Quilliam, a hardened raider (or survivor, as he likes to call himself), born long before the war, encounters a filly, no older than 17, coming out of a Stable just 15 minutes after he robbed his last companion at gunpoint. At first he is tempted to take the chance at a defenseless mare to use and some new supplies to take, but his conscience got the better of him. He was a nice stallion before the war. Seeing her, with her clean and almost pre-war looks, a small memory of his daughter wormed itself into his brain, refusing to let him do any harm to her. He takes her under his tutelage and teaches her the ways of the Wasteland.

-Please give your thoughts in the comments and tell me how I can improve.