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Immortal Coil

by The Grey Legionnaire
The magics of the pony world are dying. First the Elements of Harmony began to decay, and now the Gate to the world of the dead lies closed. Twilight must leave her life behind to restore it, before the enemies of Canterlot can get there first...

Twilight Sparkle's come a long way since Princess Celestia took her under her wing. But seven years after the return of Princess Luna, a research breakthrough turns into a nightmare as Twilight discovers that the world's core magics are breaking down - and foremost among them are the Elements of Harmony, Equestria's strongest line of defence against the universe's greater powers. And with Rainbow Dash and her pendant disappearing in a calamitous fire on a journey to discover the Elements' fate, the future looks bleaker than ever.

Three years later, however, the Princesses get word from Rainbow herself. She is alive. The Element of Loyalty is safe. But she's nowhere near her destination. She has discovered the Gate to the World of the Dead - and while it is closed, neither the living or those lost to them can rest easy, for the Gate holds unimaginable power, free for any to grasp.

So begins a desperate race against time. Twilight and her friends are chosen - willing or not - to travel across the Eastern Sea, to the continent of Celagia and its Great Forest beyond civilisation's edge. One of them must take hold of the Gate's incredible might before the enemies of Canterlot can - for if they do, they will surely wage war against the Princesses themselves. But power must come at a price - and the hardest thing for Twilight and her friends will not be the journey - but knowing that they cannot all come back.

This story was planned before season three. Any canon impacting on this story from season three or later is disregarded. I reserve the right to use themes from beyond season two, although will endeavour to justify these if I choose to do so.

Teen
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114867 words: Estimated about 10 hours to read

15 Chapters:

  1. Prologue: Old Pitsburgh 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    4475
  2. By the Light of the Moon 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    5010
  3. The Regrettable Request 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    6871
  4. Keep the Customer Satisfied 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    4369
  5. The Gazelle and the Pinkie and Me 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    7978
  6. Gifts 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    18109
  7. Know Your Enemy 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    7538
  8. Hockfall 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    10447
  9. The Troubled Mind of Governor Pool 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    4623
  10. The Traitor's Way 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    8896
  11. Under An Indifferent Sky 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    7093
  12. To the Manor Borne 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    9966
  13. The Shadow Game 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    7885
  14. Pieces on the Board 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    4543
  15. Blood and Ichor 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    7064