Ethereal Chaos

by JudgmentisForbidden

First published

The Trossels, a magically evolved race of ponies from Equestria's long-forgotten sister world Golirath, live peacefully in a utopian magical paradise. One day, however, an innocent young mare named Frostburn accidentally finds a puzzle box containing a powerful and dangerous evil from the distant past, forcing the Trossels to flee their home. Frostburn and her family eventually find their way to Ponyville, where Twilight Sparkle is learning about friendship. However, it's the Trossels themselves who will have to learn about friendship, unity, and even love in a strange and confusing new place.

This story is probably one of my favorites to write. Keep in mind that this is subject to some minor rewrites, but the plot won't be altered. You can check out my Trossels on my dA account. Hope that everypony likes it. The original, unedited fic and all 20 chapters, can be found here: http://psyko6669.deviantart.com/art/Ethereal-Chaos-Chapter-1-272252201 the fanfiction.net version is also avalible here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7796980/1/Ethereal-Chaos