... they knew about us. Why didn’t we know about them?”

Luna dragged her hooves through the snow, creating a small path behind her. "It doesn’t seem fair..." she muttered.

Just as they were about to leave the kingdom behind, a voice called out from behind them.

"Wait! Stop!"

The sisters turned to see the young Pegasus from before racing toward them, her wings flapping with urgency. She skidded to a halt in front of them, panting heavily.

"I'm Private Pansy," she introduced herself, her voice breathless but sincere. "Please, don't leave just yet. I believe there's been a misunderstanding."

Luna and Celestia exchanged puzzled glances but remained silent as Private Pansy continued.

"What do you mean, a misunderstanding?" Celestia asked cautiously.

Private Pansy took a deep breath, trying to collect her thoughts. "Queen Dormant Thunder... she's not herself lately," she explained, her voice low. "She’s been consumed by anger and bitterness toward unicorns—and Earth Ponies—ever since... well, it’s a long story. But I believe you’re not the ones to blame for our kingdom’s troubles."

Luna and Celestia listened intently, their curiosity piqued.

“Earth Ponies?” Celestia asked, tilting her head in confusion.

Private Pansy nodded quickly. “Yes. But listen, I know it seems hopeless... but there might be a way to change Queen Dormant Thunder’s mind. I think you two might hold the key.”

Before the sisters could respond, the sound of hoofsteps echoed behind them. Commander Hurricane and a contingent of guards approached, their expressions stern and suspicious.

"What is the meaning of this, Private Pansy?" Commander Hurricane demanded, his voice sharp.

Private Pansy stood her ground, her gaze unwavering. "Commander, hear me out," she said, stepping forward. "These unicorns might be the key to resolving our kingdom’s troubles. Instead of driving them away, perhaps we should consider... keeping them here as leverage."

Her words took everyone by surprise, including Luna and Celestia. But before anyone could protest, Commander Hurricane’s eyes lit up with sudden realization.

"Leverage," he repeated, a grin spreading across his face. "Yes! If we hold these unicorns, their kind may come to reason... and surrender!"

Private Pansy blinked in confusion, but before she could clarify, Commander Hurricane grabbed her in an enthusiastic embrace, giving her two hearty pats on the back. "Excellent thinking, Private!" he praised, leaving her breathless.

Luna and Celestia exchanged uncertain glances with Private Pansy, who offered them a somewhat apologetic look as the guards surrounded them once more.

With that, the sisters were escorted back to the palace, where they awaited another audience with Queen Dormant Thunder. The path ahead was far from clear, but for the first time since they had entered the frozen kingdom, they felt a glimmer of hope.


"ABSOLUTELY NOT!" Queen Dormant Thunder’s voice echoed through the throne room, sharp and furious. "I’ve had enough of this nonsense! Commander Hurricane, I expected better from you!"

Commander Hurricane lowered his head in shame, but Private Pansy remained steadfast, despite the nervousness flickering in her eyes. "Your Majesty, please hear me out," she pleaded. "These unicorns might hold the key to ending our kingdom’s troubles. If we work together—"

"Silence!" Queen Dormant Thunder snapped, her voice like shards of ice. "I will not hear any more of your treacherous lies, Private Pansy. These unicorns cannot be trusted."

The queen’s eyes burned with fury as she turned her gaze to Luna and Celestia. "I gave you a

chance to leave, and you did not heed it. Now, you may stay... but you will do so in a cell."

"Your Majesty, please," Celestia implored, her voice filled with desperation. "We mean you no harm. We only seek answers to the snow and ice that plague our home."

But the queen was unmoved. Her expression hardened as she rose from her throne with an air of finality. "Enough!" she declared. "Guards, seize these unicorns and throw them into the dungeons. They will rot there until I decide their fate."

The guards stepped forward, their expressions impassive as they grabbed Luna and Celestia, dragging them away. The sisters didn’t resist, knowing there was no point in fighting back. As they were led out of the throne room, they caught a glimpse of Private Pansy, her ears drooping in disappointment as she watched them being taken away.

The cold stone walls of the dungeon closed in around them as they were thrown into a small, damp cell deep beneath the palace. The air was thick with the scent of mildew, and a layer of frost clung to the rough stone walls, shimmering faintly in the dim torchlight.

The cell was cramped, barely large enough for the two of them to stand side by side. A narrow slit in the wall served as the only window, offering a bleak view of the icy landscape outside. A single straw pallet lay in one corner, its threadbare blanket offering little warmth against the bitter cold.

Huddling together for warmth, Luna and Celestia pressed their coats against each other, their breath visible in the freezing air. The only sound was the constant drip of water echoing somewhere in the depths of the dungeon.

In the dim light, Celestia gently nuzzled Luna’s mane, whispering soothing words of comfort. "Shh... it’s okay, Luna. We’ll get through this together. Just close your eyes and rest. I’m right here."

Luna sighed softly, her tense muscles beginning to relax under her sister’s gentle touch. Her eyelids grew heavy as she nestled against Celestia, finding comfort in her presence. Within moments, she drifted off to sleep, her breathing slowing into a peaceful rhythm.

As Luna slept, Celestia remained vigilant, her heart heavy with worry. She stared at the narrow window, watching the moon rise higher in the sky, casting long shadows across the stone floor. She knew their situation was dire, but she refused to give in to despair. They had faced challenges before, and they would find a way out of this one, too.


Hours passed, and the silence of the dungeon was broken only by the occasional drip of water and the distant howl of the wind. Celestia’s ears twitched as she detected the faint sound of hoofsteps approaching. Her heart quickened with anticipation as she strained to listen.

The hoofsteps drew closer, accompanied by a soft whisper. "Celestia, are you awake?"

It was Private Pansy.

Celestia’s eyes snapped open, and she gently nudged Luna awake. "Private Pansy?" she whispered, her pulse quickening with a mixture of hope and apprehension.

Before she could say another word, a second voice cut through the darkness. "I hope you know what you’re doing, Pansy. This is such a ridiculous idea. I can’t believe I agreed to this."

A figure shimmered into view, his form cloaked in an invisible veil. Celestia’s heart swelled with relief as she recognized him—Clover the Clever, a unicorn of great repute.

"This... this is Clover the Clever," Private Pansy whispered, a small smile playing on her lips. "He’s not like the others. Just... look past the attitude."

Clover huffed and gave her a light kick with his hoof, but there was a hint of amusement in his eyes.

"Thank you for coming," Celestia whispered, her voice filled with gratitude. "We thought we were alone down here."

Private Pansy and Clover exchanged a knowing glance before turning their attention to the sisters. "We’re here to help you escape," Private Pansy explained, her voice resolute. "But we have to move quickly before the guards catch on."

With the guards patrolling nearby, the four of them had to act swiftly and silently. They approached the heavy iron door of the cell, exchanging a determined nod before setting to work.

Private Pansy produced a set of lockpicks from her pocket, working quickly and efficiently on the lock. Meanwhile, Clover focused his magic, casting a subtle spell to muffle the sound of their actions. The air shimmered around them, creating an almost imperceptible barrier of silence.

Clover glanced at Pansy with a smirk. "Where’s the key? I thought you had higher rank than this."

"Queen Dormant Thunder took them," Pansy muttered, focused on the lock. "To avoid any ‘funny business.’"

"I guess she was right," Clover teased, though there was no malice in his tone.

Time seemed to stretch on as they worked, the tension in the air thick with anticipation. Finally, after what felt like an eternity, there was a soft click, and the lock gave way.

With careful precision, Private Pansy eased the door open, motioning for the others to follow. They slipped out into the corridor, their hoofsteps light and cautious as they made their way through the shadows, the promise of freedom just within reach.

As they neared the exit, the sound of approaching hoofsteps echoed through the corridor, sending a jolt of fear through the group. Quick-thinking, Private Pansy motioned for them to duck into a nearby alcove, where they pressed themselves against the rough stone walls, holding their breath as the guards passed.

The torchlight flickered as the guards drew closer, their voices low and indistinct. Celestia’s heart pounded in her chest, each second stretching into an eternity. But at the last moment, the guards continued on their way, oblivious to the four ponies hiding in the shadows.

With a collective sigh of relief, the group emerged from their hiding place and pressed on, their movements swift and silent. At last, they reached the heavy iron doors that marked the entrance to the dungeon. With one final effort, Private Pansy and Clover unlocked the doors, and they stepped out into the crisp night air.

The moon hung high overhead, casting its silver light over the snowy landscape. The world beyond the dungeon felt like a beacon of hope, guiding them toward freedom.

"Alright, let’s get you two out of here," Clover whispered to Luna and Celestia, leading them away from the palace.

As they began to leave, Celestia glanced back and noticed that Private Pansy had stayed behind. She caught the young pegasus’s eye, and Pansy gave her a small nod before slipping back into the palace, her duty to her kingdom keeping her from leaving with them. Celestia smiled softly and mouthed a quiet "thank you" before turning to join Clover and Luna in the frozen night.


Author's Note

Hello there!
I am Mellow Mare, I am the one writing this story! thank you so much for your interest in it.

As you can see, the writing style is different in Chapter 6, it is mainly because for this chapter I planned things out better while previously, I would just write as I went...

I still hope you liked it!

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