The Dragon Sinner

by LoganRyder

Chapter 3: Hell's New Arrival

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Spike only began to awaken once more and his vision began to get more clear again. The young boy woke up again with sweat rolling down his head and panting with a fast pace. Spike only looked and saw he was in some sort of alleyway. He only felt his chest and said

"Huh? I'm....healed.....? How?" Spike said confused.

The young teen wandered the area and escaped out the alleyway and saw a person. Spike, in desperate confusion and fear said to the person.

"Excuse me sir? Can you help me?"

The person turned around, revealing they were some sort of shark like creature with a green color and purple pants and a white shirt with a devil. The creature only said

"The fuck do you want you little shit?"

"AAAGGHHH! WHAT THE SHIT?!" Spike said at the monster's appearance before he ran in the other direction out of fright and confusion. As Spike ran, he had evaded cars and people that appeared to be different from of creatures or animals. He even bumped into a female red looking imp.

"Hey watch it jackass!" The imp shouted at the running teen.

As Spike ran, even barely avoiding hitting a car in the process, he only said the very question that had bothered him.

"WHERE THE FUCK AM I?!?!?!"

As Spike was left distressed and confused, he looked and noticed there were different shops all around ranging from movie studios with pornographic content, vending machines with drugs, stores with guns and other odd criteria, with one place even saying Franklin and Rosie Emporium, though the Franklin name was crossed out with an x with a black marker. Spike looked and saw a large red pentagram in the sky and a few buildings with large signs saying none other then on the neon lights WELCOME TO HELL.

Spike was left in shock and disbelief at the signs and said in a horrified and shocked tone

"Wait....this is......HELL?!?!"

Spike only fell on his knees and began to cry a bit and puke before running off, bumping into someone.

The man in the red coat with pinstripes and black pants and had red hair with black tips and sharp yellow teeth. He also wore a monacle and held a radio like cane and looked at Spike with a sinister smile and said with a rather eccentric and ominous voice

"Well, what do we have here? Are you ok dear boy?" The demonic man asked, his smile never leaving his face.

Spike, with a look of fright and wide eyes only passed out once more.

"Hmmm......." The man said

He examined Spike and lifted his shirt a bit and his eyes widened slightly and said

"Well......this boy.......he might be interesting."

He grabbed Spike and carried him up and left the area. with the last thing Spike seeing was the man grinning at him.


(A few hours later)

Spike opened his eyes once more and groaned "Wha....?"

"Hey, he's getting up." A female voice said

"Mom? Twilight? I had a awful nightmare." Spike said

"Oh dear, what was it about?" The voice said, with Spike not seeing her as he was too distressed and scared

Spike continued "It was about me at Pinkie's party, The girls agreed to invite me to make up for neglecting me until I wake up and a bunch of devil worshippers stabbed me everywhere and I......huh?!?"

Spike slowly got up and saw he was inside what appeared to be a hotel lobby of a sort, laying on a comfy sofa.

"Wait, devil worshippers?" The voice asked worried.

Spike had turned around and saw a girl with white skin and red cheek spots and blonde hair who wore a red tuxedo and had red eyes with yellow on the sclera.

Spike was startled and asked "Huh? Who are you?!"

The girl said "Ok, calm down, I know your scared and that's understandable. I take it you just arrived to Hell?"

Spike replied in dismay and sadness "Hell? So this is real?"

The girl nodded and said "Yes. Unfortunately."

Spike only said in distress and depression "But why ME?! I didn't do anything wrong!"

"It's because of those cultists. When they do that an sacrifice, they are automatically sent to Hell." Another female voice said.

Spike turned and saw two other people, the female had worn a hairbow along with an eyepatch on her left eye along with a red blouse and miniskirt, wearing stockings and long fingerless gloves. The other creature appeared to be a white spider-like creature with a big fluffy chest while wearing a light pink suit and grey miniskirt along with grey colored thigh high boots. His top arms had pink gloves while his bottom arms had white gloves.


Spike was left grief-stricken as the spider like creature said

"Hey it's not so bad, everything you can't do on the top is legal here like sex, guns, murder, fuck you can even get drugs out a vending machine!"

Spike only said in shock "Are you fucking kidding me right now?"

"Plus, you get a new appearance, you don't look too bad yourself cutie~" The spider creature added in a rather flirty tone.

Spike was confused at his statement and asked 'Wait, what do you mean by appearance?"

The girl in the red tuxedo used a mirror and Spike was left horrified. His green hair was now dark black and sharpened, his purple skin had become pale white, his teeth were now sharpened and white, his eyes had now become black in the sclera and red in the pupils and his clothes had turned from purple and green to black and red.

(Just imagine it's a mix of the description and the pictures. I will remove art if necessary).

"WHAT THE FUCK?!" Spike said in shock at his new appearance.

"Um are you ok kid?" The woman with the eyepatch had asked.

Spike tried to process it and cried a bit to himself, the girl in the tuxedo went and comforted him and said while holding his shoulder

"It's ok....it's ok. Nobody's gonna hurt you in here."

Spike felt a pang of reassurance and said "Thanks.....um.....who are you all?"

The girl had said in response "Oh! My apologies, My name is Charlie, Charlie Morningstar. Daughter of Lucifer and the Princess of Hell. Over there is my girlfriend Vaggie and Angel Dust."

Vaggie waved to Spike while Angel said "Heyyyyyyy~"

Spike said "My name is Spike. Spike Sparkle. So....what is this place? And how did I get here?"

Charlie said with enthusiasm as she then "Well Spike. This is the Hazbin Hotel! And as for how you got here, Alastor dragged you here."

Spike said in confusion "Hazbin Hotel? Alastor?"

"You called?" A voice said.

Spike turned and saw the same man in the red coat behind him, who said to Spike with a voice of a radio host that appeared to originate from the 1930s.

"Ah, you must be the new young soul I dragged here outside Pentagram city. Welcome to the Hazbin Hotel young man."

Charlie nodded and added "A hotel where sinners can rehabilitate their souls to earn a place up to Heaven."

Spike said "A hotel where demons can redeem themselves?"

Charlie nodded as Spike continued with a look of confusion and dismay.

"But wait, can you redeem me? I've done nothing wrong and I was here because those devil worshippers killed me. I'm not a sinner! I've been good as long as i remember!"

"Yeah...about that....." Charlie struggled to explain with a reluctant and pitiful expression.

"What is it?" Spike asked.

"Charlie, hun. I'll tell him." Vaggie said as Charlie nodded

"Spike right? There are reasons people come down here. Murder, rape, stealing and drugs. But there are VERY rare and special cases where the victim is killed in a satanic ritual and in those cases....they can't ever go to Heaven as their soul is linked with Hell. In fact....lift your shirt up."

Spike was confused but did so and there was a bloody pentagram on his chest as Vaggie pointed to it and continued her explanation.

"See this pentagram? It links you to Hell and means your soul is here forever since the symbol links you to Hell."

Spike, despite likely knowing the answer, only asked speechlessly with a fearful expression.

"Wait...Vaggie is it?....what.....what do you mean?"

Vaggie only said while holding Spike's hand and said in an uneasy tone

"I'm saying even if you did redeem yourself, you won't be sent to Heaven......EVER."

Spike was left speechless and silent.


(The living world)

Paramedics were carrying Spike's body out in a stretcher as the girls gave looks of sadness, with Rarity even crying as evidenced by her ruined makeup with Twilight also crying.

"Spike.....no.......no......." Twilight cried in grief

"Spikey-wikey! WHY DID I FORSAKE YOU?!" Rarity screamed in tears with anguish.

The other girls had mourned also at Spike's demise, with Pinkie's hair flat while Applejack and Rainbow Dash comforted another while Fluttershy was hugged by Sunset.

"How did this happen.....?" Pinkie asked

"The police don't know, Spike was found stabbed and on a weird symbol." Twilight said in her grief.

"Maybe we should investigate. We failed Spike so many times....it's time we try to make it right for the poor feller." Applejack said with grief as she tried to swallow her tears.

However, they were unaware they were being observed.......

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