Rarity’s Hell

by CrimsonRose97

Rating: mature
Tags: Non-consensual, Sex, Profanity, Gore, Violence, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Anthro, Original Character, Tree of Harmony, Rarity, Horror
Length: 2190

Rarity gets an unlikely visitor in her eternal prison

All Rarity had to do was left things be. If she had just accepted the fact there was nothing between her and Spike, she would've still be alive. She would have been apart of the War, be a part of Twilight's coronation, seeing Spike become the Dragonlord...

Spike, spike spike spike spike spike spike spike spike spike spike

If Rarity would have just not poisoned the dragon, she wouldn't been eaten alive.

Becoming a disgrace of the Element she was supposed to represent, her hands stained by the blood of countless lives, her damned soul was sent to Tartarus where she suffered over and over again....

One moment however, the most unlikely visitor visits Rarity in her hell.

This was asked for several times, also a chance to sorta transition to the next and the final installment of the Spike/Rachel universe.

I'll do the cover art later

Published 2024-06-29 17:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2024-06-29 17:50:01 UTC

Replacing Harmony

Deep in the darkest pits of Tartarus itself, screams of the damned enduring the worst of the worst punishments for their sins. Never truly knowing sweet release as the demons who run the place had their way with them.

Never eating, never sleeping, enduring such horrors over and over again.

One of the sinners who fell from grace quickly became a favorite among the demons.

And that one sinner was about to have a visitor.

Strutting the cobblestone flooring, hips swaying and tail swishing, a figure approaches a goat-like creature with six spider-like legs standing guard.

Its red eyes looked up from its post to see who it was. “Who goes there???” it baaed.

Seeing a rather tall purple alicorn stopping just at them. A sly smile spread on her lips, wearing an elegant white and gold dress that was anything but innocent. A version of what the current ruler of Equestria was wearing.

Unlike her single draconic wing Twilight had gained during the War years ago, this alicorn still has both alicorn wings.

“Cartus! Now I know it's been centuries and a different face, but surely you recognize me.” She giggled.

It took a minute for Cartus to recognize who it was. “Oh Harmony! Wow it's been ages, looking good,” it grinned, mouth full of sharp teeth. “I liked the other look you had before, but this is nice.”

Harmony rubs her hips. “That face did have a nice ass, but this face isn't that bad.”

The two shared a laugh.

“So lemme guess, it's about that time for the switch?” Cartus asked as they and the Spirit of Harmony began walking down the pathway.

Walking past all the other sinners screaming and begging when they saw her walking for help. Harmony paid no attention to them.

“It is about that time again. It lasted short this go around. Kinda excited though.” Harmony smiled. “I wonder what face I'll get this time.”

“Hopefully this generation doesn't fuck up as bad as this bitch did.”

“Oh please!! Please stop!!! I can't take it!” Speaking of which, her loud shrill screams echoed loudly. Music to every one's ears.

Harmony looked at Cartus. “What have you guys been doing to her?” She asked.

“Oh, we've been giving her the classic, being chained up and eaten alive in a continuous loop, making her eat her own organs and feces to let her know what a piece of shit she is.” Cartus maliciously cackled.

“Ooh giving her the Prometheus treatment, that's always a goody.” Harmony said, liking how they were mistreating the former element.

“Oh! We also are putting her Generosity into some good use at the moment. I was suppose to have a turn soon but since you're here, I guess I can use that shadow fuck.”

Harmony stopped for a moment as she thought of that one. Looking down at her body, she could use one last good rut before the change before waving the thought away. “No time.” She told herself before following the demon.

Coming into a large cell, there were already a bunch of demons, from the largest beasts to the smallest of Imps. Impossible to count how many there were inside, but judging by the smells of lust, musk, they were having fun. Hearing them growling, hooting and cheering with the sounds of their newest fuck toy choking down whatever cocks that were stuffed in all her holes.

Cartus whistled so loudly, it made the demons stop their fun.

All of them turned to him and Harmony.

“Alright you guys, Harm's here, fuck times over with this one.” The goat said.

There was a collective sound of disappointment and frustration in unison coming from these male citizens of Hell. Their toy was released and just dropped her in a massive pool of blood and cum before filing out of the cell.

None dared to do anything to Harmony or go against her wishes. If she wants a particular soul, she'll get it.

“You got this?” Cartus asked the Spirit.

“I got this cover. Thank you. Oh, give Mephesto my regards, I keep missing him whenever I come down here.” Harmony said.

“You still owe him a date. You're lucky he's patient. He's actually going to be here soon if you want to catch him.” Cartus suggested. Mephesto being one of the head honchos in this part of Tartarus. Really friendly to Harmony, no matter what face they get.

Harmony looks over to the complete mess that was Rarity. “After I deal with her.” She says with guarantee.

“Have fun then.” Cartus then steps away, going back to his post.

Leaving the two alone.

The once beautiful unicorn was reduced to an ugly mess. Her pristine white coat was matted and stained red from all the cuts and lashes that haven't healed completely yet. Words carved into body spelling WHORE, HYPOCRITE, CUM DUMPSTER all over her. As hot as Tartarus was, the cell was actually so cold against her nude body it hurts to move.

But what felt like eternity, Rarity was able to have a breather.

She silently sobbed and whimpered, pulling herself in a sitting position and hugging herself.

She fearfully turned to see who was there and let's out a shallow gasp. “Twilight? I-is that you, darling?”

Harmony approaches her, giving her a smile only Twilight would have before snorting. “Sorry, darling. I'm not her. I have her face and body but I'm not the princess.” She then bends down, getting close to her. “I'm the Spirit of Harmony.”

Once she said that, Rarity breaks down. “Please, there has to be a mistake! I shouldn't be here, I haven't done anything to deserve this kind of torture!”

“Oh brother, after all these years you still don't get it.” Harmony grunted. “You're a disgrace of Generosity, the worst I've seen in such a long time.” She said, straightening up.

“I've been the embodiment of Generosity! All my work and I got sent to Hell!” Rarity cried. “I was murdered-”

“Because you went against your element and as a result, many creatures were killed. All for what? Because Spike wouldn’t put his dick in you and follow you like the gentle creature he is.” Harmony told her, crossing her arms. “Honestly, if you would just let things go, you wouldn't even be here.”

“But Spike is mine! He'll always be-” She was completely cut off when Harmony shot her hand at Rarity's throat. When she let out a gasp, Harmony used her other hand, jams it in the unicorn’s mouth, grabs her tongue.

And violently rips her tongue out. Rarity let out a horrid painful, gurgling sound. Her blood spewed all over the Spirit.

“For fuck sakes, you don't know how to shut up and listen to what's not your voice.” Harmony said, letting go to watch the bloody mare squirm.

Rarity looked at Harmony with fearful eyes, grunting and whimpering in pain.

Holding her tongue, Harmony sighed in relief. “Finally some peace. For your information Rarity, Spike isn't thinking about you, despite what you did to him, you are not even in his mind. In fact….”

Using her magic, she showed Rarity a mirror to the living world. It showed Dragon's Lair, somewhere inside of the dark palace.

Showing off a much happier Dragonlord Spike, lounging on a rather large couch, snuggling with his adoring Queen before seeing not one, but five children jumping on them from all sides in a blitz tickle fight, mostly tickling their mother since she was the most ticklish. With Spike holding her down with a playful grin.

Rarity's eyes widened when she saw the dragon. She didn't recognize the female or the children.

“Spike is currently enjoying his life with his family.” Harmony explains, seeing Rarity getting completely crushed. “Oh, his wife/Queen is Rachel by the way. Those are their babies. Cute family, aren't they.” Harmony giggled.

The look on Rarity's bloody face was priceless. Realizing it was that damned human girl. But seeing her completely in her new form and seeing all those kids.

She really was in Hell.

Harmony snapped her fingers and the tongue returned in Rarity's mouth, allowing her to talk as the mirror disappeared. “Now, let's get you up. You're going to pay your dues.”

“I'm in Tartarus, what possibly could I endure more of?” Rarity whispered after making sure it was placed right.

Harmony smiled creepily. “Oh just how you think the magic of friendship comes from?”

The Spirit grabs her and the cell changes. Everything turned to dark crystals, Rarity felt chains attaching to her wrists, legs, neck, completely suspending her.

She felt this white hot pain of something injecting her on every surface of her backside, causing her to scream.

There were other screams here that suggested that she was not alone. Rarity managed to open her eyes and felt her sweating. There were other creatures in there suspended in the same way. Other races hooked up to many, many rods that disappear up in the darkness.

In the center was a swirly white mass.

“W-what is this place?” Rarity asked with a whisper.

“This is where the power of the Elements of Harmony comes from.” Harmony explains, motioning a hand towards the others. “These sorry lots are other failed representations of their Elements. Each time an element is being used, even if it's just in their everyday lives, your essence will be used to power them.” She then turns to a female serpent-like creature. With a wave of a hand, the rods and chains disappeared and she dropped to the ground.

“Wavier, congratulations, you paid your dues, you get to move on to Paradise.” Harmony said with a soft smile.

The serpent whimpered, pushing herself up. Hugging her torso. “T-thank you…” her voice echoed before fading into nothing.

“You see, Rarity I can't have more than one failed element in the same category. I have to replace them ever so often. And some of these fucks have been here for a very long time. Bit with you, Rares, since what you did was so bad, even if another Generosity were to come and replace you, you'll be going back to Tartarus. I'm sure those demons would be excited to have their toy again.”

“You can't do this to us! You're supposed to be the embodiment of good, what you're doing is evil!” Rarity cried out.

“Talk to me when you had infinite lifetimes of this job and see if you could give a rats ass of what anyone says.” Harmony scoffs. “Normally I wouldn't stoop low but each and every single one of you broke my patience. You don't live as long as I have without picking up a few interests.” She chuckled.

Then her body started to glow. “Oooh, it's time!”

“Time for what???”

She gave Rarity a look. “A new Element of Magic has been chosen. I'm about to have a new body.” She sounded excited. “Lucky for you lot, you'll get to have the first look of who it is.”

Harmony stepped back and she was consumed completely in the light.

Rarity gets a painful sensation of getting drained and she and everyone else in there begin to scream in agony. Their essence being used for whatever was happening.

It lasted a full minute before they were able to relax for a moment.

“Oh, this is something.” A new male voice could be heard.

Rarity raised her shaking head to see who it was.

Standing in place was a tall male, almost looking like a dragon with green and brown scales, long twisting horns. Instead of spikes on his head, he had long blond hair pinned back with black glasses on. Taloned hooves instead of claws and scaley pony shaped ears.

He looked at himself in the countless reflections. “Been a minute since I took in a male face.”

It was Harmony!

She-he then removed the glasses, the white gown changed to robes to match their new body. “Oh this is absolutely hilarious! Not the looks because there's something sexy about him but the irony is too good.” He tossed the glasses aside before turning. Seeing Rarity's face. “It seems Spike’s third born is destined to be the new element of magic. He's still considered a baby so his magic usage will be all over the place.”

He said that as their essences were being painfully drained again, causing Harmony to laugh with glee. “You won't die from this, but you can't escape either. No one can enter this place without me. So Rarity, get comfy, consider this a little vacation until I send you back down to Hell. Speaking of which,” he looks down at his new body. “Think Mephesto is going to love this body. Have fun everyone!”

Harmony fades away, leaving Rarity and others to power the magic of Harmony and Friendship.

Author's Note

This story has been asked for and here it is!

Rarity has truly been suffering the consequences since Rewrite the Stars and will continue to suffer.

What did you guys think if my twisted version of Harmony?